Poems About Monsters Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about monsters seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Onyxceila
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:31am
Yesterday 3:31am
Sincerely Dr. Jekyll
I can feel this rage boiling,
Bubbling to the top.
I can feel it catching fire,
Gathering heat nonstop.
Trampled on, belittled, and used,
With pain and anger suppression fused,
Cap to bottle where pressure grew.
A rageful burst ignites a flame,
A violent urge inside creates
An urgent need to purge what’s sane.
So I tipped the ladle and poured my pain,
Into molds I cast from shame,
Where molten bone is cooled with haste
To form the blackest glass to claws and fangs.
From iron ladle, fall tears like viscous...
Bubbling to the top.
I can feel it catching fire,
Gathering heat nonstop.
Trampled on, belittled, and used,
With pain and anger suppression fused,
Cap to bottle where pressure grew.
A rageful burst ignites a flame,
A violent urge inside creates
An urgent need to purge what’s sane.
So I tipped the ladle and poured my pain,
Into molds I cast from shame,
Where molten bone is cooled with haste
To form the blackest glass to claws and fangs.
From iron ladle, fall tears like viscous...
#dark
#hate
#jealousy #monsters
#jealousy #monsters
34 reads
1 Comment
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 5:47pm
5th Nov 2024 5:47pm
Dis Iz Elmo Fool
Carroll, David, Jerry, Frank, Leslie, Erik, Jim are the bitches behind the mask
All you pussy puppet motherfuckas can kiss Elmo’s red ass,
“Along with those half-retarded germ infested kids
Elmo Da Fool is gonna show you how a motherfucka live,
“At one time Elmo was the world’s number one beloved toy
Bringing joy to every stanking ass little girl and shit-stained boy,
“They having a good ole’ time, watch Elmo shake and giggle
Check this out. Now you can watch how Elmo’s bullets wiggle,
“What Elmo is bringing every day are...
All you pussy puppet motherfuckas can kiss Elmo’s red ass,
“Along with those half-retarded germ infested kids
Elmo Da Fool is gonna show you how a motherfucka live,
“At one time Elmo was the world’s number one beloved toy
Bringing joy to every stanking ass little girl and shit-stained boy,
“They having a good ole’ time, watch Elmo shake and giggle
Check this out. Now you can watch how Elmo’s bullets wiggle,
“What Elmo is bringing every day are...
#dark
#monsters
73 reads
8 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 5:27pm
4th Nov 2024 5:27pm
An Unnatural Quiet
They come, they come, shadows cold and sly
That dance in silence, mocking as they flit
A host unseen, with thousand unseen eyes
And each one fixed upon my shivering wit
O silent fiends, why creep ye through my cell?
Is’t not enough my mind’s become thy prey?
Ye slither, lurk, and fester—yet none tell
What foul delight or purpose bids you stay
Hark! They do whisper, low and serpent-sweet
Their voices coil within the breathless gloom
“Come nearer, fool, where light and shadow meet,
And touch the edge of thy eternal doom.”...
That dance in silence, mocking as they flit
A host unseen, with thousand unseen eyes
And each one fixed upon my shivering wit
O silent fiends, why creep ye through my cell?
Is’t not enough my mind’s become thy prey?
Ye slither, lurk, and fester—yet none tell
What foul delight or purpose bids you stay
Hark! They do whisper, low and serpent-sweet
Their voices coil within the breathless gloom
“Come nearer, fool, where light and shadow meet,
And touch the edge of thy eternal doom.”...
#dark
#home
#monsters
#shadows
#silence
33 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 10:09am
31st Oct 2024 10:09am
Freak Show
I've got skeletons in my cupboard
A ghost from the past
Flowers in the attic
A baseball bat and mask
Johnny's at the door
Eyes wide and shiny
Lecter's liver raw
Chianti wine, untie me
Upon the wall a frame
Stuffed with evil hearts
Want to play a game
Jigsaw's bout' to start
Annabelle's on the left
Chucky to the right
Evil dolls possessed
This frightful freaky night
A ghost from the past
Flowers in the attic
A baseball bat and mask
Johnny's at the door
Eyes wide and shiny
Lecter's liver raw
Chianti wine, untie me
Upon the wall a frame
Stuffed with evil hearts
Want to play a game
Jigsaw's bout' to start
Annabelle's on the left
Chucky to the right
Evil dolls possessed
This frightful freaky night
#ghosts
#monsters
68 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 6:54pm
28th Oct 2024 6:54pm
On The Way Back To The Campsite
On
the way
back to the
campsite, Nancy
spotted Marcia on
the ground naked under
a full moon with a demon
sticking its tongue into her just
before it saw Nancy and lunged at
her making Nancy wake up screaming loud.
the way
back to the
campsite, Nancy
spotted Marcia on
the ground naked under
a full moon with a demon
sticking its tongue into her just
before it saw Nancy and lunged at
her making Nancy wake up screaming loud.
#fiction
#friendship
#monsters
#nightmares
#sex
83 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 8:08am
23rd Oct 2024 8:08am
Hellbound
Hellbound, pyre, descending, falling
Hollow souls, shadows call on
Incomplete, darkness marches
Glutton feeds, silent, charges
Mirror shards, dissect in shame
Symbols pour, acid rain
No rebound, from this hold
Tears drown on sins untold
Hollow souls, shadows call on
Incomplete, darkness marches
Glutton feeds, silent, charges
Mirror shards, dissect in shame
Symbols pour, acid rain
No rebound, from this hold
Tears drown on sins untold
#monsters
121 reads
18 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 3:09pm
20th Oct 2024 3:09pm
One's Encounter With A Succubus
Both Kevin and Delilah stripped.
She allowed him to probe her hard.
She ate him with fangs.
She allowed him to probe her hard.
She ate him with fangs.
#dark
#death
#fiction
#monsters
#sex
74 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 7:56am
9th Oct 2024 7:56am
Killin' Time
Feed my lust behind the mask
Any questions, dare you ask?
My wicked games, evil heart
I feel no shame, ripped apart
The walls can't hear, the light is dead
Face your fear, tonight dons red
Fan my shrine, I bid farewell
It's killin' time... Here in HELL!
Any questions, dare you ask?
My wicked games, evil heart
I feel no shame, ripped apart
The walls can't hear, the light is dead
Face your fear, tonight dons red
Fan my shrine, I bid farewell
It's killin' time... Here in HELL!
#ghosts
#monsters
#vampires
118 reads
8 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 5:30pm
8th Oct 2024 5:30pm
It Won't Die
It won't leave me alone this night
It haunts the corners of the days
This terror and thing of fright
Why won't it just go away
Scratching along at my floors
Please don't let it in
It's whispering at the door
Words blacker than mortal sin
I can smell the fetid rot
This thing that should not be
It stalks my halls and thoughts
Braying with twisted insanity
The dead won't be still and lie
Things that just bite and scratch
God it's...
It haunts the corners of the days
This terror and thing of fright
Why won't it just go away
Scratching along at my floors
Please don't let it in
It's whispering at the door
Words blacker than mortal sin
I can smell the fetid rot
This thing that should not be
It stalks my halls and thoughts
Braying with twisted insanity
The dead won't be still and lie
Things that just bite and scratch
God it's...
#dark
#death
#fear
#horror
#monsters
92 reads
4 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 11:12am
7th Oct 2024 11:12am
Lost Souls
Far and wide the night he pries
Sins shy from serpent eyes
Dreams repeat, all alone
Incomplete and unbeknown
Time stands still on hallow ground
Lost until a soul is found
Sins shy from serpent eyes
Dreams repeat, all alone
Incomplete and unbeknown
Time stands still on hallow ground
Lost until a soul is found
#ghosts
#monsters
129 reads
12 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 7:04pm
30th Sep 2024 7:04pm
The Abominate
He stalks along the fringes of the Sub-conscious
Walking in comfort along the Bed of Coals
that is your Soul
Waiting for your eyes to close....
To depose you of your Sovereignty
Hate-seeking in the darkness
Looking to harness the despicable you
Ride your E-motions like a Pale White Horse
Stray you off course...cavity-strip you of common remorse
Dump you in Limbo's Lost and Found
While He drags your Avatar along that long Green Mile
Leave you used up with a broken smile
As a new addition to His...
Walking in comfort along the Bed of Coals
that is your Soul
Waiting for your eyes to close....
To depose you of your Sovereignty
Hate-seeking in the darkness
Looking to harness the despicable you
Ride your E-motions like a Pale White Horse
Stray you off course...cavity-strip you of common remorse
Dump you in Limbo's Lost and Found
While He drags your Avatar along that long Green Mile
Leave you used up with a broken smile
As a new addition to His...
#dark
#monsters
#spiritual
#humankind
#ghosts
197 reads
5 Comments
Poet__2248
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 10:33am
28th Sep 2024 10:33am
Creature
My body overcome and mind awash with emotion i think of myth.
Creature, do not run from me but embrace the similar strangeness of me as I shall do to you, sing to me a story of heartbreak and tragedy, tell me your mind, you’re wrongness, your innermost desires and sorrows and in doing that let me know you truly
Creature, do not run from me but embrace the similar strangeness of me as I shall do to you, sing to me a story of heartbreak and tragedy, tell me your mind, you’re wrongness, your innermost desires and sorrows and in doing that let me know you truly
#identity
#monsters
#PersonalGrowth
#wisdom
#WritingPoetry
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