Poems About Trees Seeking Honest Critique
#trees
Poems about trees seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Emily Lema Lucy and Neil. Yes you.
Things aren't fine
For the dine.
Be slow.
Birthday.
Be cautious of uncles
We have been
Fortunate enough
To have a good
Ceremony at the end.
Be careful of your
Coming to home while
bus or train running late.
Be careful with a
Good gracias.
Much longer
Than I needed.
Never let anyone!??
as the fruits of divine
Are relish to cherish.
Preservation is the best care.
Letter to Emily, lema and Lucy anda boy Neil.
For the dine.
Be slow.
Birthday.
Be cautious of uncles
We have been
Fortunate enough
To have a good
Ceremony at the end.
Be careful of your
Coming to home while
bus or train running late.
Be careful with a
Good gracias.
Much longer
Than I needed.
Never let anyone!??
as the fruits of divine
Are relish to cherish.
Preservation is the best care.
Letter to Emily, lema and Lucy anda boy Neil.
#trees
#flowers
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Were I a Palm Tree
I see a palm tree
stand tall
arms spread wide
reaching across the sky
fingers waving in the wind.
As I look at the palm tree
I wonder
if it were me
would I be as happy and glee?
stand tall
arms spread wide
reaching across the sky
fingers waving in the wind.
As I look at the palm tree
I wonder
if it were me
would I be as happy and glee?
#trees
#nature
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Sunset
I sat beneath an Almond tree
by the sea,
and looked at the sun as it set
over the horizon.
The sea,
in its serenity,
beckoned to me.
I closed my eyes
and the magic died.
by the sea,
and looked at the sun as it set
over the horizon.
The sea,
in its serenity,
beckoned to me.
I closed my eyes
and the magic died.
#trees
#sun
#nature
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The hobbit.
Hobbies that are
Self made.
Self made.
#trees
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Life of a Tree
Deeply rooted in the womb of
Mother Earth
Branches stretched out to the sky
I connect this planet with the
Spiritual realm
Being a tree I am more awaken
Than I was in my life as a human
Once I was an insecure woman
Full of doubt without self-esteem
Now I live in widening circles and
Trust in nature's cyclical unfolding
Every spring I am reborn
In full bloom
A bride of the man of green
Soon after I give birth to
Sweet summer fruits
Before autumnal storms
Ask me for the death dance
And I let...
Mother Earth
Branches stretched out to the sky
I connect this planet with the
Spiritual realm
Being a tree I am more awaken
Than I was in my life as a human
Once I was an insecure woman
Full of doubt without self-esteem
Now I live in widening circles and
Trust in nature's cyclical unfolding
Every spring I am reborn
In full bloom
A bride of the man of green
Soon after I give birth to
Sweet summer fruits
Before autumnal storms
Ask me for the death dance
And I let...
#forest
#trees
#LifeCycle
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Common Juniper
bitter blue berries
juniperus communis
snow cloaked conifer
© 2024 Raibeart Bruis
juniperus communis
snow cloaked conifer
© 2024 Raibeart Bruis
#trees
#winter
#nature #haiku
#nature #haiku
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Belief, that nature will promote
The forest floor, part shade it lay
sunlight, its glint was, obscured day
alone I stood in wonders gasp
like an ant, I was dwarfed by mass
The monolith that stood before
its breadth and span that rendered awe
and questions came to Google it?
that magesty from just a pip!
For centuries its growth upright
forest fires, its progress could not blight
natives honoured ancient truthes
spirits good, traped within its roots
As its altars towered high
the forever saquoia, sanctifies
a feeling, God...
sunlight, its glint was, obscured day
alone I stood in wonders gasp
like an ant, I was dwarfed by mass
The monolith that stood before
its breadth and span that rendered awe
and questions came to Google it?
that magesty from just a pip!
For centuries its growth upright
forest fires, its progress could not blight
natives honoured ancient truthes
spirits good, traped within its roots
As its altars towered high
the forever saquoia, sanctifies
a feeling, God...
#trees
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0 Comments
Forever Sequoia
A witness to Earth's history.
Fire and storm resistant
and caring for the life that inhabits her.
Silent is a wise Sequoia
the oldest tree in the world.
And shares natural wisdom
with whoever listens.
Symbol of immortality and hope
and I say to those who wonder:
forever Sequoia.
Triumphant wood of life
and box of the essence of the world...
blood-sap running red!
A tree forever!
A vision of eternal beauty!
Forever Sequoia!
Fire and storm resistant
and caring for the life that inhabits her.
Silent is a wise Sequoia
the oldest tree in the world.
And shares natural wisdom
with whoever listens.
Symbol of immortality and hope
and I say to those who wonder:
forever Sequoia.
Triumphant wood of life
and box of the essence of the world...
blood-sap running red!
A tree forever!
A vision of eternal beauty!
Forever Sequoia!
#happiness
#forest
#trees
#nature
#spiritual
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Winter awaits her love
Cold, gray skies
trees leafless, not ready to die
gentle breeze rustles limbs
reminding us of summer's whims.
Nothing has ended
snow has only blended
the gray hues together
to form a beautiful nature sweater
to adorn the world in it's mourning
only waiting for spring's lovely morning
to awaken what was asleep
and to finally grant us peace to keep.
trees leafless, not ready to die
gentle breeze rustles limbs
reminding us of summer's whims.
Nothing has ended
snow has only blended
the gray hues together
to form a beautiful nature sweater
to adorn the world in it's mourning
only waiting for spring's lovely morning
to awaken what was asleep
and to finally grant us peace to keep.
#trees
#winter
#nature
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One's Personal Opinion On The Holidays
If
you were
to ask me,
Christmas shopping
could really be
causing strong damage to
one's sanity for you have
to find each of those on your list
the perfect gift, the right things for your
tree and other Yuletide stuff like that.
you were
to ask me,
Christmas shopping
could really be
causing strong damage to
one's sanity for you have
to find each of those on your list
the perfect gift, the right things for your
tree and other Yuletide stuff like that.
#trees
#Christmas
#MentalHealth
#dialogue
#nonfiction
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Autumnal Flow
crystalline ice flowing beneath
azure atmosphere living art
painter streaking stroking leisurely
creating erasing recreating adapting
autumn scented breeze cooling
yellowing leaves flutter falling
settling insulating brown earth
beneath flowing crystalline ice
azure atmosphere living art
painter streaking stroking leisurely
creating erasing recreating adapting
autumn scented breeze cooling
yellowing leaves flutter falling
settling insulating brown earth
beneath flowing crystalline ice
#trees
#fall
#wind #nature
#wind #nature
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Nature’s Bounty
What a time
To be alive
Slowly awakened by rustling leaves
Swaying in the gentle fall breeze
The distant call and response;
A pair of red robins
Join in nature’s chorus
A symphony of calmness
My eyes wander through the foliage
Admiring the collage of colors
Vibrant, lush greenery greets my gaze
Surrounded by an invigorating, uplifting aura
I lethargically take a strolling glimpse
Up above the forest —
A crisp, blue canvas patterned with milky, white clouds meets my pupils
The...
To be alive
Slowly awakened by rustling leaves
Swaying in the gentle fall breeze
The distant call and response;
A pair of red robins
Join in nature’s chorus
A symphony of calmness
My eyes wander through the foliage
Admiring the collage of colors
Vibrant, lush greenery greets my gaze
Surrounded by an invigorating, uplifting aura
I lethargically take a strolling glimpse
Up above the forest —
A crisp, blue canvas patterned with milky, white clouds meets my pupils
The...
#countryside
#forest
#trees
#sky
#nature
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DU Poetry : Poems About Trees Seeking Honest Critique