Poems About Rejection Seeking Friendly Advice
#rejection
Poems about rejection seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
sadness
her hair hides
the fragile smile
as tears find
their way down
her cheeks,
dropping away
into emptiness
and confusion,
passing lost hope
and what was
once happier days.
the fragile smile
as tears find
their way down
her cheeks,
dropping away
into emptiness
and confusion,
passing lost hope
and what was
once happier days.
#sadness
#loneliness
#rejection
#heartbroken
#frustration
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No-one can think.
"Look. I mean. Don't blame yourself."
"But I do! I cussed him out this morning."
"But I mean. It's not your fault. I know you do your best you can."
"He's fifteen years old."
"He's nearly a man though. He knows right from wrong."
"Wot you talkin bout. He's just a boy!"
"Come on baby, you're alright. Right?"
"Are you being funny! How can I be alright?"
"Listen babe. I don't want us to fight."
"This ain't fighting. I'm jus stating a fact." ...
"But I do! I cussed him out this morning."
"But I mean. It's not your fault. I know you do your best you can."
"He's fifteen years old."
"He's nearly a man though. He knows right from wrong."
"Wot you talkin bout. He's just a boy!"
"Come on baby, you're alright. Right?"
"Are you being funny! How can I be alright?"
"Listen babe. I don't want us to fight."
"This ain't fighting. I'm jus stating a fact." ...
#sadness
#regret
#rejection
#disappointment
#bittersweet
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Not who I see
We were meant to be
Now I'm drowning
Lost at sea
Crying
A knife to the back
You're certainly
Not lacking tact
Crawling out of windows
Quietly morphing
Your shape into the shadows
Hiding
Stories changing to lies
Truth is hidden
Where you'll never find
Betrayal at your core
Selling your soul
Is something you can't afford
Love your selfish self
While the rest of us
Walk through hell
You crossed a line
There's no going back
No, we...
Now I'm drowning
Lost at sea
Crying
A knife to the back
You're certainly
Not lacking tact
Crawling out of windows
Quietly morphing
Your shape into the shadows
Hiding
Stories changing to lies
Truth is hidden
Where you'll never find
Betrayal at your core
Selling your soul
Is something you can't afford
Love your selfish self
While the rest of us
Walk through hell
You crossed a line
There's no going back
No, we...
#sadness
#loneliness
#rejection
#heartbroken
#disappointment
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Borrowed Heart
Something borrowed
Something blue
Had I only known
I’d borrowed you
We met at a wedding
A family affair
You were the best man
I did the brides hair
I caught your attention
You smiled at me
We locked eyes a moment
Underneath the oak tree
The vows were exchanged
The whole time you stared
My heart began racing
The wind in my hair
We met at the bar
You just said “hello”
Your voice unexpected
You spoke very low
You seemed then so timid
And a little bit bold ...
Something blue
Had I only known
I’d borrowed you
We met at a wedding
A family affair
You were the best man
I did the brides hair
I caught your attention
You smiled at me
We locked eyes a moment
Underneath the oak tree
The vows were exchanged
The whole time you stared
My heart began racing
The wind in my hair
We met at the bar
You just said “hello”
Your voice unexpected
You spoke very low
You seemed then so timid
And a little bit bold ...
#sadness
#rejection
#heartbroken
#breakup
#UnrequitedLove
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Inane things
A audience of one can be fun.
I lived with paint at home.
I lived with pain at school,
at the hands of insecure,insignificant fools,who knew the were nothing special.
Like them,life horrified me.
So I learned to buy inane material things.
©SukiSushiCrown.27-01-2024
I lived with paint at home.
I lived with pain at school,
at the hands of insecure,insignificant fools,who knew the were nothing special.
Like them,life horrified me.
So I learned to buy inane material things.
©SukiSushiCrown.27-01-2024
#loneliness
#rejection
#misunderstood
#ignorance
#FeelingTrapped
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Seeing mum
Such Serenity,a joy to see.
Express,the expression,from breast.
I watched my mother feed my baby sister. I wanted it to be me.
Seeing mum's balloon chest.
Done something to me.
It confused the hell outta me.
My sister suckled,while I felt my penis stiffen. This picture,a memory.
Now I'm in my late forties, happily married,with a six month old daughter,who uncannily,resembles my mother.
I advised my wife,to bottle feed.
Thank God, my wife agreed.
...
Express,the expression,from breast.
I watched my mother feed my baby sister. I wanted it to be me.
Seeing mum's balloon chest.
Done something to me.
It confused the hell outta me.
My sister suckled,while I felt my penis stiffen. This picture,a memory.
Now I'm in my late forties, happily married,with a six month old daughter,who uncannily,resembles my mother.
I advised my wife,to bottle feed.
Thank God, my wife agreed.
...
#loneliness
#rejection
#shame
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it won't let go of me
I cut the rope that bound us
Yet it still wraps around my throat
At night... even during the day
It's random and out of the blue
That thoughts of you choke me
I reach to pull them away from me
But it grows tighter as the memories fade
You were my compass now I've lost my way
I'm chosing to let go but the rope loops again
Intangible, untangable pain... it's just pain
I'm left with the noose of your loss
Strands of vibrant mourning I can't touch
I want to let go but it won't let go of me
Yet it still wraps around my throat
At night... even during the day
It's random and out of the blue
That thoughts of you choke me
I reach to pull them away from me
But it grows tighter as the memories fade
You were my compass now I've lost my way
I'm chosing to let go but the rope loops again
Intangible, untangable pain... it's just pain
I'm left with the noose of your loss
Strands of vibrant mourning I can't touch
I want to let go but it won't let go of me
#rejection
#heartbroken
#IMissYou #obsession
#IMissYou #obsession
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Now She Tells Me
Now she tells me
for the however manyeth time that
yes, she still loves me but
in a different way.
I kept hearing that but
translated it as
yes, she still loves me but
there are issues which can
and probably will be
worked out.
Silly boy.
The latest issue being
the guy twenty-some years younger
who just got out of jail ...
for the however manyeth time that
yes, she still loves me but
in a different way.
I kept hearing that but
translated it as
yes, she still loves me but
there are issues which can
and probably will be
worked out.
Silly boy.
The latest issue being
the guy twenty-some years younger
who just got out of jail ...
#sadness
#rejection
#heartbroken
#confusion
#emptiness
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He's reaching entropy
"How're are you?" He asked me.
"I'm ok. You?"
"I'm ok." Facing me he denied..
I could see that he wasn't ok at all.Love
His face,bloody swollen,painful turmoil, gravitational fields. In the darkness of space,where transmuted light,shone on him.
He was reaching out.
I chose not to see his outstretched hands. Fearful of his reaction. Combative attraction,my intuition spoke to me.
Reach back out to him. The plea of my heart communicated. He remembered what you told him. Sharp!
Now in need.
He's...
"I'm ok. You?"
"I'm ok." Facing me he denied..
I could see that he wasn't ok at all.Love
His face,bloody swollen,painful turmoil, gravitational fields. In the darkness of space,where transmuted light,shone on him.
He was reaching out.
I chose not to see his outstretched hands. Fearful of his reaction. Combative attraction,my intuition spoke to me.
Reach back out to him. The plea of my heart communicated. He remembered what you told him. Sharp!
Now in need.
He's...
#regret
#rejection
#denial #bittersweet
#denial #bittersweet
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FishNChips cold
We met, for a meal.
I had 'fishnChips.
He had pain.
I ignored him and carried on eating.
Didn't want my 'fishNChips to get cold.
He had anger.
I told him stop embarrassing me.
He wouldn't let anger go.
So I got up, leaving him in the restaurant ,to devour on whatever emotions he felt like eating.
The door slammed shut,apparently,quietly.
©SukiSushiCrown.4-01-2024
I had 'fishnChips.
He had pain.
I ignored him and carried on eating.
Didn't want my 'fishNChips to get cold.
He had anger.
I told him stop embarrassing me.
He wouldn't let anger go.
So I got up, leaving him in the restaurant ,to devour on whatever emotions he felt like eating.
The door slammed shut,apparently,quietly.
©SukiSushiCrown.4-01-2024
#sadness
#anger
#rejection
#shame
#emptiness
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The Final Flight to Freedom
Silent through the years
Like a giving tree
You kept cutting branches
Shredding me by decree
Quiet as harmless rock
Sitting by your side
You kept smashing your hammer
Cracking my core inside
Heart blossomed like a flower
So many times sitting beside
Hoping you would hold me tender
But got plucked and discarded aside
Finally, I became a bird
In this heartless nest
You tried to severe my wings
But I soared and flew away, for the best.
I...
Like a giving tree
You kept cutting branches
Shredding me by decree
Quiet as harmless rock
Sitting by your side
You kept smashing your hammer
Cracking my core inside
Heart blossomed like a flower
So many times sitting beside
Hoping you would hold me tender
But got plucked and discarded aside
Finally, I became a bird
In this heartless nest
You tried to severe my wings
But I soared and flew away, for the best.
I...
#strength
#loneliness
#rejection
#heartbroken
#emptiness
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scars
she is
too
far away
in distance,
to hear,
if
i could
give her
flowers
to speak,
a garden
of poems,
i will
be lonely
my mind,
my soul
will be
roped
with scars.
too
far away
in distance,
to hear,
if
i could
give her
flowers
to speak,
a garden
of poems,
i will
be lonely
my mind,
my soul
will be
roped
with scars.
#sadness
#loneliness
#rejection
#disappointment
#emptiness
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DU Poetry : Poems About Rejection Seeking Friendly Advice