Poems About Rejection Seeking Friendly Advice
#rejection
Poems about rejection seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:50pm
Yesterday 8:50pm
Am I the equivalent of elevator music?
You wrap me up in empty promises
I want to want you
I want to want you
but you always leave me waiting
for the bass drop that never comes
and this melody is getting old
You pin me down
without pinning me down
and am I so desperate for love
I would accept less than the minimum
just so I can tell myself I'm wanted?
You look at me
like I'm everything
but your words betray you
your absence of touch speaks so loud
and I'm reminded of how it feels
to be unloveable
Am I so unloveable...
I want to want you
I want to want you
but you always leave me waiting
for the bass drop that never comes
and this melody is getting old
You pin me down
without pinning me down
and am I so desperate for love
I would accept less than the minimum
just so I can tell myself I'm wanted?
You look at me
like I'm everything
but your words betray you
your absence of touch speaks so loud
and I'm reminded of how it feels
to be unloveable
Am I so unloveable...
#hurt
#loneliness
#love
#lover
#rejection
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Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 00:20am
24th Jan 2025 00:20am
am I just a ghost in your world?
I watch you pass me in the hallway
a tangible ghost
you talk but I'm not listening
because I'm the ghost
and I've got no time
for your living problems
You want me
you say you want me
but all your words are about you
and even if I had something to say
you wouldn't know
because you dare not ask
the hard questions
I feel like a spectator
in my own science experiment
where I'm the subject in my own
rat maze of emptiness
and I forgot the way to the exit
or maybe I just forgot to...
a tangible ghost
you talk but I'm not listening
because I'm the ghost
and I've got no time
for your living problems
You want me
you say you want me
but all your words are about you
and even if I had something to say
you wouldn't know
because you dare not ask
the hard questions
I feel like a spectator
in my own science experiment
where I'm the subject in my own
rat maze of emptiness
and I forgot the way to the exit
or maybe I just forgot to...
#boredom
#depression
#rejection
#relationships
#sadness
77 reads
3 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 7:58am
20th Jan 2025 7:58am
like a glass
she breaks
emotionally
from his
rejection
like a
glass
thrown
up against
a wall.
emotionally
from his
rejection
like a
glass
thrown
up against
a wall.
#conflict
#deception
#heartbroken
#manipulation
#rejection
74 reads
5 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 5:26am
11th Jan 2025 5:26am
touch
i wanted that
in every bright night and foggy evening
my words and my feelings remain intact,
i wanted that
even with the falling leaves,
and with the rising buds
my voice keeps resonating even in my absence
i wanted that
in the rotten story of my life
your sprouting steps will bring a rainbow
i wanted that
like a photo frame hanging on the wall
my memories remain hanging on the wall of your heart
i wanted that
even without me you will keep feeling
the butterfly dancing on my naked thighs
...
in every bright night and foggy evening
my words and my feelings remain intact,
i wanted that
even with the falling leaves,
and with the rising buds
my voice keeps resonating even in my absence
i wanted that
in the rotten story of my life
your sprouting steps will bring a rainbow
i wanted that
like a photo frame hanging on the wall
my memories remain hanging on the wall of your heart
i wanted that
even without me you will keep feeling
the butterfly dancing on my naked thighs
...
#emotions
#rejection
#sadness
149 reads
12 Comments
HarleyQuinn80
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 3:22pm
10th Jan 2025 3:22pm
Naked Emotion
As I lay here naked on the foor, I think back to what we were. We were fun, we were free, we couldn't keep our hands to ourself.
Now I am broken by your tongue. Your words stab deeper than seraded blades. I just wanted to please you. What we had was great. Now it's gone. I am the fool I know. I gave you all that was me. You consumed.
I have no more to give. Your greedy paws your greedy jaws...you put me on a pedistool..only to point at my flaws. Im shamed, broken and alone. I was just a game, a passtime, a plaything. You made me a mockery. Now here I lay in puddled...
Now I am broken by your tongue. Your words stab deeper than seraded blades. I just wanted to please you. What we had was great. Now it's gone. I am the fool I know. I gave you all that was me. You consumed.
I have no more to give. Your greedy paws your greedy jaws...you put me on a pedistool..only to point at my flaws. Im shamed, broken and alone. I was just a game, a passtime, a plaything. You made me a mockery. Now here I lay in puddled...
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#rejection
#sadness
#shame
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3 Comments
3Y3S-THVT-S33
Electra
Electra
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 7:32am
2nd Jan 2025 7:32am
I Cannot Forgive the Little Girl.
I don't think I'm actually healing.
I just walk around with the ashes of a little girl in a jar,
And I claim that she is somewhere better,
Somewhere safer,
And that she's okay.
When in reality,
She is locked within my bones.
How much she cries daily sickens me.
Those ashes are just a piece of her,
But her heart stills beats a broken tune.
She begs for me to love her,
But I cut her,
And tell her that I hate her.
When I do try to mend her wounds,
They are cut so far down through the bone,
I vomit when I feel them. ...
I just walk around with the ashes of a little girl in a jar,
And I claim that she is somewhere better,
Somewhere safer,
And that she's okay.
When in reality,
She is locked within my bones.
How much she cries daily sickens me.
Those ashes are just a piece of her,
But her heart stills beats a broken tune.
She begs for me to love her,
But I cut her,
And tell her that I hate her.
When I do try to mend her wounds,
They are cut so far down through the bone,
I vomit when I feel them. ...
#anger
#hate
#healing
#loneliness
#rejection
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0 Comments
Ashriyon
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 8:55pm
30th Dec 2024 8:55pm
The Echoes of Solitude
Darkness envelops me, a cloak of fear,
Shadows whisper, "You're alone, my dear. "
The world around me fades, a distant dream,
As I grapple with the weight of this unseen.
Memories of love ones, once so bright,
Now fade like embers in the fading light.
Their presence, once a beacon in the night,
Slips away, leaving me in endless plight.
Scars adorn my skin, a testament to pain,
A silent cry for help, a plea to regain
The strength to face the world, to find my way,
But the path ahead seems shrouded, day by day. ...
Shadows whisper, "You're alone, my dear. "
The world around me fades, a distant dream,
As I grapple with the weight of this unseen.
Memories of love ones, once so bright,
Now fade like embers in the fading light.
Their presence, once a beacon in the night,
Slips away, leaving me in endless plight.
Scars adorn my skin, a testament to pain,
A silent cry for help, a plea to regain
The strength to face the world, to find my way,
But the path ahead seems shrouded, day by day. ...
#dark
#fear
#loneliness #rejection
#loneliness #rejection
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Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 1:30pm
29th Dec 2024 1:30pm
Forget
Forget my smile
Forget my laugh
Forget my eyes
Forget all those things you said
You loved so much about me
Forget my utterly unexplainable devotion
To every little whim of yours
Because your happiness was all I wanted, all I needed
Your desires are what I lived to fulfill
Yet it wasn't enough
So please just forget
Everything about me
And hopefully one day I'll be able
To forget about you
Forget my laugh
Forget my eyes
Forget all those things you said
You loved so much about me
Forget my utterly unexplainable devotion
To every little whim of yours
Because your happiness was all I wanted, all I needed
Your desires are what I lived to fulfill
Yet it wasn't enough
So please just forget
Everything about me
And hopefully one day I'll be able
To forget about you
#breakup
#heartbroken
#rejection
#sadness
#separation
109 reads
2 Comments
DarkPopPrincess
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 10:14pm
27th Dec 2024 10:14pm
Standing At The Edge of an Abyss
I'm standing at the edge of an abyss,
about to be pushed in everytime.
This is why support groups or Meetup is no longer comforting, but rather patronizing.
Went to one last night. They put words in my mouth that I did not say, gaslighting me. I always experience this, not surprised or even fazed by stupid smiles or stupid tricks. Just for being blunt and authentic, I was shunned when not every time I was. But lately I find myself less and less supported by them.
And it doesn't surprise me that they did not let this girl who was gonna share...
about to be pushed in everytime.
This is why support groups or Meetup is no longer comforting, but rather patronizing.
Went to one last night. They put words in my mouth that I did not say, gaslighting me. I always experience this, not surprised or even fazed by stupid smiles or stupid tricks. Just for being blunt and authentic, I was shunned when not every time I was. But lately I find myself less and less supported by them.
And it doesn't surprise me that they did not let this girl who was gonna share...
#LifeStruggles
#rejection
69 reads
2 Comments
Da_kwesta
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 11:48pm
15th Dec 2024 11:48pm
The Last Note
I met her in the sway of twilight,
the hum of a bus station alive with strangers.
She stood like dusk personified-
skin the color of midnight’s promise,
eyes that held the weight of unspoken galaxies.
Her laughter was a quiet storm,
shaking loose the edges of my solitude.
She sat beside me,
and the world shifted its rhythm.
A fleeting conversation turned eternity,
her words folding into me like pages
pressed too tightly to separate.
When she came into my life,
it was always with whispers,
love letters tucked...
the hum of a bus station alive with strangers.
She stood like dusk personified-
skin the color of midnight’s promise,
eyes that held the weight of unspoken galaxies.
Her laughter was a quiet storm,
shaking loose the edges of my solitude.
She sat beside me,
and the world shifted its rhythm.
A fleeting conversation turned eternity,
her words folding into me like pages
pressed too tightly to separate.
When she came into my life,
it was always with whispers,
love letters tucked...
#bittersweet
#heartbroken
#love #rejection
#love #rejection
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oskar
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 11:45am
11th Dec 2024 11:45am
canary bird
A canary bird in its cage placed near a window
a leafy tree of spring, where lesser sparrows sat
wished for the mystical word, freedom
Was the freedom the canary bird saw real or not
constructed by an AI method, like the journalist
in a famous newspaper had seen a clip where
her husband was eating lettuce with a rabbit
Ai, opens up a scary world, where fake is true
and we can't know the difference
The eyes seeing us are blind, they have no life
and do not know they are construct
but human-like robots might in time develop
a...
a leafy tree of spring, where lesser sparrows sat
wished for the mystical word, freedom
Was the freedom the canary bird saw real or not
constructed by an AI method, like the journalist
in a famous newspaper had seen a clip where
her husband was eating lettuce with a rabbit
Ai, opens up a scary world, where fake is true
and we can't know the difference
The eyes seeing us are blind, they have no life
and do not know they are construct
but human-like robots might in time develop
a...
#regret
#rejection
#sadness #shame
#sadness #shame
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Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 10:37pm
28th Nov 2024 10:37pm
Shards
Skies bleeding grey
Rain covers my lovelorn face
As I question my existence
And try to make sense of....
Loss
Loss of innocence
In an unforgiving world
That uses up what it wants
Then casts the rest
In the garbage bin
I watch the trees grow, bloom,
Wither and fade
Much like my heart
Given away....
Only to be raped
You said forever
But forever was just a word
That one day you could use
To crush and hurt
While you live out your twisted...
Rain covers my lovelorn face
As I question my existence
And try to make sense of....
Loss
Loss of innocence
In an unforgiving world
That uses up what it wants
Then casts the rest
In the garbage bin
I watch the trees grow, bloom,
Wither and fade
Much like my heart
Given away....
Only to be raped
You said forever
But forever was just a word
That one day you could use
To crush and hurt
While you live out your twisted...
#despair
#emptiness
#grief
#heartbroken
#rejection
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