Fictional Prose by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Short stories and chapters from books and novels
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Brinkton Fartentuaht

#narrative
#ShortStory
#prose
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Mm... Blending Fate And Destiny

#lust
#sex
#lover
#passion
#seductive
86 reads
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Aphrodite Rising (III of III)
Divinity in Darkness
Times of High Strangeness call into question the nature of the reality in which we exist, a world of phenomenon and perception. When our notions of consensus reality are bent and even broken, we are set adrift in the neo-gravity of the unknown, a spaceman out of the capsule and into space, approaching the end of the tether, like an amphibious creature roaming the land, meeting the end of it’s terrestrial capacity with no water in sight, synonymous with the dreamer or the thinker in the realms of thoughts and dreams.
My normal respiratory functions...
Times of High Strangeness call into question the nature of the reality in which we exist, a world of phenomenon and perception. When our notions of consensus reality are bent and even broken, we are set adrift in the neo-gravity of the unknown, a spaceman out of the capsule and into space, approaching the end of the tether, like an amphibious creature roaming the land, meeting the end of it’s terrestrial capacity with no water in sight, synonymous with the dreamer or the thinker in the realms of thoughts and dreams.
My normal respiratory functions...
#angels
#aliens
238 reads
4 Comments
Pillow talk and dirty sex

1913 reads
13 Comments
The Trick of Pumpkin Manor
Grinning, Mr. Saint James rises from his chair and walks over
to the wooden doors.
Standing in front of them, he opens them both at the same
time with a flourish and stands back.
As the three boys move closer, they see an old piece of paper
filled with printed words, floating inside an infinite looking
space flickering with brilliant orange light.
CAESAR
Wow! How’s it doing that?
DEON
You a magician or something,
mister?
MR. SAINT JAMES
Something. One of you must read it
out loud.
CAESAR ...
to the wooden doors.
Standing in front of them, he opens them both at the same
time with a flourish and stands back.
As the three boys move closer, they see an old piece of paper
filled with printed words, floating inside an infinite looking
space flickering with brilliant orange light.
CAESAR
Wow! How’s it doing that?
DEON
You a magician or something,
mister?
MR. SAINT JAMES
Something. One of you must read it
out loud.
CAESAR ...
#Halloween
190 reads
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Story Angio two
Here in what ever form, no matter is given to us.
Every living creature has its own miracle
Spirit as nature is Life giving.
We hear not the old gods as they speak in Sulfur, in quick silver
For the equinox has come birthing a new season where chemistry creates transforming tides. I was reminded of the shedding skin, of earth, through life, the budding leaves.
One day I knew I would converse with these Nefarious beings. Known as human hybrids of angels. The spirits spoke celestial. That night the wind seemed a neighing seahorse as it galloped around the...
Every living creature has its own miracle
Spirit as nature is Life giving.
We hear not the old gods as they speak in Sulfur, in quick silver
For the equinox has come birthing a new season where chemistry creates transforming tides. I was reminded of the shedding skin, of earth, through life, the budding leaves.
One day I knew I would converse with these Nefarious beings. Known as human hybrids of angels. The spirits spoke celestial. That night the wind seemed a neighing seahorse as it galloped around the...
#universe
#spiritual
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Father forgive me for I have sinned

#anger
#dark
#disappointment
81 reads
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Yew - A long story, short

1270 reads
10 Comments
5 myths about sex for over 60

#science
#fiction
232 reads
9 Comments
Stoker stoking the Fire - #2
……and there she was
innocent handmaiden
bending consciously over
picking graveside roses
extracting the aroma of each one
through her sweet nostrils
becoming more beautified each time
how I wanted to be in her hands at that moment
all these sensations travelled through me
from places I know not where
something I never felt before
alien to my designs
contradicting every baneful indoctrination
how can the undead
be touched by such a thing of sanctity?
fairer than what she plucks out of the ground
then carefully...
innocent handmaiden
bending consciously over
picking graveside roses
extracting the aroma of each one
through her sweet nostrils
becoming more beautified each time
how I wanted to be in her hands at that moment
all these sensations travelled through me
from places I know not where
something I never felt before
alien to my designs
contradicting every baneful indoctrination
how can the undead
be touched by such a thing of sanctity?
fairer than what she plucks out of the ground
then carefully...
#beauty
#evil
#rose
#vampires
#graveyard
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To Sail a Sea of Stars
- To Sail a Sea of Stars -
Note: I originally wrote this story back in 2008, under the name Chaos_Theocrat.
(A mysterious and beautiful woman from another world, and a man from Arabia who is seeking knowledge, power, and wealth, embark together upon an epic quest that will unite their very fates and test the worth of worldly pursuits in the face of a truly cosmic revelation that will change both of their lives for the better… as well as for all eternity.)
Prologue: The Dark Wanderer
The day faded and it was a gray afternoon, as the light of the setting...
Note: I originally wrote this story back in 2008, under the name Chaos_Theocrat.
(A mysterious and beautiful woman from another world, and a man from Arabia who is seeking knowledge, power, and wealth, embark together upon an epic quest that will unite their very fates and test the worth of worldly pursuits in the face of a truly cosmic revelation that will change both of their lives for the better… as well as for all eternity.)
Prologue: The Dark Wanderer
The day faded and it was a gray afternoon, as the light of the setting...
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Been known to take pint glasses home
The night started walking west
down the road to the street kitchen
because fuck it hungry
all that was left was a mince pie
a loaf of bread that's ok
got tomatoes and cheese back home
Coffee?
Please thanks luv
drinking lidl ciders sitting on some monuments step chain smoking
people watching
because fuck it skint
Walking round town what to do?
some guy asks for a smoke or a light ...
down the road to the street kitchen
because fuck it hungry
all that was left was a mince pie
a loaf of bread that's ok
got tomatoes and cheese back home
Coffee?
Please thanks luv
drinking lidl ciders sitting on some monuments step chain smoking
people watching
because fuck it skint
Walking round town what to do?
some guy asks for a smoke or a light ...
#LifeAsAWriter
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