Symbolism Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#symbolism
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 3:28am
20th Mar 2025 3:28am
The White Wolf
The elders say there once was upon a time a story was told by the ancient ones, about the white wolf that roam the country side, traveling in the woods of forgotten time in search of the wolf pack. For it was said that kind of white wolf was some kind of ancient god, with mystical powers of protection over the land, and the spiritual creatures who live in this land buried deep into the forest of mother nature. For the elders say that this white wolf only has one purpose, and that is to protect all that exist on the land of what time has forgotten. For this white wolf was born from a special...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#mythology
#philosophical
#symbolism
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summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 8:57pm
19th Mar 2025 8:57pm
~of a 2 random flashed paradisiacal poetic symbolisms.. of an otherwise prosaic day
1.
the messy mosquito window mesh
loaded with immortally chamfering
dusts over their each tiny squaring in
portals.. today had a surprise guest
not just knocking its door .. but falling
vertically flat & stuck..in a 90 degree
‘sashtanga namaskaram’ over the
waiting portal doors.. its iridescence
was a killer nacreous shine.. though
a dorsal beauty, away from my direct
visions.. only
her horrific ventral side.. of a boggy
brown muddiness.. in a nauseating
thoraxo-abdominal...
the messy mosquito window mesh
loaded with immortally chamfering
dusts over their each tiny squaring in
portals.. today had a surprise guest
not just knocking its door .. but falling
vertically flat & stuck..in a 90 degree
‘sashtanga namaskaram’ over the
waiting portal doors.. its iridescence
was a killer nacreous shine.. though
a dorsal beauty, away from my direct
visions.. only
her horrific ventral side.. of a boggy
brown muddiness.. in a nauseating
thoraxo-abdominal...
#animals
#flowers
#nature
#symbolism
#trees
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3 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 9:04pm
9th Mar 2025 9:04pm
She comes in waves
She comes in waves crashes over me
She's the ocean I'm lost at sea
She on the breeze and the air
Like a tornado everywhere
She comes with passion a burning fire
Lighting up a hidden desire
She comes so loud without a sound
She comes in waves I almost drown
She's the ocean I'm lost at sea
She on the breeze and the air
Like a tornado everywhere
She comes with passion a burning fire
Lighting up a hidden desire
She comes so loud without a sound
She comes in waves I almost drown
#rhyming
#symbolism
#uplifting
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summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 9:34am
6th Mar 2025 9:34am
~selkie:: in the sempiternal inner calling
The one thing which we seek with insatiable desire is to forget ourselves, … to lose our sempiternal memory, and to do something without knowing how or why….” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
she
has appeared
for me ..
watching me
following me ..
an intervention
decodes me this
now…
will i be able to
sense her presence ..
she had risen for me
from the deep seas
.. in her enchanted seal
form .. her dense shiny skin ...
she
has appeared
for me ..
watching me
following me ..
an intervention
decodes me this
now…
will i be able to
sense her presence ..
she had risen for me
from the deep seas
.. in her enchanted seal
form .. her dense shiny skin ...
#animals
#love
#sea
#spiritual
#symbolism
131 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:02pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:02pm
Spiritual Wolf
The elders say that we each have a entity hiding with in each of us, who is waiting for the chance to escape from the deepness, and depth of our mind and heart and spiritual soul of our subconsciousness of our thoughts. AS we are the ALPHA OF THE WOLF PACK meant to be set free as a leader of the wolves. For I soon learned why BIG MAMA needed to see me on that greatful and blessed day at the family reunion. She told me who I was told that was my own destiny. For the spirit of the WOLF offers meaning in the realm as a most striking animal showing the deepness of the power of the truth of the...
#CallToAction
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#symbolism
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2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 10:50pm
15th Feb 2025 10:50pm
Generation to Generation
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ For what does it mean to pass down from generation to generation, as it was a precious red stone pass down from Generation to Generation. FOR the elders say that the red stone was not created by man, as it came from out of the ground but it was created, by the elements of time. FROM the ancient times of long ago before man even existed in the land, that time has forgotten. For it's sole purpose was as it was presented as a gift, created as a gift that had Mystikal powers. AS it was created out of a...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 1:51am
20th Jan 2025 1:51am
The uprising of the rebellion
They say that we all come in peace yet there's those who rather destroy, the true foundation of the Constitution of America, For sure you can't never make a right an wrong, but yet what you can do stop, the evil environments for their own political games. For sure even now as a change is slowly taking place, there are those individuals shills, that still can't handle the truth, that a new change is gonna come through out the world. 🌍 For sure you don't have to believe that what I say, 😤 just do your own research. YET we do have our own opinions and thoughts, on situations that...
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 11:49am
29th Dec 2024 11:49am
Eternally Harmony
For sure what are you willing to sacrifice, for your eternal Harmony
🤔 For what are you doing in order to remain positive, and focus on what you want and need not what you don't need or want, in your life and world. 🌎 For real do you know what you want and need, to sustain your own way of thinking about your own life. 😌 For haven't you had enough of the UNTRUTH, that you've been receiving 😳 for sure you don't deserve what you've been getting from someone. For real what would you change from them to now. 🤔 For just a mortal moment just imagine,...
🤔 For what are you doing in order to remain positive, and focus on what you want and need not what you don't need or want, in your life and world. 🌎 For real do you know what you want and need, to sustain your own way of thinking about your own life. 😌 For haven't you had enough of the UNTRUTH, that you've been receiving 😳 for sure you don't deserve what you've been getting from someone. For real what would you change from them to now. 🤔 For just a mortal moment just imagine,...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
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2 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 8:53am
24th Dec 2024 8:53am
A Path To Walk
A path to walk, would that be fate?
that fear of dark, would I abate?
souls of profound bonds seldom found
barren hearts wouldn't tread that ground
quiet calls to trace in timeless rate.
Would inner rhythm dictate
heart abode or be it blind date?
or just to a world be spellbound?
A path to walk
To each step there should be a date
for every choice time wouldn't wait
roamers seek not the Self imbound
on divine journeys, souls unbound
feed heart and open wide mind's gate
A path to walk.
that fear of dark, would I abate?
souls of profound bonds seldom found
barren hearts wouldn't tread that ground
quiet calls to trace in timeless rate.
Would inner rhythm dictate
heart abode or be it blind date?
or just to a world be spellbound?
A path to walk
To each step there should be a date
for every choice time wouldn't wait
roamers seek not the Self imbound
on divine journeys, souls unbound
feed heart and open wide mind's gate
A path to walk.
#metaphor
#MyInspiration
#spiritual
#symbolism
#WritingPoetry
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6 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 00:51am
5th Dec 2024 00:51am
Odd Thoughts
I sit here and watch the drop of liquid coke
Roll into a puddle of sugary bliss.
Zoned into nothing.
Space is a non-touchable thing.
Yet all-encompassing
When the submucosal walls
Dry out from lack of adequate liquid substrate.
The mind is forced to retaliate.
Sending a resound call.
To attack
Subconsciously driven.
A need to fulfill the addiction.
The cool feeling
Thrashes against the heat
Only to be awarded
By a thief
Who has stolen?
My vibration
Roll into a puddle of sugary bliss.
Zoned into nothing.
Space is a non-touchable thing.
Yet all-encompassing
When the submucosal walls
Dry out from lack of adequate liquid substrate.
The mind is forced to retaliate.
Sending a resound call.
To attack
Subconsciously driven.
A need to fulfill the addiction.
The cool feeling
Thrashes against the heat
Only to be awarded
By a thief
Who has stolen?
My vibration
#FreeVerse
#science
#symbolism
273 reads
19 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 4:45am
25th Oct 2024 4:45am
Teeth
Alien Predator within me
My teeth are sinking into my core
My tail is razor sharp but predator has weapons
Teeth to teeth Jaw to jaw pull us both under me
Going down the depths of misery
Still clamped jaw to jaw and soul to devil
Stretcher lifts me up takes me
Back down where I started in me
Eyes are closed I feel my sins
Building a coffin of my deeds
Predator alive alien within me breathing
We are predators of innocence
Get you close enough to sink in
My...
My teeth are sinking into my core
My tail is razor sharp but predator has weapons
Teeth to teeth Jaw to jaw pull us both under me
Going down the depths of misery
Still clamped jaw to jaw and soul to devil
Stretcher lifts me up takes me
Back down where I started in me
Eyes are closed I feel my sins
Building a coffin of my deeds
Predator alive alien within me breathing
We are predators of innocence
Get you close enough to sink in
My...
#aliens
#myself
#shadows #symbolism
#shadows #symbolism
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BaldyBrown
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 6:25am
24th Oct 2024 6:25am
Seeds
The bee and the flower, how could either know
that because of their little dance the world lives?
Writing words is like waxing one’s carrot, to borrow from a colorful George Carlin metaphor. One sees something and it sets off a spark in the loins. What are words on a page but the end result of the same spark? and what is a sperm cell that is produced without first being a very pleasant hit of dopamine .
This is our process, displayed through a billion variations on the same life-giving theme and force.
But for every word written in this single suspended...
that because of their little dance the world lives?
Writing words is like waxing one’s carrot, to borrow from a colorful George Carlin metaphor. One sees something and it sets off a spark in the loins. What are words on a page but the end result of the same spark? and what is a sperm cell that is produced without first being a very pleasant hit of dopamine .
This is our process, displayed through a billion variations on the same life-giving theme and force.
But for every word written in this single suspended...
#philosophical
#prose
#StreamOfConsciousness #symbolism
#StreamOfConsciousness #symbolism
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