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The knights of the night

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Mofos Didn’t Know


mofos caught one blue
these slugs
they didn’t have
a clue

knight lines
straight ahead and solo
him doing
almost what his
dad know

::what he knew::

knowing for certain
these four
were through

chivalry
versus all he sees
for honor’s sake, he seeks to please
mofo’s “missed”
counter to the knees
what’s one to do
with slugs like these?

move
blade to wreck
apply through neck
mofo’s didn’t know
what’s meant by respect
so this group of four, none
can protect

lost cause; one by one
last one screaming, “Sorry, son”
the knight’s retort, “You are not my dad
because if you were
then
you’d be glad
because this dumb fight
would’ve never had”

then,
quick as that;
knight pierced his head

four;
the score
like dad; all
dead

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