Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
#stars
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 5:08am
14th Sep 2024 5:08am
Distracted
The narrator
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
#stars
#universe
154 reads
3 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2024 2:41pm
23rd Apr 2024 2:41pm
O Mighty Orion
A furry star so damp and bright
purred with grace and simmering light.
Brushed against his heavenly belt
sprinkling her pearls above his kilt.
O Mighty Orion, cease your play.
I did not come to reminisce or stay.
You came to steal my wavering heart,
rip it out of my chest, smash it apart.
O Mighty Hunter, she wickedly gasped.
a kiss on the lips was all I asked.
I want that kiss, and for you to stay,
to hold in my arms for a night or day.
That all depends on your hardened vigil,
between...
purred with grace and simmering light.
Brushed against his heavenly belt
sprinkling her pearls above his kilt.
O Mighty Orion, cease your play.
I did not come to reminisce or stay.
You came to steal my wavering heart,
rip it out of my chest, smash it apart.
O Mighty Hunter, she wickedly gasped.
a kiss on the lips was all I asked.
I want that kiss, and for you to stay,
to hold in my arms for a night or day.
That all depends on your hardened vigil,
between...
#erotic
#love
#stars
204 reads
14 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
14th Nov 2024 9:53am
10 Wondrous Senryu Poems
Lost in Confusion:
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
Mystery enquired
Paradox alienates
No truth and purpose
Fallen Suddenly:
Thievery question
Fragility foundation
Unstable collapse
Imagined Expanse:
Above atmosphere
Observational below
Connection wondrous
Idolatrous Guess:
The gift of the stars
Deceitful ultimatum
To expect answers
Separate Conscience:
Physics fabricate
Presumably literal
Spirit spatially
...
#haiku
#metaphor
#senryu
#stars
#universe
101 reads
2 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 7:05pm
23rd Jan 2025 7:05pm
Intertwined
The vast stars shine
ever so, ravenous
for lover's wishes.
Our lips were starved
for deep velvet kisses.
Craving further passage
to a blast of bliss.
Flesh, muscle and bone
clash and intertwine.
Desire climbing the heart
with it's yearning whine.
In adamant refusal
to be denied.
We made lust drenched love
beneath the shiny black
sequin sky.
The sweet stains of ecstasy
made it feel like
a hundred million times.
ever so, ravenous
for lover's wishes.
Our lips were starved
for deep velvet kisses.
Craving further passage
to a blast of bliss.
Flesh, muscle and bone
clash and intertwine.
Desire climbing the heart
with it's yearning whine.
In adamant refusal
to be denied.
We made lust drenched love
beneath the shiny black
sequin sky.
The sweet stains of ecstasy
made it feel like
a hundred million times.
#love
#lust
#stars
267 reads
12 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
Written In The Stars
fore the Nile flowed from primal spring
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How...
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How...
#universe
#stars
#mystery
624 reads
2 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 5:40pm
1st Apr 2025 5:40pm
strange thing about bright night
strange thing about bright night
The moon is
sitting sadly today,
the stars are
going to meet
their beloved earth
The palaces
of the sand
have started falling,
the sea is adamant
on capturing the shore
The sun hanging
behind the leaves
is planning to surround
the light of the stars
The bumble bee
is weaving thorny web
on the flowers
that are scenting
someone's hair
Old shadows
are shimmering
in a colorful umbrella,
the...
The moon is
sitting sadly today,
the stars are
going to meet
their beloved earth
The palaces
of the sand
have started falling,
the sea is adamant
on capturing the shore
The sun hanging
behind the leaves
is planning to surround
the light of the stars
The bumble bee
is weaving thorny web
on the flowers
that are scenting
someone's hair
Old shadows
are shimmering
in a colorful umbrella,
the...
#nature
#stars
67 reads
2 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:48pm
7th Feb 2025 10:48pm
we make new names for old Gods
The evening sky blushes through my window
between twilight and darkness we lie, looking out
waiting for the stars through the
leafy silhouettes of palm tress
I try to teach you all the names
of the creeping constellations
but you make up your own
giggling into the deepening sky
We are so small under the burning tendrils of light
and so blessed to see them, and name them at all
between twilight and darkness we lie, looking out
waiting for the stars through the
leafy silhouettes of palm tress
I try to teach you all the names
of the creeping constellations
but you make up your own
giggling into the deepening sky
We are so small under the burning tendrils of light
and so blessed to see them, and name them at all
#astronomy
#nature
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
149 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 2:34am
4th Feb 2025 2:34am
Softly Stargazing
I have been loving this awakening moment in time
It has taken me so many years to be in heart, mind, body and giving thanks to my soul
To not allow the small occurrence in life to rock my morale
It is best to live in the moment
I listen daily to so many troubled intellects and they scream for peace, serenity of their heart
Endorphins and Adrenaline is the body’s best friend
Such a natural high when both are merged is to calm or a flight in your weakened defense
If everyone would only tap into the resources of its on psychic ...
It has taken me so many years to be in heart, mind, body and giving thanks to my soul
To not allow the small occurrence in life to rock my morale
It is best to live in the moment
I listen daily to so many troubled intellects and they scream for peace, serenity of their heart
Endorphins and Adrenaline is the body’s best friend
Such a natural high when both are merged is to calm or a flight in your weakened defense
If everyone would only tap into the resources of its on psychic ...
#moon
#stars
#universe
#water
#sun
209 reads
JusTim_
Poem Published
6th Dec 2018 1:20pm
6th Dec 2018 1:20pm
Wishes
Silently the sun slinks down
leaving passionate beauty in her wake
sparkles brighten
as darkness takes hold
a million flashing specks of light
far, so very far
and I'm planting wishes on every one
wishes of seeing your sparkles
as I hold you in that night-time sky
laying soft kisses on your skin
as I feel every heartbeat inside
wishes of kisses
and long into the night caresses
moonlit strolls
with sandy shore envisions
wishes that tommorows wouldn't be
far, so very far ...
leaving passionate beauty in her wake
sparkles brighten
as darkness takes hold
a million flashing specks of light
far, so very far
and I'm planting wishes on every one
wishes of seeing your sparkles
as I hold you in that night-time sky
laying soft kisses on your skin
as I feel every heartbeat inside
wishes of kisses
and long into the night caresses
moonlit strolls
with sandy shore envisions
wishes that tommorows wouldn't be
far, so very far ...
#love
#stars
582 reads
10 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:41pm
Yesterday 6:41pm
where stars are born
disturbing stars as I fade from this world
leaving glitter as I go
sparkling understanding that amuses
take me far from here
into exotic worlds place me
where I can be myself
a new form to explore in
experiencing the place before me
interactive my new mother smiles at me
with a nudge encourages me to open my eyes
at the wonderful vistas before me
sigh to touch the universes
I'm where souls are born
grieving not from where I've come
in time my mind conceives a life
born of immortal love
the...
leaving glitter as I go
sparkling understanding that amuses
take me far from here
into exotic worlds place me
where I can be myself
a new form to explore in
experiencing the place before me
interactive my new mother smiles at me
with a nudge encourages me to open my eyes
at the wonderful vistas before me
sigh to touch the universes
I'm where souls are born
grieving not from where I've come
in time my mind conceives a life
born of immortal love
the...
#stars
44 reads
2 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
31st Jan 2022 2:17pm
31st Jan 2022 2:17pm
The Eyes Have It
The Eyes Have It
The swirl
Of the girl
As she entered
The room
Took up
The space,
As one
Might assume,
In fact
Her demeanor
Just filled up
The place.
Spiraling,
Encouraging,
Spilling over
Like lace,
Seen
By the hall
No chance
Not at all
And rested
The seat
Across
From my feet.
Covering her face,
She asked
The color
Of her eyes.
"That's a trick
Question,"
I came
With surprise.
...
The swirl
Of the girl
As she entered
The room
Took up
The space,
As one
Might assume,
In fact
Her demeanor
Just filled up
The place.
Spiraling,
Encouraging,
Spilling over
Like lace,
Seen
By the hall
No chance
Not at all
And rested
The seat
Across
From my feet.
Covering her face,
She asked
The color
Of her eyes.
"That's a trick
Question,"
I came
With surprise.
...
#universe
#stars
#shadows #evolution
#shadows #evolution
461 reads
6 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
25th May 2023 9:49am
25th May 2023 9:49am
The cow jumped over the moon
Hey Diddle, Diddle...
thought you were something special
ha, you were just something
another wave in the ocean,
just another blade of grass
blowing in the wind
bird in the sky
tweet. tweet
No Special K Here
just somethin' somethin'
no 4 leaf clover
no flying fish
no blue moon
no 1 in a million...
and the dish ran away with the spoon.
thought you were something special
ha, you were just something
another wave in the ocean,
just another blade of grass
blowing in the wind
bird in the sky
tweet. tweet
No Special K Here
just somethin' somethin'
no 4 leaf clover
no flying fish
no blue moon
no 1 in a million...
and the dish ran away with the spoon.
#strength
#moon
#stars
226 reads
6 Comments
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