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BeyondPoeticKiller
Lost Thinker
France
Joined 10th Mar 2012
Forum Posts: 5

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summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1388

 
( wrote this a few days ago, for one of my best friend, reiterating true belief in frienship, beyond any doubts & misjudging)

**FRIEND FOREVER**

Emotional ocean seating
simmering silent bottom
yet a tranquil wholesome!
No doubting this dear friend…
Human errors ,trials and
tribulations of noisy bubbles
down beneath is but natural!
All for a causative streamlined
final flow, cyclical wave it is.

Web of intricately knotted
complex thoughts entangled
to maximum complications,
are but destined my friend…
Readymade solvable templates
are noone available globally,
like a raring bull full of boldness,
just hit ans miss the targets seen,
defend and defeat one by one-
All whom you meet in your survival
circle, its scoring a final bull’s eye,
uncrowned victorious gladiator ever!

Balanced invincible intuitive mix
of emotions and thoughtful actions
I hold my friend! Dont ever doubt…
I am but an ordinary looking human,
yet with a holy power of cosmic heavens!
Blinded and deafened by angry impulsive
pulses and given to whispered foxy rumours,
momentarily blocked in senses you are!
I know you by depths of heart my friend….
All the tumultous tributaries and
ravaging runs of boisterous rivers,
should finally drain into the salience
of silent sea and liberating oceans!

JAITO
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight
Kenya 8awards
Joined 24th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 171

                 
I  am  blaming  myself  for  this   terrible   sin
Which  is  hurting  me  so  hard  like a pin
I  thought…I  cant   believe  I  believed  she  was  for  me
Now  I  don’t  have  any  good  to  think
This   cruel  world  which  I  lived
Showed  me   no  relief  all  hated  me
But  I  thought  u  were  my  friend  and  u  accepted  me
What  I  got in  return  was  that  u  fleed
Now  u  talk  ill  about  me
Forget   everything  me  and  u  did
Like  when  I  used  to  help   u  out  when  u  had  no  thing
When   u  were   sad   and    I   gave  u  advice   and  peace
We  used  to  hang  together  helping  one  another  each  week.

I  don’t  know   what  changed  my  friend
They  told  u  that  I  was  interested  in   sex..
Hey  I  always  thought  of  u  as  a  friend
I  loved   your  company  and  all  u  had  to  say
To  u  I  had  only  love  and  respect
As  a  matter  of  fact I  never  need  your  kisses
a  true   friend   I  had  no  other   wishes.

Atropabelladonna
Atro
Fire of Insight
United States 8awards
Joined 30th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 187

My far away friend


Friend:

A have a friend that I have never seen;
To me I view her as a beautiful queen. 
She seems to keep my ass in check;
So I don't become a nervous wreck. 

A have a friend that I might not ever meet;
I know she is kind and awful sweet. 
She seems to pick my mind apart;
She has always done this from the start. 

I know that her life in the past may have been shit;
If she ever needed me; I'd be there in a New York minute. 
I may never completely know what she is all about;
But I know she is a drug I can't live without. 

I have a friend that is so dear;
I hope she knows that my feelings are sincere. 
I know she has been broken and torn;
This is the life in which we are born. 

I wish I can one day give her a handshake and maybe a hug;
I know it would hit home; just as snug. 
I will help her as much as she helps I;
For I pray I will never hear a goodbye. 
I wish you knew what this friend is like;
You would agree that she is worth the fight. 

I hope that she may look at the moon lit night;
My heart goes out to her from "her" moons light. 
I shall be the best friend that I know I can;
Even though she might have an itchy butt from sand ( inside joke )

I have this friend in which made me post;
For her replies I love the most. 
I have found a quote for her to ponder;
I hope she takes the time and truly wonder. 

Flatter me, and I may not believe you. Criticize me, and I may not like you. Ignore me, and I may not forgive you. Encourage me, and I will not forget you. Love me and I may be forced to love you... 

   Signed with love: David Rafael Angel Gomez II 

JAITO
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight
Kenya 8awards
Joined 24th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 171

It  all  started  with   the   science  project
our   things  moved  on  well  on the  go head
All  that  time i  thought  i  was  okay
because  in me  u  were   the  all best.

Faith  i  believed   we   were forever
how   we  used   to  joke   whenever
how  u   smiled  and  gave  me  pleasure
but  now  all  of  these  is  just  weathered.

i   remember   when  u   spoke   nice  words
i  never  at  one  point  felt  sad
when  i  made  u  laugh  i saw  u  were  glad
why  would  u  turn  up against  me  and  be  mad.

i  know  it  was  all  that   sucker
who  told  u   that  i  was  a disater
poor   misrable   and  miserable  husler
and  u  bught  that  crap   now  we  longer  friends...

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