Poems About Roses Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about roses seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 2:45pm
22nd Apr 2024 2:45pm
Stolen Haiku
Put his hand in his pocket
Couldn't buy the rose
Decided to steal her heart
Couldn't buy the rose
Decided to steal her heart
#emotional
#flowers
#love
#mirror
#rose
35 reads
2 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 8:29pm
16th Apr 2024 8:29pm
Rose
Queen of the garden
Outshines all
Of her peers
Emitting a scent
as lovely
As she looks
Outshines all
Of her peers
Emitting a scent
as lovely
As she looks
#flowers
#rose
#nature
71 reads
8 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 6:48pm
14th Apr 2024 6:48pm
thorns and kisses
Oh lift me as a wave, a leaf, a cloud! I fall upon the thorns of life!
I bleed!”—Percy Bysshe Shelley
and when i saw your perfect teeth,
i thought, how awesome for the perfect bite!
may they not bruise the kiss beneath
the sheathing of their canine-sparkling white.
a honeybee upon the wing,
no less resplendent than the mouth of you;
so cock-sure with its venom sting,
while foolish men get stung for honey brew.
so, too, the dark-red dew-clad rose,
enticing fondling hands to blow her horn,
while, underneath her...
I bleed!”—Percy Bysshe Shelley
and when i saw your perfect teeth,
i thought, how awesome for the perfect bite!
may they not bruise the kiss beneath
the sheathing of their canine-sparkling white.
a honeybee upon the wing,
no less resplendent than the mouth of you;
so cock-sure with its venom sting,
while foolish men get stung for honey brew.
so, too, the dark-red dew-clad rose,
enticing fondling hands to blow her horn,
while, underneath her...
#relationships
#romantic
#LifeStruggles
#rose
#hurt
67 reads
0 Comments
Angel24
Poem Published
28th Mar 2024 4:21am
28th Mar 2024 4:21am
Angel Hudson
This name
Oh oh this name
Well I represented
With youthful pride
To be one of you
Is like honouring Christ
Like the resurrection today
Good Friday
My name represents unity
Unity meaning all
Our genre all the generic
People get together
To celebrate success
With Mr Saul Hudson Slash
I love you all
And hope I can bring
Some mercy to the
People that nominated us
In good faith to be winners
And Hudson
My love for you
Is deeper than any river
Maybe the rockpool in Darwin
Where we met...
Oh oh this name
Well I represented
With youthful pride
To be one of you
Is like honouring Christ
Like the resurrection today
Good Friday
My name represents unity
Unity meaning all
Our genre all the generic
People get together
To celebrate success
With Mr Saul Hudson Slash
I love you all
And hope I can bring
Some mercy to the
People that nominated us
In good faith to be winners
And Hudson
My love for you
Is deeper than any river
Maybe the rockpool in Darwin
Where we met...
#love
#BestFriend
#friendship #rose
#friendship #rose
43 reads
0 Comments
Ivory
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 4:23pm
7th Feb 2024 4:23pm
Untitled 3
Every rose was once a tiny bud
Waiting for its day to bloom.
Waiting for its day to bloom.
#rose
66 reads
8 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2024 2:38am
22nd Jan 2024 2:38am
of life and breath
Sometimes it's the same moments that take your breath away that
breathe purpose and love back into your life.”―Steve Marabol
i remember you
from another world,
elegant one, in a thousand roses.
naked now, of dew,
wherefore are you hurled
whence i’ve lusted for your orgic poses?
where, the stunning blush,
of...
breathe purpose and love back into your life.”―Steve Marabol
i remember you
from another world,
elegant one, in a thousand roses.
naked now, of dew,
wherefore are you hurled
whence i’ve lusted for your orgic poses?
where, the stunning blush,
of...
#sadness
#death
#flowers
#rose
#LifeCycle
132 reads
9 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
8th Dec 2023 5:37am
8th Dec 2023 5:37am
a smile among the roses
The rose and the thorn, and sorrow and gladness
are linked together.”–Saadi
everyday
i wait for you
by my window
and all i see are roses
blushing red
in the dripping of my tears
in my lay-
wait rendezvous
i crave to know
the things your heart discloses
...
are linked together.”–Saadi
everyday
i wait for you
by my window
and all i see are roses
blushing red
in the dripping of my tears
in my lay-
wait rendezvous
i crave to know
the things your heart discloses
...
#rejection
#romantic
#rose
#FallingInLove
#UnrequitedLove
176 reads
2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
7th Dec 2023 1:09am
7th Dec 2023 1:09am
broken token
A rose must remain with the sun and the rain or its lovely
promise won’t come true.”—Ray Evans
on bended knees my rose now bows,
for broken are the solemn vows
the suitor and his beau made on her head.
tossed through a window in disdain,
her blush shall ne'er be red again,
for, in the cold, she faints, as good as dead.
she whimpers in the cruel earth,
how indisposed, where once her worth
was weightier than tried silver or fine gold!
for lovers, when their filigree
explodes with vexful tyranny,
get burnt,...
promise won’t come true.”—Ray Evans
on bended knees my rose now bows,
for broken are the solemn vows
the suitor and his beau made on her head.
tossed through a window in disdain,
her blush shall ne'er be red again,
for, in the cold, she faints, as good as dead.
she whimpers in the cruel earth,
how indisposed, where once her worth
was weightier than tried silver or fine gold!
for lovers, when their filigree
explodes with vexful tyranny,
get burnt,...
#relationships
#romantic
#rose
#FallingInLove
#symbolism
165 reads
3 Comments
Cen
Rakhi Rudra
Rakhi Rudra
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 1:40pm
26th Nov 2023 1:40pm
Rulee and Sudeshna and Rakhi.
I love my sisters
Often in rain
And wind and woods
Where the wet winds
Blows a new break
Of summer.
I lie with
A
Semblance
Of mother
And pen
Is my new
Inl of the
Green.
She is a midnight
Harbour of island
Blue where the
Moon is red.
Often in rain
And wind and woods
Where the wet winds
Blows a new break
Of summer.
I lie with
A
Semblance
Of mother
And pen
Is my new
Inl of the
Green.
She is a midnight
Harbour of island
Blue where the
Moon is red.
#flowers
#rose
#nature
65 reads
0 Comments
Cen
Rakhi Rudra
Rakhi Rudra
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 1:33pm
26th Nov 2023 1:33pm
Romu
My brother
Is the rain
Too much for
Tine when
We walk
Away
To a village of the
Valley and sing
Songs of
Garlands
And gown.
Is the rain
Too much for
Tine when
We walk
Away
To a village of the
Valley and sing
Songs of
Garlands
And gown.
#brother
#rose
71 reads
0 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
19th Nov 2023 11:18pm
19th Nov 2023 11:18pm
how quelling, now, your dwelling
plucked-flower reaping song
“We say we love flowers, yet we pluck them. We say we love trees,
yet we cut them down. And people still wonder why some are afraid
when told they are loved.”—Brandi Snyder
how linden
in the garden,
resplendent in the cradle
of the wind,
the conversations
of bright, charming roses
and sweet forget-me-nots,
cut short by strident knife
in prime of life!
not knowing
where they’re going,
they huddle close to hear
the reaping song:
hasten to me,...
“We say we love flowers, yet we pluck them. We say we love trees,
yet we cut them down. And people still wonder why some are afraid
when told they are loved.”—Brandi Snyder
how linden
in the garden,
resplendent in the cradle
of the wind,
the conversations
of bright, charming roses
and sweet forget-me-nots,
cut short by strident knife
in prime of life!
not knowing
where they’re going,
they huddle close to hear
the reaping song:
hasten to me,...
#flowers
#rose
#nature
#sacrifice
#deception
78 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
13th Nov 2023 10:53am
13th Nov 2023 10:53am
Secret Garden
I was exploring my town.
Looking at mountains far away.
Then ,something caught my eye.
I found a house.
With a backyard,very big.
I went into the backyard.
I entered through the doors.
I explored the mystical halls.
Listening to birds chirping.
As I catch a sunlight ray.
And I found something fascinating.
I had found a secret garden.
A fairytale,hidden away.
It had flowers of all kinds, so much color.
Like a jungle hidden in paradise.
You look at its beauty and you widen your eyes.
As...
Looking at mountains far away.
Then ,something caught my eye.
I found a house.
With a backyard,very big.
I went into the backyard.
I entered through the doors.
I explored the mystical halls.
Listening to birds chirping.
As I catch a sunlight ray.
And I found something fascinating.
I had found a secret garden.
A fairytale,hidden away.
It had flowers of all kinds, so much color.
Like a jungle hidden in paradise.
You look at its beauty and you widen your eyes.
As...
#dreams
#flowers
#rose #nature
#rose #nature
95 reads
2 Comments
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