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proposal
you could learn,
how to peel yourself open,
to let out the pain you feel
he moved closer,
sliding his legs between hers
his hands on her thighs,
his lips pressed to her ear
"do you understand what I mean?
If I touched you would you moan
with pleasure ... would you scream?"
how to peel yourself open,
to let out the pain you feel
he moved closer,
sliding his legs between hers
his hands on her thighs,
his lips pressed to her ear
"do you understand what I mean?
If I touched you would you moan
with pleasure ... would you scream?"
Published 14th Apr 2016
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17th Apr 2016 6:22am
that's a little intimidating, a little sexy.
might have to draw the curtain on that little scene...
might have to draw the curtain on that little scene...
Thank You JohnFeddeler for the read and comments ... no need to draw the curtain ... she was less than amused ....
18th Apr 2016 4:59am
...let his good intentions 'touch' you like he's writing a novel on your skin...
Love it!
Love it!
18th Apr 2016 8:44pm
Thank You Rain for the read and thoughtful comments ... much appreciated dear
lady ox.
lady ox.
short and sweet. I like how this encourages moving beyond our perceived comfort zones for the potential pleasures
20th Apr 2016 3:42pm
Thank You for the read and thoughtful comments bootselectric ... pushing boundaries, I seem to be getting that a lot lately ...
