Poems About the Night Seeking Honest Critique
#night
Poems about the night seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Pale Evenings Glow
Words spoken over wine in candlelight
On a pale moonlit night
What could be better?
Such are the desires and pleasures of life
Heard in the evening crooner’s voice
Witnessed in the twilight
By the night owl’s steady gaze
Together in unison
As the stars blaze
Burning till the wax melts
And the wick flickers and fades
On a pale moonlit night
What could be better?
Such are the desires and pleasures of life
Heard in the evening crooner’s voice
Witnessed in the twilight
By the night owl’s steady gaze
Together in unison
As the stars blaze
Burning till the wax melts
And the wick flickers and fades
#love
#moon
#night #romantic
#night #romantic
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Nightcastle
The future is only as certain
As a cold winter night
And the pale moon on the horizon
Shining Upon the edge of time
Your only comfort awaits In desperation
Beneath starlight
While your solace
Awaits in the soft dreamy realms of delight
As a cold winter night
And the pale moon on the horizon
Shining Upon the edge of time
Your only comfort awaits In desperation
Beneath starlight
While your solace
Awaits in the soft dreamy realms of delight
#dreams
#night
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~04:14, the 14th (with 414 madnesses posted in du.), l o v e
eyes & ears bury & burn sleepless
from the overnight whirring bikes
in roaring ruthless silencers .. in
such nonstop criming sound sin
is it some formula racing or just
the racing hearts of the riding
Valentines .. whatever
its 04:14 .. it’s 14 the Valentine
Feb.. What more logic . Happy
rashly polluting these pure
cosmically auspicious hours
of Brahmamuhurta
this crazy owlish sleepless
me .. a pretty nocturnal specie
I...
from the overnight whirring bikes
in roaring ruthless silencers .. in
such nonstop criming sound sin
is it some formula racing or just
the racing hearts of the riding
Valentines .. whatever
its 04:14 .. it’s 14 the Valentine
Feb.. What more logic . Happy
rashly polluting these pure
cosmically auspicious hours
of Brahmamuhurta
this crazy owlish sleepless
me .. a pretty nocturnal specie
I...
#healing
#love
#night
#spiritual
#ValentinesDay
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Nighttime
The time of night!
When souls are bright.
There goes the sun in flight!
The dark blankets all and many affright!
When souls are bright.
There goes the sun in flight!
The dark blankets all and many affright!
#dark
#dreams
#night
#nightmares
#surreal
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Hush
Bring me the dawn
Though my longing wanes
Fading like a candle guttering in the void
This darkness is not of night
But of silence—vast, endless
A chasm where voices are swallowed
Where echoes are entombed
My road remains unwritten
A path unspooled into nothingness
Promises once spoken now ash on my tongue
Dreams once held now smoke in the abyss
A covenant sworn beneath celestial fire
To walk among the stars
Now broken, now spent
Cast to the gutter with the last ember of my cigarette
O hush of...
Though my longing wanes
Fading like a candle guttering in the void
This darkness is not of night
But of silence—vast, endless
A chasm where voices are swallowed
Where echoes are entombed
My road remains unwritten
A path unspooled into nothingness
Promises once spoken now ash on my tongue
Dreams once held now smoke in the abyss
A covenant sworn beneath celestial fire
To walk among the stars
Now broken, now spent
Cast to the gutter with the last ember of my cigarette
O hush of...
#night
#patience
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Haunt The Stars
Drifting. Drifting. Drifting
A cold silence deeper than the void
The aching wound at the center of my being
For you, I burn. For you, I hunger
Come unto me
My sweet lamentation
Come into my embrace
And surrender your flesh
That I may drink of marrow and spirit alike
I roam the blackened firmament
The sky of the dead
Where no prayers rise
Where no saints intercede
Await my arrival with arms open
For I am the hand that was stayed
The blade that was broken
The voice that fell silent at...
A cold silence deeper than the void
The aching wound at the center of my being
For you, I burn. For you, I hunger
Come unto me
My sweet lamentation
Come into my embrace
And surrender your flesh
That I may drink of marrow and spirit alike
I roam the blackened firmament
The sky of the dead
Where no prayers rise
Where no saints intercede
Await my arrival with arms open
For I am the hand that was stayed
The blade that was broken
The voice that fell silent at...
#dark
#death
#night #universe
#night #universe
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but you write
tedious is the night
you can’t sleep and it’s
been quite a while since you did,
but you write ..
you can’t sleep and it’s
been quite a while since you did,
but you write ..
#night
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ode to a dream
I had a dream.
Not of grandeur or poverty.
Power or flight.
Race nor riot.
A dream of waking.
endlessly waking.
Sometimes sitting up in bed…
Then just waking.
Am I still there?
I may never know.
Or soon be there.
When the alarm's blare ends.
Not of grandeur or poverty.
Power or flight.
Race nor riot.
A dream of waking.
endlessly waking.
Sometimes sitting up in bed…
Then just waking.
Am I still there?
I may never know.
Or soon be there.
When the alarm's blare ends.
#dreams
#frustration
#night #sleep
#night #sleep
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Winter Luminescence
Whisp of cold air
Flying flakes free
Ice upon my hair
Falling to my knees
Coming of twilight
Sitting in snow
Between day and night
Wait for stars to show
Shine without heat
Cold to the bone
Freezing my feet
For winter has shown
Though without dread
In the frozen glade
With naught but leaves dead
In bliss I wade
Flying flakes free
Ice upon my hair
Falling to my knees
Coming of twilight
Sitting in snow
Between day and night
Wait for stars to show
Shine without heat
Cold to the bone
Freezing my feet
For winter has shown
Though without dread
In the frozen glade
With naught but leaves dead
In bliss I wade
#dawn
#forest
#night
#snow
#winter
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Blossoming Sin Putrescent
Ravaging the soul
Temptation ascended
Between the pestle and bowl
Heaven now rended
The skeletons now dance
A chalice now sanguine
Devil eyes in a trance
Sacred shapes withered thin
Radiance of infernal shine
Sevenfold immolation rite
Usurped and inverse divine
Brilliance of perdition in the night
Temptation ascended
Between the pestle and bowl
Heaven now rended
The skeletons now dance
A chalice now sanguine
Devil eyes in a trance
Sacred shapes withered thin
Radiance of infernal shine
Sevenfold immolation rite
Usurped and inverse divine
Brilliance of perdition in the night
#curse
#dark
#evil
#night
#religion
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~of this elongating ever life… dotted in differential deltaic deaths
this young midnight’s chilling air
in a weirdly turning on groovy beat
mixing in your smoking touchy heat
-tastes a warm spice of musky mace
I crave for
a metallic blood flower rapturous
I bleed and bloom in a pleasantly~
pungent addictive blossom.. that
even this waiting nocturne animal
in your plunging deep purplish trysts..
pierces sharp unto this seductive
self digging hell in an unreturning
pathway spiral..
hitting red & black as sky~ high
cranial kicks..
this unbearably...
in a weirdly turning on groovy beat
mixing in your smoking touchy heat
-tastes a warm spice of musky mace
I crave for
a metallic blood flower rapturous
I bleed and bloom in a pleasantly~
pungent addictive blossom.. that
even this waiting nocturne animal
in your plunging deep purplish trysts..
pierces sharp unto this seductive
self digging hell in an unreturning
pathway spiral..
hitting red & black as sky~ high
cranial kicks..
this unbearably...
#death
#love
#night #sensual
#night #sensual
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Night Call
Pulled me into your lair
Cocktails for 2
Let my passion hold you tight
Surrender ?
Cocktails for 2
Let my passion hold you tight
Surrender ?
#art
#night
#seductive
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
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DU Poetry : Poems About the Night Seeking Honest Critique