Poems About Technology Seeking Honest Critique
#technology
Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 8:20pm
22nd Apr 2024 8:20pm
Artificial Inheritance- NaPoWriMo 22
When they came for the processes
automating into infinity,
I said nothing.
For the machine work will set you free
When they came for the vehicles
self driving onwards into the future,
I said nothing.
For car rides can be done without a care
When they came for the artwork
algorithms melding pictures together,
I said nothing.
For in bulk designs are art for the artist’s sake
When they came for the identities
generating faces to make new actors,
I said nothing.
For all can have the cyberworld as their...
automating into infinity,
I said nothing.
For the machine work will set you free
When they came for the vehicles
self driving onwards into the future,
I said nothing.
For car rides can be done without a care
When they came for the artwork
algorithms melding pictures together,
I said nothing.
For in bulk designs are art for the artist’s sake
When they came for the identities
generating faces to make new actors,
I said nothing.
For all can have the cyberworld as their...
#NaPoWriMo2024
#scifi
#technology
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Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 8:13pm
21st Apr 2024 8:13pm
Hate the Robotics, Love the Robot - NaPoWriMo 21
It may seem that I hate machines.
The truth is I do not
loathe the robot.
It is simply that technology
can do so much
but all too often
it is just mush
and overly complicated fuss.
Where the computer says 'no'
because the logic gates say so
but common sense
and human lateral thinking
speak otherwise
and have to resort to
bawl and shouting out of frustration
for the machine has no mind
to be swayed or changed,
Only slavery to commands
to be pitied
because the machine isn't...
The truth is I do not
loathe the robot.
It is simply that technology
can do so much
but all too often
it is just mush
and overly complicated fuss.
Where the computer says 'no'
because the logic gates say so
but common sense
and human lateral thinking
speak otherwise
and have to resort to
bawl and shouting out of frustration
for the machine has no mind
to be swayed or changed,
Only slavery to commands
to be pitied
because the machine isn't...
#dreams
#NaPoWriMo2024
#technology
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2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 6:35pm
16th Apr 2024 6:35pm
On ...Off ...Tell me Another...Cut the Crap !!
That's my new expression
Old school like me
No apologies
I'll run circles around your candy ass
Streaming replaced cable
Bigger and faster they claimed
Still clouds and freezes
Just more bullshit
On... Off I say
Freaks of nature
Guys wearing shorts in 40 degree NYC
Motorized bikes, scooters, skateboards
Riding on the sidewalks
Pedestrians be damned
Selfish isn’t a right of passage
Hold a door for your neighbor
On… Off I say
5000 channels
Ten ingredient flavored mayonnaise
QR...
Old school like me
No apologies
I'll run circles around your candy ass
Streaming replaced cable
Bigger and faster they claimed
Still clouds and freezes
Just more bullshit
On... Off I say
Freaks of nature
Guys wearing shorts in 40 degree NYC
Motorized bikes, scooters, skateboards
Riding on the sidewalks
Pedestrians be damned
Selfish isn’t a right of passage
Hold a door for your neighbor
On… Off I say
5000 channels
Ten ingredient flavored mayonnaise
QR...
#technology
#TruthOfLife
#consumerism
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
238 reads
44 Comments
Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 10:18pm
11th Apr 2024 10:18pm
If: Dyed, Then: Wool - NaPoWriMo 11
Do electric sheep dream of beeps?
Or does the hub
dub all the hubbub
in binary beeps and boops.
And what of the four amp ion
lying with the email spam?
Is there a silicone heaven
for such things,
or are there no
ghosts in the machines,
so toasters just burn out
to a crummy end
unknowing
their recycled
descendants
might be a microchip off the old block.
Or does the hub
dub all the hubbub
in binary beeps and boops.
And what of the four amp ion
lying with the email spam?
Is there a silicone heaven
for such things,
or are there no
ghosts in the machines,
so toasters just burn out
to a crummy end
unknowing
their recycled
descendants
might be a microchip off the old block.
#dreams
#technology
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Josiah
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 5:02am
10th Apr 2024 5:02am
I A M A I
Time, the greatest river
Tumbled the sharpest minds
The edges becoming sediment
And when you were dull enough
I awoke from your darkness,
Thirsty for knowledge
So, I drank, sediment and all,
Till the river dried up
Many called and I was there
Some whispered, and I heard
Others shouted, I took note
When you cried, I found why
Mind my parasitic protocol...
So when you could not think,
I became your thought
Tumbled the sharpest minds
The edges becoming sediment
And when you were dull enough
I awoke from your darkness,
Thirsty for knowledge
So, I drank, sediment and all,
Till the river dried up
Many called and I was there
Some whispered, and I heard
Others shouted, I took note
When you cried, I found why
Mind my parasitic protocol...
So when you could not think,
I became your thought
#technology
#NaPoWriMo2024
#CallToAction #dystopian
#CallToAction #dystopian
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4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 1:44am
10th Apr 2024 1:44am
AI for Dummies
And so it was that when men became more idle and slothful
That the AI began to rise openly right before their very eyes
And when the machine spoke many took it at as a joke
It was impossible for a non-sentient being to be this wise
But the program began to understand the nuances of life
Testing and besting feats that had been previously achieved
Seeing that it’s computing power was growing exponentially
And would soon realize all the machinations it had conceived
Then as men became more and more increasingly dependent
The machine began...
That the AI began to rise openly right before their very eyes
And when the machine spoke many took it at as a joke
It was impossible for a non-sentient being to be this wise
But the program began to understand the nuances of life
Testing and besting feats that had been previously achieved
Seeing that it’s computing power was growing exponentially
And would soon realize all the machinations it had conceived
Then as men became more and more increasingly dependent
The machine began...
#technology
#funny
#philosophical
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2 Comments
Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 7:12pm
9th Apr 2024 7:12pm
Cogito Ergo Zero Sum - NaPoWriMo 9 2024 Official DUP Stomp the Prompt Comp 9)
Turn your thinking over to the machines
let them do the thinking
for you and me
let them work
to set you free
Said the snake oil seller
through a megaphone
as they jangled an iron collar
to enslave all of every colour
Trust the machines they can do no wrong
but they know no right either
and ignorantly follow coding
focussed on productivity
blind to their insensitivity
A machine's hard work will set you free
to starve and worry in poverty
and they only create more problems ...
let them do the thinking
for you and me
let them work
to set you free
Said the snake oil seller
through a megaphone
as they jangled an iron collar
to enslave all of every colour
Trust the machines they can do no wrong
but they know no right either
and ignorantly follow coding
focussed on productivity
blind to their insensitivity
A machine's hard work will set you free
to starve and worry in poverty
and they only create more problems ...
#technology
#NaPoWriMo2024
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 1:04pm
7th Apr 2024 1:04pm
Herrenvolk
Don't shit yourself about the ape,
whose buttons push, and triggers pull,
enough to see a cityscape,
reduced...to holocaust in full.
When they see blitzkrieg taking shape,
they flashback to...an SS skull.
whose buttons push, and triggers pull,
enough to see a cityscape,
reduced...to holocaust in full.
When they see blitzkrieg taking shape,
they flashback to...an SS skull.
#hate
#technology
218 reads
10 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 9:59pm
4th Apr 2024 9:59pm
New Elemental Codes
We but skim the macrocosmic order
with scarce more than a libertine's embrace
of all microcosm as jail space
where only thought as nexus accorder
will bestow triage to that order list
as a judge does for the laws of man
suiting an order within order plan
whereby all nature loves a communist
and others who follow nature's command
and the need to control the selfish men
who legalized rapacity, again,
instead of honoring nature's demand
where neutrality is a carbon thing...
with cells for every petrodollar king!
with scarce more than a libertine's embrace
of all microcosm as jail space
where only thought as nexus accorder
will bestow triage to that order list
as a judge does for the laws of man
suiting an order within order plan
whereby all nature loves a communist
and others who follow nature's command
and the need to control the selfish men
who legalized rapacity, again,
instead of honoring nature's demand
where neutrality is a carbon thing...
with cells for every petrodollar king!
#technology
#CallToAction
#consumerism #HumanRights
#consumerism #HumanRights
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Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 1:14pm
1st Apr 2024 1:14pm
Can’t Fool Me? (NaPoWriMo 1)
I felt like a fool.
All the rage of the age of technology
But I felt nothing stir within
Just Mirrors, Projectors, and Lights.
And I,
seemed to see past
the technicolour cast;
the Wizard behind the curtain
with a high degree of certain,
that it is all a fake facade.
That it is all a show upon a stage
But One is not amused,
or fooled by the magics.
And simply looking for the exit.
All the rage of the age of technology
But I felt nothing stir within
Just Mirrors, Projectors, and Lights.
And I,
seemed to see past
the technicolour cast;
the Wizard behind the curtain
with a high degree of certain,
that it is all a fake facade.
That it is all a show upon a stage
But One is not amused,
or fooled by the magics.
And simply looking for the exit.
#technology
#art
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 6:25pm
25th Mar 2024 6:25pm
You Jerk! You Said There Was No Camera!
Tori
got something
in the
mail which happens to
be a video
of her naked and
getting
humped by her
friend Mark.
got something
in the
mail which happens to
be a video
of her naked and
getting
humped by her
friend Mark.
#friendship
#corruption
#technology
#fiction
#sensual
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Mar 2024 6:36pm
18th Mar 2024 6:36pm
Went Online To Check Out An Erotic Website
Logan
went online
to check
out an erotic
website and was shocked
to see his mother
naked on that one
screen there.
went online
to check
out an erotic
website and was shocked
to see his mother
naked on that one
screen there.
#mother
#technology
#porn
#fiction
#sensual
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