Poems About the Sky by Top Critiquers
#sky
Poems about the sky by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Intoxicating Droplets...
As charcoal tufts tumble with purified droplets, floating frigid in the ether,
I await its caressing mists.
Obsidian hues imprison the periwinkle
and rolling formations of fluffy white,
as strident lashes strike lush landscapes and startle the foundations.
When the cosmos pours its liquid calm,
and relinquishes its inner chaos,
I sit in a realm of utter sereneness.
Eyes and heart filled with earnest awe.....
while the well anticipated pitter patter
and sweet perfume of petrichor
rejuvenates my senses,
and...
I await its caressing mists.
Obsidian hues imprison the periwinkle
and rolling formations of fluffy white,
as strident lashes strike lush landscapes and startle the foundations.
When the cosmos pours its liquid calm,
and relinquishes its inner chaos,
I sit in a realm of utter sereneness.
Eyes and heart filled with earnest awe.....
while the well anticipated pitter patter
and sweet perfume of petrichor
rejuvenates my senses,
and...
#sky
#rain
#nature
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4 Comments
Symphony of the Clouds
As if listening to music were about,
she whirled free above the clouds,
stormy emerald green.
The invisible notes danced in the air,
each chord vibrating with the breeze,
echoing among the heavenly flakes.
The sun, silent conductor, governed the show,
painting the sky with shades of gold and sapphire,
as the melody intertwined with the wind.
And there, in the symphony of heights,
the soul found its secret compass,
lost between ether and eternity.
she whirled free above the clouds,
stormy emerald green.
The invisible notes danced in the air,
each chord vibrating with the breeze,
echoing among the heavenly flakes.
The sun, silent conductor, governed the show,
painting the sky with shades of gold and sapphire,
as the melody intertwined with the wind.
And there, in the symphony of heights,
the soul found its secret compass,
lost between ether and eternity.
#sky
#clouds
#storm
#wind
#lover
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0 Comments
Opposites .
Sky expanded above as an ever evolving dream and it’s etched with silver stars . They are whispering how grateful they are for the night sky for it makes them seem more illuminating. How they are such opposites
but how each is their perfect dance partner as the blanket of the night has pockets to share . While the stars turn pirouettes of shooting stars they can be seen far and wide. It’s a gift of celebration and it reminds me of a birthday cake made by another’s hands with love . All sprinkled with hundreds and thousands on sugar creamed frosting . Topped with a sign filled with such...
but how each is their perfect dance partner as the blanket of the night has pockets to share . While the stars turn pirouettes of shooting stars they can be seen far and wide. It’s a gift of celebration and it reminds me of a birthday cake made by another’s hands with love . All sprinkled with hundreds and thousands on sugar creamed frosting . Topped with a sign filled with such...
#kindness
#hope
#sky
#nature
#respect
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0 Comments
I Hope You Can See Me Now
I have comfort
In the fact
That you are looking
At the same cotton candy sky
I am
isn’t that so strangely beautiful?
You are in heaven
And I on earth
Yet we still view the same sky
In the fact
That you are looking
At the same cotton candy sky
I am
isn’t that so strangely beautiful?
You are in heaven
And I on earth
Yet we still view the same sky
#sky
#heaven
72 reads
2 Comments
Rogue Lightning
Sky of ions -
seemingly spent,
vibrating static
Sent -
Across the horizon
to & fro -
whispering
dreams,
In the silence
of
symphonies
in
The stillness
of
otherworldly
meditation,
Into
focal
point
consolidation,
Out
of
illusory
nothing,
Instantaneous
surfacing
of
verse,
to
Traverse
the
Earth
With
the Will
of
the
Universe
seemingly spent,
vibrating static
Sent -
Across the horizon
to & fro -
whispering
dreams,
In the silence
of
symphonies
in
The stillness
of
otherworldly
meditation,
Into
focal
point
consolidation,
Out
of
illusory
nothing,
Instantaneous
surfacing
of
verse,
to
Traverse
the
Earth
With
the Will
of
the
Universe
#universe
#sky
#WritingPoetry
399 reads
12 Comments
and since no more people cares ..
too tired to climb the stairs
I piss out the door
catching a rabbit unawares ..
I piss out the door
catching a rabbit unawares ..
#sky
#night
#confusion
412 reads
5 Comments
Who Then
Who Then
Who
do I
have to fuck
to get kissed
around here?
Who then?
Tortured
to torture,
Cogito ergo cum.
Who
do I
have to fuck
to get kissed
around here?
Who then?
Tortured
to torture,
Cogito ergo cum.
#sky
#clouds
#nature
411 reads
2 Comments
TO ESCAPE FAR AWAY
Let's examine something that can affect your thoughts and imagination, with a image and sounds of translating the process of your mind 🤫 For lets clear our thoughts and the sense of our well being, in a wonderful place of peace and tranquility with the sounds of clean clear water falling down from above 🤔 Now I want you to close your eyes and to think not like me, I just want you to think about a place that offers you. A sense of calmness.🤫 As it is reflecting and feeding on the mere, vibes that is illuminating positive ENERGY that is slowly. Entering and going through...
#river
#sky
#water
#nature
#mountains
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6 Comments
It Counts
It counts
it all counts
the perfect chosen word
what is spoken and what is heard
interactions and reactions
the smiles of your eyes
the feelings felt inside
oh how they make me melt
I swam naked in your soul
drying off under a heated sun
creating moments understood
just like you knew I would
strolling off in the night's review
not leaving you behind
two lover's lost inside
with dreams steadfast entwined
drifting with the glow of the moon ...
it all counts
the perfect chosen word
what is spoken and what is heard
interactions and reactions
the smiles of your eyes
the feelings felt inside
oh how they make me melt
I swam naked in your soul
drying off under a heated sun
creating moments understood
just like you knew I would
strolling off in the night's review
not leaving you behind
two lover's lost inside
with dreams steadfast entwined
drifting with the glow of the moon ...
#love
#dreams
#sky
546 reads
14 Comments
The Sky's Beauty
Painted like a picture
The sky reminds me of better times.
The stars twinkle like magical chimes,
But the sky will never waiver or flicker.
Gone are all of yesterday’s sorrows.
We only focus on the present moment
As the sky is the world’s bestowment.
There is tomorrow.
The sky reminds me of better times.
The stars twinkle like magical chimes,
But the sky will never waiver or flicker.
Gone are all of yesterday’s sorrows.
We only focus on the present moment
As the sky is the world’s bestowment.
There is tomorrow.
#sky
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6 Comments
Tonight I Fly
(Lol, just let me have my cheese.)
I am celebrating love tonight.
It fills me, it gives me wings.
I celebrate what I feel so deeply
Inside for you, what still burns in me
For you, what softly melts over my
Skin at the mere thought of you.
It is right, it is good, it is beautiful.
Just. Like. You.
I used to be so angry at God.
Why did You make us need each other
So much... Why did You make me
Need others so much...
Why did You put this thing in me
That makes me need him ...
I am celebrating love tonight.
It fills me, it gives me wings.
I celebrate what I feel so deeply
Inside for you, what still burns in me
For you, what softly melts over my
Skin at the mere thought of you.
It is right, it is good, it is beautiful.
Just. Like. You.
I used to be so angry at God.
Why did You make us need each other
So much... Why did You make me
Need others so much...
Why did You put this thing in me
That makes me need him ...
#love
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#sky
#lover
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3 Comments
In Windowpanes
That each dull day and each despairing act
Builds up the crags from which the spirit leaps.'
- Phillip Larkin
I
Framed in grey the drab light
spills from white expanse;
reaches over the goings of many,
their eyes swimming in conformity,
heels pounding the firmament
to somewhere gone meandering,
catching a sideways smirk.
Feeling the midday confusion,
striding along with purpose,
the many among the few notice
where everyones direction points --
to the...
Builds up the crags from which the spirit leaps.'
- Phillip Larkin
I
Framed in grey the drab light
spills from white expanse;
reaches over the goings of many,
their eyes swimming in conformity,
heels pounding the firmament
to somewhere gone meandering,
catching a sideways smirk.
Feeling the midday confusion,
striding along with purpose,
the many among the few notice
where everyones direction points --
to the...
#loneliness
#sky
#escape
#boredom
#NaPoWriMo2023
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10 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About the Sky by Top Critiquers