Fictional Prose by Top Critiquers

Suddenly white light encompassed the whole compound; the light seemed to be made of little stars twinkling. Strange musical sounds came from everywhere; tinkling bells and summer rain. The twinkling light suffused the whole village and the people stood up, spritely and fresh. They looked around in wonder.

Ameria and I stood there in astonishment; the Guardian had taken off his helmet showing his long golden hair. He spread out his arms and the whole world seemed to glow with a warm pleasant light.

Orcus and Desire stood shocked as wonder upon wonder unfold. Flowers of...

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Sheep 1: Willy was suffering from a lack of friends, but at least Mel seemed to like him. Tommy said she was a veggie-terror human-terrorism or something scary sounding like that. Willy was glad he wasn't a veggie or a human. Maybe she wanted to be his mommy!
Sheep 2: If only little Willy felt sure he had friends! Most of his previous 4 footed neighbors seemed sure he was only good at being part of the menu. Daddy farmer didn't even think he could be good at that!
Sheep 3: Feeling sure he would never breed, or make a ham, it wasn't clear where Willy belonged in the...

This is not prose. This is a fiction based dialogue.

Until recently voices were regarded as a symptom of a mental illness and not talked about because of fear of stigma. Hearing voices is still considered by psychiatry as an auditory hallucination and as a symptom of conditions such as schizophrenic disorders, manic depression and psychosis.

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A male voice: "What did you say your name was?"

Daniels: " My name? ... Daniels...

A male voice: "Fill the blanks..."

Daniels: "Alice's miracles... I'm a rainbow... ... ...