Poems About Sacrifice Seeking Honest Critique
#sacrifice
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Aug 2024 10:32am
9th Aug 2024 10:32am
Always & Forever
This is my greatest happiness,
to spend my life with you.
Sharing trials and triumphs,
joy's & problems too.
To kiss you in the morning,
and hold you close at night.
To know we'll be together,
Whether days are grey or bright.
Sharing all the things,
that make our daily life.
This is my greatest happiness,
when I stab you with this knife.
to spend my life with you.
Sharing trials and triumphs,
joy's & problems too.
To kiss you in the morning,
and hold you close at night.
To know we'll be together,
Whether days are grey or bright.
Sharing all the things,
that make our daily life.
This is my greatest happiness,
when I stab you with this knife.
#happiness
#honesty
#inspirational
#love
#sacrifice
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6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2024 1:45am
2nd Aug 2024 1:45am
CREATURES OF HABITS
As we exchange our own personal chains of thoughts and insight, into this senseless mindless trap between the lines of your own personal. REALITY of what is right and wrong 🤔 For have you ever been in a relationship or situation, that you have felt like a outer experience. FOR your thoughts and insight and imagination. 🤨 Become slowly something that you have or not never had to expected. TO ever happens to just you yet there is no longer a exception. TO the rules of what is known of your own personal life. 😞 AS people are creatures of habits. For a snake sheds it's...
#honesty
#misunderstood
#sacrifice
#strength
#tolerance
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u53l355
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 12:33pm
21st Jul 2024 12:33pm
Be A Man !
To be a man,
is not
to bully and push people around,
It's not
about testosterone fueled violence or black eyes at night on the town ,
It's not
to drink beer or silenceing your shame , money , reputation or having a trade .
It's not
about counting the birds that have perched on your pole.
It's not
About football , rugby or golf .
It's about protecting and caring for the ones that you love ,
Sacrificing your wants
Supporting your family
No matter what
It's about loyalty
Whether your single or committed to a...
is not
to bully and push people around,
It's not
about testosterone fueled violence or black eyes at night on the town ,
It's not
to drink beer or silenceing your shame , money , reputation or having a trade .
It's not
about counting the birds that have perched on your pole.
It's not
About football , rugby or golf .
It's about protecting and caring for the ones that you love ,
Sacrificing your wants
Supporting your family
No matter what
It's about loyalty
Whether your single or committed to a...
#depression
#family
#love
#men
#sacrifice
133 reads
4 Comments
Just-Rob
Poem Published
16th Jul 2024 8:07pm
16th Jul 2024 8:07pm
All For You
Reach into my chest and tear out my soul to feed you
If that's not enough, twist a knife and make me bleed too
Let my insides pour to the ground
Let all that I am be all that I was
If some devil would come to me and offer a deal
I would sacrifice everything if it meant you could heal
The pain in your eyes is unbearable
You deserve to live free from burden
Your beauty and radiance is meant to outshine the sun
If my death could give that to you then hand me the gun
This world needs what you have
You will...
If that's not enough, twist a knife and make me bleed too
Let my insides pour to the ground
Let all that I am be all that I was
If some devil would come to me and offer a deal
I would sacrifice everything if it meant you could heal
The pain in your eyes is unbearable
You deserve to live free from burden
Your beauty and radiance is meant to outshine the sun
If my death could give that to you then hand me the gun
This world needs what you have
You will...
#gratitude
#love
#sacrifice #support
#sacrifice #support
213 reads
6 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 9:00pm
9th Jul 2024 9:00pm
that he might live
Let us die as soon as possible, and by whatever process God shall
appoint. And when we are dead to the world, and nature, and self,
we shall begin to live to God.”—Adoniram Judson
a man must live each day, that he might die
and not go down into eternity
obliterated, like a whimpering sigh,
ignoble in its wasteful brevity.
the plots he scribbles daily on his page
(of fantasies, odes, ballads, tragedies)
will judge his ink with gladness or with rage,
sifting cacophonies from euphonies.
the hands that feed; the will that...
appoint. And when we are dead to the world, and nature, and self,
we shall begin to live to God.”—Adoniram Judson
a man must live each day, that he might die
and not go down into eternity
obliterated, like a whimpering sigh,
ignoble in its wasteful brevity.
the plots he scribbles daily on his page
(of fantasies, odes, ballads, tragedies)
will judge his ink with gladness or with rage,
sifting cacophonies from euphonies.
the hands that feed; the will that...
#death
#identity
#kindness
#sacrifice
#SelfWorth
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Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
9th Jul 2024 00:41am
9th Jul 2024 00:41am
Fight For Love
I'm willing to fight for your love,
To battle against the forces that try to tear us apart.
I'll stand strong in the face of adversity,
Ready to defend what we have with all my heart.
I'll go to war against doubt and fear,
Facing every challenge head on.
I'll fight for us with everything I have,
Because in your love, I have found my home.
I'll fight for our love with courage and grace,
Standing tall in the midst of the storm.
I'll never give up, never surrender,
For in your love, I am reborn.
I'll fight for you...
To battle against the forces that try to tear us apart.
I'll stand strong in the face of adversity,
Ready to defend what we have with all my heart.
I'll go to war against doubt and fear,
Facing every challenge head on.
I'll fight for us with everything I have,
Because in your love, I have found my home.
I'll fight for our love with courage and grace,
Standing tall in the midst of the storm.
I'll never give up, never surrender,
For in your love, I am reborn.
I'll fight for you...
#LGBT
#LookingForLove
#love
#romantic
#sacrifice
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CasketSharpe
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2024 00:19am
22nd Jun 2024 00:19am
Sacrificial Repossession
On the cross Jesus gave his life with his sacrifice
But motherfuckas are still acting a fool and not living right,
“Every walk of life is doing the same backwards ass shit
On the real he should make a special appearance and cleanse this bitch,
“His sacrifice was for all either they were evil or good
Look at the fucked up world now, you can consider it one big hood,
“Humanity have the nerve to want to travel the stars
But like caged animals we will be kept within our Earthly bars,
“Jesus should take back what he has given...
But motherfuckas are still acting a fool and not living right,
“Every walk of life is doing the same backwards ass shit
On the real he should make a special appearance and cleanse this bitch,
“His sacrifice was for all either they were evil or good
Look at the fucked up world now, you can consider it one big hood,
“Humanity have the nerve to want to travel the stars
But like caged animals we will be kept within our Earthly bars,
“Jesus should take back what he has given...
#disappointment
#sacrifice
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10 Comments
Aquatic-Vehicle
Lexiloo
Lexiloo
Poem Published
10th Jun 2024 9:14am
10th Jun 2024 9:14am
The Cult
Mumble the hymn
Without a stutter
And the gardenias
They’ll creep up
To hug her
Lifeless body
To become one with nature
Or join the cult.
Without a stutter
And the gardenias
They’ll creep up
To hug her
Lifeless body
To become one with nature
Or join the cult.
#corruption
#death
#evil #sacrifice
#evil #sacrifice
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Seelie
Poem Published
1st Jun 2024 5:54am
1st Jun 2024 5:54am
My Inferno
I immolate in my holy fire.
I cry on the pyre
where I will breathe
my last breath
on the breeze,
frozen in the heat.
I lie motionless
and watch the flame
as it undulates.
My fate sealed,
my hate steeled.
My heart
no longer beats,
and my flesh burns
in the scintillating heat.
Raining embers
have left their impression
on my bones.
They've taken their toll
outside of my control.
I'm sick, I can't eat,
I'm incomplete.
All my dreams
and romantic things ...
I cry on the pyre
where I will breathe
my last breath
on the breeze,
frozen in the heat.
I lie motionless
and watch the flame
as it undulates.
My fate sealed,
my hate steeled.
My heart
no longer beats,
and my flesh burns
in the scintillating heat.
Raining embers
have left their impression
on my bones.
They've taken their toll
outside of my control.
I'm sick, I can't eat,
I'm incomplete.
All my dreams
and romantic things ...
#dark
#love
#sacrifice
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Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
9th May 2024 1:47pm
9th May 2024 1:47pm
Note to Friends and a Poem by Mother
Note to friends and a poem by my mother -
I've been advised by my doctors to practice strict bed rest until my baby arrives, which means I won't be writing for a few days. While it's a bit frustrating to slow down, I know it's what's best for my baby and me.
I'm in good hands. A special friend has graciously stepped in to help with my workload, and Joseph, my ever-supportive partner, is by my side, ensuring I'm comfortable and cared for every step of the way. And of course, David continues to provide financial support for which I’m grateful.
As I...
I've been advised by my doctors to practice strict bed rest until my baby arrives, which means I won't be writing for a few days. While it's a bit frustrating to slow down, I know it's what's best for my baby and me.
I'm in good hands. A special friend has graciously stepped in to help with my workload, and Joseph, my ever-supportive partner, is by my side, ensuring I'm comfortable and cared for every step of the way. And of course, David continues to provide financial support for which I’m grateful.
As I...
#motherhood
#pregnancy
#sacrifice
230 reads
4 Comments
HowlingHeart
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 4:46pm
3rd May 2024 4:46pm
The Silence in our Friendship
You did this to us it was all your fault; You mesmerized us and led us to your cult.
the time we shared the hours you stole. How we look back upon them so miraculous and true was the time we had. You stole our very will, was that always your goal. We were helpless to resist. Lost in your comfort like a ship lost in the fog and mist. The world around us fills with deception so the darkness grows. Through the darkness coming in from all sides, we couldn't see beyond the end of our nose.
Trust lost and spirit broken, a rage inside us that we thought long since past is...
the time we shared the hours you stole. How we look back upon them so miraculous and true was the time we had. You stole our very will, was that always your goal. We were helpless to resist. Lost in your comfort like a ship lost in the fog and mist. The world around us fills with deception so the darkness grows. Through the darkness coming in from all sides, we couldn't see beyond the end of our nose.
Trust lost and spirit broken, a rage inside us that we thought long since past is...
#friendship
#love
#sacrifice
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1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
2nd May 2024 10:31pm
2nd May 2024 10:31pm
Letter to the Martyr in the Eye of the Hurricane
In the scars you carry
I see the story of courage.
You are the altar where bravery is sacrificed,
where the soul rises in sacrifice.
Each wound is a verse, each mark, a poem.
The pain you endured is the ink that writes your epic.
Your hands, once firm, now trembling,
held the sword of justice.
Your eyes, once full of hope,
they saw the world break into pieces.
And still, you remain standing,
rising like a beacon in the darkness.
Martyr's body,
you are the silent testimony of the struggle.
Your veins are rivers...
I see the story of courage.
You are the altar where bravery is sacrificed,
where the soul rises in sacrifice.
Each wound is a verse, each mark, a poem.
The pain you endured is the ink that writes your epic.
Your hands, once firm, now trembling,
held the sword of justice.
Your eyes, once full of hope,
they saw the world break into pieces.
And still, you remain standing,
rising like a beacon in the darkness.
Martyr's body,
you are the silent testimony of the struggle.
Your veins are rivers...
#anxiety
#hope
#hurt
#mirror
#sacrifice
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