Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems
#romantic
romantic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Tomorrow's Forever
A man and woman fall deeply in love
nothing else truly matters
strolling together through life, hands entwined
through respect for one another’s hopes and desires
Two lives combine, creating a connected One
sharing struggles, while holding onto the good
forging loving memories along the way
provided a chance to do it again, for sure we would
Our yesterdays and today's will always be tethered
we are meant to always be together
we stand eternally side by side
tomorrow our love will remain bonded forever
nothing else truly matters
strolling together through life, hands entwined
through respect for one another’s hopes and desires
Two lives combine, creating a connected One
sharing struggles, while holding onto the good
forging loving memories along the way
provided a chance to do it again, for sure we would
Our yesterdays and today's will always be tethered
we are meant to always be together
we stand eternally side by side
tomorrow our love will remain bonded forever
#happiness
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#rhyming
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Every Breath
I just want to be free
Anything you want to do
Pleases me
Stay
And see
Loving you defies all logic
When you look at me
I loose my sense of direction
Tease me
Play
Sweetly
My every breath is yours
Put me over your bender knee
Inflame my insubordinate will
Break me
Sway
Dreamy
We unite in ecstatic rhythm
Grind into me slowly
Take me to heights unknown
Just please
Slay
Fiercely
Your touch baptizes my desires
...
Anything you want to do
Pleases me
Stay
And see
Loving you defies all logic
When you look at me
I loose my sense of direction
Tease me
Play
Sweetly
My every breath is yours
Put me over your bender knee
Inflame my insubordinate will
Break me
Sway
Dreamy
We unite in ecstatic rhythm
Grind into me slowly
Take me to heights unknown
Just please
Slay
Fiercely
Your touch baptizes my desires
...
#erotic
#lover
#romantic
114 reads
14 Comments
I AM NOT ALL MY POEMS
I continually marvel how
there is a tendency to equate
or judge poets to be what they
write about. I plead not guilty
to that charge. Rarely, if ever
"I am what or who I write about."
I once read there are 168 poetry
writing styles. In college I was
taught there were 29.
I know most forms of literature
has a way of drawing the reader
into the text creating opinions,
and even identity and pros and
cons conclusion about the writer.
I, as most of us tend to do, draw
on personal observations, imaginary ...
there is a tendency to equate
or judge poets to be what they
write about. I plead not guilty
to that charge. Rarely, if ever
"I am what or who I write about."
I once read there are 168 poetry
writing styles. In college I was
taught there were 29.
I know most forms of literature
has a way of drawing the reader
into the text creating opinions,
and even identity and pros and
cons conclusion about the writer.
I, as most of us tend to do, draw
on personal observations, imaginary ...
#romantic
#inspirational
#fiction
#narrative
#confessional
130 reads
6 Comments
Into You
I couldn't be more into you
Even if I tried
And if I could I'd cast a spell
Just to make you mine
Your lips are so alluring
Your embrace is heavenly
I would be so happy though
If you gave your heart to me
Even if I tried
And if I could I'd cast a spell
Just to make you mine
Your lips are so alluring
Your embrace is heavenly
I would be so happy though
If you gave your heart to me
#love
#romantic
686 reads
13 Comments
desert winds
you are the warm winds
that blow across my desert
*
you circle in my skies
a mighty hawk
*
with passion in my blood
I call to you caw, caw
*
primal is my desire for you
wild in nature
you belong to none
*
untamed
your will has carved canyons
in my soul
*
a mighty river courses
through my veins
my body remains scorched
& parched
* ...
that blow across my desert
*
you circle in my skies
a mighty hawk
*
with passion in my blood
I call to you caw, caw
*
primal is my desire for you
wild in nature
you belong to none
*
untamed
your will has carved canyons
in my soul
*
a mighty river courses
through my veins
my body remains scorched
& parched
* ...
#love
#lust
#romantic
#nature
#desert
1049 reads
32 Comments
Revelation
I saw a shooting star
before the sun had risen
I wished for us, near or far
to holdfast our intuition
I closed my eyes and saw
upon that inhaled moment
contentment of our hearts
a vulnerable exposure
and dreary days consoled
snuggled up under blankets
our hands together fold
into cashed-in rain checks
for that’s how love becomes
while the birds pluck the worm
and the bees dutifully buzz
I’ll be your only girl
before the sun had risen
I wished for us, near or far
to holdfast our intuition
I closed my eyes and saw
upon that inhaled moment
contentment of our hearts
a vulnerable exposure
and dreary days consoled
snuggled up under blankets
our hands together fold
into cashed-in rain checks
for that’s how love becomes
while the birds pluck the worm
and the bees dutifully buzz
I’ll be your only girl
#love
#wife
#romantic
#NaPoWriMo2024
#crush
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8 Comments
Tension Moist
These Lips
Your mouth
The romance that thinks
out loud or in hushed tones
Sitting on the veranda
Sipping tea, my arm around you
Picking up your wild mane
Grazing your neck ever so slightly
Romance
Connection
Electricity
Tension moist in the collected air
Your mouth
The romance that thinks
out loud or in hushed tones
Sitting on the veranda
Sipping tea, my arm around you
Picking up your wild mane
Grazing your neck ever so slightly
Romance
Connection
Electricity
Tension moist in the collected air
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#sensual
#seductive
573 reads
22 Comments
I
I have always wanted to fly
To reach a height that only I could feel
To lay on soft pillowed clouds
To soar with external zeal
I have always wanted to climb.
The stairs of Kuramayama Kyoto
To reach the heavens here on earth
So, I soar to the heavens.
As I spread my wings
And you take me,
Without question
Or demands.
So, I can experience
The glory that is.
Within me.
To reach a height that only I could feel
To lay on soft pillowed clouds
To soar with external zeal
I have always wanted to climb.
The stairs of Kuramayama Kyoto
To reach the heavens here on earth
So, I soar to the heavens.
As I spread my wings
And you take me,
Without question
Or demands.
So, I can experience
The glory that is.
Within me.
#erotic
#romantic
#sensual #sex
#sensual #sex
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8 Comments
i cannot see (too well)
i cannot
see
too well,
each picture
of her,
each happy
remembrance
blocks
my vision
from seeing
everything
else.
see
too well,
each picture
of her,
each happy
remembrance
blocks
my vision
from seeing
everything
else.
#admiration
#beauty
#kindness
#relationships
#romantic
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6 Comments
THE SHALL WE DO IT QUESTION
We've hung around each other long,
the bond we have is growing strong.
Tell me, honey, what would you do
if I asked to make love to you?
Would you say "Yes", give me a go,
or shake your pretty head, say "No"
and turn your back upon the chance
of a consummated romance.
or take the third way, hesitating,
by insisting on us waiting
until about this you're more sure
of wanting sexual pleasure?
the bond we have is growing strong.
Tell me, honey, what would you do
if I asked to make love to you?
Would you say "Yes", give me a go,
or shake your pretty head, say "No"
and turn your back upon the chance
of a consummated romance.
or take the third way, hesitating,
by insisting on us waiting
until about this you're more sure
of wanting sexual pleasure?
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#sex
#rhyming
213 reads
2 Comments
MY DAILY RITUAL
Each and every night I talk to the moon about you
place my wishes upon its light in hope to come true
also I tell the Lord the very same words when I pray
how badly want your safe return to me someday
I miss our conversations, your laugh and smile
oh, how I wish you'd come back and stay awhile
my happiest moments were ones I shared with you
now that you have gone away I am feeling so blue
I like to believe that you also love and miss me
and wonder if we were together how it would be
you will be welcomed very warmly I...
place my wishes upon its light in hope to come true
also I tell the Lord the very same words when I pray
how badly want your safe return to me someday
I miss our conversations, your laugh and smile
oh, how I wish you'd come back and stay awhile
my happiest moments were ones I shared with you
now that you have gone away I am feeling so blue
I like to believe that you also love and miss me
and wonder if we were together how it would be
you will be welcomed very warmly I...
#love
#romantic
#patience
#passion
#bittersweet
237 reads
My pen won't dry up
The ink never ceases to flow,
For my thoughts of you, they never go.
Page after page, they take their form,
A torrent of words, a literary storm.
Some shared with the world, others just for you,
Capturing the moments we shared, the things we do.
In dreams and waking, my pen takes flight,
Bringing to life my deepest, burning desire.
The words, they dance across the page,
Tuning the strings of passion's endless stage.
Together we revel in this company divine,
Your presence, my muse, a symphony sublime.
No end in...
For my thoughts of you, they never go.
Page after page, they take their form,
A torrent of words, a literary storm.
Some shared with the world, others just for you,
Capturing the moments we shared, the things we do.
In dreams and waking, my pen takes flight,
Bringing to life my deepest, burning desire.
The words, they dance across the page,
Tuning the strings of passion's endless stage.
Together we revel in this company divine,
Your presence, my muse, a symphony sublime.
No end in...
#romantic
#FallingInLove
#admiration
#sensual
#seductive
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2 Comments
DU Poetry : Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems