Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
#stars
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2024 1:41pm
23rd Apr 2024 1:41pm
O Mighty Orion
A furry star so damp and bright
purred with grace and simmering light.
Brushed against his heavenly belt
sprinkling her pearls above his kilt.
O Mighty Orion, cease your play.
I did not come to reminisce or stay.
You came to steal my wavering heart,
rip it out of my chest, smash it apart.
O Mighty Hunter, she wickedly gasped.
a kiss on the lips was all I asked.
I want that kiss, and for you to stay,
to hold in my arms for a night or day.
That all depends on your hardened vigil,
between...
purred with grace and simmering light.
Brushed against his heavenly belt
sprinkling her pearls above his kilt.
O Mighty Orion, cease your play.
I did not come to reminisce or stay.
You came to steal my wavering heart,
rip it out of my chest, smash it apart.
O Mighty Hunter, she wickedly gasped.
a kiss on the lips was all I asked.
I want that kiss, and for you to stay,
to hold in my arms for a night or day.
That all depends on your hardened vigil,
between...
#erotic
#love
#stars
209 reads
14 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
10 Wondrous Senryu Poems
Lost in Confusion:
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
#haiku
#metaphor
#senryu
#stars
#universe
101 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 4:08am
14th Sep 2024 4:08am
Distracted
The narrator
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
#stars
#universe
155 reads
3 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 2:34am
4th Feb 2025 2:34am
Softly Stargazing
I have been loving this awakening moment in time
It has taken me so many years to be in heart, mind, body and giving thanks to my soul
To not allow the small occurrence in life to rock my morale
It is best to live in the moment
I listen daily to so many troubled intellects and they scream for peace, serenity of their heart
Endorphins and Adrenaline is the body’s best friend
Such a natural high when both are merged is to calm or a flight in your weakened defense
If everyone would only tap into the resources of its on psychic ...
It has taken me so many years to be in heart, mind, body and giving thanks to my soul
To not allow the small occurrence in life to rock my morale
It is best to live in the moment
I listen daily to so many troubled intellects and they scream for peace, serenity of their heart
Endorphins and Adrenaline is the body’s best friend
Such a natural high when both are merged is to calm or a flight in your weakened defense
If everyone would only tap into the resources of its on psychic ...
#moon
#stars
#universe
#water
#sun
210 reads
smackdownraven
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 5:41pm
7th Apr 2025 5:41pm
where stars are born
disturbing stars as I fade from this world
leaving glitter as I go
sparkling understanding that amuses
take me far from here
into exotic worlds place me
where I can be myself
a new form to explore in
experiencing the place before me
interactive my new mother smiles at me
with a nudge encourages me to open my eyes
at the wonderful vistas before me
sigh to touch the universes
I'm where souls are born
grieving not from where I've come
in time my mind conceives a life
born of immortal love
the...
leaving glitter as I go
sparkling understanding that amuses
take me far from here
into exotic worlds place me
where I can be myself
a new form to explore in
experiencing the place before me
interactive my new mother smiles at me
with a nudge encourages me to open my eyes
at the wonderful vistas before me
sigh to touch the universes
I'm where souls are born
grieving not from where I've come
in time my mind conceives a life
born of immortal love
the...
#stars
68 reads
2 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
6th Dec 2018 1:20pm
6th Dec 2018 1:20pm
Wishes
Silently the sun slinks down
leaving passionate beauty in her wake
sparkles brighten
as darkness takes hold
a million flashing specks of light
far, so very far
and I'm planting wishes on every one
wishes of seeing your sparkles
as I hold you in that night-time sky
laying soft kisses on your skin
as I feel every heartbeat inside
wishes of kisses
and long into the night caresses
moonlit strolls
with sandy shore envisions
wishes that tommorows wouldn't be
far, so very far ...
leaving passionate beauty in her wake
sparkles brighten
as darkness takes hold
a million flashing specks of light
far, so very far
and I'm planting wishes on every one
wishes of seeing your sparkles
as I hold you in that night-time sky
laying soft kisses on your skin
as I feel every heartbeat inside
wishes of kisses
and long into the night caresses
moonlit strolls
with sandy shore envisions
wishes that tommorows wouldn't be
far, so very far ...
#love
#stars
582 reads
10 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
Written In The Stars
fore the Nile flowed from primal spring
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How...
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How...
#universe
#stars
#mystery
626 reads
2 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:48pm
7th Feb 2025 10:48pm
we make new names for old Gods
The evening sky blushes through my window
between twilight and darkness we lie, looking out
waiting for the stars through the
leafy silhouettes of palm tress
I try to teach you all the names
of the creeping constellations
but you make up your own
giggling into the deepening sky
We are so small under the burning tendrils of light
and so blessed to see them, and name them at all
between twilight and darkness we lie, looking out
waiting for the stars through the
leafy silhouettes of palm tress
I try to teach you all the names
of the creeping constellations
but you make up your own
giggling into the deepening sky
We are so small under the burning tendrils of light
and so blessed to see them, and name them at all
#astronomy
#nature
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
150 reads
8 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
31st Mar 2023 5:53am
31st Mar 2023 5:53am
alas!
The shores became lonely
the waves of the sea left them
the sun ran away by stealing
the colors of the sea
and gave the heavy scary night
coconut tree was chirping
with birds in sunlight
now surrounded by silence
this night imprisoned
the sounds of nature
the strong wind began
to blow in the space of
the soul of the sea and
gave a fierce music to the waves
the boats sat in night meditation
now...the wave arose in the heart
of twinkling stars
want to see the world of the sea
but alas!!!! they will...
the waves of the sea left them
the sun ran away by stealing
the colors of the sea
and gave the heavy scary night
coconut tree was chirping
with birds in sunlight
now surrounded by silence
this night imprisoned
the sounds of nature
the strong wind began
to blow in the space of
the soul of the sea and
gave a fierce music to the waves
the boats sat in night meditation
now...the wave arose in the heart
of twinkling stars
want to see the world of the sea
but alas!!!! they will...
#love
#stars
#nature
265 reads
7 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 11:54am
9th Apr 2025 11:54am
Wide-eyed no Blinking
09/30
Wide-eyed no Blinking
I believe it was my very first summer
Summer camp to be exact
Meteor Ranch, in Upper Lake,
California
Little to no light pollution
That first night the sky was so dark
The stars seemed Brighter
than the ones in the city
I think this magic moment
also, my first
Shooting star!
I held my breath,
Made a wish
And then saw another white streak
WOW!
My wish kind of came true
I got to return every summer
but as staff
...
Wide-eyed no Blinking
I believe it was my very first summer
Summer camp to be exact
Meteor Ranch, in Upper Lake,
California
Little to no light pollution
That first night the sky was so dark
The stars seemed Brighter
than the ones in the city
I think this magic moment
also, my first
Shooting star!
I held my breath,
Made a wish
And then saw another white streak
WOW!
My wish kind of came true
I got to return every summer
but as staff
...
#memories
#stars
#summer
53 reads
2 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
31st Jan 2022 2:17pm
31st Jan 2022 2:17pm
The Eyes Have It
The Eyes Have It
The swirl
Of the girl
As she entered
The room
Took up
The space,
As one
Might assume,
In fact
Her demeanor
Just filled up
The place.
Spiraling,
Encouraging,
Spilling over
Like lace,
Seen
By the hall
No chance
Not at all
And rested
The seat
Across
From my feet.
Covering her face,
She asked
The color
Of her eyes.
"That's a trick
Question,"
I came
With surprise.
...
The swirl
Of the girl
As she entered
The room
Took up
The space,
As one
Might assume,
In fact
Her demeanor
Just filled up
The place.
Spiraling,
Encouraging,
Spilling over
Like lace,
Seen
By the hall
No chance
Not at all
And rested
The seat
Across
From my feet.
Covering her face,
She asked
The color
Of her eyes.
"That's a trick
Question,"
I came
With surprise.
...
#universe
#stars
#shadows #evolution
#shadows #evolution
462 reads
6 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
30th Mar 2023 7:24pm
30th Mar 2023 7:24pm
INSIDE THE WITCH'S LAIR - Part Two
#erotic
#BDSM
#stars #witches
#stars #witches
360 reads
6 Comments
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