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penitration
handcuffed
im teased
he kisses my soulders and
works his way down
the air smells like him
his power and
pleasure
his tounge
reaches my swollen clit
and explores
tickeling me
putting me on edge
my heart a drum
pounding through my chest
then
penetration
i feel him
pulsating withing
slow but pleasuring
my breath comes in
pants and
moans
harder and harded
his tounge
teases my nipples
and im
cumming
together we fall
pushed over the edge
in sexual bliss
im teased
he kisses my soulders and
works his way down
the air smells like him
his power and
pleasure
his tounge
reaches my swollen clit
and explores
tickeling me
putting me on edge
my heart a drum
pounding through my chest
then
penetration
i feel him
pulsating withing
slow but pleasuring
my breath comes in
pants and
moans
harder and harded
his tounge
teases my nipples
and im
cumming
together we fall
pushed over the edge
in sexual bliss
Published 24th Mar 2011
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24th Mar 2011 1:44am
...no comments after 20 reads because it's boring. Sex, to be written well, must engage the senses as well as the mind...fail...maybe send it to a mens magazine, but they'd burn it as bog-standard.
24th Mar 2011 2:10am
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25th Mar 2011 1:36pm
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8th Apr 2011 8:06pm
I actually enjoyed this poem. It engaged my mind because I didnt click home after the 1st five lines. Good imagery and emotion i would say
9th Apr 2011 1:20am
