Poems About Tolerance Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about tolerance seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Jun 2023 7:14pm
14th Jun 2023 7:14pm
Her Lips Are Like Pink Curtains
Her lips are like pink
curtains covering
the braces made of
metal that are on
the teeth in her mouth.
curtains covering
the braces made of
metal that are on
the teeth in her mouth.
#grief
#relationships
#fiction
#dialogue
#tolerance
229 reads
4 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
11th Jun 2023 10:35pm
11th Jun 2023 10:35pm
temperance
a quatrain
The beauty of the soul shines out when a man bears with composure one heavy
mischance after another, not because he does not feel them, but because he is
a man of high and heroic temper.—Aristotle
pins and needles pierce unguarded flesh
as, naked, i navigate my path;
tho my trickling blood bleeds hot and fresh,
i am wont to keep controlled my wrath.
ridiculed by sage and psychopath,
sanctioned by the greed of selfish men,
i am won't to keep controlled my wrath;
thus may i maintain my acumen. ...
The beauty of the soul shines out when a man bears with composure one heavy
mischance after another, not because he does not feel them, but because he is
a man of high and heroic temper.—Aristotle
pins and needles pierce unguarded flesh
as, naked, i navigate my path;
tho my trickling blood bleeds hot and fresh,
i am wont to keep controlled my wrath.
ridiculed by sage and psychopath,
sanctioned by the greed of selfish men,
i am won't to keep controlled my wrath;
thus may i maintain my acumen. ...
#anger
#LifeStruggles
#inspirational
#inequality
#tolerance
324 reads
3 Comments
BITS
Poem Published
8th Jun 2023 6:59am
8th Jun 2023 6:59am
(Part 2) I Hate Computer Cookies Trilogy
I hate that poetry is mocked yet writing lyrics is cool. Ignore the critics. Express yourself on a page, trust me, it will set you free.
I hate people who dare to paint their front door illuminous green, no, no, no. You are not edgy and cool and pushing the boundaries, you are out of touch,just like undercuts, 16 hole Doc Martens and Def leopard back patches.
I hate back seat drivers, if I ever want a co-pilot I’d ask. Nobody ever goes up to the pilot of a plane and offers “ Hey Bud, might be quicker if we swing by the Cape Verde Islands there!”
I hate small...
I hate people who dare to paint their front door illuminous green, no, no, no. You are not edgy and cool and pushing the boundaries, you are out of touch,just like undercuts, 16 hole Doc Martens and Def leopard back patches.
I hate back seat drivers, if I ever want a co-pilot I’d ask. Nobody ever goes up to the pilot of a plane and offers “ Hey Bud, might be quicker if we swing by the Cape Verde Islands there!”
I hate small...
#funny
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#wisdom
#tolerance
293 reads
6 Comments
Markis
Poem Published
21st Mar 2023 9:54am
21st Mar 2023 9:54am
We are one
We were born from blood!
Blood and fire!
We received the baptism and passed it on!
Wolf cubs, we tore each other apart.
Fangs and claws should have been our coat of arms!
Who are we today?
How do we look towards tomorrow?
When yesterday's fears haunts us,
When everything seems different than it was...
Who are you, my neighbor?
What do you want from me?
What do I hope for from you?
How would you like us to be tomorrow?
Millennia spin in our blood
Like a rolling wave they come towards us!
You're not my...
Blood and fire!
We received the baptism and passed it on!
Wolf cubs, we tore each other apart.
Fangs and claws should have been our coat of arms!
Who are we today?
How do we look towards tomorrow?
When yesterday's fears haunts us,
When everything seems different than it was...
Who are you, my neighbor?
What do you want from me?
What do I hope for from you?
How would you like us to be tomorrow?
Millennia spin in our blood
Like a rolling wave they come towards us!
You're not my...
#uplifting
#gratitude
#heroic #tolerance
#heroic #tolerance
254 reads
4 Comments
LiliH13
Poem Published
19th Mar 2023 10:14pm
19th Mar 2023 10:14pm
Bad temper
The Lily of the Valley
Blossoms beautifully
Its fragance is light and fresh
But poison runs through its veins,
A dark side
It surely hides
Somehow similar to this flower
Two sides are part of this girl
On her happy days,
Like a nightingale
Sitting on a cherry tree's branche
She sings the greatest melodies
But when angry,
Becoming a deadly tornado
She destroys all in her path
Blossoms beautifully
Its fragance is light and fresh
But poison runs through its veins,
A dark side
It surely hides
Somehow similar to this flower
Two sides are part of this girl
On her happy days,
Like a nightingale
Sitting on a cherry tree's branche
She sings the greatest melodies
But when angry,
Becoming a deadly tornado
She destroys all in her path
#tolerance
261 reads
2 Comments
jemac
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2023 4:14pm
2nd Feb 2023 4:14pm
My heart
her heart
isn't perfect
it is layered with emotions
pulsing through thick veins
it has been punished
brutally
it has felt utter joy
kindness
love
there are times
she is shaken
by its depths
memories are carried
in the deep wells
pumping life into each
sacred moment
many times she
has wondered
marveled at this
muscle
that feels too much
its desire to go on
without knowing
how or why
it still beats
rhythmically ...
isn't perfect
it is layered with emotions
pulsing through thick veins
it has been punished
brutally
it has felt utter joy
kindness
love
there are times
she is shaken
by its depths
memories are carried
in the deep wells
pumping life into each
sacred moment
many times she
has wondered
marveled at this
muscle
that feels too much
its desire to go on
without knowing
how or why
it still beats
rhythmically ...
#love
#patience
#LifeAsAWriter #tolerance
#LifeAsAWriter #tolerance
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5 Comments
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
21st Jan 2023 3:59am
21st Jan 2023 3:59am
No Go
Back on a plane from Spain 🇪🇦
From sunshine, pull into the rain ☔
Living tha UK dream, Buenos Dias
Do tha walk of shame...🚶🏽
Letting tha beer flow, benefit street on tha jam&roll 💸
I gotta get that dough, set up shop, and start that grow 🪴
I kept my nose clean for long enough🫧
Stay off tha street where it gets rough 👊🏽
But them boys called my bluff 🤫
Start fights, blue lights, n get me cuffed 🚨
I stayed in and I wrote my stories📚
I...
From sunshine, pull into the rain ☔
Living tha UK dream, Buenos Dias
Do tha walk of shame...🚶🏽
Letting tha beer flow, benefit street on tha jam&roll 💸
I gotta get that dough, set up shop, and start that grow 🪴
I kept my nose clean for long enough🫧
Stay off tha street where it gets rough 👊🏽
But them boys called my bluff 🤫
Start fights, blue lights, n get me cuffed 🚨
I stayed in and I wrote my stories📚
I...
#strength
#courage
#misunderstood
#vanity
#tolerance
213 reads
1 Comment
Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
18th Dec 2022 6:17pm
18th Dec 2022 6:17pm
Position of credibility
On uncommon grounds we stood face to face with our desires
Against my judgment we were inseparable & the pattern became habitual
Even in the glass I saw beauty with my vision locked & made the move
Shell shocked by the physical I cared less of the long term affect I seen coming
Split the emotional ties with nothing good to give options were given but limited
No fan of neither you introduce your own choice & I became deaf
In the beginning your words were credible & never questioned
Then you...
Against my judgment we were inseparable & the pattern became habitual
Even in the glass I saw beauty with my vision locked & made the move
Shell shocked by the physical I cared less of the long term affect I seen coming
Split the emotional ties with nothing good to give options were given but limited
No fan of neither you introduce your own choice & I became deaf
In the beginning your words were credible & never questioned
Then you...
#power
#bipolar
#gratitude #tolerance
#gratitude #tolerance
332 reads
1 Comment
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
29th Oct 2022 1:02am
29th Oct 2022 1:02am
we’d picnic on the common
what do you mean there is no common ground to the left and the right we looked around and sat in the middle of the meadow
#politics
#tolerance
190 reads
3 Comments
nealmorell
Poem Published
9th Sep 2022 2:08pm
9th Sep 2022 2:08pm
leaves
leaves drawn down to bed
dancing we float together
‘till the colors meld
dancing we float together
‘till the colors meld
#tolerance
351 reads
2 Comments
Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
9th Sep 2022 3:08am
9th Sep 2022 3:08am
Love in game playing
I knew we weren’t meant to last but I ate it with pride
We knew how to cultivate but we chose to decimate
Comfortable under calamity for different reasons
We stayed longer than expected
Attached through the games played
Life decisions made based off fantasies we keep in mind
I made the mistake of taking your bare minimum
Knowingly you were capable of more
You convinced me it was all in my head & became spoon fed with words only
(Class was needed but...
We knew how to cultivate but we chose to decimate
Comfortable under calamity for different reasons
We stayed longer than expected
Attached through the games played
Life decisions made based off fantasies we keep in mind
I made the mistake of taking your bare minimum
Knowingly you were capable of more
You convinced me it was all in my head & became spoon fed with words only
(Class was needed but...
#strength
#learning
#tolerance
#bittersweet
#emotions
322 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
26th Aug 2022 4:31am
26th Aug 2022 4:31am
Should We Tolerate People Who Do Wrong Things?
Why do gays want heterosexuals to tolerate them?
Same-sex marriage is definitely an unnatural thing.
You should have sex with someone of the opposite sex.
Gays do not think they are doing the wrong thing,
But insane people cannot tell right from wrong.
No sensible person would tolerate the lifestyle of gays.
Honest answers cannot come from dishonest people,
But I suppose you will allow me to ask some questions.
Do you honestly tolerate kidnappers?
Do you honestly tolerate sex slavery?
Do you honestly tolerate police brutality?
Do...
Same-sex marriage is definitely an unnatural thing.
You should have sex with someone of the opposite sex.
Gays do not think they are doing the wrong thing,
But insane people cannot tell right from wrong.
No sensible person would tolerate the lifestyle of gays.
Honest answers cannot come from dishonest people,
But I suppose you will allow me to ask some questions.
Do you honestly tolerate kidnappers?
Do you honestly tolerate sex slavery?
Do you honestly tolerate police brutality?
Do...
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#wisdom #tolerance
#wisdom #tolerance
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