Poems About Monsters Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about monsters seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Breech Presentation
sometimes I think I came into the world
of a reverse birth in the middle of the desert
and they never gave me the slap to breathe...
I think my panic disorder
may be directly linked
to my unusual way of leaving the womb.
to my unorthodox way of entering the world.
my memory of that moment is very poor
no smell, no taste...
and a diffused light at the end of the tunnel.
I believe that my poetry was born,
just like me, from this birth panic
from that dry and hard moment of
turning liquid into solid and breathing....
of a reverse birth in the middle of the desert
and they never gave me the slap to breathe...
I think my panic disorder
may be directly linked
to my unusual way of leaving the womb.
to my unorthodox way of entering the world.
my memory of that moment is very poor
no smell, no taste...
and a diffused light at the end of the tunnel.
I believe that my poetry was born,
just like me, from this birth panic
from that dry and hard moment of
turning liquid into solid and breathing....
#mother
#mirror
#monsters
#myself
#mystery
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2 Comments
Tinker Belle on Wheels
It's a shrinky-dink matter of ins-
tincts that bats its wrinkly winks at
a phat drink of roller-rink stink & pink.
He has no inkling of Brink's direct-link
to the clink when he sinks-in, slinks his
"slinky winky" into her tattered mink skin,
innocently inks some DNA (allegedly) then,
skinks away in a blink. It's his rat-fink, drinky
brain all outta sync when he plinks that kinky
trinket out at the precinct. That's just a baad
coinkydink. At best, deliṅquent hijinks when:
Tinker Belle, knowing all well, sprinkles her ...
tincts that bats its wrinkly winks at
a phat drink of roller-rink stink & pink.
He has no inkling of Brink's direct-link
to the clink when he sinks-in, slinks his
"slinky winky" into her tattered mink skin,
innocently inks some DNA (allegedly) then,
skinks away in a blink. It's his rat-fink, drinky
brain all outta sync when he plinks that kinky
trinket out at the precinct. That's just a baad
coinkydink. At best, deliṅquent hijinks when:
Tinker Belle, knowing all well, sprinkles her ...
#rainbow
#monsters
#fairies
#unicorns
#zombies
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S.S. Worship
Kleptomanic:
pussy👜 in a panic;
she hijacked my dick
like it's grandtheft Titanic
heading iceberg... Lettuce-
bẹgin in the mouth & finish
South of the Atlantic, ex-
ploding volcanic🌋6-6-6!
Cock-rrring, you heard???
I'm dick-dialin' drunk, all
hung up in you frantic☎️
bottom top-shelf on tap,
and driving eṛratịc;🚢🥴
😈S.S. Warship Satanic!
...Helvetic-poking holes
like a fully-autømatỉk 🔫
MPX on sabbatical- in ur
Burmuda...
pussy👜 in a panic;
she hijacked my dick
like it's grandtheft Titanic
heading iceberg... Lettuce-
bẹgin in the mouth & finish
South of the Atlantic, ex-
ploding volcanic🌋6-6-6!
Cock-rrring, you heard???
I'm dick-dialin' drunk, all
hung up in you frantic☎️
bottom top-shelf on tap,
and driving eṛratịc;🚢🥴
😈S.S. Warship Satanic!
...Helvetic-poking holes
like a fully-autømatỉk 🔫
MPX on sabbatical- in ur
Burmuda...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
267 reads
5 Comments
A sonnet to The Snotty Green Worm
Around the web corner there's a worm
A snotty gummy freak, that looks infirm
Wide gazing long at me, an alien germ
On his face i can see all the worlds' scum
He is so so ugly, a toothless mouth
With an upper nasty lip that sticks forth
Seems like a missing link of old species
Dinosaur's back, but sticky and leechy
What God can create is such freaky thing !!!
It looks like every thing, but its nothing
I...
A snotty gummy freak, that looks infirm
Wide gazing long at me, an alien germ
On his face i can see all the worlds' scum
He is so so ugly, a toothless mouth
With an upper nasty lip that sticks forth
Seems like a missing link of old species
Dinosaur's back, but sticky and leechy
What God can create is such freaky thing !!!
It looks like every thing, but its nothing
I...
#monsters
#aliens
#zombies
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1 Comment
We Bought A Haunted Nursing Home In Iowa
PUBLIC NOTICE:
Cait and I finally bought that haunted house in Waterloo, Iowa (with 200+ murders/deaths) formerly known as The Bonorden Nursing Home;
located at: 1020 West Third Street... 50701.
This house is in a state of suspended decay, fleshed-out as a paranormal escape-room bed & breakfast. We're open to visitors.
We've got cursed objects, horcruxes a plenty, death mirrors galore, dolls with attachments, dybbuk boxes, occult paraphernalia, torture tubs, tainted materials, human remains; stained: books, movies, apparel, furniture, etc!
...
Cait and I finally bought that haunted house in Waterloo, Iowa (with 200+ murders/deaths) formerly known as The Bonorden Nursing Home;
located at: 1020 West Third Street... 50701.
This house is in a state of suspended decay, fleshed-out as a paranormal escape-room bed & breakfast. We're open to visitors.
We've got cursed objects, horcruxes a plenty, death mirrors galore, dolls with attachments, dybbuk boxes, occult paraphernalia, torture tubs, tainted materials, human remains; stained: books, movies, apparel, furniture, etc!
...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
277 reads
6 Comments
Moroi
Conceived in darkness, a curse from birth
The power to murder, but easily killed
A river of blood draining the street
Until the whitest eye burns in the red
The power to murder, but easily killed
A river of blood draining the street
Until the whitest eye burns in the red
#dark
#death
#monsters #vampires
#monsters #vampires
210 reads
1 Comment
SLEEPEATER
I awaken with a rumble
Stirred by a grumble
Blinking eyes in the thunder
No escape
From the pulling under
Blinded
By the hunger
Feasting
On the numbers
The time it takes
My sleep
Like a hunter
Where does my sleep go
When it rushes from my side
Why does it hide away
In fight or flight
When I get lost in the fray
And can no longer see the way
I fall from my sleep like a boulder
Jostled loose by the shoulder
Gasping breaths, smoky smolder
No way but down
Gravity, the only...
Stirred by a grumble
Blinking eyes in the thunder
No escape
From the pulling under
Blinded
By the hunger
Feasting
On the numbers
The time it takes
My sleep
Like a hunter
Where does my sleep go
When it rushes from my side
Why does it hide away
In fight or flight
When I get lost in the fray
And can no longer see the way
I fall from my sleep like a boulder
Jostled loose by the shoulder
Gasping breaths, smoky smolder
No way but down
Gravity, the only...
#sadness
#secrets
#monsters
#FeelingTrapped
#fear
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The Loup
#fire
#monsters
#werewolves
114 reads
0 Comments
A LITTLE NIGHTMARE
IT'S ONLY A LITTLE NIGHTMARE.....
WATCH THEM STARE....
IT'S ONLY A LITTLE NIGHTMARE
IN A PLACE OF NOWHERE....
SEARCHING,
WALKING,
RUNNING.....
Huhhh uhhhhhh....
Beware Georgie the fatties are coming
Time is brutal and now you're hungry
What will you eat
Live Meat makes a great treat...
IT'S ONLY A LITTLE NIGHTMARE.....
WATCH THEM STARE
IT'S ONLY A LITTLE NIGHTMARE
IN A PLACE OF NOWHERE...
WATCH THEM STARE....
IT'S ONLY A LITTLE NIGHTMARE
IN A PLACE OF NOWHERE....
SEARCHING,
WALKING,
RUNNING.....
Huhhh uhhhhhh....
Beware Georgie the fatties are coming
Time is brutal and now you're hungry
What will you eat
Live Meat makes a great treat...
IT'S ONLY A LITTLE NIGHTMARE.....
WATCH THEM STARE
IT'S ONLY A LITTLE NIGHTMARE
IN A PLACE OF NOWHERE...
#monsters
588 reads
16 Comments
Vampire Vortex Dream
Separated from the world of the living...Eternity is your life long curse of breathing among the living...Your carvings, lusting, for the human BLOOD. Bon appetit is the desire of hunt of first fresh kill. Your needle piercing fangs of teeth...draining the blood right out of his body, the light right out of his eyes. Hellion of Hell...A Vampire Vortex...A Sly Seduction of Sex...A whole new meaning & definition in the morale contex. These victims of ignorance, couldn't fathom or measure the macbrea evening of unknown horrors in the primitive, darken night. Bats in flight, high pitch...
#monsters
#vampires
#ghosts
282 reads
6 Comments
Flesh Prison
God knows that if we'd ever meet Id break their teeth
So they play these jokes with my body and mind
Blood attacking itself, pain meds not working
Axe that though it's all my meds not working properly
Nails that split like these fucked up lips
Both only happy when I bite them off
Violence in these veins literally and spiritually
Busted doll vibes with these messed up joints
God loves to see me happy in the pain
It's mild, continuous torture at best
And sadistic fuckery at it's basic worst
Yes, let's bless and curse me in one breathe ...
So they play these jokes with my body and mind
Blood attacking itself, pain meds not working
Axe that though it's all my meds not working properly
Nails that split like these fucked up lips
Both only happy when I bite them off
Violence in these veins literally and spiritually
Busted doll vibes with these messed up joints
God loves to see me happy in the pain
It's mild, continuous torture at best
And sadistic fuckery at it's basic worst
Yes, let's bless and curse me in one breathe ...
#God
#spiritual
#monsters
#luck
#curse
192 reads
4 Comments
Aquamarine Kingdom!!
Shackled and in chains ⛓!!
Underwater with restraints!!
Like, lost spirits and deities, the fallen one's who remain trapped under the Euphrate's!!
A river of sin, since the beginning of this marine kingdom, bound and seldomly found, free to Rome the Abyss!!
With all the sharks and all the creatures out of the depths of darkness!!
Of this deep blue sea, when washed ashore with all it's vapors and mist, magically it appears!!
This aquamarine kingdom, out the blue, like 👍 💙 a mystical myth!!
...
Underwater with restraints!!
Like, lost spirits and deities, the fallen one's who remain trapped under the Euphrate's!!
A river of sin, since the beginning of this marine kingdom, bound and seldomly found, free to Rome the Abyss!!
With all the sharks and all the creatures out of the depths of darkness!!
Of this deep blue sea, when washed ashore with all it's vapors and mist, magically it appears!!
This aquamarine kingdom, out the blue, like 👍 💙 a mystical myth!!
...
#monsters
#dragons
#ghosts
#aliens
#mermaids
372 reads
11 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Monsters Seeking Honest Critique