Poems for and About Sisters Seeking Honest Critique
#sister
copingwithwords__
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 9:04pm
21st Apr 2024 9:04pm
i’m sure; i live in awe
I live in awe
of every tattoo that will draw
on your skin, as unique as you are,
I live in awe
of all the beauty that you saw,
your smiles, your being so raw.
I live in awe
of every child that will soar
because you’re the one they adore
When I see your coming through the door
it hits me like waves hit the shore
feeling serene, so gentle and I’m sure.
I’m sure you’re my mentor
I know you by heart like a child it’s folklore
I’m sure I’ll forever like you to your core…
I live in awe
of you, ...
of every tattoo that will draw
on your skin, as unique as you are,
I live in awe
of all the beauty that you saw,
your smiles, your being so raw.
I live in awe
of every child that will soar
because you’re the one they adore
When I see your coming through the door
it hits me like waves hit the shore
feeling serene, so gentle and I’m sure.
I’m sure you’re my mentor
I know you by heart like a child it’s folklore
I’m sure I’ll forever like you to your core…
I live in awe
of you, ...
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude
#love
#sister
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 8:45pm
1st Mar 2024 8:45pm
Who Looks Sexier? Me Or My Sister?
Hugh spotted Julia's new dress.
It looks like the one Justine's wearing.
His problem's telling them apart.
It looks like the one Justine's wearing.
His problem's telling them apart.
#anxiety
#sister
#friendship
#fiction
#confusion
60 reads
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Ash74
Poem Published
21st Feb 2024 2:26pm
21st Feb 2024 2:26pm
The Days I Remember
I remember the smell of rain on asphalt
The gentle caress of the summer breeze
The sweet taste of fruits so ripe
The music that was your laughter
I miss the happiness in your eyes
when home still welcomed us
The gentle caress of the summer breeze
The sweet taste of fruits so ripe
The music that was your laughter
I miss the happiness in your eyes
when home still welcomed us
#sister
#memories
#escape #separation
#escape #separation
66 reads
1 Comment
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Feb 2024 8:59pm
5th Feb 2024 8:59pm
Happy Birthday to #9
I do not know, as yet, if you have heard
about the poet who rules the night
with chiseled stanzas and surpassing word,
like the sort that might give werewolves delight.
He champions the old and gothic whimsey
like Edgar Allan Poe, or some old ghost,
whose haunting voice is not weak or flimsy
like some daytime T.V. talk show host.
Oh, the time has come for all to witness
the genius of my nocturnal thought
and glorious linguistic fitness...
the kind, you know, that just can't be bought.
But hold! The bells have...
about the poet who rules the night
with chiseled stanzas and surpassing word,
like the sort that might give werewolves delight.
He champions the old and gothic whimsey
like Edgar Allan Poe, or some old ghost,
whose haunting voice is not weak or flimsy
like some daytime T.V. talk show host.
Oh, the time has come for all to witness
the genius of my nocturnal thought
and glorious linguistic fitness...
the kind, you know, that just can't be bought.
But hold! The bells have...
#sister
69 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Feb 2024 11:24am
5th Feb 2024 11:24am
Her One Last Chance To Finally Get Some Sleep
My
sister
suffered from
insomnia
so much that she got
desperate enough to
strip dow, put on a robe and
follow a hot stud into his
apartment. And it must have worked for
she woke up the next day still in his bed.
sister
suffered from
insomnia
so much that she got
desperate enough to
strip dow, put on a robe and
follow a hot stud into his
apartment. And it must have worked for
she woke up the next day still in his bed.
#sister
#fiction
#insomnia
#dialogue
#sensual
117 reads
2 Comments
Ald
Poem Published
10th Jan 2024 6:40am
10th Jan 2024 6:40am
India.
Why India
Is full of dirt?
It recycles waste
Thrown for a dollar.
If you can't build a nation
You can never build a business
Religion is the opium of masses
They gave me opium but snatched it and left me suffering
Medication,Fucking medicine school,taichi what not for cultivation of opium.
God Paramhansa Yogananda saved me.Why spring and autumn🍃🍂 are apart?
So the king lost the Glory!
That was...
Is full of dirt?
It recycles waste
Thrown for a dollar.
If you can't build a nation
You can never build a business
Religion is the opium of masses
They gave me opium but snatched it and left me suffering
Medication,Fucking medicine school,taichi what not for cultivation of opium.
God Paramhansa Yogananda saved me.Why spring and autumn🍃🍂 are apart?
So the king lost the Glory!
That was...
#nature
#evolution
#sister
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
25th Dec 2023 00:44am
25th Dec 2023 00:44am
Christmas
I remember the Christmas lights the best
decorating our tree with dazzling colors
so shiny next to the tinsel
the brightly wrapped packages
and my dreams of what would be awaiting me Christmas morning
I would watch all night waiting for Santa to come
bringing gifts for me and my sisters
I could barely stand the wait
until then we baked Christmas cookies
and made lists for the man himself
my dad was my favorite part of the season
he loved Christmas and would always go out of his way
to make it beautiful for us
...
decorating our tree with dazzling colors
so shiny next to the tinsel
the brightly wrapped packages
and my dreams of what would be awaiting me Christmas morning
I would watch all night waiting for Santa to come
bringing gifts for me and my sisters
I could barely stand the wait
until then we baked Christmas cookies
and made lists for the man himself
my dad was my favorite part of the season
he loved Christmas and would always go out of his way
to make it beautiful for us
...
#love
#father
#sister
108 reads
4 Comments
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
The Gardener
Poem Published
20th Dec 2023 00:24am
20th Dec 2023 00:24am
Aftermath
The sky is deliciously clear,
a hundred white irises stare down on this,
this dilapidated Eden, this night
where the owl rings clear and the smoke billows steady
from corners of an upturned, chill coloured mouth
pouring out those cups of tears I've been carrying for my sisters,
I don't let on the barrel is heavy,
I don't let on I have no second vessel,
instead I sit on the porch and sing
quietly to the Moon
imagining I could still talk to you,
recognising there were so many tears when I could've
that even ten sisters couldn't carry...
a hundred white irises stare down on this,
this dilapidated Eden, this night
where the owl rings clear and the smoke billows steady
from corners of an upturned, chill coloured mouth
pouring out those cups of tears I've been carrying for my sisters,
I don't let on the barrel is heavy,
I don't let on I have no second vessel,
instead I sit on the porch and sing
quietly to the Moon
imagining I could still talk to you,
recognising there were so many tears when I could've
that even ten sisters couldn't carry...
#sister
#rebirth
#healing #emotions
#healing #emotions
136 reads
2 Comments
Cen
Rakhi Rudra
Rakhi Rudra
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 3:11pm
25th Nov 2023 3:11pm
The TWINGLIGS.
Pschedulwed spent time at a Statements
Building.
Drafts for the firstfods a new one of the
Twingings and a subway burger
Brunch with a new one of the
Bruchette and brochette
Brokvon
Of the tea garden in the morning
In yeich heichi
Of the family
So the United much Municifields
Casw crmone.
Gusted the great day of
Nusched schedule.
Building.
Drafts for the firstfods a new one of the
Twingings and a subway burger
Brunch with a new one of the
Bruchette and brochette
Brokvon
Of the tea garden in the morning
In yeich heichi
Of the family
So the United much Municifields
Casw crmone.
Gusted the great day of
Nusched schedule.
#love
#mother
#father
#sister
#motherhood
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Oct 2023 11:38am
10th Oct 2023 11:38am
A Voice In Each Of Their Heads
A voice
in each of
their heads
made those sisters strip
down and jog naked
on a local beach
in front
of others
right there.
in each of
their heads
made those sisters strip
down and jog naked
on a local beach
in front
of others
right there.
#sister
#beach
#fiction
#MentalHealth
#sensual
140 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2023 11:09am
2nd Oct 2023 11:09am
What We Were Able To Tell From Her Postcard
We know
that in the
city
of San Francisco,
a new beginning
had started in the
life of
my sister
Holly.
that in the
city
of San Francisco,
a new beginning
had started in the
life of
my sister
Holly.
#sister
#family
#city
#fiction
#dialogue
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Sep 2023 2:05am
20th Sep 2023 2:05am
Your Friend Conned You Into Doing It... Right?
Michael
walked into the
classroom and saw his kid
sister posing nude in front of some
students painting their own portraits of her.
walked into the
classroom and saw his kid
sister posing nude in front of some
students painting their own portraits of her.
#sister
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
115 reads
2 Comments
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