Fictional Prose Seeking Friendly Advice
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Short stories and chapters from books and novels
Friendly feedback has been requested for these poems.
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 3:42am
6th Apr 2024 3:42am
As I Watch
#erotic
#BDSM
111 reads
11 Comments
Lozzamus
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 8:24pm
5th Apr 2024 8:24pm
Silent - Rock Bottom
Two Years Ago, Gavin
Sorry, back with Aidan. x Philippa
Just like that. Dumped by text. No explanation, nothing.
The words Back with Aidan meant she had been his girlfriend all along. Philippa had lied from the moment she'd introduced me to him. Aidan had told the truth from the start.
My hands were shaking. Not putting up with this. I dialled her number.
She answered after four rings. 'You're wasting your time, Gavin. I've already made up my mind.'
She ended the call. I tried again, but this time voicemail took over and I...
Sorry, back with Aidan. x Philippa
Just like that. Dumped by text. No explanation, nothing.
The words Back with Aidan meant she had been his girlfriend all along. Philippa had lied from the moment she'd introduced me to him. Aidan had told the truth from the start.
My hands were shaking. Not putting up with this. I dialled her number.
She answered after four rings. 'You're wasting your time, Gavin. I've already made up my mind.'
She ended the call. I tried again, but this time voicemail took over and I...
#love
#relationships
#mystery #obsession
#mystery #obsession
70 reads
6 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 7:23pm
5th Apr 2024 7:23pm
Welcome to the Party Chapter 18
#lust
#dreams
#passion #manipulation
#passion #manipulation
31 reads
2 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 5:49pm
5th Apr 2024 5:49pm
The Chronicles of a Nipple
#erotic
#sensual
#seductive
86 reads
4 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 1:00pm
5th Apr 2024 1:00pm
Alice
Alice stayed at home.
Losing track of time.
She escaped into her imagination.
Where she traveled everyday.
She escaped into Wonderland.
And saw a cheshire cat.
She saw white roses painted red.
And a mad hatter as he sat.
He had a twisted smile.
She stayed there for a while.
Her head went up in the clouds.
Where has she gone now?
Has she escaped into her head?
Or was it to escape her frown?
At first,she did not know what it meant.
But she kept daydreaming,cheshire cat said.
When she...
Losing track of time.
She escaped into her imagination.
Where she traveled everyday.
She escaped into Wonderland.
And saw a cheshire cat.
She saw white roses painted red.
And a mad hatter as he sat.
He had a twisted smile.
She stayed there for a while.
Her head went up in the clouds.
Where has she gone now?
Has she escaped into her head?
Or was it to escape her frown?
At first,she did not know what it meant.
But she kept daydreaming,cheshire cat said.
When she...
#dreams
#escape
#FeelingTrapped
35 reads
0 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2024 4:53pm
3rd Apr 2024 4:53pm
Welcome to the Party Chapter 16
#lust
#dreams
#passion #manipulation
#passion #manipulation
31 reads
2 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 5:50am
2nd Apr 2024 5:50am
Welcome to the Party Chapter 15
#lust
#dreams
#passion #manipulation
#passion #manipulation
30 reads
2 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 8:30pm
1st Apr 2024 8:30pm
Welcome to the Party Chapter 14
#lust
#dreams
#passion #manipulation
#passion #manipulation
32 reads
3 Comments
Lozzamus
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 7:29pm
1st Apr 2024 7:29pm
Silent - The Moment Of Truth
Two Years Ago, Gavin
Bed and shower. At around half three, Philippa went back to her room to fetch a bottle of white wine and plastic cups, and we headed downstairs to the Remembrance Garden.
'What's really going on?' I said. 'You reinventing your background and coming here? Altering your age? Saying you're from Kent when you're from Exeter? Your interest in the fire?' I couldn't bring myself to mention Philippa's half-sister Lucy, since it seemed out of order, like betraying Lucy.
'I suppose now's the right time to tell you,' Philippa said. 'I'm the...
Bed and shower. At around half three, Philippa went back to her room to fetch a bottle of white wine and plastic cups, and we headed downstairs to the Remembrance Garden.
'What's really going on?' I said. 'You reinventing your background and coming here? Altering your age? Saying you're from Kent when you're from Exeter? Your interest in the fire?' I couldn't bring myself to mention Philippa's half-sister Lucy, since it seemed out of order, like betraying Lucy.
'I suppose now's the right time to tell you,' Philippa said. 'I'm the...
#relationships
#mystery
#obsession
61 reads
4 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 00:49am
1st Apr 2024 00:49am
Welcome to the Party Chapter 13
#lust
#dreams
#passion #manipulation
#passion #manipulation
31 reads
5 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
31st Mar 2024 00:24am
31st Mar 2024 00:24am
Welcome to the Party Chapter 12
#lust
#dreams
#passion #manipulation
#passion #manipulation
34 reads
5 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
30th Mar 2024 10:14am
30th Mar 2024 10:14am
Miss Prissy
Miss Prissy
He was dressed in his finest suit as he lay in his casket under the rotunda. Pat’s Aunt Mercy lay in her bed in a room off the big room. Her name was Pat and her duty was to sneak bourbon and whiskey to get Auntie drunk enough not to cry. She kept Pat on her feet as she went to the kitchen to get Auntie booze. Aunt Mercy ushered in her widowhood with gin and tonic with lime on the rocks. At twenty-one Pat was still girlish but old enough to learn how to mix drinks during a wake. Her bridegroom, Bob, was huddled with the men but quiet as a church mouse while letting...
He was dressed in his finest suit as he lay in his casket under the rotunda. Pat’s Aunt Mercy lay in her bed in a room off the big room. Her name was Pat and her duty was to sneak bourbon and whiskey to get Auntie drunk enough not to cry. She kept Pat on her feet as she went to the kitchen to get Auntie booze. Aunt Mercy ushered in her widowhood with gin and tonic with lime on the rocks. At twenty-one Pat was still girlish but old enough to learn how to mix drinks during a wake. Her bridegroom, Bob, was huddled with the men but quiet as a church mouse while letting...
#love
#marriage
#death
#TruthOfLife
#nostalgia
54 reads
2 Comments
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