Fictional Prose by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Short stories and chapters from books and novels
Poems written by Top Critiquers
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
17th Sep 2020 2:07am
17th Sep 2020 2:07am
Moonlight’s Temptation
#lover
#temptation
#passion
79 reads
15 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
20th Aug 2020 8:07pm
20th Aug 2020 8:07pm
Hard time
#happiness
#strength
#gratitude #emotions
#gratitude #emotions
44 reads
0 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
15th Jan 2020 9:29pm
15th Jan 2020 9:29pm
The Lady Blue 7
That night, I had difficulty getting Gary off of my mind. Memories of us were impossible to ignore.
I remembered the time I got caught being in Gary's arms.it was during one of those endless parties my parents put on.
I was outside on the front porch when I turned to see him approaching me from out of nowhere.
"What are you doing outside,ma cheri?"
"Nothing, I replied in a near whisper as I felt one of his hands lightly brush my lower back.
"You looked like you were very deep in thought."
"To be honest, I was just wondering why you won't...
I remembered the time I got caught being in Gary's arms.it was during one of those endless parties my parents put on.
I was outside on the front porch when I turned to see him approaching me from out of nowhere.
"What are you doing outside,ma cheri?"
"Nothing, I replied in a near whisper as I felt one of his hands lightly brush my lower back.
"You looked like you were very deep in thought."
"To be honest, I was just wondering why you won't...
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#crush
150 reads
8 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
6th Oct 2019 10:52am
6th Oct 2019 10:52am
Hallowine
Hello!
Lovely to see you.
Please.
Come in.
Do sit down, make yourself comfortable.
May I offer you something to drink? Coffee, tea- something stronger perhaps?
I do have wine. Red or white?
Red. Delicious! I’ll join you in a glass. I’ve just found a new pinot noir. I hope you’ll like it.
Your request to see me sounded
-urgent- I hope everything is all right.
Yes, I have noticed my husband has been working later than usual. Not altogether out of the ordinary though. Why do...
Lovely to see you.
Please.
Come in.
Do sit down, make yourself comfortable.
May I offer you something to drink? Coffee, tea- something stronger perhaps?
I do have wine. Red or white?
Red. Delicious! I’ll join you in a glass. I’ve just found a new pinot noir. I hope you’ll like it.
Your request to see me sounded
-urgent- I hope everything is all right.
Yes, I have noticed my husband has been working later than usual. Not altogether out of the ordinary though. Why do...
#jealousy
#wife
#husband #girlfriend
#husband #girlfriend
248 reads
18 Comments
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
23rd May 2019 2:23am
23rd May 2019 2:23am
Remniscent
I remember a time when I was young, and I could still dream in color...
A time when the days weren't so black and white; I could still see the beauty in the world before me.
I remember how vivid it all used to be; before I stopped listening, anyway.
Before I closed my eyes to the world,
Or before my eyes were closed for me...
The universe was my palate:
a brilliant spectrum of colors, with endless possibilities, and many different worlds to explore;
And I was the brush, painting my dreams on a pedestal before me, naive to the...
A time when the days weren't so black and white; I could still see the beauty in the world before me.
I remember how vivid it all used to be; before I stopped listening, anyway.
Before I closed my eyes to the world,
Or before my eyes were closed for me...
The universe was my palate:
a brilliant spectrum of colors, with endless possibilities, and many different worlds to explore;
And I was the brush, painting my dreams on a pedestal before me, naive to the...
#regret
#dreams
#death #memories
#death #memories
494 reads
25 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
14th Aug 2019 2:19am
14th Aug 2019 2:19am
the stone that floated
a young acolyte, who recently
entered the monastery to learn
the way, saw a venerable ancient
master walking slowly in the garden.
the young man ran over to him
and exclaimed with great excitement,
"Teach me master! Teach me
everything! "
the old master, bent over with age,
looked up at the young man. A
small, wise smile drew back his
lips and he softly said,
"I will teach you nothing."
the novice looked shocked
and walked sadly away, not
realizing that he had experienced
his...
entered the monastery to learn
the way, saw a venerable ancient
master walking slowly in the garden.
the young man ran over to him
and exclaimed with great excitement,
"Teach me master! Teach me
everything! "
the old master, bent over with age,
looked up at the young man. A
small, wise smile drew back his
lips and he softly said,
"I will teach you nothing."
the novice looked shocked
and walked sadly away, not
realizing that he had experienced
his...
#Buddhist
145 reads
6 Comments
DanielChristensen
Poem Published
29th Aug 2017 10:57pm
29th Aug 2017 10:57pm
Yew - A long story, short
931 reads
10 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
28th Oct 2019 7:57pm
28th Oct 2019 7:57pm
Brinkton Fartentuaht
#narrative
#ShortStory
#prose
158 reads
0 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
25th Aug 2020 4:20pm
25th Aug 2020 4:20pm
It Was Indeed Juicy
I was on the subway the other day, standing 6 feet near to this guy.
We were just moving out from the Dekalb Avenue station.
He cuts a huge juicy fart, then comes diarrhea out his pantleg puddling on the subway car floor.
He turns to me and says, "shit....i'm really sorry", as many folks move to the other end of the car, forsaking any six feet "distancing". Above his mask there are tears in his eyes.
I says to him, "Don't sweat it, friend. It could happen to any one of us who has an asshole. G'odd bless ye"--------------> thank goodness for our COVID...
We were just moving out from the Dekalb Avenue station.
He cuts a huge juicy fart, then comes diarrhea out his pantleg puddling on the subway car floor.
He turns to me and says, "shit....i'm really sorry", as many folks move to the other end of the car, forsaking any six feet "distancing". Above his mask there are tears in his eyes.
I says to him, "Don't sweat it, friend. It could happen to any one of us who has an asshole. G'odd bless ye"--------------> thank goodness for our COVID...
#illness
#trains
42 reads
2 Comments
Sunwolfe1745
Poem Published
20th Aug 2020 11:10pm
20th Aug 2020 11:10pm
Starting the day
Mmmmmm waking in the morning to the smell of fresh coffee and sizzling bacon. God I am such a lucky man! She amazes me every day. I slip out of the sheets and head into the kitchen.
There is my sunshine!! I stop and admire the view. Lol, she is cooking in just an apron!! That beautiful ass is just staring right back at me. Her cute little birthmark on her tight cheek. My cock stirs, thrilled by the site.
“Morning my love,” I say as I pad up behind her. She peeks over her shoulder and gives me a radiant smile. I slip my arms around her waist and she leans into...
There is my sunshine!! I stop and admire the view. Lol, she is cooking in just an apron!! That beautiful ass is just staring right back at me. Her cute little birthmark on her tight cheek. My cock stirs, thrilled by the site.
“Morning my love,” I say as I pad up behind her. She peeks over her shoulder and gives me a radiant smile. I slip my arms around her waist and she leans into...
#lust
#sex
#erotic #lover
#erotic #lover
81 reads
4 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
27th Sep 2019 9:46pm
27th Sep 2019 9:46pm
Philosophy For Life
When I was like Hippos Go Berserk!
no guide to show me the way
I was the untethered soul
immersed in Zen Meditation.
Though not quite Turning Japanese
decided on A Trip to South America
maybe discover my own
Book of Thorns replacing my youth
& Pocket Pal
with my Pocket Zen.
I did managed to uncover
The Hound of Heaven
amidst Sapiens in the
Southern Hemisphere
guiding me
to a new type of Philosophy For Life.
_______________________________________________
1. Philosophy For...
no guide to show me the way
I was the untethered soul
immersed in Zen Meditation.
Though not quite Turning Japanese
decided on A Trip to South America
maybe discover my own
Book of Thorns replacing my youth
& Pocket Pal
with my Pocket Zen.
I did managed to uncover
The Hound of Heaven
amidst Sapiens in the
Southern Hemisphere
guiding me
to a new type of Philosophy For Life.
_______________________________________________
1. Philosophy For...
#identity
#Buddhist
#meditation #philosophical
#meditation #philosophical
313 reads
23 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
4th Oct 2019 7:47pm
4th Oct 2019 7:47pm
Swamp Gas
The smell of death
surrounds me
as I crawl carefully
through the
sultry steamy
mosquito-infested
swamp.
Upon closer
observation ,
I realize
that the smell
is coming from me.
surrounds me
as I crawl carefully
through the
sultry steamy
mosquito-infested
swamp.
Upon closer
observation ,
I realize
that the smell
is coming from me.
#anxiety
#dark
#death
#despair
#curse
175 reads
3 Comments
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