Poems About Murder Seeking Honest Critique
#murder
Northern_Soul
-Missy-
-Missy-
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 9:45am
18th Apr 2024 9:45am
Hymn to Witches
Who did Margaret Read see
in her last throes of agony
what must it have been like
to suffer the flames of this world
to fear the fires of the next
the anguish of it,
the terror of such.
As women, it can often feel
as if our choices lie between
shitty and shittier
as if that intuition burning
our hearts and our guts and our blood
is the very thing turning our skin
to ash.
Some nights, my mind finds them
charred in a market square
consumed by ignorant fires
my bones are...
in her last throes of agony
what must it have been like
to suffer the flames of this world
to fear the fires of the next
the anguish of it,
the terror of such.
As women, it can often feel
as if our choices lie between
shitty and shittier
as if that intuition burning
our hearts and our guts and our blood
is the very thing turning our skin
to ash.
Some nights, my mind finds them
charred in a market square
consumed by ignorant fires
my bones are...
#Britain
#murder
#pagan
#witches
#women
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LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 4:28pm
16th Apr 2024 4:28pm
Sniper Files #3 The Kill
As the moon hung low in the night sky, casting shadows across the deserted alley, I watched them from the rooftop opposite the dimly lit apartment building. The general's daughter, Olena, stood on the balcony, her silhouette joined by that of her lover, Andrei. They seemed lost in each other, unaware of the danger lurking in the darkness below.
I adjusted the scope on my rifle, my breath steady despite the adrenaline coursing through my veins. This was the moment I had trained for, the mission I had been assigned by my superiors. But as I stared through the crosshairs, doubt...
I adjusted the scope on my rifle, my breath steady despite the adrenaline coursing through my veins. This was the moment I had trained for, the mission I had been assigned by my superiors. But as I stared through the crosshairs, doubt...
#sex
#murder
#war #responsibility
#war #responsibility
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 10:47am
15th Apr 2024 10:47am
A fork, a knife and a spoon
My wife only wants me to spoon her when she's hammered
Any other time, she don't want me near
That's ok
I actually despise her and spooning
One night she came home incredibly drunk
She was all over the place
Stumbling, making no sense
Fell backwards into my cabinet
Breaking some heirloom figurines I had from my family
No apology, nothing
My blood was beginning to boil
I yelled at her, "GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY FACE!!!"
I was tired, so I went to bed
Few moments later she came into bed
She was frisky and...
Any other time, she don't want me near
That's ok
I actually despise her and spooning
One night she came home incredibly drunk
She was all over the place
Stumbling, making no sense
Fell backwards into my cabinet
Breaking some heirloom figurines I had from my family
No apology, nothing
My blood was beginning to boil
I yelled at her, "GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY FACE!!!"
I was tired, so I went to bed
Few moments later she came into bed
She was frisky and...
#wife
#murder
#food
#ShortStory
#horror
60 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 8:26pm
11th Apr 2024 8:26pm
The Invited Guest
One moonlit night I was in my convertible driving through the city of Las Vegas, NV
After losing a lot of cash and getting into a fight with my wife
I went to see a silent film for mature audiences only
As I was leaving the city limits, heading back home in California
I saw a hitchhiker waving me down
He looked mousey, a little disheveled but I felt bad for him
He told me his name was Sid
I asked him where he was headed
He said, “Anywhere you’re going, I’m fine with.”
I thought that was odd
He told me that he was coming from a desert grave...
After losing a lot of cash and getting into a fight with my wife
I went to see a silent film for mature audiences only
As I was leaving the city limits, heading back home in California
I saw a hitchhiker waving me down
He looked mousey, a little disheveled but I felt bad for him
He told me his name was Sid
I asked him where he was headed
He said, “Anywhere you’re going, I’m fine with.”
I thought that was odd
He told me that he was coming from a desert grave...
#courage
#murder
#cars
#ShortStory
#mystery
61 reads
6 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 5:56pm
7th Apr 2024 5:56pm
Murderers
I do not expect murders to disagree with Israel massacring innocent Palestinians.
The wicked, bloodthirsty American military would do the same thing.
Speaking as a mixed Jew, I do not support the evil Israeli foreign policy,
And neither do I encourage genocide, racism, injustice, and oppression.
Aggression and terrorism are wrong, but we need to identify the real terrorists.
People who face perpetual oppression will rise up against the oppressors.
The wicked, bloodthirsty American military would do the same thing.
Speaking as a mixed Jew, I do not support the evil Israeli foreign policy,
And neither do I encourage genocide, racism, injustice, and oppression.
Aggression and terrorism are wrong, but we need to identify the real terrorists.
People who face perpetual oppression will rise up against the oppressors.
#murder
#oppression
#war
#racism
#military
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 11:02pm
6th Apr 2024 11:02pm
Some needed justice
I hear a pig's radio outside my window
It's 2:30 am
I look out the window
I see a pig screaming in some youths face
I decide to crack the window open and I hear...,
"YOUR HAMMERED, TANKED, WASTED, BLASTED, SKUNKED, FRIED, LOADED, SLOSHED, WRECKED, TOASTED AND PIE-EYED!"
"I HAVE COMPLAINTS OF YOU DEFACING PROPERTY AND DISORDERLY CONDUCT!!"
"WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF??!"
I couldn't hear the boy, he's talking to low
He couldn't be no more then 15
Pig says, "WHAT IT WASN'T YOU?!",...
It's 2:30 am
I look out the window
I see a pig screaming in some youths face
I decide to crack the window open and I hear...,
"YOUR HAMMERED, TANKED, WASTED, BLASTED, SKUNKED, FRIED, LOADED, SLOSHED, WRECKED, TOASTED AND PIE-EYED!"
"I HAVE COMPLAINTS OF YOU DEFACING PROPERTY AND DISORDERLY CONDUCT!!"
"WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF??!"
I couldn't hear the boy, he's talking to low
He couldn't be no more then 15
Pig says, "WHAT IT WASN'T YOU?!",...
#lies
#corruption
#murder
#bullying
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 8:22pm
5th Apr 2024 8:22pm
My Most Failed Possession
Drunk skunk, wish you weren't the one
Bite my woman's sugarplum
This worthless piggy never made it home
Impulsive, compulsive
Hope you know your so repulsive
Pommel you like the dog you are
Oh honey I can kill you if I want
Kill you with my own two hands
Oh sugar I'm so happy I could kill you
Kill you like a stranger on my land
Because you, You are worthless like an animal
Labeled "rejected" on your back
A presence so offensive, A presence so unreal
So many ways to skin a cat
Everything...
Bite my woman's sugarplum
This worthless piggy never made it home
Impulsive, compulsive
Hope you know your so repulsive
Pommel you like the dog you are
Oh honey I can kill you if I want
Kill you with my own two hands
Oh sugar I'm so happy I could kill you
Kill you like a stranger on my land
Because you, You are worthless like an animal
Labeled "rejected" on your back
A presence so offensive, A presence so unreal
So many ways to skin a cat
Everything...
#kindness
#murder
#evil
#rhyming
#metaphor
62 reads
4 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 12:20pm
4th Apr 2024 12:20pm
MYSTERY UNDER ROCKS DEEP ERRIE ROADS
Too many deaths
It's hard now the count
It keeps growing more than sex
It's a rebel without a cause no doubt
The sad way it is, found even lost skeletons
Murders more than before, what God think's of it now?
It's hard now the count
It keeps growing more than sex
It's a rebel without a cause no doubt
The sad way it is, found even lost skeletons
Murders more than before, what God think's of it now?
#dark
#murder
#death
#TruthOfLife
#suffering
68 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 00:00am
2nd Apr 2024 00:00am
Confession
#wife
#murder
#confessional
68 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 1:39pm
1st Apr 2024 1:39pm
Just a heads up..
I may murder my wife today.
#wife
#murder
108 reads
24 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
29th Mar 2024 4:51pm
29th Mar 2024 4:51pm
It Was Time (part 2)
Tany's back continued to glow as tears crept into my eyes. What was happening? Was I getting soft?
My finger still pressed against the trigger.
Tanya's attention stayed with the water. She said something to Michael. He nodded toward her and then looked away, still standing silently.
I thought of the love they’d made over the years. I replayed their love making in my mind from earlier that evening but was astonished when the vision turned to a young girl experiencing love for what I knew must have been her first time. She was smooth-skinned with a...
My finger still pressed against the trigger.
Tanya's attention stayed with the water. She said something to Michael. He nodded toward her and then looked away, still standing silently.
I thought of the love they’d made over the years. I replayed their love making in my mind from earlier that evening but was astonished when the vision turned to a young girl experiencing love for what I knew must have been her first time. She was smooth-skinned with a...
#love
#murder
#death
87 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Mar 2024 11:03am
28th Mar 2024 11:03am
If at first you don't succeed, hide in the garden shed
A man from America convinced himself that he was dying of a transmissible disease and that he had already infected his wife & children. To spare himself and his family this terrible fate, he decided they should all die.
In the middle of his homemade crime spree, he called the police to notify them of the murder suicide in progress. He murdered each family member with a fatal gunshot to the head.
While waiting for the cops to arrive, he stabbed himself repeatedly, but found that he wasn't dying quickly enough. He then decided to hit himself over the head with a...
In the middle of his homemade crime spree, he called the police to notify them of the murder suicide in progress. He murdered each family member with a fatal gunshot to the head.
While waiting for the cops to arrive, he stabbed himself repeatedly, but found that he wasn't dying quickly enough. He then decided to hit himself over the head with a...
#family
#murder
#suicide
#fiction
#ignorance
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