Poems About Monsters Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about monsters seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 9:32am
7th Jan 2025 9:32am
That What Lurks Within
Beneath yon moonlit, hallowed ground
Doth creep a beast of dread untold
Its claws with cursed marrow crowned
Its gaze a pyre both fierce and cold
A shadowed wretch of sinewy rot
Its breath, a whisper fraught with pain
Lingers 'neath stagnant wisps and knots
A harbinger of doom's refrain
Yet lo! It dwelleth not alone
For deep within thy trembling chest
Its likeness molds thy heart to stone
And robs thy soul of tranquil rest
Thy own despair it calls its lair
Thy sins, the feast it doth devour
It weaves thy...
Doth creep a beast of dread untold
Its claws with cursed marrow crowned
Its gaze a pyre both fierce and cold
A shadowed wretch of sinewy rot
Its breath, a whisper fraught with pain
Lingers 'neath stagnant wisps and knots
A harbinger of doom's refrain
Yet lo! It dwelleth not alone
For deep within thy trembling chest
Its likeness molds thy heart to stone
And robs thy soul of tranquil rest
Thy own despair it calls its lair
Thy sins, the feast it doth devour
It weaves thy...
#dark
#gothic
#graveyard
#monsters
#shadows
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 5:54am
3rd Jan 2025 5:54am
The Smell of Fear
Ah, the perfume of terror, thick and sweet!
It coils, invisible tendrils in the air
A fragrant hymn to my ravenous heat
A banquet drawn from mortal despair
It rises, oh, it rises, from quaking flesh
That wretched vessel of trembling clay
Trembling breath makes the essence fresh
As their spirits rot and minds decay
I scent it now, that nectar, that prize
A symphony writ in the notes of dread
It speaks to me in their widening eyes
Where shadows dwell and hope has fled
Oh, how it lingers, how it taints the breeze ...
It coils, invisible tendrils in the air
A fragrant hymn to my ravenous heat
A banquet drawn from mortal despair
It rises, oh, it rises, from quaking flesh
That wretched vessel of trembling clay
Trembling breath makes the essence fresh
As their spirits rot and minds decay
I scent it now, that nectar, that prize
A symphony writ in the notes of dread
It speaks to me in their widening eyes
Where shadows dwell and hope has fled
Oh, how it lingers, how it taints the breeze ...
#dark
#evil
#fear
#horror
#monsters
79 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 5:27pm
6th Dec 2024 5:27pm
The stone man
Here I am as I am a man of truth and genuine honesty, when I speak with truth and trust. For what I believe in my mind and heart and spiritual thoughts. As I draw off my own life substance, with intelligences and upmost of my own subconscious thoughts. For sure as I continue, to stand up to the very tolerates, with the deepness of the nonsense that I see. THAT you will hear my words of thoughts of my own conversations. For sure sometimes we have to learn to be resilient, in our search of the truth instead of continuing to believe, in the bold face of lies. For sure I am a witness to what he...
#ghosts
#mermaids
#monsters
#vampires
#werewolves
58 reads
0 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 4:27pm
1st Dec 2024 4:27pm
Exorcizing Demons (Part 4) (ExercisingDemons near-collab)
Walking abandoned faint section
of steel train track entranced
by opulent bug with a god complex
in murder of crows nest
Dante inferno hallucination drapes
bewitch stage scene entry
absent benevolence malice feint
convenes eternal rest
Fallen endlessly soul struck fowl
bestial wraith outside carnal realms
only rule at Tartarus entrance
was Allowed Temporary burning
Carnivorous phoenix leading eye (Job 1:12 view)
dichotomy Shrieks aerial ablaze
legendary incarnate landed
Craves carnage fiercely feast...
of steel train track entranced
by opulent bug with a god complex
in murder of crows nest
Dante inferno hallucination drapes
bewitch stage scene entry
absent benevolence malice feint
convenes eternal rest
Fallen endlessly soul struck fowl
bestial wraith outside carnal realms
only rule at Tartarus entrance
was Allowed Temporary burning
Carnivorous phoenix leading eye (Job 1:12 view)
dichotomy Shrieks aerial ablaze
legendary incarnate landed
Craves carnage fiercely feast...
#angels
#evil
#God
#monsters
#mythology
148 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 8:25am
1st Dec 2024 8:25am
WHAT IF IT WAS ALL A LIE
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️.
What if it was all a
lie, to have the ones that believe there is things, behind the curtains that you can't see 👁️👁️ the real, deepness of the truth about what is happening in real time. ⌚ For sure what if Biden, has put into place a plan to destroy the world 🌎 That has been change by the powers that be 🤨 to have us all not believe what we really see. AS long as we continue to wear the blinders, covering our own eyes and closing off our mind to...
What if it was all a
lie, to have the ones that believe there is things, behind the curtains that you can't see 👁️👁️ the real, deepness of the truth about what is happening in real time. ⌚ For sure what if Biden, has put into place a plan to destroy the world 🌎 That has been change by the powers that be 🤨 to have us all not believe what we really see. AS long as we continue to wear the blinders, covering our own eyes and closing off our mind to...
#monsters
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#vampires
#witches
93 reads
4 Comments
Onyxceila
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 3:31am
20th Nov 2024 3:31am
Sincerely Dr. Jekyll
I can feel this rage boiling,
Bubbling to the top.
I can feel it catching fire,
Gathering heat nonstop.
Trampled on, belittled, and used,
With pain and anger suppression fused,
Cap to bottle where pressure grew.
A rageful burst ignites a flame,
A violent urge inside creates
An urgent need to purge what’s sane.
So I tipped the ladle and poured my pain,
Into molds I cast from shame,
Where molten bone is cooled with haste
To form the blackest glass to claws and fangs.
From iron ladle, fall tears like viscous...
Bubbling to the top.
I can feel it catching fire,
Gathering heat nonstop.
Trampled on, belittled, and used,
With pain and anger suppression fused,
Cap to bottle where pressure grew.
A rageful burst ignites a flame,
A violent urge inside creates
An urgent need to purge what’s sane.
So I tipped the ladle and poured my pain,
Into molds I cast from shame,
Where molten bone is cooled with haste
To form the blackest glass to claws and fangs.
From iron ladle, fall tears like viscous...
#dark
#hate
#jealousy #monsters
#jealousy #monsters
128 reads
1 Comment
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 5:47pm
5th Nov 2024 5:47pm
Dis Iz Elmo Fool
Carroll, David, Jerry, Frank, Leslie, Erik, Jim are the bitches behind the mask
All you pussy puppet motherfuckas can kiss Elmo’s red ass,
“Along with those half-retarded germ infested kids
Elmo Da Fool is gonna show you how a motherfucka live,
“At one time Elmo was the world’s number one beloved toy
Bringing joy to every stanking ass little girl and shit-stained boy,
“They having a good ole’ time, watch Elmo shake and giggle
Check this out. Now you can watch how Elmo’s bullets wiggle,
“What Elmo is bringing every day are...
All you pussy puppet motherfuckas can kiss Elmo’s red ass,
“Along with those half-retarded germ infested kids
Elmo Da Fool is gonna show you how a motherfucka live,
“At one time Elmo was the world’s number one beloved toy
Bringing joy to every stanking ass little girl and shit-stained boy,
“They having a good ole’ time, watch Elmo shake and giggle
Check this out. Now you can watch how Elmo’s bullets wiggle,
“What Elmo is bringing every day are...
#dark
#monsters
128 reads
8 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 5:27pm
4th Nov 2024 5:27pm
An Unnatural Quiet
They come, they come, shadows cold and sly
That dance in silence, mocking as they flit
A host unseen, with thousand unseen eyes
And each one fixed upon my shivering wit
O silent fiends, why creep ye through my cell?
Is’t not enough my mind’s become thy prey?
Ye slither, lurk, and fester—yet none tell
What foul delight or purpose bids you stay
Hark! They do whisper, low and serpent-sweet
Their voices coil within the breathless gloom
“Come nearer, fool, where light and shadow meet,
And touch the edge of thy eternal doom.”...
That dance in silence, mocking as they flit
A host unseen, with thousand unseen eyes
And each one fixed upon my shivering wit
O silent fiends, why creep ye through my cell?
Is’t not enough my mind’s become thy prey?
Ye slither, lurk, and fester—yet none tell
What foul delight or purpose bids you stay
Hark! They do whisper, low and serpent-sweet
Their voices coil within the breathless gloom
“Come nearer, fool, where light and shadow meet,
And touch the edge of thy eternal doom.”...
#dark
#home
#monsters
#shadows
#silence
58 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 10:09am
31st Oct 2024 10:09am
Skeletons
I've got skeletons in my cupboard
A ghost from the past
Flowers in the attic
A baseball bat and mask
Johnny's at the door
Eyes wide and shiny
Lecter's liver raw
Chianti wine, untie me
Upon the wall a frame
Stuffed with evil hearts
Want to play a game
Jigsaw's bout' to start
Annabelle's on the left
Chucky to the right
Evil dolls possessed
This frightful freaky night
A ghost from the past
Flowers in the attic
A baseball bat and mask
Johnny's at the door
Eyes wide and shiny
Lecter's liver raw
Chianti wine, untie me
Upon the wall a frame
Stuffed with evil hearts
Want to play a game
Jigsaw's bout' to start
Annabelle's on the left
Chucky to the right
Evil dolls possessed
This frightful freaky night
#ghosts
#monsters
109 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 6:54pm
28th Oct 2024 6:54pm
On The Way Back To The Campsite
On
the way
back to the
campsite, Nancy
spotted Marcia on
the ground naked under
a full moon with a demon
sticking its tongue into her just
before it saw Nancy and lunged at
her making Nancy wake up screaming loud.
the way
back to the
campsite, Nancy
spotted Marcia on
the ground naked under
a full moon with a demon
sticking its tongue into her just
before it saw Nancy and lunged at
her making Nancy wake up screaming loud.
#fiction
#friendship
#monsters
#nightmares
#sex
111 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 8:08am
23rd Oct 2024 8:08am
Hellbound
Hellbound, pyre, descending, falling
Hollow souls, shadows call on
Incomplete, darkness marches
Glutton feeds, silent, charges
Mirror shards, dissect in shame
Symbols pour, acid rain
No rebound, from this hold
Tears drown on sins untold
Hollow souls, shadows call on
Incomplete, darkness marches
Glutton feeds, silent, charges
Mirror shards, dissect in shame
Symbols pour, acid rain
No rebound, from this hold
Tears drown on sins untold
#monsters
192 reads
18 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 3:09pm
20th Oct 2024 3:09pm
One's Encounter With A Succubus
Both Kevin and Delilah stripped.
She allowed him to probe her hard.
She ate him with fangs.
She allowed him to probe her hard.
She ate him with fangs.
#dark
#death
#fiction
#monsters
#sex
93 reads
0 Comments
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