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Life as a thimble
Its not running over
said life as a thimble of mine
Its very wide not small
not the perfect kind
Its filled with truths
partially damaged by lies
only to be calmed
by the sweetest of ryes
nothing can change
this life
as a thimble
of mine
said life as a thimble of mine
Its very wide not small
not the perfect kind
Its filled with truths
partially damaged by lies
only to be calmed
by the sweetest of ryes
nothing can change
this life
as a thimble
of mine
Published 26th Jan 2024
Author's Note
In the thimble contest
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26th Jan 2024 3:06am
Very interesting perception you've chosen. I like it. What a great vision you wrote.
2nd Feb 2024 3:43am
Thank you, love. ....I left lines unwritten and may you read between the lines. <3
26th Jan 2024 5:44am
Dear ML,
Love that third couplet. I think moving forward my outlook will be my thimble runneth over because my cup never did. I enjoyed the originality of this and wish you all the best in the comp.
H🌷
Love that third couplet. I think moving forward my outlook will be my thimble runneth over because my cup never did. I enjoyed the originality of this and wish you all the best in the comp.
H🌷
2nd Feb 2024 3:44am
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16th Mar 2024 1:45am
Love where this took me. A deeply thought contemplation of life with an exquisite metaphor.
John
John
17th Mar 2024 4:32am
