Poems About Motherhood Seeking Honest Critique
#motherhood
Poems about motherhood seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Beauty As I Know You Will Be
Where I search
You will find
Where I die
Life unto mine
Forgotten not
Line of my life
Feel man's plight
Devour their strife
My daughter
Or son
Take from me
For youth
Forgoes decay
In your
Beauty.
You will find
Where I die
Life unto mine
Forgotten not
Line of my life
Feel man's plight
Devour their strife
My daughter
Or son
Take from me
For youth
Forgoes decay
In your
Beauty.
#children
#motherhood
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BABY BUMP
#motherhood
#marriage
#sex #fatherhood
#sex #fatherhood
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Smoke
Memory floats back like smoke
and I’m back in a pie-and-mash shop with mum;
it’s one of my few happy memories of her,
uncomplicated by the past and old resentments.
It’s a bright summer’s day in a seaside town
and we’ve walked three miles to here,
to be served from warming trays
by cockney ladies in tabards.
Because the smoking ban’s not yet enforced
my mother smokes as she sits beside me,
in memory like a clay carving
with pendulous breasts and potbelly.
I savour eel sauce across two stodgy pies
and mash as thick as...
and I’m back in a pie-and-mash shop with mum;
it’s one of my few happy memories of her,
uncomplicated by the past and old resentments.
It’s a bright summer’s day in a seaside town
and we’ve walked three miles to here,
to be served from warming trays
by cockney ladies in tabards.
Because the smoking ban’s not yet enforced
my mother smokes as she sits beside me,
in memory like a clay carving
with pendulous breasts and potbelly.
I savour eel sauce across two stodgy pies
and mash as thick as...
#motherhood
#childhood
#food #memories
#food #memories
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Spider Babies
It’s been 5 months since
We’ve spoken
And I’ve been stirring it up,
It’s all in my head
I’ve tried to forget
A conversation with my husband;
Me: I don’t want spiders
in my room,
Should we do something?
Husband: no, when they hatch
They’ll all blow away
That spider out my window
She’s got babies
A tiny cocoon;
Like how I call my robe
When I see my bebe’s
Morning face,
My cocoon’s only for my
Littlest ones
I want them to remember
These silken warmseys threads
It’s...
We’ve spoken
And I’ve been stirring it up,
It’s all in my head
I’ve tried to forget
A conversation with my husband;
Me: I don’t want spiders
in my room,
Should we do something?
Husband: no, when they hatch
They’ll all blow away
That spider out my window
She’s got babies
A tiny cocoon;
Like how I call my robe
When I see my bebe’s
Morning face,
My cocoon’s only for my
Littlest ones
I want them to remember
These silken warmseys threads
It’s...
#parent
#motherhood
#responsibility
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Empty.
when i’m busy pouring life into everyone
who’s pouring back into me?
who’s filling me back up?
who’s making me whole?
who gives a fuck?
about me?
me
the one person i’ve turned my back on..
i give
give
give
give
you take
he takes
she takes
they take
that’s what life is right?
give and take?
for fuck’s sake
can i get a break?
can i get back to me?
a happy me
a healed me
not a fake smile or laugh
the real me
a me when i look in the mirror
and know exactly who...
who’s pouring back into me?
who’s filling me back up?
who’s making me whole?
who gives a fuck?
about me?
me
the one person i’ve turned my back on..
i give
give
give
give
you take
he takes
she takes
they take
that’s what life is right?
give and take?
for fuck’s sake
can i get a break?
can i get back to me?
a happy me
a healed me
not a fake smile or laugh
the real me
a me when i look in the mirror
and know exactly who...
#wife
#motherhood
#LifeStruggles #emptiness
#LifeStruggles #emptiness
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Having His Child
When my eyes came to rest on his firming heat
I knew my lips would follow.
His manhood hung confidently while gaining girth,
and I imagined the pleasures he must have shared.
When I knelt and tasted the saltiness of his wife's tears,
I knew I would have his child.
I knew my lips would follow.
His manhood hung confidently while gaining girth,
and I imagined the pleasures he must have shared.
When I knelt and tasted the saltiness of his wife's tears,
I knew I would have his child.
#motherhood
#marriage
#sex #betrayal
#sex #betrayal
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The tradegy.
I have no man to love me.
#motherhood
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Sick.
My little doll
Is sick.
When the
Night comes before sun .
Is sick.
When the
Night comes before sun .
#motherhood
#responsibility
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City lights.
I Will die through you
And With you on a pyre.
Story of Radha Krishna and Sita.
And With you on a pyre.
Story of Radha Krishna and Sita.
#motherhood
#marriage
#responsibility #pregnancy
#responsibility #pregnancy
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My Oracle Sacred Rites Of The Placenta (Part I of Part II)
Unto life that has been given unto the womb, a sacred connection between the divine, intermission of growth and development from embryo to a fetus, to the deliverance of man child or woman child into the enlightenment from the mythical of passage from the Heavens to Earth, in exile from the darkness unto the light of Eve’s disobedience manifested by life and death.
I will ask level-minded intellects a question, what are the gifts we get from the universe, when we are without guidance, blind eyes as looking through the world with the innocent of a childlike’s perceptions.
...
I will ask level-minded intellects a question, what are the gifts we get from the universe, when we are without guidance, blind eyes as looking through the world with the innocent of a childlike’s perceptions.
...
#birth
#motherhood
#feminism #philosophical
#feminism #philosophical
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The Sun Has Returned
The sun has returned
I welcome its light and warmth
My heart melts at the life that came from me, and invigorates me
My house is now a home again
A part of my soul has been extended into other beings of light
Is… is this a dream?
I never thought I’d feel so… complete
Blissful, content, alive…
The sun has returned, and I’m eager to bask in its light.
I welcome its light and warmth
My heart melts at the life that came from me, and invigorates me
My house is now a home again
A part of my soul has been extended into other beings of light
Is… is this a dream?
I never thought I’d feel so… complete
Blissful, content, alive…
The sun has returned, and I’m eager to bask in its light.
#happiness
#love
#children
#motherhood
#family
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depth of love
soulmates
are a match
made in heaven
~
then we learn
to love
.
children
are the love
made in heaven
~
and we try to
comprehend
the depth
of it
are a match
made in heaven
~
then we learn
to love
.
children
are the love
made in heaven
~
and we try to
comprehend
the depth
of it
#love
#children
#parent
#motherhood
#fatherhood
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DU Poetry : Poems About Motherhood Seeking Honest Critique