Fictional Prose Seeking Friendly Advice
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Short stories and chapters from books and novels
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Secrets - Robert And Gordon
Later, I check on Robert. He's sleeping in his room. 'Night, buddy,' I whisper, adjusting the brown teddy bear so it won't fall.
It is quiet, far too quiet for me. The static stillness of the country gives the impression of time slowing down, stopping altogether. I find a beer in the fridge, sit on the sofa bed and drink. So much for good intentions. Fitness, diet. I don't want to go to sleep. Sleep frightens me, has done ever since Vince Macarthur brought his crowbar down on my head, screaming his innocence again and again. My recovery from the attack took several years....
It is quiet, far too quiet for me. The static stillness of the country gives the impression of time slowing down, stopping altogether. I find a beer in the fridge, sit on the sofa bed and drink. So much for good intentions. Fitness, diet. I don't want to go to sleep. Sleep frightens me, has done ever since Vince Macarthur brought his crowbar down on my head, screaming his innocence again and again. My recovery from the attack took several years....
#childhood
#family
#memories
#mystery
#risk
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The Non People Pleasing Serum.
#Christian
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Secrets - The Disclosure
I have chips and gravy for tea, along with a couple of chunks of homemade bread to dip in the gravy. Doorsteps, we called them when we were kids. Mel shakes her head and says I need to eat more sensibly.
Afterwards, we retreat to my flat for a few minutes and talk with the door open, keeping an eye on Robert who's in the other flat on Mel's computer. A delicate matter, she said earlier, one she would prefer Robert not to overhear.
'There's something I think you ought to know,' she says. 'Gordon Day's living in Burrington and is in charge of the gym there.' ...
Afterwards, we retreat to my flat for a few minutes and talk with the door open, keeping an eye on Robert who's in the other flat on Mel's computer. A delicate matter, she said earlier, one she would prefer Robert not to overhear.
'There's something I think you ought to know,' she says. 'Gordon Day's living in Burrington and is in charge of the gym there.' ...
#friendship
#memories
#mystery #risk
#mystery #risk
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My Fanfiction: A Deadly Town
#Christian
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Alia the temptress
#Christian
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swallowed
Natalie was unforgettable.
The kind of woman who could make a room stop with just her presence.
She wasn’t just big, she was voluptuous—confident, curvy, and unapologetically sexy. Her hips were wide, her ass round, and her breasts always seemed to defy the tops she wore, straining against the fabric.
I’d always had a thing for women like her—soft, sensual, and proud.
We knew each other through mutual friends, and every time we were in the same room, there was an unspoken tension between us, something electric that we both felt but never...
The kind of woman who could make a room stop with just her presence.
She wasn’t just big, she was voluptuous—confident, curvy, and unapologetically sexy. Her hips were wide, her ass round, and her breasts always seemed to defy the tops she wore, straining against the fabric.
I’d always had a thing for women like her—soft, sensual, and proud.
We knew each other through mutual friends, and every time we were in the same room, there was an unspoken tension between us, something electric that we both felt but never...
#dirty
#erotic
#lust #sexy
#lust #sexy
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He Loved Me, He Loved Me Not: The Love Note
She gets closer to JR4; he's freaked out yet intrigued and has awe at how much this girl loves him. But is unwilling to admit it. She's hugging him, saying the most outlandish things to do anything to mask such feelings. Anything, really anything...
"It's okay if you don't love me, Jason! I'll just fuck all the football players I hated in high school!"
He tries to speak, saying, "I don't think that's a good id-"
She's so, so oblivious to her lack of filter. She goes on and on. "I'll create The Love Note! I'll write every guy's name...
"It's okay if you don't love me, Jason! I'll just fuck all the football players I hated in high school!"
He tries to speak, saying, "I don't think that's a good id-"
She's so, so oblivious to her lack of filter. She goes on and on. "I'll create The Love Note! I'll write every guy's name...
#ForbiddenLove
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Secrets - Back to Lancashire (3)
After a cup of tea in Mel's flat, I return for the rest of the luggage, grab the remaining bags from the boot of my car and use the electronic keypad to get back in The Factory. Once inside, I drag my belongings to the lift at the side of the building and ride up to the top storey, watching each floor disappear through the door panel. Mel's flat faces mine across the drop. I don't like heights, though. Never have done. The surrounding valley looks tiny from the drop.
Mel's laughter floats across the top floor of the building. She has a one bedroom apartment with a tiny kitchenette...
Mel's laughter floats across the top floor of the building. She has a one bedroom apartment with a tiny kitchenette...
#breakup
#family
#memories
#mystery
#risk
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Playing my role keeps her coming back for more
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#passion
#sex
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Secrets - Back to Lancashire (2)
Hills, and more hills, conjuring up thoughts of the old tongue twister about the ragged rascal running round and round the rugged hill. I get lost on the way. After stopping to look at the map, I retrace the route over a bridge and past a tiny village church, the colour of hay.
'Nearly there,' I say to Robert, listening to an iPod in the back.
My son doesn't reply, just stares out of the window. He's eight.
I wish you could meet Robert. I'm sure he'd warm to you. He does to certain people, but he has never bonded with me. I won’t use the word autism, but...
'Nearly there,' I say to Robert, listening to an iPod in the back.
My son doesn't reply, just stares out of the window. He's eight.
I wish you could meet Robert. I'm sure he'd warm to you. He does to certain people, but he has never bonded with me. I won’t use the word autism, but...
#childhood
#mystery
#risk
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Secrets - Back To Lancashire (1)
Let me explain, Craig. It's a mess.
Where do I begin? At the present time, I suppose. I started making notes this summer, hoping to regain a clearer picture of what actually took place on Whaley Hill. A therapeutic quest of sorts, especially after my marriage fell apart.
But I'm still searching for answers.
Nine years have passed since Macarthur attacked me with the crowbar during the storm.
But was it him?
According to the police, yes. He planned it while still in prison and he acted alone.
I can just about accept that...
Where do I begin? At the present time, I suppose. I started making notes this summer, hoping to regain a clearer picture of what actually took place on Whaley Hill. A therapeutic quest of sorts, especially after my marriage fell apart.
But I'm still searching for answers.
Nine years have passed since Macarthur attacked me with the crowbar during the storm.
But was it him?
According to the police, yes. He planned it while still in prison and he acted alone.
I can just about accept that...
#memories
#mystery
#risk
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Secret Mexican lover
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#sex
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