Poems About Monsters Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about monsters seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
nikkimoe
Poem Published
16th Dec 2021 5:02pm
16th Dec 2021 5:02pm
There Are None So Blind
The light surface
leads to a black hole,
a darkened soul
and something
so out of control
it uses the light
to swallow you whole,
and yet you long
to touch it.
Poor baby.
leads to a black hole,
a darkened soul
and something
so out of control
it uses the light
to swallow you whole,
and yet you long
to touch it.
Poor baby.
#dark
#monsters
#unicorns
101 reads
7 Comments
arortiz73
MTP
MTP
Poem Published
15th Dec 2021 7:58pm
15th Dec 2021 7:58pm
Miss Doublemint Visqueen
Dirty dishes do my laundry
down the chute in vanilla-ice cream.
Cloudy swishes, sudsy sundae;
hot jacuzzi, clear-umbrella swat team.
Tick tag-toed and I'll see you next Tuesday,
over-boiled and raining soft steam.
Wanna catch me? Be there Monday.
I'm in the bag earmarked "Dry Clean".
down the chute in vanilla-ice cream.
Cloudy swishes, sudsy sundae;
hot jacuzzi, clear-umbrella swat team.
Tick tag-toed and I'll see you next Tuesday,
over-boiled and raining soft steam.
Wanna catch me? Be there Monday.
I'm in the bag earmarked "Dry Clean".
#monsters
86 reads
1 Comment
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
14th Dec 2021 3:17pm
14th Dec 2021 3:17pm
Is it fair?
Have you died today, my fellow?
Transcending up to peace and love?
Bathing in comfort and lights mellow?
Does it seem pure harmony above?
Yes. It is our promise.
That death soothes our human pains.
Like a fairytale upon us...
No imperfection, angelic domains...
This is reality we can't depict.
In our brute lives of die hard.
But does it... doesn't it contradict
itself, the fact of the backyard?
The backyard of dimensions.
For our peaceful books hide a bit
of information, best unmentioned,
in order not...
Transcending up to peace and love?
Bathing in comfort and lights mellow?
Does it seem pure harmony above?
Yes. It is our promise.
That death soothes our human pains.
Like a fairytale upon us...
No imperfection, angelic domains...
This is reality we can't depict.
In our brute lives of die hard.
But does it... doesn't it contradict
itself, the fact of the backyard?
The backyard of dimensions.
For our peaceful books hide a bit
of information, best unmentioned,
in order not...
#evil
#God
#scary
#monsters
#fear
99 reads
9 Comments
arortiz73
MTP
MTP
Poem Published
12th Dec 2021 1:48am
12th Dec 2021 1:48am
Hey, Zealousy.
#monsters
50 reads
2 Comments
Whyme
Poem Published
7th Dec 2021 00:28am
7th Dec 2021 00:28am
Nightmares Take Control
Nightmares takes flight,
When the wind howls
The black clouds scream
Across the thunderess skies
Lightning flashes
The rains slates down
Hitting the ground like bullets
Leaves bend and break
Beneath the unforgiving onslaught
Windows rattle and bow
Curtains swirl and shake
Dogs growl and bark
Strange shadows run rampant
Horrific nightmares take hold
Evil deeds have no limits
Witches brew their evil stew
And spread their poison
From atop their bewitched brooms
I sleep shivering...
When the wind howls
The black clouds scream
Across the thunderess skies
Lightning flashes
The rains slates down
Hitting the ground like bullets
Leaves bend and break
Beneath the unforgiving onslaught
Windows rattle and bow
Curtains swirl and shake
Dogs growl and bark
Strange shadows run rampant
Horrific nightmares take hold
Evil deeds have no limits
Witches brew their evil stew
And spread their poison
From atop their bewitched brooms
I sleep shivering...
#monsters
#ghosts
#witches
80 reads
2 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
28th Nov 2021 7:00pm
28th Nov 2021 7:00pm
50 Caliber Stare
If you've ever got the urge
to murder a few people,
be confident, it kills
the insecure.
Quick
yet surely not
painless
to murder a few people,
be confident, it kills
the insecure.
Quick
yet surely not
painless
#monsters
#unicorns
#learning
107 reads
1 Comment
nikkimoe
Poem Published
25th Nov 2021 8:11pm
25th Nov 2021 8:11pm
Hollowed Out
Bound to an
emotional emptiness
I cannot feel you.
Possibly sorry
but we'll truly
never know.
emotional emptiness
I cannot feel you.
Possibly sorry
but we'll truly
never know.
#monsters
#unicorns
#emotions
77 reads
4 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2021 2:41pm
23rd Nov 2021 2:41pm
DEATH CHANT Three Point Four
Sum'n me up from the ocean floor ..?
DEATH CHANT Three Point Four
Disturb my slumber, risk hearing me roar
DEATH CHANT Three Point Four
Run for your lives as I come a-
shore
Larger than life, I am
A Godzilla while you're Japan
What MOAR
do you really think you're owed?
I never was a fan of Repeat M'ode
Say it once in rhyme ( or not )
then, BAM! What I've got
is copy paste at the ready
To reply in real time is a waste
whenever you pass off...
DEATH CHANT Three Point Four
Disturb my slumber, risk hearing me roar
DEATH CHANT Three Point Four
Run for your lives as I come a-
shore
Larger than life, I am
A Godzilla while you're Japan
What MOAR
do you really think you're owed?
I never was a fan of Repeat M'ode
Say it once in rhyme ( or not )
then, BAM! What I've got
is copy paste at the ready
To reply in real time is a waste
whenever you pass off...
#monsters
#WritingPoetry
#rap
161 reads
4 Comments
Junco
H. D. Jaster
H. D. Jaster
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2021 10:38pm
22nd Nov 2021 10:38pm
Eyes Symmetry
It speaks to me of symmetry, and of tender little lies.
The little lies we tell ourselves, when we look into our eyes.
"These eyes are even," we seek to say. "They align in a way just right."
But we know inside, that this little lie, is purely a construction of spite.
And though this creature sought me out, and offers up its hands,
It sees things in such wicked ways, I wish I didn't understand.
It spoke to me of symmetry, and of painful, awful lies.
And now my eyes have symmetry, in a face I don't recognize.
The little lies we tell ourselves, when we look into our eyes.
"These eyes are even," we seek to say. "They align in a way just right."
But we know inside, that this little lie, is purely a construction of spite.
And though this creature sought me out, and offers up its hands,
It sees things in such wicked ways, I wish I didn't understand.
It spoke to me of symmetry, and of painful, awful lies.
And now my eyes have symmetry, in a face I don't recognize.
#secrets
#monsters
#FeelingTrapped
#temptation
#bittersweet
116 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
12th Nov 2021 4:57pm
12th Nov 2021 4:57pm
Scars Hiding
Look at my face
Really look
Grizzled
Beat up
Scars hiding
Irresistible
Right ?
A woman like you needs me
I don't take your crap
Yet I coddle you
As I can't resist the hurt you've suffered
We're not perfect
Pretty damn good
I'll take it
Will you ?
Really look
Grizzled
Beat up
Scars hiding
Irresistible
Right ?
A woman like you needs me
I don't take your crap
Yet I coddle you
As I can't resist the hurt you've suffered
We're not perfect
Pretty damn good
I'll take it
Will you ?
#anxiety
#relationships
#monsters #philosophical
#monsters #philosophical
171 reads
27 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
31st Oct 2021 6:45pm
31st Oct 2021 6:45pm
[ TSC ] Pray!
Straight from the Cretacious
apex predator predates us
Over our modern kingdom it reins
Too huge for capture in any man-made cage
Trampling powerlines, derailing trains
Consuming human flesh in rapacious rampage
world terrorized by The Deadly Mantis;
behemoth unleashed by climate change
Media's gone bananapants over this!
Target acquired in rocket firing range
Impervious, the exoskeleton!
What's it gonna take to save the day?
Perhaps this is a battle that can't be won ...
apex predator predates us
Over our modern kingdom it reins
Too huge for capture in any man-made cage
Trampling powerlines, derailing trains
Consuming human flesh in rapacious rampage
world terrorized by The Deadly Mantis;
behemoth unleashed by climate change
Media's gone bananapants over this!
Target acquired in rocket firing range
Impervious, the exoskeleton!
What's it gonna take to save the day?
Perhaps this is a battle that can't be won ...
#Halloween
#monsters
135 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
30th Oct 2021 6:08pm
30th Oct 2021 6:08pm
Killer Candy Corn
His momma was a candy
And his daddy was a corn
Though their love was forbidden
Sometime later, he was born
At first they called him a monster
Looking abnormal and vicious
Unbeknownst to him later on
People would find his kind delicious
"He’s a freak, he’s bizarre, he’s a weirdo!"
They called him an odd shaped beast
With sworn scorn they hated his form
Not knowing he’d be part of their feast
Then he found out his mommy and daddy
Had popped more corns than kettle porn
Now his breed are all over the...
And his daddy was a corn
Though their love was forbidden
Sometime later, he was born
At first they called him a monster
Looking abnormal and vicious
Unbeknownst to him later on
People would find his kind delicious
"He’s a freak, he’s bizarre, he’s a weirdo!"
They called him an odd shaped beast
With sworn scorn they hated his form
Not knowing he’d be part of their feast
Then he found out his mommy and daddy
Had popped more corns than kettle porn
Now his breed are all over the...
#Halloween
#scary
#funny #monsters
#funny #monsters
95 reads
4 Comments
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