Poems About Rebellion by Top Critiquers
#rebellion
Poems about rebellion by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Shadow of Fear
You can drive a car if you do it right
but you can't go far if it puts you out of sight
you can't look at girls
you can't drink anything
you got to get your kicks in the shadow of fear
You stay out late when they think your young
then they find out, there gonna want you hung
so you try to understand that you might get near
cause your lost alone in the shadow of fear
So you found a chick that you think is fine
but you fell too fast so you lost your mind
society looks, but they turn their ears
you got to get your kicks in...
but you can't go far if it puts you out of sight
you can't look at girls
you can't drink anything
you got to get your kicks in the shadow of fear
You stay out late when they think your young
then they find out, there gonna want you hung
so you try to understand that you might get near
cause your lost alone in the shadow of fear
So you found a chick that you think is fine
but you fell too fast so you lost your mind
society looks, but they turn their ears
you got to get your kicks in...
#FeelingTrapped
#lyrics
#rebellion
#rhyming
#teens
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Illuminate
inside the houses of nine
I see you Zomb
my immortal enemy
wolf against bat
inside the scorn scream
Illuminate this oh ye Night's Templar
I see the red new order
it has been previewed and broadcasted
Revelations revealed the truth in part
my lips are sealed Father
I cry now not out of weakness but happiness
with a heaviness on me I can barely stand
you chose me to speak and I am
gifted with great magics
it's a miracle I still stand
I came for war
I didn't come to die
I shall see you...
I see you Zomb
my immortal enemy
wolf against bat
inside the scorn scream
Illuminate this oh ye Night's Templar
I see the red new order
it has been previewed and broadcasted
Revelations revealed the truth in part
my lips are sealed Father
I cry now not out of weakness but happiness
with a heaviness on me I can barely stand
you chose me to speak and I am
gifted with great magics
it's a miracle I still stand
I came for war
I didn't come to die
I shall see you...
#technology
#war
#God #rebellion
#God #rebellion
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Hell on Two Wheels
On the heels of injustice comes hell on two wheels
Riding into town looking for stern retribution
A steel horse baptized in fire is engulfing its rider
Who brings the inspiring flame of a revolution
Like a burning invader this infernal crusader
Carries a chain to punish or to possibly atone
But his unsheathed sword brings you the word
With poetic tongue dipped in sharp brimstone
“Vengeance is bliss” the rider hisses if you reminisce
When reason and logic were mistaken for anarchy
As the laws have fractured under all...
Riding into town looking for stern retribution
A steel horse baptized in fire is engulfing its rider
Who brings the inspiring flame of a revolution
Like a burning invader this infernal crusader
Carries a chain to punish or to possibly atone
But his unsheathed sword brings you the word
With poetic tongue dipped in sharp brimstone
“Vengeance is bliss” the rider hisses if you reminisce
When reason and logic were mistaken for anarchy
As the laws have fractured under all...
#PowerOfWords
#rebellion
#revenge #TruthOfLife
#revenge #TruthOfLife
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~ASHTAKAALI~ The Eight Avatar-ing Kaali
https://youtu.be/xWgDYQgCKM8?feature=shared
the demon in a let loose cruel
.’Rakshasa Kora Thaandavam’
..the slaying of the demon
are the needful prayers
of these innocent helpless
masses ..
in the happening now. the
#Soorasamhaaram
the virgin snake goddess
‘Nagakanni Amman’
births the raging sacred forces
The Eight Kaali Forms .. the
‘ASHTAKAALI..’
from the eighth egg.....
the demon in a let loose cruel
.’Rakshasa Kora Thaandavam’
..the slaying of the demon
are the needful prayers
of these innocent helpless
masses ..
in the happening now. the
#Soorasamhaaram
the virgin snake goddess
‘Nagakanni Amman’
births the raging sacred forces
The Eight Kaali Forms .. the
‘ASHTAKAALI..’
from the eighth egg.....
#feminism
#God
#inspirational
#rebellion
#spiritual
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6 Comments
unzipped lips
I'm still getting used to this
releasing thoughts freely & without pause
I let them blow
& the old me reaches up
tickling the back of my mind
are you sure you didn't just overstep?
but then I remember...
overstepping is how we get out of the box
& I'm tired of being crated & labeled
harmless
so I let 'er rip
giving voice to what's always been present
scratching like sandpaper of coarse grit
burning my imprisoning throat
begging to get out
I've always had a lot to say
just too...
releasing thoughts freely & without pause
I let them blow
& the old me reaches up
tickling the back of my mind
are you sure you didn't just overstep?
but then I remember...
overstepping is how we get out of the box
& I'm tired of being crated & labeled
harmless
so I let 'er rip
giving voice to what's always been present
scratching like sandpaper of coarse grit
burning my imprisoning throat
begging to get out
I've always had a lot to say
just too...
#corruption
#deception
#honesty #rebellion
#honesty #rebellion
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WHY SHE POSED NUDE

#teens
#erotic
#rhyming #rebellion
#rhyming #rebellion
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Watch and see
I'll end the war in Ukraine
within the first 24 hours
if elected president
Trump said
Day 21:
Russian troops push
toward Pokrovsk
as we speak
Trump remains silent
far too busy raging war
on our democracy
to maintain control:
commuting his militia
—J6 insurrectionists—
who'll beat police officers
and the national guard,
replacing qualified personnel
with predators and drunks
he deems loyalists,
cancelling health research
education...
within the first 24 hours
if elected president
Trump said
Day 21:
Russian troops push
toward Pokrovsk
as we speak
Trump remains silent
far too busy raging war
on our democracy
to maintain control:
commuting his militia
—J6 insurrectionists—
who'll beat police officers
and the national guard,
replacing qualified personnel
with predators and drunks
he deems loyalists,
cancelling health research
education...
#CallToAction
#faith
#politics #rebellion
#politics #rebellion
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29 Comments
Ponder a Box
What lies within the box, unseen,
a token lost, a thought pristine?
Or merely air, a void serene?
Does it hold time, a clock unwound,
a moment trapped, a silence found?
Or echoes lost where none astound?
Could it be dreams of lives once led,
flickering ghosts a life long dead?
Or hopes unwoven, stitched with thread?
Might it contain the stars of yore.
The cosmos bound behind this door?
Infinity within its core?
Or is it but the simplest guise,
a trick played out before our eyes?...
a token lost, a thought pristine?
Or merely air, a void serene?
Does it hold time, a clock unwound,
a moment trapped, a silence found?
Or echoes lost where none astound?
Could it be dreams of lives once led,
flickering ghosts a life long dead?
Or hopes unwoven, stitched with thread?
Might it contain the stars of yore.
The cosmos bound behind this door?
Infinity within its core?
Or is it but the simplest guise,
a trick played out before our eyes?...
#evolution
#honesty
#mythology
#rebellion
#spiritual
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Defiant
you defeat mE
.stresS
.mE
.ouT
.so defianT
. .without a doubT
.not the samE
.not even closE
.you're my paiN
.
.why I overdosE
.you're the braiN
.inside my skulL
.can't cross the bridgE
.you're just a trolL
.you weaken mE ...
.stresS
.mE
.ouT
.so defianT
. .without a doubT
.not the samE
.not even closE
.you're my paiN
.
.why I overdosE
.you're the braiN
.inside my skulL
.can't cross the bridgE
.you're just a trolL
.you weaken mE ...
#freedom
#rebellion
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Epilogue of Rain
The epilogue of the rain
sounds like quelling silence.
A solve unto my pain -
a mystery I cannot solve.
Maybe I am insane -
I have long thought but never said.
because…
being insane was something that always made me proud.
Does that make me insane?
I guess I just didn’t want to be the same
as all those people in the crowd.
I guess I just wanted my silence to be loud
and vanquish the seeds sown
by lying scheming manipulative powers that be
that write the script of you and me
...
sounds like quelling silence.
A solve unto my pain -
a mystery I cannot solve.
Maybe I am insane -
I have long thought but never said.
because…
being insane was something that always made me proud.
Does that make me insane?
I guess I just didn’t want to be the same
as all those people in the crowd.
I guess I just wanted my silence to be loud
and vanquish the seeds sown
by lying scheming manipulative powers that be
that write the script of you and me
...
#dark
#rain
#honesty
#rebellion
#dystopian
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14 Comments
Remember, Remember
Bonfire Night is an ironic thing
at 400 years after the event
where a Gunpowder Plot had killed no king
and sabotage became Guido's lament
as the people had made it very clear
that a disruption to the status quo
based on violence and subsequent fear
wasn't the most discerning way to go
to carry heretofore the common law;
be the ancient regimes hip, hip, hooray,
or establishments of indolent blah
countermanding even a sunny day...
since rare indeed is the revolution
that fairly treats the wealth distribution!
at 400 years after the event
where a Gunpowder Plot had killed no king
and sabotage became Guido's lament
as the people had made it very clear
that a disruption to the status quo
based on violence and subsequent fear
wasn't the most discerning way to go
to carry heretofore the common law;
be the ancient regimes hip, hip, hooray,
or establishments of indolent blah
countermanding even a sunny day...
since rare indeed is the revolution
that fairly treats the wealth distribution!
#HumanRights
#inequality
#politics
#rebellion
#war
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prodigal son
beneath the molten surface
where shadows reign
I slipped thru brick and brimstone
when the devil stepped away
no plans for rebellion
just mayhem and mischief
sweet and fleetin
his scepter caught my eye
I claimed it as my right
the succubi recognized me
eyes darkenin with memory
bodies archin in welcome
to my inevitable return
“the prodigal son” I announced myself
sprawled across his throne
legs spread wide
reclaimin familiar territory
demons bowed with practiced ease
whisperin...
where shadows reign
I slipped thru brick and brimstone
when the devil stepped away
no plans for rebellion
just mayhem and mischief
sweet and fleetin
his scepter caught my eye
I claimed it as my right
the succubi recognized me
eyes darkenin with memory
bodies archin in welcome
to my inevitable return
“the prodigal son” I announced myself
sprawled across his throne
legs spread wide
reclaimin familiar territory
demons bowed with practiced ease
whisperin...
#devil
#erotic
#hell #rebellion
#hell #rebellion
139 reads
10 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Rebellion by Top Critiquers