Nonfiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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nonfiction seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 11:05am
25th Mar 2024 11:05am
Benefits of being an Atheist
I know that believing in God is NOT necessary to be a good person, it is possible to be moral and have good values without believing in God.
I can embrace new scientific theories about human origins, without being saddled with the belief that a god created everything.
I’m free from church hierarchy telling me what I can and can’t do.
I can embrace a woman’s right to make choices when it comes to her own body.
I don’t have to give my money to a church, so that the pastor can afford his own personal jet, home, mistresses, children or any other...
I can embrace new scientific theories about human origins, without being saddled with the belief that a god created everything.
I’m free from church hierarchy telling me what I can and can’t do.
I can embrace a woman’s right to make choices when it comes to her own body.
I don’t have to give my money to a church, so that the pastor can afford his own personal jet, home, mistresses, children or any other...
#atheism
#TruthOfLife
#nonfiction
74 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Mar 2024 9:01pm
24th Mar 2024 9:01pm
The Importance of an Orgasm
#LifeGoals
#SelfWorth
#nonfiction #orgasm
#nonfiction #orgasm
79 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Mar 2024 12:03pm
24th Mar 2024 12:03pm
Possibly, Maybe part 2
How will it be done?
maybe a knife or a gun
once done, time to run
maybe a knife or a gun
once done, time to run
#murder
#haiku
#rhyming #nonfiction
#rhyming #nonfiction
76 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Mar 2024 12:02pm
24th Mar 2024 12:02pm
Possibly, Maybe
I may kill my wife
she causes me pain & strife
tells me I can't write
she causes me pain & strife
tells me I can't write
#haiku
#LifeAsAWriter
#nonfiction #rhyming
#nonfiction #rhyming
52 reads
11 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Mar 2024 00:58am
19th Mar 2024 00:58am
This Is What I Would Like To See Happening
I really do
wish they open the shopping
malls back up like the old days.
wish they open the shopping
malls back up like the old days.
#rebirth
#dialogue
#nostalgia
#nonfiction
#bittersweet
56 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
19th Mar 2024 00:55am
19th Mar 2024 00:55am
the argument
you can’t accuse me of living in the past, since it’s not an accusation but the truth is, I’ve lived most of my life in the past and only now in the present.
#nonfiction
43 reads
6 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
13th Mar 2024 4:32pm
13th Mar 2024 4:32pm
pretty pictures
I try to stay away from
the hearts and flowers
in my poems
because the hearts
would be crushed
and broken
and all the flowers
dried out and
dead
the hearts and flowers
in my poems
because the hearts
would be crushed
and broken
and all the flowers
dried out and
dead
#nonfiction
85 reads
4 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2024 7:12pm
2nd Mar 2024 7:12pm
Damaged Goods
her body language said it all
she wanted to stay..
and if truth be told...i wanted her to stay
but while sticking to the truth
i knew we were two strays
seeking some form of...redemption..
maybe that's not the best word
but it's all this shell of a man can spare in this moment
fresh of the break up with my daughter's mother
all i could do was drink party and drown my failures
in Seagram's Gin, loud music and new pussy..
fucking for the sake of forgetfulness..
life...
she wanted to stay..
and if truth be told...i wanted her to stay
but while sticking to the truth
i knew we were two strays
seeking some form of...redemption..
maybe that's not the best word
but it's all this shell of a man can spare in this moment
fresh of the break up with my daughter's mother
all i could do was drink party and drown my failures
in Seagram's Gin, loud music and new pussy..
fucking for the sake of forgetfulness..
life...
#regret
#breakup
#alcohol
#honesty
#nonfiction
282 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Feb 2024 10:21pm
21st Feb 2024 10:21pm
One-Up's
The majority of people are maggots
there here to make you soft
they try & kill you with small talk
bragging about nothing
death to all one uppers
a toxic personality that makes them feel superior
not my problem you have low self-esteem and are also insecure
your irritating me as I will never get this time back again
you like when you make people feel smaller
i won't be gently telling them their personality sucks & to stay away from me
instead, I'm going to tell them that I want to hear more of their bombastic stories
easiest way...
there here to make you soft
they try & kill you with small talk
bragging about nothing
death to all one uppers
a toxic personality that makes them feel superior
not my problem you have low self-esteem and are also insecure
your irritating me as I will never get this time back again
you like when you make people feel smaller
i won't be gently telling them their personality sucks & to stay away from me
instead, I'm going to tell them that I want to hear more of their bombastic stories
easiest way...
#anger
#motivational
#nonfiction
71 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Feb 2024 3:02pm
10th Feb 2024 3:02pm
More Than One Use For A Potato
I learned you could use
a potato to remove
a broken light bulb.
a potato to remove
a broken light bulb.
#home
#haiku
#dialogue
#learning
#nonfiction
66 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2024 11:30am
2nd Jan 2024 11:30am
Only Dogs Are Taught To Obey. If You Love Your Woman, You Must Respect Her Opinion.
Yes.
It is
true that when
I look at a
centerfold like the
ones in Playboy, I feel
the sudden urge to get it
on with that chick. But I also
agree with what Eddie Murphy said
in the film Coming to America.
It is
true that when
I look at a
centerfold like the
ones in Playboy, I feel
the sudden urge to get it
on with that chick. But I also
agree with what Eddie Murphy said
in the film Coming to America.
#beauty
#dialogue
#sensual
#morality
#nonfiction
140 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Dec 2023 6:00pm
17th Dec 2023 6:00pm
If I Have A Junk Drawer
I don't
know if I
have a
junk drawer. But if
I do, it would be
filled with a bunch of
vintage
comic books
I have.
know if I
have a
junk drawer. But if
I do, it would be
filled with a bunch of
vintage
comic books
I have.
#books
#dialogue
#art
#nostalgia
#nonfiction
88 reads
2 Comments
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