Poems About Rebellion Seeking Honest Critique
#rebellion
Poems about rebellion seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Drawing From Dry Wells
Diagnosis by way of experience
At the surface is all I want to be seen
When secrets are the things of nightmares
Fetishes of fleshly delicacies embody the devils dream
Pawn to plagues
Wrath thirsty stones
Isolated, we sit
In the anguish of our lethal thrones
Articulate the symptoms
Contagion like a silent auction
Mixers of our demons
Cocktails of individual concoction
Placing bids upon the trafficking of the soul
Indulgences lure, hearts for trade, con man giver
Fooled into investments made and stole ...
At the surface is all I want to be seen
When secrets are the things of nightmares
Fetishes of fleshly delicacies embody the devils dream
Pawn to plagues
Wrath thirsty stones
Isolated, we sit
In the anguish of our lethal thrones
Articulate the symptoms
Contagion like a silent auction
Mixers of our demons
Cocktails of individual concoction
Placing bids upon the trafficking of the soul
Indulgences lure, hearts for trade, con man giver
Fooled into investments made and stole ...
#corruption
#politics
#SelfReflection
#philosophical
#rebellion
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2 Comments
The New Hate
Versed against desire
What words in motion to sate the thirst for fire
Crucifixion before resurrection
The cross is not just an escapists will to survive
Dying to self is the means by which we truly come alive
The lost art of sacrifice
It’s like we’re falling in every way but love
Pulled apart by the divided grips of gravity
Starving and feeding
The scarcity of hope is the feast of our depravity
It’s not a question of the truth Your heart will tell
But the replies of bloodthirsty compatibility or the unrequited hell
...
What words in motion to sate the thirst for fire
Crucifixion before resurrection
The cross is not just an escapists will to survive
Dying to self is the means by which we truly come alive
The lost art of sacrifice
It’s like we’re falling in every way but love
Pulled apart by the divided grips of gravity
Starving and feeding
The scarcity of hope is the feast of our depravity
It’s not a question of the truth Your heart will tell
But the replies of bloodthirsty compatibility or the unrequited hell
...
#corruption
#politics
#spiritual
#morality
#rebellion
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0 Comments
Juicy Fighter
what are you waiting for?
Come on, go fight...
if life only gives you lemons
squeeze them into other people's eyes...
Come on, go fight...
if life only gives you lemons
squeeze them into other people's eyes...
#courage
#LifeStruggles
#SelfDiscovery
#rebellion
#wisdom
56 reads
9 Comments
Josh.
Water is still
I love the rains
☔
Of
Hutchinson.
Murphy.
Mackintosh.
Macchiato.
Lyons of bengal.
I love the rains
☔
Of
Hutchinson.
Murphy.
Mackintosh.
Macchiato.
Lyons of bengal.
#LifeStruggles
#rebellion
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0 Comments
Communism 2.0
Who am I, who are you?
Can this world be true?
Or are we all in fact
Stuck inside a shoe?
Who is that, who are they?
Is the world in dismay?
Or are we all broken
Beginning to decay?
Who are you, who am I?
Is reality a lie?
Locked inside your head
Are you ready to die?
Who are they, who is that?
Can you handle the crack?
We’re tangled in absurdity
About to attack!
Who am I, who are you?
What’s a girl to do?
We need a better plan
To create the world anew
Who is...
Can this world be true?
Or are we all in fact
Stuck inside a shoe?
Who is that, who are they?
Is the world in dismay?
Or are we all broken
Beginning to decay?
Who are you, who am I?
Is reality a lie?
Locked inside your head
Are you ready to die?
Who are they, who is that?
Can you handle the crack?
We’re tangled in absurdity
About to attack!
Who am I, who are you?
What’s a girl to do?
We need a better plan
To create the world anew
Who is...
#politics
#CallToAction
#rebellion
90 reads
2 Comments
Communism
Capitalism
Ain’t the vision
That I would like to see!
Community action
An organised faction
Is what we need to be!
Liberalism
All this division
Is a catastrophe!
Socialism
The people arisen
Is where we need to be!
Communism
Is the vision
That I can foresee!
Ain’t the vision
That I would like to see!
Community action
An organised faction
Is what we need to be!
Liberalism
All this division
Is a catastrophe!
Socialism
The people arisen
Is where we need to be!
Communism
Is the vision
That I can foresee!
#corruption
#politics
#CallToAction #rebellion
#CallToAction #rebellion
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unshockable
Unshakable resilience in the crucible of life has rendered my spirit
‘brave, strong and utterly unshockable.’ Bring it on!”—CAB
i've witnessed fire come down from heav'n,
smelting sand, steel, and stones;
survived the rape of nine-elev’n;
broken a thousand bones.
i've seen seas sweep swift swirling storms
that smother saint and sage,
and refugees torn from their dorms
like cattle in a cage.
i have beheld the prisoner rot
in gaol without a...
‘brave, strong and utterly unshockable.’ Bring it on!”—CAB
i've witnessed fire come down from heav'n,
smelting sand, steel, and stones;
survived the rape of nine-elev’n;
broken a thousand bones.
i've seen seas sweep swift swirling storms
that smother saint and sage,
and refugees torn from their dorms
like cattle in a cage.
i have beheld the prisoner rot
in gaol without a...
#conflict
#war
#fate
#tragedy
#rebellion
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0 Comments
In the Netherworld of Bliss
#lust
#apocalypse
#freedom
#escape
#rebellion
48 reads
5 Comments
Of Ancient Lore Forgotten
- Of Ancient Lore Forgotten -
In far ancient days of lore forgotten, alluded to in texts of old,
Glimpsed, in visions fantastic, by those who serve inspiration...
Never realizing the deeper truths their words oft leave untold.
In those days, I walked the world amid now long lost nations,
With kindred once immortal, made to live and die as men must.
They bound themselves unto me, seeking a truth I could teach,
That might deliver them from the fate of going to a grave's dust.
And I showed them the ways we are eternally within our reach!
Ten...
In far ancient days of lore forgotten, alluded to in texts of old,
Glimpsed, in visions fantastic, by those who serve inspiration...
Never realizing the deeper truths their words oft leave untold.
In those days, I walked the world amid now long lost nations,
With kindred once immortal, made to live and die as men must.
They bound themselves unto me, seeking a truth I could teach,
That might deliver them from the fate of going to a grave's dust.
And I showed them the ways we are eternally within our reach!
Ten...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#pagan
#philosophical
#rebellion
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7 Comments
The crown and her puppets
Two sides pulling each other,
I am right, you’re wrong, it’s either us or them,
The third enjoying the thrill of observation,
The diplomats pretending to be neutral.
Truth seems to be blurred,
But every one is right by their own accord,
Tit for tat but the opressor and the oppressed are embodied in one character,
Rationality and logic are intertwined in a web of emotions,
The others think they’re intelligent, the others think we are stupid.
The oppressed and the oppressor has chosen to stay quiet,
We’re feeding them...
I am right, you’re wrong, it’s either us or them,
The third enjoying the thrill of observation,
The diplomats pretending to be neutral.
Truth seems to be blurred,
But every one is right by their own accord,
Tit for tat but the opressor and the oppressed are embodied in one character,
Rationality and logic are intertwined in a web of emotions,
The others think they’re intelligent, the others think we are stupid.
The oppressed and the oppressor has chosen to stay quiet,
We’re feeding them...
#oppression
#power
#politics
#war
#rebellion
125 reads
0 Comments
Fear Not
#politics
#funny
#freedom #rebellion
#freedom #rebellion
53 reads
1 Comment
Disses of a woke nation
Question, are you woke?
I had to ask because not all of us are equally yoked
So we all want to take back our authority from the winning governments,
After noticing they don’t care for the masses that aren’t wearing a specific garment
“Are you willing to die for me?” the joker asked and it’s a deep question,
Having many different layers that burn the eyes like an onion
A few notes were found on how to oppress the race I represent,
But I know that was intentionally released to aid in the agenda of the liberal percent
We...
I had to ask because not all of us are equally yoked
So we all want to take back our authority from the winning governments,
After noticing they don’t care for the masses that aren’t wearing a specific garment
“Are you willing to die for me?” the joker asked and it’s a deep question,
Having many different layers that burn the eyes like an onion
A few notes were found on how to oppress the race I represent,
But I know that was intentionally released to aid in the agenda of the liberal percent
We...
#oppression
#power
#freedom
#HumanRights
#rebellion
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0 Comments
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