Poems About the Universe Seeking Honest Critique
#universe
Poems about the universe seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Mar 2024 6:09pm
18th Mar 2024 6:09pm
King of the Road
A traveling wiz kid
Shit kicker
Gathering speed
Push button magic
Cyclone launch
Over the edge
Asphalt rising
Hotdogging
Driving into the interstellar highway
Eatin dust!
Neptune’s convoy or the boogie van
Velvet interior, hell on wheels
His freedom of choice
Picking up his trapeze freak, sea hag
At the space farm
She once owned a Coyote Duster
A super shooter, strato-streak machine
Currently lugs around in a Falcon
White dice
The two are missing links
From a...
Shit kicker
Gathering speed
Push button magic
Cyclone launch
Over the edge
Asphalt rising
Hotdogging
Driving into the interstellar highway
Eatin dust!
Neptune’s convoy or the boogie van
Velvet interior, hell on wheels
His freedom of choice
Picking up his trapeze freak, sea hag
At the space farm
She once owned a Coyote Duster
A super shooter, strato-streak machine
Currently lugs around in a Falcon
White dice
The two are missing links
From a...
#universe
#rainbow
#cars
#ShortStory
#scifi
65 reads
7 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Mar 2024 9:28pm
13th Mar 2024 9:28pm
There is Transformation in Death
For some species on earth,
there is transformation in death, a renaissance
if you will, becoming young all over again, whether you
see it as reincarnation or rebirth, a new life begins. There is
transformation in death, some lifeforms can be considered
immortal, the cycle continues underneath the ocean waves,
filling the sea with vibrant and deadly limbs. But that’s the
way nature has made them out to be, a wonderful creation of
beauty and wonder, for when their time comes, ...
there is transformation in death, a renaissance
if you will, becoming young all over again, whether you
see it as reincarnation or rebirth, a new life begins. There is
transformation in death, some lifeforms can be considered
immortal, the cycle continues underneath the ocean waves,
filling the sea with vibrant and deadly limbs. But that’s the
way nature has made them out to be, a wonderful creation of
beauty and wonder, for when their time comes, ...
#universe
#nature
#fish
101 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
11th Mar 2024 3:47pm
11th Mar 2024 3:47pm
Garden of Stars
In the twilight of memories,
where the real and the imaginary intertwine,
there is a secret garden, hidden among the stars,
a refuge of dreams and hopes.
On the banks of the river of eternity
flowers made of light and longing grow.
Its petals sparkle like constellations,
and its roots go back in time.
Every flower holds a story,
a love that transcends mortality.
The winds whisper ancient secrets
and the stars weave threads of destiny.
In the center of the garden there is a mirror
reflecting the longings of...
where the real and the imaginary intertwine,
there is a secret garden, hidden among the stars,
a refuge of dreams and hopes.
On the banks of the river of eternity
flowers made of light and longing grow.
Its petals sparkle like constellations,
and its roots go back in time.
Every flower holds a story,
a love that transcends mortality.
The winds whisper ancient secrets
and the stars weave threads of destiny.
In the center of the garden there is a mirror
reflecting the longings of...
#love
#flowers
#universe
#stars
#mystery
89 reads
7 Comments
Breedlove
Poem Published
9th Mar 2024 2:43am
9th Mar 2024 2:43am
The Truth
#heartbroken
#conflict
#betrayal #universe
#betrayal #universe
49 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
4th Mar 2024 3:50pm
4th Mar 2024 3:50pm
Immortal Love 2
I was the only being existing on earth with immortal love.
For millennia, I sought true love that could not die,
But this kind of love did not exist on the planet.
The love of the daughters of earth could not last forever.
They were mortals and I was an immortal being.
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one day.
I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mine.
How I wanted to get out of this dying world.
Then at last, I saw an advanced starship descending slowly.
An alien...
For millennia, I sought true love that could not die,
But this kind of love did not exist on the planet.
The love of the daughters of earth could not last forever.
They were mortals and I was an immortal being.
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one day.
I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mine.
How I wanted to get out of this dying world.
Then at last, I saw an advanced starship descending slowly.
An alien...
#love
#universe
#aliens
#scifi
#travel
101 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 9:14pm
1st Mar 2024 9:14pm
Elizabelle the series~Bren
Daddy did you not know?
Bren has come from her wandering in the universes
she has returned to Earth to rest
while I silently listen to her observations taking note
she is an earthling I am not
I am here with her experiencing secondhand what she feels
I make my observations and share them with you my father
I am brens alien spirit child
she is my mother and host
I would like to have my own mortal body someday
but I should also very much like to travel space
like a space pirate
Bren is communing today with the...
Bren has come from her wandering in the universes
she has returned to Earth to rest
while I silently listen to her observations taking note
she is an earthling I am not
I am here with her experiencing secondhand what she feels
I make my observations and share them with you my father
I am brens alien spirit child
she is my mother and host
I would like to have my own mortal body someday
but I should also very much like to travel space
like a space pirate
Bren is communing today with the...
#universe
#aliens
70 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 00:55am
1st Mar 2024 00:55am
Hidden Memories The Regress
my tapestry of hidden memories
rise within me bringing back to memory past lives
a place of visions
a place where I can breathe
I regress into nothingness
to the void before time existed
like a space mermaid, I swim
echoing high and low seeking the others
swimming so deep into the abyss that I tire
I cover myself with the dark and anchor in to rest
waking from startling visions of what is to be
first, I was awake and aware I was
using sonar-like pings
I send them out on the waves in space
then wait to...
rise within me bringing back to memory past lives
a place of visions
a place where I can breathe
I regress into nothingness
to the void before time existed
like a space mermaid, I swim
echoing high and low seeking the others
swimming so deep into the abyss that I tire
I cover myself with the dark and anchor in to rest
waking from startling visions of what is to be
first, I was awake and aware I was
using sonar-like pings
I send them out on the waves in space
then wait to...
#universe
#aliens
#scifi
83 reads
8 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
26th Feb 2024 5:00pm
26th Feb 2024 5:00pm
Fragments
All aspiration by inspiration;
true poets cannot help but yearn
for words to douse the conflagration
of cerebration that seems to burn
like Anemoi in the lungs...
to expound in Babel Tower tongues
all of the Olympian things we learn!
And then one day we see our age
slipping away like gods on a breeze;
an exeunt-omnes from the stage...
to blend forever in the trees.
The bones creak like a ghost town board
as I long to sport with the wind...
to have more Aether, by my verse, explored, ...
true poets cannot help but yearn
for words to douse the conflagration
of cerebration that seems to burn
like Anemoi in the lungs...
to expound in Babel Tower tongues
all of the Olympian things we learn!
And then one day we see our age
slipping away like gods on a breeze;
an exeunt-omnes from the stage...
to blend forever in the trees.
The bones creak like a ghost town board
as I long to sport with the wind...
to have more Aether, by my verse, explored, ...
#universe
102 reads
4 Comments
POEADREAM37
Poem Published
19th Feb 2024 3:02am
19th Feb 2024 3:02am
Star Wars
The stars are aligned with my soul,
Mars as my fingernails,
Read this brail,
We seek and tell the truth,
Venus like a belt, this loop,
Is seldomly moved,
Neptunes a lace, placed inside the loops of my shoes like snakes when they move,
My heart,
Races hard,
Mars is my guard, come marvel and march with me,
Walk quickly to saturn,
Eclipsed to the masses this glyph,
Like a lantern burning pictures to ashes,
Risk is all i have,
My eyes on venus,
Rise like creases in jeans im neat what it seems,
We speak wit a meaning,...
Mars as my fingernails,
Read this brail,
We seek and tell the truth,
Venus like a belt, this loop,
Is seldomly moved,
Neptunes a lace, placed inside the loops of my shoes like snakes when they move,
My heart,
Races hard,
Mars is my guard, come marvel and march with me,
Walk quickly to saturn,
Eclipsed to the masses this glyph,
Like a lantern burning pictures to ashes,
Risk is all i have,
My eyes on venus,
Rise like creases in jeans im neat what it seems,
We speak wit a meaning,...
#universe
#moon
#stars
#evolution
#astronomy
77 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
9th Feb 2024 3:57pm
9th Feb 2024 3:57pm
Empty spaces between commas...
I know witches
who like concoctions
but they don't have
any vegan options!
I know bitches
who like production
but they have no
sense of fashion!
I know assholes
who ask for emotion
but they have no
any good duration!
I know some moles
who dig big suction
but they have no
lasting long action!
I know many others
that keep in motion
but their heat has no
effect of induction!
who like concoctions
but they don't have
any vegan options!
I know bitches
who like production
but they have no
sense of fashion!
I know assholes
who ask for emotion
but they have no
any good duration!
I know some moles
who dig big suction
but they have no
lasting long action!
I know many others
that keep in motion
but their heat has no
effect of induction!
#universe
#patience
#WritingPoetry
#PopCulture
#seductive
84 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 10:39pm
7th Feb 2024 10:39pm
Crossbones
The ages haunt the bookworm brain
with letters in a torrent blast
no concentration might sustain
into a resurrected past.
No measure of nostalgia dust,
to which some potion we might add
to magically reverse the rust,
for glory once more to be had
among all sorts of ancient things
that once upon a time were grand
where now only ruination sings
to cover pride in heaping sand,
taming ambition's eager dare...
into extinction's stale air!
with letters in a torrent blast
no concentration might sustain
into a resurrected past.
No measure of nostalgia dust,
to which some potion we might add
to magically reverse the rust,
for glory once more to be had
among all sorts of ancient things
that once upon a time were grand
where now only ruination sings
to cover pride in heaping sand,
taming ambition's eager dare...
into extinction's stale air!
#universe
#fate
85 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 9:21pm
7th Feb 2024 9:21pm
The Mesonoxian Order
It's in radio wave propagation
mimicking stone drop ripples in a lake
or the wave forms of a sidewinder snake
in a state of venomous predation
as constant as retro broadcasting pips
in evermore globular expansion
toward heaven's zodiacal mansion,
like songs from Aphrodite's dulcet lips
scoring all of the steady cosmic states
with the epicycling glissando beams
an angel host might see in all their dreams
where background splendor officiates,
as it does from Saturn's awesome rings,
down through all the hearts...full...
mimicking stone drop ripples in a lake
or the wave forms of a sidewinder snake
in a state of venomous predation
as constant as retro broadcasting pips
in evermore globular expansion
toward heaven's zodiacal mansion,
like songs from Aphrodite's dulcet lips
scoring all of the steady cosmic states
with the epicycling glissando beams
an angel host might see in all their dreams
where background splendor officiates,
as it does from Saturn's awesome rings,
down through all the hearts...full...
#universe
#astronomy
83 reads
0 Comments
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