Poems About the Moon by Top Critiquers
#moon
Poems about the moon by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
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I've always opened my ocean for you
for esoteric exploration
soothed your aches in my waters
while undercurrents get carried away in
waves of my devotion rolling over your structure
bent in limbo...stretching limbs
spread myself for your keen penetration
nothing held back
accepting focused progression
sweaty aggression
fully embracing my place in your universe
engraved within the enclave of us
grateful for what I'm given
taken in faith to our NetherRealm
and yet here we are ...
for esoteric exploration
soothed your aches in my waters
while undercurrents get carried away in
waves of my devotion rolling over your structure
bent in limbo...stretching limbs
spread myself for your keen penetration
nothing held back
accepting focused progression
sweaty aggression
fully embracing my place in your universe
engraved within the enclave of us
grateful for what I'm given
taken in faith to our NetherRealm
and yet here we are ...
#love
#moon
#water
247 reads
10 Comments
Are Your Ready My Brothen (The Eighth Wonder Of Enlightment)
This is your time to rise above the clouds and touch the energy of Heaven’s divine
According to the laws of your gravity, nothing last forever, you will one day see in the particles of your sands of time
Rebirth to ascend higher where the nakedness of the flesh, not the original sin
It is the reversal of fortunes from the Garden of Eden, you will be returned as your soul is let in
No fallacies, mistakes
In the pilgrimage of evolution everyone is given their gift of human experience during birth
Your DNA, the mirror of your universal worth ...
According to the laws of your gravity, nothing last forever, you will one day see in the particles of your sands of time
Rebirth to ascend higher where the nakedness of the flesh, not the original sin
It is the reversal of fortunes from the Garden of Eden, you will be returned as your soul is let in
No fallacies, mistakes
In the pilgrimage of evolution everyone is given their gift of human experience during birth
Your DNA, the mirror of your universal worth ...
#sun
#moon
#water
#angels
#spiritual
224 reads
2 Comments
Honeycomb Hideout
she wore poetry with no panties as
her verbiage dripped ambrosial.....ephemeral
hinting at her scented garden...an invitation of sorts
to come and tickle her fancy
bold and demur
a daring woman indeed
she dripped again....eclectic...elegant
in holographic ink stains
gave me an esoteric strip show...facetious in falsetto
while I moon-gazed at the phases of her Luna
igniting a particular buzz...
got me wanting to finger-part her
lotus's fuzziness..spread enriched...
her verbiage dripped ambrosial.....ephemeral
hinting at her scented garden...an invitation of sorts
to come and tickle her fancy
bold and demur
a daring woman indeed
she dripped again....eclectic...elegant
in holographic ink stains
gave me an esoteric strip show...facetious in falsetto
while I moon-gazed at the phases of her Luna
igniting a particular buzz...
got me wanting to finger-part her
lotus's fuzziness..spread enriched...
#sex
#moon
#nature
#lover
#bees
281 reads
7 Comments
k-
you are a moonlit tear
trickling down cheek
the love in your pen
is felt by many
bouncing moonbeams
through the ether
you send us
wise words
and a kind soul
my heart is with you
dear friend
💙
trickling down cheek
the love in your pen
is felt by many
bouncing moonbeams
through the ether
you send us
wise words
and a kind soul
my heart is with you
dear friend
💙
#kindness
#friendship
#moon
#MyInspiration
#gratitude
298 reads
10 Comments
Besotted
Besotted .The word alone conjures a deep, expensive Cabernet, one that surrenders your shame and drips warm syrupy liquid into your cleavage. So seductive is it to be besotted that soon you are pouring wine over your head, requiring full immersion, guzzling this nectar of the gods until you drown. Drowning in Cabernet is a capitulation to exquisitely perfect men; the long-standing denizens of your tortured imagination.
Don't drown. Swim. Swim with him, this real man, the one who lives here, not in your nebulous realms. Swim with his imperfections, his bald spot, his stubborn,...
Don't drown. Swim. Swim with him, this real man, the one who lives here, not in your nebulous realms. Swim with his imperfections, his bald spot, his stubborn,...
#happiness
#love
#moon
#night
#water
304 reads
8 Comments
Perspective
May 15th 11:25pm EST]
... In the grand scheme of things,
we are but a moment....
make haste,
dear soul—
make haste.
... In the grand scheme of things,
we are but a moment....
make haste,
dear soul—
make haste.
#motivational
#universe
#moon
#spiritual
#philosophical
532 reads
44 Comments
Moon dance
#erotic
#dreams
#moon #dance
#moon #dance
399 reads
4 Comments
I Worship The Night Sky
And nothing more
Except for you
Full moon
Half moon
It's never really
Mattered to me.
What does count
Is the moon shines
For you and I
The stars dance
Up in the sky
Bowing below
A moon washed sky
I wonder if
You're thinking of me
And missing me tonight
Except for you
Full moon
Half moon
It's never really
Mattered to me.
What does count
Is the moon shines
For you and I
The stars dance
Up in the sky
Bowing below
A moon washed sky
I wonder if
You're thinking of me
And missing me tonight
#dreams
#moon
#night
215 reads
8 Comments
Moon love
Dark mind,
bright thoughts
for distant muses:
humble egotists
dirty old artists
musical empaths
benevolent firestorms
warrior poets
Love bouncing off full moon..
Can you feel it?
bright thoughts
for distant muses:
humble egotists
dirty old artists
musical empaths
benevolent firestorms
warrior poets
Love bouncing off full moon..
Can you feel it?
#loneliness
#friendship
#moon
649 reads
11 Comments
Two Werewolves. Loving causes wild pain.
You asked me not to leave you alone,
And looked at the full moon with angry eyes.
I was just silent - I didn’t know what to say.
We shouldn't be together, I just knew that.
I repeated again that we can not be together,
Explained many times that we are different.
But you didn't want to understand what I meant.
I boldly cut at the root of all my dreams ...
You stood under the moon, turning away from me,
And lovingly said something through my tears.
I will never forget that moment of destruction,
That moment of our silent...
And looked at the full moon with angry eyes.
I was just silent - I didn’t know what to say.
We shouldn't be together, I just knew that.
I repeated again that we can not be together,
Explained many times that we are different.
But you didn't want to understand what I meant.
I boldly cut at the root of all my dreams ...
You stood under the moon, turning away from me,
And lovingly said something through my tears.
I will never forget that moment of destruction,
That moment of our silent...
#love
#moon
#Halloween
#suffering
#werewolves
664 reads
75 Comments
Mother of Bones
There it is
The moon
Up high
Suspended
For what seems like years
Before it goes down
Being swallowed
Like medication
So many moon pills
The same color of skeletons
I’ve held in the
Palm of my hand
Miniature in comparison
Resembling the river stones
Embedded in my freshwater veins
The perfect remedy
To help me sleep
And continue to spin
Towards the next day
Towards the sun
My blazing vitamin
Who I absorb daily
Warming all the
Variety of bones
I’ve been...
The moon
Up high
Suspended
For what seems like years
Before it goes down
Being swallowed
Like medication
So many moon pills
The same color of skeletons
I’ve held in the
Palm of my hand
Miniature in comparison
Resembling the river stones
Embedded in my freshwater veins
The perfect remedy
To help me sleep
And continue to spin
Towards the next day
Towards the sun
My blazing vitamin
Who I absorb daily
Warming all the
Variety of bones
I’ve been...
#sun
#moon
#humankind #apocalypse
#humankind #apocalypse
283 reads
23 Comments
Haiku #15
The full moon shines
Reflects in the calm water
Crows are silent
Reflects in the calm water
Crows are silent
#birds
#moon
#night
#water
#nature
48 reads
0 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About the Moon by Top Critiquers