Poems About Unicorns Seeking Honest Critique
#unicorns
Time's Up
In a blind rage of all or nothing
the ghost of our God stole in
to stare at the fools in the mirror
and ask them what they'd seen
Our finest years grew heartless
as we became dead to His call
sorry lives controlled by greed
such sad existence with no heart at all
So what message would He offer
to our soulless desert of pain
where twilight covers the sun
through clouds of acid rain
If I was God I'd tell the truth
knowing humans cannot change
Our design was always flawed
and Earth must start again
the ghost of our God stole in
to stare at the fools in the mirror
and ask them what they'd seen
Our finest years grew heartless
as we became dead to His call
sorry lives controlled by greed
such sad existence with no heart at all
So what message would He offer
to our soulless desert of pain
where twilight covers the sun
through clouds of acid rain
If I was God I'd tell the truth
knowing humans cannot change
Our design was always flawed
and Earth must start again
#God
#humankind
#unicorns #greed
#unicorns #greed
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Gods of Rhyme
Maybe she's a goddess
maybe he's a god
all the poets I've known
are bound to give them the nod
We all bend the knee
when it's writing time
when the words stream down
from the gods of rhyme
When the words keep bouncing
round your head
you can't help wonder
where your pen gets led
From the clearest mountain
where reason flies
to the darkest corner
with unseeing eyes
I knew my beginnings
but I don't know the end
so there's no sense guessing
if a rhyme's your friend
...
maybe he's a god
all the poets I've known
are bound to give them the nod
We all bend the knee
when it's writing time
when the words stream down
from the gods of rhyme
When the words keep bouncing
round your head
you can't help wonder
where your pen gets led
From the clearest mountain
where reason flies
to the darkest corner
with unseeing eyes
I knew my beginnings
but I don't know the end
so there's no sense guessing
if a rhyme's your friend
...
#lyrics
#LifeAsAWriter
#unicorns
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Great American Jackalope
mythical animal
of
north american folklore
sometimes referred to as
'horned' hares or
'warty' rabbits
jackalope
a portmanteau of jackrabbit
and antelope.
most often described
as a jackrabbit
with antelope horns
tales of horned hares have long existed
likely inspired by sightings
of rabbits infected with shope-papilloma virus,
causing horn-and antler-like
tumors
on a rabbit's head and body.
in central america,
ancient huichol
oral tradition
passed...
of
north american folklore
sometimes referred to as
'horned' hares or
'warty' rabbits
jackalope
a portmanteau of jackrabbit
and antelope.
most often described
as a jackrabbit
with antelope horns
tales of horned hares have long existed
likely inspired by sightings
of rabbits infected with shope-papilloma virus,
causing horn-and antler-like
tumors
on a rabbit's head and body.
in central america,
ancient huichol
oral tradition
passed...
#America
#funny
#unicorns #mythology
#unicorns #mythology
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A Dog's Life
I'm puzzled by the muzzle
they've wrapped around my snout
it must have been because
of those times that I got out
I was only being friendly
while my master wasn't there
but the lady with the baby
started screaming in despair
The farmer with the sheep
went fumbling for his gun
I'd jumped the fence to play
and then I had to run
I couldn't wait to queue
when the butcher's shop
smelled yummy
so I made a quick escape
with a sausage in my tummy
The only thing I've bitten ...
they've wrapped around my snout
it must have been because
of those times that I got out
I was only being friendly
while my master wasn't there
but the lady with the baby
started screaming in despair
The farmer with the sheep
went fumbling for his gun
I'd jumped the fence to play
and then I had to run
I couldn't wait to queue
when the butcher's shop
smelled yummy
so I made a quick escape
with a sausage in my tummy
The only thing I've bitten ...
#dogs
#unicorns
#inequality
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one needs to accept the situation
the only way out was by finding a way in and then turning it around
about now I think no, I’ll just stay where I am
about now I think no, I’ll just stay where I am
#unicorns
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Imprinted Souls
listening to my soul I am spellbound
cast into the universes
an immortal bound to the earth
fate tips her hand
and leads me deep into my searching
sanctifying the way
sared in the art of understanding
I peer at the mortal
gleaning knowledge
gone far and wide
I seek the hidden gems
other souls cast here also
revealing a beauty so ancient
close held secrets beckon I come closer
bidden to enter a knowing
reaching a point in my being where I am forgiving
taking note of the obscene
the macabre...
cast into the universes
an immortal bound to the earth
fate tips her hand
and leads me deep into my searching
sanctifying the way
sared in the art of understanding
I peer at the mortal
gleaning knowledge
gone far and wide
I seek the hidden gems
other souls cast here also
revealing a beauty so ancient
close held secrets beckon I come closer
bidden to enter a knowing
reaching a point in my being where I am forgiving
taking note of the obscene
the macabre...
#love
#beauty
#dreams
#dragons
#unicorns
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best pubs
the old shades on pall mall was my favourite for a while
I thought of the chandos near charing cross with a smile I remembered,
not its name,
but that pub in dartford by a mile ..
I thought of the chandos near charing cross with a smile I remembered,
not its name,
but that pub in dartford by a mile ..
#unicorns
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Contented Kitty
#erotic
#unicorns
#sensual #orgasm
#sensual #orgasm
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Breaking News!!!
#sex
#religion
#aliens #unicorns
#aliens #unicorns
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Re-Cycling
no resolutions
no promises
to be broken
no plans or goals
a clean slate
a new orbit around the sun
a new journey
without expectations
only wonder
no promises
to be broken
no plans or goals
a clean slate
a new orbit around the sun
a new journey
without expectations
only wonder
#spiritual
#unicorns
#NewYear
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Pointless Poem
the label on the
yellow net bag
in bold letters
“seedless lemons”
whats the point
of a seedless lemon?
isn’t the purpose of fruit
to propagate
to make seed to distribute
to insure survival?
so whats the point
of a seedless fruit?
same as a
pointless needle
or this
pointless poem
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
yellow net bag
in bold letters
“seedless lemons”
whats the point
of a seedless lemon?
isn’t the purpose of fruit
to propagate
to make seed to distribute
to insure survival?
so whats the point
of a seedless fruit?
same as a
pointless needle
or this
pointless poem
© 2023 Raibeart Bruis
#environment
#WritingPoetry
#unicorns #hypocrisy
#unicorns #hypocrisy
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Kneel Not In Prayer
#relationships
#BDSM
#unicorns #passion
#unicorns #passion
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