Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
#stars
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 5:08am
14th Sep 2024 5:08am
Distracted
The narrator
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
#stars
#universe
124 reads
3 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
31st Mar 2023 6:53am
31st Mar 2023 6:53am
alas!
The shores became lonely
the waves of the sea left them
the sun ran away by stealing
the colors of the sea
and gave the heavy scary night
coconut tree was chirping
with birds in sunlight
now surrounded by silence
this night imprisoned
the sounds of nature
the strong wind began
to blow in the space of
the soul of the sea and
gave a fierce music to the waves
the boats sat in night meditation
now...the wave arose in the heart
of twinkling stars
want to see the world of the sea
but alas!!!! they will...
the waves of the sea left them
the sun ran away by stealing
the colors of the sea
and gave the heavy scary night
coconut tree was chirping
with birds in sunlight
now surrounded by silence
this night imprisoned
the sounds of nature
the strong wind began
to blow in the space of
the soul of the sea and
gave a fierce music to the waves
the boats sat in night meditation
now...the wave arose in the heart
of twinkling stars
want to see the world of the sea
but alas!!!! they will...
#love
#stars
#nature
227 reads
7 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
Written In The Stars
fore the Nile flowed from primal spring
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How many universes are...
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How many universes are...
#universe
#stars
#mystery
551 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
11th Nov 2018 2:46am
11th Nov 2018 2:46am
*****
walked the road at night
seeking space to view the stars
Perseids obliged
seeking space to view the stars
Perseids obliged
#stars
#haiku
716 reads
2 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
28th Feb 2022 1:52am
28th Feb 2022 1:52am
My Shining Star
She's my star she's
shining very bright
doing that Thing You Do
You chase the adventure
Where it may lead
You find yourself on
a wild ride giving
it all you got
While you are both
shining with
Orgasmic Bliss
over and over again
Til the roosters crow
shining very bright
doing that Thing You Do
You chase the adventure
Where it may lead
You find yourself on
a wild ride giving
it all you got
While you are both
shining with
Orgasmic Bliss
over and over again
Til the roosters crow
#love
#women
#men
#sex
#stars
568 reads
7 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 5:28pm
26th Nov 2024 5:28pm
Venus
The Shepherd's Hour
The moon is red on misty horizon
Within a dancing fog, and the plains
In vapor dozing, the frog complains
Among the reeds, where chill has arisen
***
Water flowers have closed their petals
In distance far, poplars show profile
Straight and tight their ghosts unseen awhile
And between the bush, glowworms shuttle
**
The owls now awake, noiseless take flight
Rowing the black air with heavy wings
The zenith full, a fainting glow blinks
White, Venus emerges, it is Night *
...
The moon is red on misty horizon
Within a dancing fog, and the plains
In vapor dozing, the frog complains
Among the reeds, where chill has arisen
***
Water flowers have closed their petals
In distance far, poplars show profile
Straight and tight their ghosts unseen awhile
And between the bush, glowworms shuttle
**
The owls now awake, noiseless take flight
Rowing the black air with heavy wings
The zenith full, a fainting glow blinks
White, Venus emerges, it is Night *
...
#nature
#sky
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
67 reads
4 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
29th Jan 2024 8:25pm
29th Jan 2024 8:25pm
Dea
Dea
With that marble white skin
Plump lips
Almond eyes
Child of God
Playing with light
Come on dear
Let us catch fireflies
Let us dig the stars
With that marble white skin
Plump lips
Almond eyes
Child of God
Playing with light
Come on dear
Let us catch fireflies
Let us dig the stars
#universe
#stars
133 reads
4 Comments
Lamjhnsn1
Poem Published
9th Aug 2024 7:54pm
9th Aug 2024 7:54pm
Moaning Song
When the evening brings it's curtain down,
& lifts it's starlit crown, she sings her moaning song.
When the sun kisses the moon goodnight,
& guides it home, by it's looming light, she sings her moaning song.
When eventide lowers it's blinding haze,
& wandering eyes cannot appraise, she sings her moaning song.
When the night owl, is unafraid,
& begins in earnest, his serenade, she too sings her moaning song.
When our lips meet, in the twilight's glow,
& the hour hand, moves ever slow, she sings her...
& lifts it's starlit crown, she sings her moaning song.
When the sun kisses the moon goodnight,
& guides it home, by it's looming light, she sings her moaning song.
When eventide lowers it's blinding haze,
& wandering eyes cannot appraise, she sings her moaning song.
When the night owl, is unafraid,
& begins in earnest, his serenade, she too sings her moaning song.
When our lips meet, in the twilight's glow,
& the hour hand, moves ever slow, she sings her...
#moon
#night
#romantic
#sky
#stars
204 reads
1 Comment
Connotation
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
10 Wondrous Senryu Poems
Lost in Confusion:
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
#haiku
#metaphor
#senryu
#stars
#universe
64 reads
2 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
29th Oct 2022 9:38pm
29th Oct 2022 9:38pm
Dark Stars
Never seeking attention
Dark Stars aren’t born that way
Existing only for inky perfection
Upon an infinite ebony skyway
Stitching into each other
Midnight’s ageless background
To hideaway from prying eyes
Without making a single sound
Uncomfortable with the shine
Elevated buried treasures
Never found or cracked open
Locked away with pleasure
Five dark pointed shoulders
Lifting bright stars high
Without malice or jealousy
Enhancing their light
Dark Stars aren’t born that way
Existing only for inky perfection
Upon an infinite ebony skyway
Stitching into each other
Midnight’s ageless background
To hideaway from prying eyes
Without making a single sound
Uncomfortable with the shine
Elevated buried treasures
Never found or cracked open
Locked away with pleasure
Five dark pointed shoulders
Lifting bright stars high
Without malice or jealousy
Enhancing their light
#friendship
#universe
#stars
790 reads
48 Comments
darkcloud68
Poem Published
14th Nov 2023 3:54am
14th Nov 2023 3:54am
I Am
I really don't like telling stories, you know the fairytale type, You know I love stories, from people that lived the story. And they telling it with feelings and emotions, and the story becomes visible, and it is like watching a movie,yet not with the eyes but with your heart so you reel every tear, and so it shall run down your face, And it is not a sad story at all tears are mixed with the laughter. We are served the smiles with the frowns, And let not worry about how others treat you, they will treat you the way you treat yourself. Yet be more aware of how you treat others. Spiritual...
#sun
#universe
#moon
#stars
#evolution
257 reads
3 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
18th Feb 2023 11:36am
18th Feb 2023 11:36am
a perfect moment
Perfect moments exist
on itchy grass
and a threadbare blanket
looking up at the stars
with you
We watch a meteor
fly past
see a helicopter buzz
overhead
temporarily disturbing
our tranquility
When it's gone
we count the stars
name the constellations
we remember
and lie comfortable
in each other's arms
For the first time
in a small forever
I feel peace
on itchy grass
and a threadbare blanket
looking up at the stars
with you
We watch a meteor
fly past
see a helicopter buzz
overhead
temporarily disturbing
our tranquility
When it's gone
we count the stars
name the constellations
we remember
and lie comfortable
in each other's arms
For the first time
in a small forever
I feel peace
#family
#stars
#peace #astronomy
#peace #astronomy
383 reads
8 Comments
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