Poems About Monsters Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about monsters seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Feb 2024 11:06am
9th Feb 2024 11:06am
A Crooked Concept
Some monsters have always said
There are parents under my bed
One of their names is Ted
The other goes by Deb
There are parents under my bed
They won’t eat me as long as their fed
There are parents under my bed
Their complexions are lumpy & red
There are parents under my bed
My dreams are filled with dread
There are parents under my bed
I’d like to shoot them with lead
There are parents under my bed
Must act now before I wind up dead
There are parents under my bed
They say this illusion is in my head
There are...
There are parents under my bed
One of their names is Ted
The other goes by Deb
There are parents under my bed
They won’t eat me as long as their fed
There are parents under my bed
Their complexions are lumpy & red
There are parents under my bed
My dreams are filled with dread
There are parents under my bed
I’d like to shoot them with lead
There are parents under my bed
Must act now before I wind up dead
There are parents under my bed
They say this illusion is in my head
There are...
#children
#rhyming
#monsters #MentalHealth
#monsters #MentalHealth
79 reads
5 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
16th Dec 2023 7:21pm
16th Dec 2023 7:21pm
Love and Legion
#dark
#monsters
#ForbiddenLove
#temptation
#horror
78 reads
2 Comments
arortiz73
MTP
MTP
Poem Published
12th Nov 2023 4:15pm
12th Nov 2023 4:15pm
Incorporated Corpse I Came
I carry carƞage
in carnations; crisp
corsages of cremation
4 cultivar and cull-curation:
carrion in celeḅratįon... I crew
the creeping crypt's caụsation
(cold, consţant, calculations) and
crash the carnival's coronation:
acute-coronary calcification.
By colt, I collate cult cathedrals;
coļlapꜱe them in capsized cerebrals
ȯf Crowley Coffee / cannabidiol keto
& computer-crafted cradle credos...
crụshing the curtain's christening curse,
cut clinically-clean &...
in carnations; crisp
corsages of cremation
4 cultivar and cull-curation:
carrion in celeḅratįon... I crew
the creeping crypt's caụsation
(cold, consţant, calculations) and
crash the carnival's coronation:
acute-coronary calcification.
By colt, I collate cult cathedrals;
coļlapꜱe them in capsized cerebrals
ȯf Crowley Coffee / cannabidiol keto
& computer-crafted cradle credos...
crụshing the curtain's christening curse,
cut clinically-clean &...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
95 reads
2 Comments
VeronikaB
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2023 11:57am
2nd Nov 2023 11:57am
How to Feed a Warmonster
React to the warmonster with my trauma responses?
¿Inherited from past generations??
I goad it on to prove its strength.
Throw shreds of factoids between its jaws?
I jump into the bottomless pit of addiction.
Appease the warmonster by fighting fear?
I cook up hunger for more.
Fight the warmonster by nurturing fear in others?
¿Just to prove my point and win an argument??
I become complicit in the brutal business of War.
Flee the fear, ignore the warmonster?
¿Hope it will go away??
¿¿Fizzle out???
¿¿¿Become...
¿Inherited from past generations??
I goad it on to prove its strength.
Throw shreds of factoids between its jaws?
I jump into the bottomless pit of addiction.
Appease the warmonster by fighting fear?
I cook up hunger for more.
Fight the warmonster by nurturing fear in others?
¿Just to prove my point and win an argument??
I become complicit in the brutal business of War.
Flee the fear, ignore the warmonster?
¿Hope it will go away??
¿¿Fizzle out???
¿¿¿Become...
#war
#monsters
#suffering
#RainerMariaRilke
#fear
117 reads
4 Comments
Maeve_Edmonson
Poem Published
1st Nov 2023 10:00pm
1st Nov 2023 10:00pm
Death By A Dream (collab with adagio)
I blinked my eyes to only meet
sweet anesthesia's dysphoria,
My eyelids sealed profusely,
drifting off clouds of dysmorphia.
But the monster crept from my closet
piercing deep into sleep's dialysis,
my heart shuttered at beatings sake
as the demon took his analysis.
The hairs on my neck stood up,
entrapped of dark academia, dreaming,
He lifted my veil only to suck my soul,
in my last breaths, I wasn't screaming.
sweet anesthesia's dysphoria,
My eyelids sealed profusely,
drifting off clouds of dysmorphia.
But the monster crept from my closet
piercing deep into sleep's dialysis,
my heart shuttered at beatings sake
as the demon took his analysis.
The hairs on my neck stood up,
entrapped of dark academia, dreaming,
He lifted my veil only to suck my soul,
in my last breaths, I wasn't screaming.
#anxiety
#depression
#dark #monsters
#dark #monsters
140 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Oct 2023 11:26pm
17th Oct 2023 11:26pm
The Men
Darkness comes to entertain
inside me conjured forward
in the greedy need I am loved
sinister stirrings awaken me to the bleak
A scarecrow perched on my shoulder shrieks
in the eternal torment froth on the seas means terror ahead
turn back inside yourself, torn
I look behind me and shadows encroach
looming large with scary grins
It's the men they've caught up with me
the powers that be scream within my soul
they are at odds with me
I seek shelter in the cool abyss
treading water appearing somewhat normal ...
inside me conjured forward
in the greedy need I am loved
sinister stirrings awaken me to the bleak
A scarecrow perched on my shoulder shrieks
in the eternal torment froth on the seas means terror ahead
turn back inside yourself, torn
I look behind me and shadows encroach
looming large with scary grins
It's the men they've caught up with me
the powers that be scream within my soul
they are at odds with me
I seek shelter in the cool abyss
treading water appearing somewhat normal ...
#dark
#monsters
145 reads
6 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
13th Oct 2023 11:34pm
13th Oct 2023 11:34pm
The Citadel of the Lost Race
- The Citadel of the Lost Race -
The descending of the evening was more sudden, more ferocious than any wild beast of the wastes. It was a curtain of darkness falling upon an already stricken land! The drum-like pounding of thunder was as the beating of the drums of an angry god, and lightning struck the rocks of the desert like forks of a hot fire from some darkly Promethean forge. The sound of the thunder seemed to be growing closer to any who traveled across the region in which this was happening, as lizard-like winged beasts prowled a haunted sky, seeking what scant prey...
The descending of the evening was more sudden, more ferocious than any wild beast of the wastes. It was a curtain of darkness falling upon an already stricken land! The drum-like pounding of thunder was as the beating of the drums of an angry god, and lightning struck the rocks of the desert like forks of a hot fire from some darkly Promethean forge. The sound of the thunder seemed to be growing closer to any who traveled across the region in which this was happening, as lizard-like winged beasts prowled a haunted sky, seeking what scant prey...
#courage
#friendship
#monsters
#apocalypse
#scifi
117 reads
0 Comments
MonumentCar24
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2023 8:53pm
23rd Sep 2023 8:53pm
The demon that ended the world with his friends
Once there was a book laying down on ground called the evil devil I opened it and a devil jumped out the book and said where are all my friends I told him I don't know I just found this book on the ground he said that he had friends that lived in other books and he told me if I didn't help him find them he would kill me I said ok so we started to look for his friends we found a book called the demon dog in a abandoned house down the road he opened the book and told the demon dog to listen to him and he told the demon dog about how I found him on the ground and he said that I would help him...
#monsters
128 reads
0 Comments
arortiz73
MTP
MTP
Poem Published
12th Sep 2023 11:45pm
12th Sep 2023 11:45pm
9/11 on an 1199
With the rising tumult,
the colt split the rum
in my predator eyes
like 45-RPMs strike
100 Usain bolts on a
33-record role to reprise.
I was seeing quadraphonics
that poly-carbon hydroponics
could only surmise. As I went
supersonic, the rubber felt
ironic where the tires left
the tarmac and my two
wheels started to fly.
Flies like bullets
desmodromic
etched the tartar
from my brick, and
my mortar-piston flesh
turned to tartare slicks for this
redlined pick between my thighs. It's
September the...
the colt split the rum
in my predator eyes
like 45-RPMs strike
100 Usain bolts on a
33-record role to reprise.
I was seeing quadraphonics
that poly-carbon hydroponics
could only surmise. As I went
supersonic, the rubber felt
ironic where the tires left
the tarmac and my two
wheels started to fly.
Flies like bullets
desmodromic
etched the tartar
from my brick, and
my mortar-piston flesh
turned to tartare slicks for this
redlined pick between my thighs. It's
September the...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns
#zombies
#ThrillSeeking
111 reads
1 Comment
Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
29th Aug 2023 00:57am
29th Aug 2023 00:57am
Human Monsters
Feigned sleep with closed eyes....Rousing the empty sands of an hourglass, that has no more time. As sleep has ended & summons the sleep of the dead...With unhuman arms they take & rape you...Open wounds of cesspools, their toxic tasty leftovers, perfume of death. Hoping my monsters of last night's dreams aren't my adversity of this upside down, disarrange, chaotic confusion. Conformity of such coercion unnatural order imposed by who??? This is a bad movie script written by some sell out, cheap suit writers...Who enshroud the words of paper...Masking this art to shame...It's just...
#monsters
#aliens
134 reads
4 Comments
arortiz73
MTP
MTP
Poem Published
4th Jun 2023 3:04pm
4th Jun 2023 3:04pm
Head-melt McGriddle
I'm gonna eat you like Cat & bibble;
labia lugs, tongue-swept under thẹ
rug-spilled kitten-kibble, no- acquittal!
You needa thug head-melt MȼGriddle.
The whole kit and kaboodle, not just
a litl nibble. Uṋskirt 'n' full coṃmitẗal,
I'll diddle that Skittle past the point
of pant and piddle. You're the bird,
I'm the worm on nitrous, wiggle, wiggle;
Hot Mama dill pickle! Whipits clit-spittle-
bug, kissin' hugs split down the middle.
Nipples stiff and shriveled, popcorn!
Buttermilk jugs, kettle swivelled. ...
labia lugs, tongue-swept under thẹ
rug-spilled kitten-kibble, no- acquittal!
You needa thug head-melt MȼGriddle.
The whole kit and kaboodle, not just
a litl nibble. Uṋskirt 'n' full coṃmitẗal,
I'll diddle that Skittle past the point
of pant and piddle. You're the bird,
I'm the worm on nitrous, wiggle, wiggle;
Hot Mama dill pickle! Whipits clit-spittle-
bug, kissin' hugs split down the middle.
Nipples stiff and shriveled, popcorn!
Buttermilk jugs, kettle swivelled. ...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
186 reads
3 Comments
Darkkin
Poem Published
1st Jun 2023 11:34pm
1st Jun 2023 11:34pm
Spoons and Stars
Spoons and Stars
A line in the sand, held hard at the 36th Parallel
at the cliff face the famed and fabled Star Socks
and a troll of unprecedented bitterness and wrath
who blocked the forward and backway unto right.
And Star Socks, who had faced the Right Hand
of the No Man down, now saw the chasm loom,
an abyss of twisted anger, the need to hurt, but
most importantly destroy all who dared to shine.
Poor Star Socks Fox, damned for his own love
of parables, legends, lores kept safe in his stars.
Stars that had damned him...
A line in the sand, held hard at the 36th Parallel
at the cliff face the famed and fabled Star Socks
and a troll of unprecedented bitterness and wrath
who blocked the forward and backway unto right.
And Star Socks, who had faced the Right Hand
of the No Man down, now saw the chasm loom,
an abyss of twisted anger, the need to hurt, but
most importantly destroy all who dared to shine.
Poor Star Socks Fox, damned for his own love
of parables, legends, lores kept safe in his stars.
Stars that had damned him...
#monsters
137 reads
0 Comments
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