Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems
#romantic
romantic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
sailing
walking around the lake
that warm September
afternoon at the Palace
Of Gold
passing by statues of
Brahma, Vishnu and
Shiva
a large boat shaped
like a white swan
sat moored by the
water's edge
the devine sun playing
chants in the ripples
on the water
I bought you a crystal
necklace
and your heart opened
like peacock tail
feathers
on our way home
the sun sailed into
the twilight
as I watched the
sun and looked
at you
...
that warm September
afternoon at the Palace
Of Gold
passing by statues of
Brahma, Vishnu and
Shiva
a large boat shaped
like a white swan
sat moored by the
water's edge
the devine sun playing
chants in the ripples
on the water
I bought you a crystal
necklace
and your heart opened
like peacock tail
feathers
on our way home
the sun sailed into
the twilight
as I watched the
sun and looked
at you
...
#romantic
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Est-ce l'amour (Revisited)
Candlelight's flicker
My eyes light upon your own
And the air hums sweet music
Of a song you've never sung
You who's every move
Dance before my eyes
A scarlet flame
Startled by the wind
From unknown depth
In a sea too deep to swim
As you in stillness shimmer
Fraught with incense
Fragrant as petals
Bedewed
Unfolding in the dawning
And I
Dizzy in your gaze
Speak a foreign tongue
Barbaric to my ear
Your smile sweet poetry
Too ethereal for my soul
As I fall swirling
Lingering ...
My eyes light upon your own
And the air hums sweet music
Of a song you've never sung
You who's every move
Dance before my eyes
A scarlet flame
Startled by the wind
From unknown depth
In a sea too deep to swim
As you in stillness shimmer
Fraught with incense
Fragrant as petals
Bedewed
Unfolding in the dawning
And I
Dizzy in your gaze
Speak a foreign tongue
Barbaric to my ear
Your smile sweet poetry
Too ethereal for my soul
As I fall swirling
Lingering ...
#love
#passion
#romantic
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Awakening my dead soul... (with Reading)
Among the garden of graves.
Your blood feeds the need to live.
And the passion only grows.
Waking the dead with your call.
My screams swaying against you.
Petals grasping the fallen.
Not salvation, but you will come.
Each sin feeding my hell.
Made to lie in tainted fields.
Filth seeping from my mind
Into your darkened chambers.
Beating in me to the rhythm.
A Symphony of Sin so deep
This descending staircase leading,
Into mixed insanity for two.
Where innocence died long ago.
But this Garden...
Your blood feeds the need to live.
And the passion only grows.
Waking the dead with your call.
My screams swaying against you.
Petals grasping the fallen.
Not salvation, but you will come.
Each sin feeding my hell.
Made to lie in tainted fields.
Filth seeping from my mind
Into your darkened chambers.
Beating in me to the rhythm.
A Symphony of Sin so deep
This descending staircase leading,
Into mixed insanity for two.
Where innocence died long ago.
But this Garden...
#dark
#romantic
#erotic
#death
#graveyard
878 reads
43 Comments
Mediterranean Moonlight
We watch in a warming embrace the falling rain
From our resort room located on the shores of Spain,
“The hot sunny days we transform into wet nights
Performing fleshy acts that become erotic deeds we delight,
“Two souls connected as one
Draining our essence every time we cum,
“Rejuvenating ourselves with liquor and Spanish city sights
Until we end up on a deserted beach under Mediterranean moonlight,
“Located on the other side of an abandoned fort
An ancient site where the Inquisition held court,
...
From our resort room located on the shores of Spain,
“The hot sunny days we transform into wet nights
Performing fleshy acts that become erotic deeds we delight,
“Two souls connected as one
Draining our essence every time we cum,
“Rejuvenating ourselves with liquor and Spanish city sights
Until we end up on a deserted beach under Mediterranean moonlight,
“Located on the other side of an abandoned fort
An ancient site where the Inquisition held court,
...
#romantic
#erotic
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4 Comments
What They See in Their Dream
#romantic
#erotic
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
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8 Comments
Lingering
Love can be a very funny thing
Sometimes… you don’t even realise it’s there
It’s just lingering… around the corner
You can sense it.. smell it.. taste it…
It’s never quite in your eye line
The sensation’s all around you
And yet you can’t quite put your finger on it
You deny it to yourself
Deny its existence at times
Because you don’t want to disturb… that beauuutiful thing
Just lingering.. lingering in the back of your thoughts
Lingering in your bed.. lingering in your mind
Where is it.. how can it be so ...
Sometimes… you don’t even realise it’s there
It’s just lingering… around the corner
You can sense it.. smell it.. taste it…
It’s never quite in your eye line
The sensation’s all around you
And yet you can’t quite put your finger on it
You deny it to yourself
Deny its existence at times
Because you don’t want to disturb… that beauuutiful thing
Just lingering.. lingering in the back of your thoughts
Lingering in your bed.. lingering in your mind
Where is it.. how can it be so ...
#emotions
#FallingInLove
#love
#NaPoWriMo2024
#romantic
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Subway chat
Subway chat
Late on a subway train, destination who knows where, I'm feeling so sad and low, so I didn't really care
Then you sat next to me, my leg it brushed against your thigh, I see your eyes brighten, I'm sure I heard a sigh
In the skirt you were wearing I could see stocking tops of pretty Red lace, for the first time in ages, a smile grew on my face
Your perfume was so lovely, you smelled like a gorgeous Rose, each time the tube rocked, it wafted up my nose
Then you started chatting, you said you're going home, you said you're not...
Late on a subway train, destination who knows where, I'm feeling so sad and low, so I didn't really care
Then you sat next to me, my leg it brushed against your thigh, I see your eyes brighten, I'm sure I heard a sigh
In the skirt you were wearing I could see stocking tops of pretty Red lace, for the first time in ages, a smile grew on my face
Your perfume was so lovely, you smelled like a gorgeous Rose, each time the tube rocked, it wafted up my nose
Then you started chatting, you said you're going home, you said you're not...
#love
#romantic
#dialogue
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2 Comments
Cold wave
The night is lying sluggish
hot steam is rising from the earth
the leaves are staggering
the fragrant wind is not blowing
Ohhh!!! someone come
make this night intoxicated
bloom it with warm touch
mesmerize the whole sky
give the earth a magical juice
Ignite the extinguishing flame
make the whole environment
drizzling n lascivious
get wet the flying dust
calm it down
give it fragrance with saliva
keep the kiss on with the drops
don't be calm
keep raining in the dry grass
quench the thirst of years ...
hot steam is rising from the earth
the leaves are staggering
the fragrant wind is not blowing
Ohhh!!! someone come
make this night intoxicated
bloom it with warm touch
mesmerize the whole sky
give the earth a magical juice
Ignite the extinguishing flame
make the whole environment
drizzling n lascivious
get wet the flying dust
calm it down
give it fragrance with saliva
keep the kiss on with the drops
don't be calm
keep raining in the dry grass
quench the thirst of years ...
#romantic
#erotic
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13 Comments
If ...
If only I could....
I'd make love to you one utterly beautiful word at a time
With my eyes would yours lock as I'd pursue your mind and then search your soul
Eagerly I'd begin, then together could we savor each other line by sweet line
So sweetly and so slowly, a smile upon your face, my only goal
Your tears of breathtaking joy would I wipe away as your lips I'd tenderly kiss
Upon your chest, my own would surely cascade and like rain would they drop
For that deepest yearning and hunger we have, for true passion to exist ...
I'd make love to you one utterly beautiful word at a time
With my eyes would yours lock as I'd pursue your mind and then search your soul
Eagerly I'd begin, then together could we savor each other line by sweet line
So sweetly and so slowly, a smile upon your face, my only goal
Your tears of breathtaking joy would I wipe away as your lips I'd tenderly kiss
Upon your chest, my own would surely cascade and like rain would they drop
For that deepest yearning and hunger we have, for true passion to exist ...
#romantic
#lover
990 reads
12 Comments
Swete freond
My purest love, I long for thee
with all my heart and soul.
Thou art the fairest of the fair.
The brightest of the whole...
No other man can match thy grace
thy handsomeness and thy wit.
Thou art the sun that lights my day
and so the moon that guides my night.
My dearest one, I swear to thee
by all the saints in heavens above
that I'll always cherish thee
and honor thee with love.
No other man can take thy place
for thy virtue and thy brave.
Thou art the star that guides my way
the shield that keeps...
with all my heart and soul.
Thou art the fairest of the fair.
The brightest of the whole...
No other man can match thy grace
thy handsomeness and thy wit.
Thou art the sun that lights my day
and so the moon that guides my night.
My dearest one, I swear to thee
by all the saints in heavens above
that I'll always cherish thee
and honor thee with love.
No other man can take thy place
for thy virtue and thy brave.
Thou art the star that guides my way
the shield that keeps...
#love
#husband
#gay
#romantic
#passion
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In the moment
she said, no one has ever
touched me like this before,
lying there, her back arching
into a perfect rainbow
as banshee winds
tore roofs off memories
inside my bone dry skull
and shredded the moment
into a confetti
of sodden glossolalia
unspoken
the rainbow collapsed
and my fraud remained
as undiscovered
as the pot of gold
I so believed in as a child
but never found.
touched me like this before,
lying there, her back arching
into a perfect rainbow
as banshee winds
tore roofs off memories
inside my bone dry skull
and shredded the moment
into a confetti
of sodden glossolalia
unspoken
the rainbow collapsed
and my fraud remained
as undiscovered
as the pot of gold
I so believed in as a child
but never found.
#girlfriend
#romantic
#ILoveYou
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The Art Of Translation
our
sips of
bliss
in tremor
ridden
kisses
we decipher
an ancient
language
in the
baring of
our naked souls
vulnerable
boundaries
stretched
by our
limitless
ripples
joyously
enslaved
to passion
our known
fires forever
ignited
sips of
bliss
in tremor
ridden
kisses
we decipher
an ancient
language
in the
baring of
our naked souls
vulnerable
boundaries
stretched
by our
limitless
ripples
joyously
enslaved
to passion
our known
fires forever
ignited
#love
#romantic
#sensual
415 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems