Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems
#romantic
romantic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
the old romantic
saw that chap wordsworth again this morning upon westminster bridge complaining about the traffic
#romantic
#WritingPoetry
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Cold wave
The night is lying sluggish
hot steam is rising from the earth
the leaves are staggering
the fragrant wind is not blowing
Ohhh!!! someone come
make this night intoxicated
bloom it with warm touch
mesmerize the whole sky
give the earth a magical juice
Ignite the extinguishing flame
make the whole environment
drizzling n lascivious
get wet the flying dust
calm it down
give it fragrance with saliva
keep the kiss on with the drops
don't be calm
keep raining in the dry grass
quench the thirst of years ...
hot steam is rising from the earth
the leaves are staggering
the fragrant wind is not blowing
Ohhh!!! someone come
make this night intoxicated
bloom it with warm touch
mesmerize the whole sky
give the earth a magical juice
Ignite the extinguishing flame
make the whole environment
drizzling n lascivious
get wet the flying dust
calm it down
give it fragrance with saliva
keep the kiss on with the drops
don't be calm
keep raining in the dry grass
quench the thirst of years ...
#romantic
#erotic
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A Kiss from an Innocent
I don’t know.
What don’t you know?
I want to tell you.
Then tell me.
No, I guess it’s not right.
Then show.
Really?
Yes.
Is it so simple?
Nothing is simple.
But you said—
I gave you an opening.
You gave me-
An opening.
Close your eyes.
No.
I can’t if you watch.
Then you shouldn’t.
I want too.
Do it, don’t think, go by instinct. I will not run.
Blood rushing through restricted...
What don’t you know?
I want to tell you.
Then tell me.
No, I guess it’s not right.
Then show.
Really?
Yes.
Is it so simple?
Nothing is simple.
But you said—
I gave you an opening.
You gave me-
An opening.
Close your eyes.
No.
I can’t if you watch.
Then you shouldn’t.
I want too.
Do it, don’t think, go by instinct. I will not run.
Blood rushing through restricted...
#romantic
#erotic
#sensual
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The Art Of Translation
our
sips of
bliss
in tremor
ridden
kisses
we decipher
an ancient
language
in the
baring of
our naked souls
vulnerable
boundaries
stretched
by our
limitless
ripples
joyously
enslaved
to passion
our known
fires forever
ignited
sips of
bliss
in tremor
ridden
kisses
we decipher
an ancient
language
in the
baring of
our naked souls
vulnerable
boundaries
stretched
by our
limitless
ripples
joyously
enslaved
to passion
our known
fires forever
ignited
#love
#romantic
#sensual
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People in love
.. ... ... ...
People in love
There is a he...
And there is a she
And I like them ...
Nothing more and nothing less
... ... ... ...
People in love
There is a he...
And there is a she
And I like them ...
Nothing more and nothing less
... ... ... ...
#hope
#relationships
#romantic #gratitude
#romantic #gratitude
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Merry Purple Christmas!
morning hour is here as the clock chimes
on this chilly Christmas morn for me to awaken
I hesitate for just a minute to hear your heart
before I crawl out beneath this warm blanket of luv
only sound heard thru the house is your breathing
I pull the curtains back slowly and light beams in
what a beautiful sight to gaze upon
snow flakes gracefully drifting from heaven
orange, bronze, gold leaves laced with white
green grass hidden by a frozen blanket of sparkles
suns reflecting like tiny diamonds upon the earth
wonderful...
on this chilly Christmas morn for me to awaken
I hesitate for just a minute to hear your heart
before I crawl out beneath this warm blanket of luv
only sound heard thru the house is your breathing
I pull the curtains back slowly and light beams in
what a beautiful sight to gaze upon
snow flakes gracefully drifting from heaven
orange, bronze, gold leaves laced with white
green grass hidden by a frozen blanket of sparkles
suns reflecting like tiny diamonds upon the earth
wonderful...
#happiness
#relationships
#romantic
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Second Chance
Second Chance
My Love slammed the door. It shut as a tomb,
like sound sucked empty from a symphony room
where no music played, where no feet light danced.
Gone was my Love, my last best chance.
300 feet per second is, I know, the speed of pain
as it travels thru the body on its way to the brain
but a breaking heart is witness to a fear coming faster
when sorrow’s Beast of impact charges reinless, without master.
My breathing’s getting deep. I seem to need more breath.
I’m fighting back the tears where they exit from...
My Love slammed the door. It shut as a tomb,
like sound sucked empty from a symphony room
where no music played, where no feet light danced.
Gone was my Love, my last best chance.
300 feet per second is, I know, the speed of pain
as it travels thru the body on its way to the brain
but a breaking heart is witness to a fear coming faster
when sorrow’s Beast of impact charges reinless, without master.
My breathing’s getting deep. I seem to need more breath.
I’m fighting back the tears where they exit from...
#love
#relationships
#heartbroken
#romantic
#FallingInLove
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WHAT YOU HAVE IS A BLESSING
THE HERE AND NOW...👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
#romantic
#gratitude
#support
#respect
#obsession
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Movie Night
Movie Night
“Well, we got out of the store without doing more than the necessary damage to your billfold.”
“I needed a woman to divert me from my path to dietary apocalypse.”
“You need only omit one word, that being ‘woman’. Anyone with even rudimentary knowledge of nutrition would know that day-old pizza is unacceptable.”
“The surgeon general would concur I am sure.”
“Then why do I have to tell you what is obvious?”
“Perhaps because I am part of the unwashed gender.”
“Well even though...
“Well, we got out of the store without doing more than the necessary damage to your billfold.”
“I needed a woman to divert me from my path to dietary apocalypse.”
“You need only omit one word, that being ‘woman’. Anyone with even rudimentary knowledge of nutrition would know that day-old pizza is unacceptable.”
“The surgeon general would concur I am sure.”
“Then why do I have to tell you what is obvious?”
“Perhaps because I am part of the unwashed gender.”
“Well even though...
#women
#romantic
#satirical
#funny
#sexy
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How with an air of quiet grace
How with an air of quiet grace
she’s come into my life
so like the way
the moon slides silently behind a cloud.
And only yesterday
I thought myself too old
to be an object of desire,
too winter-waned without,
within ice greyed
and blurred
to have once more
the heart inside me
stirred.
she’s come into my life
so like the way
the moon slides silently behind a cloud.
And only yesterday
I thought myself too old
to be an object of desire,
too winter-waned without,
within ice greyed
and blurred
to have once more
the heart inside me
stirred.
#romantic
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The Restrained Companion
The thrill of a Friday night
endless stars
counted
chased
Alone in the K car
two of us
mixed tapes
painfully edited
with explanations
We could talk for hours
or just sit silently
But I was never aggressive
and I had heard that turned you off
I could wait for an eternity
basking in that possibility
that we might touch,
even kiss
The bravery never came
and you grew tired of waiting
and wondering
Of course, I cried
but I never could...
endless stars
counted
chased
Alone in the K car
two of us
mixed tapes
painfully edited
with explanations
We could talk for hours
or just sit silently
But I was never aggressive
and I had heard that turned you off
I could wait for an eternity
basking in that possibility
that we might touch,
even kiss
The bravery never came
and you grew tired of waiting
and wondering
Of course, I cried
but I never could...
#sadness
#rejection
#romantic
#MovingOn
#nostalgia
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Just a little time
Sons gone to bed.
My daughters just now lay their head.
My wife puts arms around my neck.
On her forehead I little Peck.
She smiles burying her face in my chest.
"Papi, these are moments I love best."
My hands grab her waist.
We start dancing all over the place.
Her arms wrap tighter in a hug.
Her legs wrap my waist I can feel her love.
She whispers in my ear "sleepy papi"
Sleep in my arms angel your safe with me.
She smiles don't let me go
I look at her I can't your in my soul.
I...
My daughters just now lay their head.
My wife puts arms around my neck.
On her forehead I little Peck.
She smiles burying her face in my chest.
"Papi, these are moments I love best."
My hands grab her waist.
We start dancing all over the place.
Her arms wrap tighter in a hug.
Her legs wrap my waist I can feel her love.
She whispers in my ear "sleepy papi"
Sleep in my arms angel your safe with me.
She smiles don't let me go
I look at her I can't your in my soul.
I...
#love
#wife
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#obsession
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DU Poetry : Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems