Poems About Vampires by Top Critiquers
#vampires
Poems about vampires by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 10:54pm
13th Sep 2024 10:54pm
gizzards
interesting hateful and not listening
hardcore I don't give a fuck
a curse on the tip of my tongue
burns my lips as it tumbles out
shimmering mirage with depths
you haven't met me yet
pluck your insincerity and hex it
my tears are mine to collect
a beauty of a witch too bad
I had to be hurt
I'm not thug hard
but I've been around enough to hold my ground
for the life of me I don't know why
5150 attracts people from me
until the dark horde attacks
from the mist running in the background ...
hardcore I don't give a fuck
a curse on the tip of my tongue
burns my lips as it tumbles out
shimmering mirage with depths
you haven't met me yet
pluck your insincerity and hex it
my tears are mine to collect
a beauty of a witch too bad
I had to be hurt
I'm not thug hard
but I've been around enough to hold my ground
for the life of me I don't know why
5150 attracts people from me
until the dark horde attacks
from the mist running in the background ...
#vampires
#witches
108 reads
4 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 7:07pm
9th Oct 2024 7:07pm
The Call of The Dhampir chapter 3
Makalo(The prince)
The night wraps around the undead like a silken sheet that slowly caresses and transitions with their every move.
A slight shift disrupted the serene night. Everyone felt and knew "He" was approaching. The newly turned made their way to their rooms, and the older vampires stayed to greet the prince.
Makalo decided to enter his home through Abella's chambers. He wanted to see what his mate was up to. Once he regained his form from being a shapeless mist. He knew that Abella was not in her chamber. It did not bode well for her. ...
The night wraps around the undead like a silken sheet that slowly caresses and transitions with their every move.
A slight shift disrupted the serene night. Everyone felt and knew "He" was approaching. The newly turned made their way to their rooms, and the older vampires stayed to greet the prince.
Makalo decided to enter his home through Abella's chambers. He wanted to see what his mate was up to. Once he regained his form from being a shapeless mist. He knew that Abella was not in her chamber. It did not bode well for her. ...
#vampires
155 reads
10 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
18th May 2024 7:41pm
18th May 2024 7:41pm
Blood Eyes
Blood drizzled,, with immaculate precision,
down her ghostly porcelain skin.
Still scattered with a myriad of mortal scars.
She preferred to feast on a gentleman
A carnivore of lands afar.
Her fangs puncture abysmally deep
into a chain of broken souls.
She drank with the force of a speed told.
His turquoise vein, bulging taut,
rendered her immortality insane.
Her eyes, those blood red eyes,
a satiated ruby red glow.
She dumped his corpse into the virgin snow.
Yesterday's blood seeping onto the ice below.
Beware of...
down her ghostly porcelain skin.
Still scattered with a myriad of mortal scars.
She preferred to feast on a gentleman
A carnivore of lands afar.
Her fangs puncture abysmally deep
into a chain of broken souls.
She drank with the force of a speed told.
His turquoise vein, bulging taut,
rendered her immortality insane.
Her eyes, those blood red eyes,
a satiated ruby red glow.
She dumped his corpse into the virgin snow.
Yesterday's blood seeping onto the ice below.
Beware of...
#vampires
141 reads
12 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 8:14am
11th Oct 2024 8:14am
The Playful Dead
Fiery hair, black lace frocks
Entangled in her chains and locks
Howls reflect, beyond the night
Chambers blow a flick of light
Satanic verse, read out rites
Satan's curse, ravenous bites
Blazes strip dungeons, rooms
Gothic trips, roses doomed
A thirst for blood, world's apart
Mirrors judge, tainted hearts
Demonic dust, laid bare, bled
From dawn til' dusk... The Playful Dead
Entangled in her chains and locks
Howls reflect, beyond the night
Chambers blow a flick of light
Satanic verse, read out rites
Satan's curse, ravenous bites
Blazes strip dungeons, rooms
Gothic trips, roses doomed
A thirst for blood, world's apart
Mirrors judge, tainted hearts
Demonic dust, laid bare, bled
From dawn til' dusk... The Playful Dead
#ghosts
#vampires
#zombies
161 reads
20 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 11:58am
27th Oct 2024 11:58am
A WICKED WORLD
As long as I can remember I never truly thought that my hometown. 🌆 NEW YORK CITY 🏙️ WOULD BE BLANKET IN SHADES OF 🌑 DARKNESS. THE YEARS OF THE INVASION 2020 to now 2024 OF THE MAGGOTS, CALLED THE NEW COMERS OF AMERICA. IMMIGRANTS AS THEY WERE SENT BY BUSES AND PLANES, even walking across the border. WHO KNEW WILL BE DESTROYING THE CITY LIFE. 😲 YET here is the truth of the devastation of crimes, with no punishment or jail time, murders and robbery, and the senseless killings of American citizen. WHO are people young and elderly and childrens....
#money
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#vampires
#werewolves
74 reads
2 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 2:00pm
28th Jun 2024 2:00pm
Storm Dee
i'm a disastrous
mess a fucked
up disaster a
Raging storm
crazy tornados
race in my brain
enraged thunder
slaying demons
one at the time
i come at night
it's vampire life
blood feeds me
& fascinates me
satisfies my lust
it's twisted & sick
yet, it's who i am
thrill seeker chick
devil killer going to
do so till the day i die
mess a fucked
up disaster a
Raging storm
crazy tornados
race in my brain
enraged thunder
slaying demons
one at the time
i come at night
it's vampire life
blood feeds me
& fascinates me
satisfies my lust
it's twisted & sick
yet, it's who i am
thrill seeker chick
devil killer going to
do so till the day i die
#dark
#vampires
190 reads
14 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th May 2024 5:39pm
18th May 2024 5:39pm
Vampire's Delight
Bite me
Hard
Break the skin
Drink my blood
Lush and lively
Thinned as you like it
Perfect bloody man drink
Shockingly delicious
All night long
Hard
Break the skin
Drink my blood
Lush and lively
Thinned as you like it
Perfect bloody man drink
Shockingly delicious
All night long
#dark
#SelfHarm
#temptation #vampires
#temptation #vampires
276 reads
34 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 10:17pm
15th Nov 2024 10:17pm
Academia Cello -- with Crimsin
Concerto macabre's academia cello
suckled from the breast of the unapologetic
accompanied by the woodwind bassoon
dripping the twilight's crimson Welsh rarebit
listening to the Aria of the Gothic mosquito
lusting the flesh smelling the souls
gorging on the veins hugging a tree
with the epitome of a vampire
Vampiric Greed sang solo
an opera of the damned
keening apologetically, she feared their pain
sinister aches stir within
the lust of the flesh must be fed
ending with blood it's Midnight
the...
suckled from the breast of the unapologetic
accompanied by the woodwind bassoon
dripping the twilight's crimson Welsh rarebit
listening to the Aria of the Gothic mosquito
lusting the flesh smelling the souls
gorging on the veins hugging a tree
with the epitome of a vampire
Vampiric Greed sang solo
an opera of the damned
keening apologetically, she feared their pain
sinister aches stir within
the lust of the flesh must be fed
ending with blood it's Midnight
the...
#collaboration
#dark
#vampires #erotic
#vampires #erotic
70 reads
6 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2024 4:20am
23rd Aug 2024 4:20am
The Apprentice
the dark lord's young apprentice
his eyes full of hope for promises
made by the lord's dark whispers
of dark magic and adventures
he stood in shadows deep
listening for the presence
of he who promised to keep
the appointment in his essence
A dance of whispers began
and his lord did appear
but the night deceived his mind
for his lord was a lady fair
her full lips red that curled with sin
her eyes red tinged with emerald green
her breasts firm full and round
waiting for a lover's hand
...
his eyes full of hope for promises
made by the lord's dark whispers
of dark magic and adventures
he stood in shadows deep
listening for the presence
of he who promised to keep
the appointment in his essence
A dance of whispers began
and his lord did appear
but the night deceived his mind
for his lord was a lady fair
her full lips red that curled with sin
her eyes red tinged with emerald green
her breasts firm full and round
waiting for a lover's hand
...
#vampires
165 reads
4 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
11th Dec 2018 7:16pm
11th Dec 2018 7:16pm
Form Of The Beast
In the form of the beast
He travels faster than a bullet
Like rain he descends upon his next soul
Knowing all
His power is absolute
The kiss from his lips
Is both cold and passionate
Ice in the veins
But deep inside a fiery urge
He will take all she has
Her body her spirit
The fire deep in her core
His thirst for flesh knows no bounds
Taking the sweetest pleasure
Torturing her mind
For it cannot be right to feel this way
To find his touch
Is the greatest touch of all
Marking his territory
His...
He travels faster than a bullet
Like rain he descends upon his next soul
Knowing all
His power is absolute
The kiss from his lips
Is both cold and passionate
Ice in the veins
But deep inside a fiery urge
He will take all she has
Her body her spirit
The fire deep in her core
His thirst for flesh knows no bounds
Taking the sweetest pleasure
Torturing her mind
For it cannot be right to feel this way
To find his touch
Is the greatest touch of all
Marking his territory
His...
#lust
#dark
#vampires
#sensual
#seductive
775 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 11:44pm
18th Aug 2024 11:44pm
Him.. Yes You, My Love, Always
Mm.. whisper to me and tell how long it takes to get to the center of my esoteric cream centered vibe
Once you have me on your King size bed, naked, thighs parted, wet for you, open and wide
Consuming my honeypot, fully forcing my moans of hungry passion, in the tease
Heart beating preparing a river of a tricking rain to flee
What joy, what ecstasy as we ride the same path
Wondrous sexual calamity, moisten as your family jewels sink into my griping gripping salve
Unrestrained, silent...
Once you have me on your King size bed, naked, thighs parted, wet for you, open and wide
Consuming my honeypot, fully forcing my moans of hungry passion, in the tease
Heart beating preparing a river of a tricking rain to flee
What joy, what ecstasy as we ride the same path
Wondrous sexual calamity, moisten as your family jewels sink into my griping gripping salve
Unrestrained, silent...
#love
#seductive
#sensual
#passion
#vampires
325 reads
5 Comments
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