Poems About Shadows Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about shadows seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Thrown to be Shown
Peering stars, moving clouds.
A stream of signs
In this dream
Of
Days
Turning
In a world
Of
Mysterious
ways,
Manifested-mysterious
A mysterium/
inside
of a wondrium.
As I read the lines
In the
Sticks of thai:
Thrown
To
Be shown.
A stream of signs
In this dream
Of
Days
Turning
In a world
Of
Mysterious
ways,
Manifested-mysterious
A mysterium/
inside
of a wondrium.
As I read the lines
In the
Sticks of thai:
Thrown
To
Be shown.
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High & Depraved
What
kind
of
person
Would
Take
The giant
bottle
of
Salsa
&
Whole bag
of
Tortilla chips
from
the refrigerator
but one:
High
&
Depraved
***
ORA
CLE
S
***
kind
of
person
Would
Take
The giant
bottle
of
Salsa
&
Whole bag
of
Tortilla chips
from
the refrigerator
but one:
High
&
Depraved
***
ORA
CLE
S
***
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C/lensed
Cleansed
in
lensed-torrents
Open palms
to
the psalms
of
The universe-dispersed
in
stars
&
Afars/afars
&
Stars
***
The
Dark
Forest
***
in
lensed-torrents
Open palms
to
the psalms
of
The universe-dispersed
in
stars
&
Afars/afars
&
Stars
***
The
Dark
Forest
***
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Emerald & Blue
The operatic movement of the dark forest
Beckon
as
beacon
of
Darkness
Who deserves this dark forest but: Me
For I
have
cultivated
Thee
Have I not
Shedding tears
in:
Serpentine skin
I:
Serpentine Being
serpentine
into
every: Scene
Eye
of
Emerald & blue: Shimmering
***
The
Dark
Forest
***
Beckon
as
beacon
of
Darkness
Who deserves this dark forest but: Me
For I
have
cultivated
Thee
Have I not
Shedding tears
in:
Serpentine skin
I:
Serpentine Being
serpentine
into
every: Scene
Eye
of
Emerald & blue: Shimmering
***
The
Dark
Forest
***
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Expiation
Insights-interwoven
Explorations
inside
of
the: Exploration
Every exploration
An expiration
inside
of
An expiration
Collapsed
stars
of
Expiation
***
ORA
CLE
S
***
Explorations
inside
of
the: Exploration
Every exploration
An expiration
inside
of
An expiration
Collapsed
stars
of
Expiation
***
ORA
CLE
S
***
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1 Comment
The Enrapture
Hello LDF
I wanted to write to you
to tell you:
I am sorry for the passing of your father.
I, too, have lost my father.
Love is a riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma, right.?.
*. *. *
Everyone is gone
What has become
of the dream
of us all, dream becoming: One
This crack
in my heart
traveling pathways
of no going-back
Where
the
turbulence
made
a
vortex
Pieces of me dying-on the ground: Scrying
What...
I wanted to write to you
to tell you:
I am sorry for the passing of your father.
I, too, have lost my father.
Love is a riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma, right.?.
*. *. *
Everyone is gone
What has become
of the dream
of us all, dream becoming: One
This crack
in my heart
traveling pathways
of no going-back
Where
the
turbulence
made
a
vortex
Pieces of me dying-on the ground: Scrying
What...
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Mind's Eye
A pouring
of
particles
Connectivity
in
collectivity
Light-ignited
Mind’s eye
of
sight
Reinvention of light
As each day
Drifts
Into each night
***
A/A
S/B
***
of
particles
Connectivity
in
collectivity
Light-ignited
Mind’s eye
of
sight
Reinvention of light
As each day
Drifts
Into each night
***
A/A
S/B
***
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Formations of Transformations
Chaos is coming for I as well
Like wandering
lights
in
depths
of
Nights
Building
a
bubble
out
of
The rubble
Absorbing-storms
of
winds
&
Rain
When you close your eyes
Brain/A design: Becomes
Mind
***
A/A
S/B
***
Like wandering
lights
in
depths
of
Nights
Building
a
bubble
out
of
The rubble
Absorbing-storms
of
winds
&
Rain
When you close your eyes
Brain/A design: Becomes
Mind
***
A/A
S/B
***
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Vast
Yes-I guess
My past
Twas a vast
&
Endless lost highway
Where I made
My way
Through broken
beams
of
light: Characterizing
The day
An ache of heart-break
Maybe that’s
why
I
cry
What would you think of me
?
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
My past
Twas a vast
&
Endless lost highway
Where I made
My way
Through broken
beams
of
light: Characterizing
The day
An ache of heart-break
Maybe that’s
why
I
cry
What would you think of me
?
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
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More-Morphine
Across the universe
Black rainbows
of
sorrows
The story arc of the glory
of a black rose
Eclipsing ellipses
Drips
of
tears
Dropping inside
of
Rain drops
Meditations of magic which makes the pain stop
More morphine: Drip
by
drop
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
Black rainbows
of
sorrows
The story arc of the glory
of a black rose
Eclipsing ellipses
Drips
of
tears
Dropping inside
of
Rain drops
Meditations of magic which makes the pain stop
More morphine: Drip
by
drop
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
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Redeemed
Worms shapeshifting in the unseen
The seen
being
a
hideous scene: Insidious dream
Where
I
dared
to
dream
That I re-dreamed the dream
Rendering it: Redeemed
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
The seen
being
a
hideous scene: Insidious dream
Where
I
dared
to
dream
That I re-dreamed the dream
Rendering it: Redeemed
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
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Ack/knowledged
You are
a
crypto-currency
a current
of
the current-currently
coursing
a
course of: Electricity-electrically
Jagged edged
across
lines of light
divided
in
shadows known
only
to
those leapt
from
the edge of knowledge, Experiments
&
Operations
[by
the Infinite Invisible/indivisible:
Acknowledged
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
a
crypto-currency
a current
of
the current-currently
coursing
a
course of: Electricity-electrically
Jagged edged
across
lines of light
divided
in
shadows known
only
to
those leapt
from
the edge of knowledge, Experiments
&
Operations
[by
the Infinite Invisible/indivisible:
Acknowledged
***
Empire
of
Dirt
***
#shadows
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DU Poetry : Poems About Shadows Seeking Honest Critique