Poems About Vampires by Top Critiquers
#vampires
Poems about vampires by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
KristinaX
Poem Published
27th Sep 2023 00:30am
27th Sep 2023 00:30am
Craving a painful eternity...
The molten sun will spill into the horizon,
And spread with cloying-honey wax.
After a long separation,
I will come again to His cold captivity,
to put on the loops of fetters.
In the eyes of the dialogue, running into infinity,
In the silence there is only a cry of desires and dreams.
We hadn't seen each other for a long time,
this painful eternity, Lost in each other,
as if in a prison.
And time was lost, falling off the cliff,
Only the pulse of a clear knock of the clock crushes.
We will get a chapter from the...
And spread with cloying-honey wax.
After a long separation,
I will come again to His cold captivity,
to put on the loops of fetters.
In the eyes of the dialogue, running into infinity,
In the silence there is only a cry of desires and dreams.
We hadn't seen each other for a long time,
this painful eternity, Lost in each other,
as if in a prison.
And time was lost, falling off the cliff,
Only the pulse of a clear knock of the clock crushes.
We will get a chapter from the...
#lust
#erotic
#BDSM
#vampires
#suffering
559 reads
35 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
27th Aug 2023 11:41am
27th Aug 2023 11:41am
Vampire Queen
#lust
#vampires
#sexy
132 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Jul 2023 2:14pm
1st Jul 2023 2:14pm
The Blood
a pinch of nutmeg
on top of your thoughts
intimate and unruly mixing
a touch of cardamom
on top of the most hidden parts
of your animal instincts
a scent of star anise
in your armpits and on your fingertips
in the sweat of your knees
smoked paprika salt
to sweeten your vital liquids
running through your open cracks
fresh turmeric and chamomile
to flavor your saliva
and thin the blood, the blood
you turn the blood into water
the water turns into wine
and the wine mixes with the...
on top of your thoughts
intimate and unruly mixing
a touch of cardamom
on top of the most hidden parts
of your animal instincts
a scent of star anise
in your armpits and on your fingertips
in the sweat of your knees
smoked paprika salt
to sweeten your vital liquids
running through your open cracks
fresh turmeric and chamomile
to flavor your saliva
and thin the blood, the blood
you turn the blood into water
the water turns into wine
and the wine mixes with the...
#love
#alcohol
#mirror
#vampires
#myself
174 reads
4 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
11th Dec 2018 7:16pm
11th Dec 2018 7:16pm
Form Of The Beast
In the form of the beast
He travels faster than a bullet
Like rain he descends upon his next soul
Knowing all
His power is absolute
The kiss from his lips
Is both cold and passionate
Ice in the veins
But deep inside a fiery urge
He will take all she has
Her body her spirit
The fire deep in her core
His thirst for flesh knows no bounds
Taking the sweetest pleasure
Torturing her mind
For it cannot be right to feel this way
To find his touch
Is the greatest touch of all
Marking his territory
His...
He travels faster than a bullet
Like rain he descends upon his next soul
Knowing all
His power is absolute
The kiss from his lips
Is both cold and passionate
Ice in the veins
But deep inside a fiery urge
He will take all she has
Her body her spirit
The fire deep in her core
His thirst for flesh knows no bounds
Taking the sweetest pleasure
Torturing her mind
For it cannot be right to feel this way
To find his touch
Is the greatest touch of all
Marking his territory
His...
#lust
#dark
#vampires
#sensual
#seductive
733 reads
8 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
4th Feb 2024 7:23pm
4th Feb 2024 7:23pm
Deja Vu
little slices of intent cut me
your bid to get away is futile
inside the noise you are lost
playing a melody only you hear I drive you mad
insatible lust you crave
it is with a directness I address you
do your worst
covet another, she will leave you unsatisfied
sate your hunger with one of your caliber
I don't undestimate you
don't do it with me
conflicting feelings will lend to your doubt
I see you in the internal storm
holding tight to your pride
restless Sadist
I will provoke your hand...
your bid to get away is futile
inside the noise you are lost
playing a melody only you hear I drive you mad
insatible lust you crave
it is with a directness I address you
do your worst
covet another, she will leave you unsatisfied
sate your hunger with one of your caliber
I don't undestimate you
don't do it with me
conflicting feelings will lend to your doubt
I see you in the internal storm
holding tight to your pride
restless Sadist
I will provoke your hand...
#lust
#vampires
91 reads
2 Comments
Lord_Stabdagger
Poem Published
17th Apr 2020 11:23pm
17th Apr 2020 11:23pm
The Vampire Tree.
Strands of rotten flesh are hanging free from twisted branches
Sun bleached bones are scattered round to where it’s standing
The ground beneath its roots are just as barren as a grave
A liquid not like water is the substance that it craves
According to old legend it’s the resting place of evil
Where once a heartless vampire used to feast upon the people
Now the tree is growing with its spirit trapped inside
Feeding on the children as they play and learn to climb
Many times attempts were made to take the...
Sun bleached bones are scattered round to where it’s standing
The ground beneath its roots are just as barren as a grave
A liquid not like water is the substance that it craves
According to old legend it’s the resting place of evil
Where once a heartless vampire used to feast upon the people
Now the tree is growing with its spirit trapped inside
Feeding on the children as they play and learn to climb
Many times attempts were made to take the...
#vampires
#mythology
#nightmares #curse
#nightmares #curse
291 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Oct 2023 1:53am
13th Oct 2023 1:53am
BEFORE DAWN THERE WAS A CROW
Have you ever tried to sleep yet your thoughts and your imagination, begins to run wild within the chambers of your mind.🤔 For it seems that the subconscious of your mind is running in over drive, taking total control of your mental abilities making it so hard to just THINK JUST TO ESCAPE.😞 This plan just might not work as you planned it would, yet is it still worth the risk to be able to relax your mind.To replace the process of the illusions with charity and understanding 🤔 For even now more than anything else specification is a warranty to maybe just before the...
#vampires
#ghosts
#mythology
#werewolves
#zombies
152 reads
0 Comments
Marks
Poem Published
16th Oct 2020 1:40am
16th Oct 2020 1:40am
She ...
.. ...
My *male intuition*...
My thoughts
My precognitions
She is air
She is sea breeze
She...
The wrinkles in my bed sheets...
Form her fangs ...
But not my dawns
She...
It is so easy to write a love poem
And complicate it until it gets gothic
It is so easy to become an intricate hunter
... ... ...
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Image: *Love and Pain (Vampire)* a painting by Edvard Munch -1895-
My *male intuition*...
My thoughts
My precognitions
She is air
She is sea breeze
She...
The wrinkles in my bed sheets...
Form her fangs ...
But not my dawns
She...
It is so easy to write a love poem
And complicate it until it gets gothic
It is so easy to become an intricate hunter
... ... ...
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Image: *Love and Pain (Vampire)* a painting by Edvard Munch -1895-
#dark
#gothic
#vampires
612 reads
8 Comments
Poetryman
Poem Published
13th Oct 2023 3:31pm
13th Oct 2023 3:31pm
It Wore a Red Leather Dress
In my peripheral vision I saw a vision
The waving in the breeze of a red leather dress
Skin tight around the hips open all the way to those red leather boots
The temptation to peek made me nervous at first
Somehow her legs blended in so well I could barely see them.
Each step opened the slit down the back
Exposing two shadowy shapes of what I thought might be legs
But I just couldn't see below the knee
Until her red leather boots glowed underneath
I walk around but somehow her back stayed facing me
"Her" indeed, it was...
The waving in the breeze of a red leather dress
Skin tight around the hips open all the way to those red leather boots
The temptation to peek made me nervous at first
Somehow her legs blended in so well I could barely see them.
Each step opened the slit down the back
Exposing two shadowy shapes of what I thought might be legs
But I just couldn't see below the knee
Until her red leather boots glowed underneath
I walk around but somehow her back stayed facing me
"Her" indeed, it was...
#dark
#death
#scary #vampires
#scary #vampires
153 reads
9 Comments
jigg82
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 4:31am
8th Apr 2024 4:31am
Blood Priestess
Arrested in the dead of night
By cloaking shadows and
Swift Ferocity.
her icy grip
Sharply piercing my veins
With scalding fangs.
passionately embraced
by death and love
And The cost of pain
From her succulent Feeding
Off my life blood.
A lustful torment I can’t and will not deny.
Now Trapped within her soulless
shoebox
My breath receding
Finding comfort in the darkness
with no holes for breathing.
I am reborn.
My once familiar soul has been
discarded and torn
I am drained hollow. ...
By cloaking shadows and
Swift Ferocity.
her icy grip
Sharply piercing my veins
With scalding fangs.
passionately embraced
by death and love
And The cost of pain
From her succulent Feeding
Off my life blood.
A lustful torment I can’t and will not deny.
Now Trapped within her soulless
shoebox
My breath receding
Finding comfort in the darkness
with no holes for breathing.
I am reborn.
My once familiar soul has been
discarded and torn
I am drained hollow. ...
#death
#vampires
#sacrifice #seductive
#sacrifice #seductive
147 reads
17 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
28th Oct 2023 3:35pm
28th Oct 2023 3:35pm
Slay Me!
(LibraSoul96/Billy Snagg)
Naked and vulnerable
Take me into your arms
Let the moonlit flood marinate our skin
Quench your undying desire for sex
As fangs sink deeper into my neck
Like a ravenous wolf howling at night
Make me moan and make me scream
Look into my eyes, devour my soul
Watch me gradually lose control
Gripping these red velvet sheets so tight
Everything about you feels so right!
There's only one thing spreading tonight
My legs, like an eagle, preparing for flight!
The room, it...
Naked and vulnerable
Take me into your arms
Let the moonlit flood marinate our skin
Quench your undying desire for sex
As fangs sink deeper into my neck
Like a ravenous wolf howling at night
Make me moan and make me scream
Look into my eyes, devour my soul
Watch me gradually lose control
Gripping these red velvet sheets so tight
Everything about you feels so right!
There's only one thing spreading tonight
My legs, like an eagle, preparing for flight!
The room, it...
#love
#lust
#vampires
#passion
#Halloween
609 reads
32 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
16th Nov 2022 8:03pm
16th Nov 2022 8:03pm
Reptiles with halos
From a fallen, Reptilian race a seraphim, a sapphire full of fire 🔥! With a new millennium face!
Sort of like a nephilim opposite of cherubim from old traditions, filled with magical and ritualistical ways!
Don't be afraid to turn the page as we embark down this unknown road in the dark in different dimensional phase,
Like a maze stay alert and aware don't get easily amazed!!
Drowned in a pool of lust overwhelmed, overcame out of control, consumed an overtaken, completely forced and persuaded and push to bust!!
Erupted in a new...
Sort of like a nephilim opposite of cherubim from old traditions, filled with magical and ritualistical ways!
Don't be afraid to turn the page as we embark down this unknown road in the dark in different dimensional phase,
Like a maze stay alert and aware don't get easily amazed!!
Drowned in a pool of lust overwhelmed, overcame out of control, consumed an overtaken, completely forced and persuaded and push to bust!!
Erupted in a new...
#monsters
#vampires
#dragons
#aliens
#witches
262 reads
3 Comments
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