Poems About Memories Seeking Honest Critique
#memories
Poems about memories seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 9:51pm
9th Feb 2025 9:51pm
Ring of life & death
He's showed his kid numerous times a video of him and the kid's mother fucking on the night the kid was conceived
He would then show the kid a video of the child's mother giving birth to him
Years later, the kid showed his kid a video of himself shooting his father in the head with a shotgun
He would then show the kid a video of the child's mother giving birth to him
Years later, the kid showed his kid a video of himself shooting his father in the head with a shotgun
#birth
#children
#father
#memories
#sex
49 reads
6 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 6:55am
9th Feb 2025 6:55am
last last laugh
"HEY!
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING!
"PRAYING?"
"STOP IT!"
"I'M THE ONLY GOD YOU NEED!"
"CHRIST! YOU MAKE ME SICK!"
"YOU CAN'T BE NO KID OF MINE!"
"I WISH YOU WERE NEVER BORN!"
"YOUR NOTHING BUT A FAT USELESS
FUCK!"
"YOU'LL NEVER AMOUNT TO ANYTHING."
"I KNOW YOUR MOM'S OUT WHORING
AROUND!"
"HOW WOULD YOU LIKE THAT BLOND...
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING!
"PRAYING?"
"STOP IT!"
"I'M THE ONLY GOD YOU NEED!"
"CHRIST! YOU MAKE ME SICK!"
"YOU CAN'T BE NO KID OF MINE!"
"I WISH YOU WERE NEVER BORN!"
"YOUR NOTHING BUT A FAT USELESS
FUCK!"
"YOU'LL NEVER AMOUNT TO ANYTHING."
"I KNOW YOUR MOM'S OUT WHORING
AROUND!"
"HOW WOULD YOU LIKE THAT BLOND...
#memories
60 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 4:28pm
6th Feb 2025 4:28pm
Cigarette Redux
Your cigarette
Smelled like the late 1970's
Camel unfiltered
At the bar at the beachfront
A certain kind of haze
My eyes fell on you
Talking Heads on the jukebox
Life During Wartime played
Sweat, glaze, punk freedom
Defiance and glory
Our late youth unfolding
Into something nevermore
Smelled like the late 1970's
Camel unfiltered
At the bar at the beachfront
A certain kind of haze
My eyes fell on you
Talking Heads on the jukebox
Life During Wartime played
Sweat, glaze, punk freedom
Defiance and glory
Our late youth unfolding
Into something nevermore
#memories
#music
#PopCulture
#SelfReflection
#WritingPoetry
103 reads
19 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 2:53pm
2nd Feb 2025 2:53pm
~misc. minimalist random scribbles:: summated from a past
1.
wafts the nightly run dunes
in a myriad ringing perfumy
runes~ lawsonia-in-blooms
2.
petrified mindfringes
drinks in the syringing rains-
levitational petrichors now
3.
hazy galloping fast, vastly
zebrine skies- tingle & tango
her moony third eye🌔
4.
#Monsoonal #TanglishMinimalist
#mridangam skies rumbly
whelm as #TalaiKaveri tears
5.
oh the giant cannibal
monsoonal glooms, how
you gobble up even
dimly living daylights! ...
wafts the nightly run dunes
in a myriad ringing perfumy
runes~ lawsonia-in-blooms
2.
petrified mindfringes
drinks in the syringing rains-
levitational petrichors now
3.
hazy galloping fast, vastly
zebrine skies- tingle & tango
her moony third eye🌔
4.
#Monsoonal #TanglishMinimalist
#mridangam skies rumbly
whelm as #TalaiKaveri tears
5.
oh the giant cannibal
monsoonal glooms, how
you gobble up even
dimly living daylights! ...
#love
#memories
#minimalist #WritingPoetry
#minimalist #WritingPoetry
102 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 5:15am
2nd Feb 2025 5:15am
Picture
Picture
The photo pulls back the layers of time
In it I’m a stranger I can’t recognize
The form of the figure looks familiar
But the blues eyes now grey seem unrecognizable
Smile on the face is alien to me
All I know now is a scowl and fear
The mop of dirty blond innocence
Now sparse grey populates the surface
Memories rush in to complete the scene
But they won’t stay because memories are fleeting
I don t know why he resembles a younger version
But he does and I can’t complete the...
The photo pulls back the layers of time
In it I’m a stranger I can’t recognize
The form of the figure looks familiar
But the blues eyes now grey seem unrecognizable
Smile on the face is alien to me
All I know now is a scowl and fear
The mop of dirty blond innocence
Now sparse grey populates the surface
Memories rush in to complete the scene
But they won’t stay because memories are fleeting
I don t know why he resembles a younger version
But he does and I can’t complete the...
#aging
#memories
#nostalgia
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KittyFromHell
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 4:43am
30th Jan 2025 4:43am
In Between Selves
The mirror image flickers again
Like a buffering screen shorting out.
I watch ghosts of me fade away
As if I am caught in the veil
Waiting for resurrection at last.
Like a buffering screen shorting out.
I watch ghosts of me fade away
As if I am caught in the veil
Waiting for resurrection at last.
#identity
#memories
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
56 reads
0 Comments
beanbandit
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 3:03am
30th Jan 2025 3:03am
Question
I already seen the past
Now I just wanna know the question
What the fuck am I to be learning
If "that's" the lesson?
Who tracks the quest then?
When I lack suggestions?
Tired of standing backwards
Guessing
So safe in my puddle
All the answers reflecting
The rain she come cleanse me
But she keeps me...
The best thing?
The world rushes past
I do my dance
Do I lessen?
Shush, that’s depressing
Even fools do half a spin
that’s just destined
So I make what’s mine?
That’s not a question
Now I just wanna know the question
What the fuck am I to be learning
If "that's" the lesson?
Who tracks the quest then?
When I lack suggestions?
Tired of standing backwards
Guessing
So safe in my puddle
All the answers reflecting
The rain she come cleanse me
But she keeps me...
The best thing?
The world rushes past
I do my dance
Do I lessen?
Shush, that’s depressing
Even fools do half a spin
that’s just destined
So I make what’s mine?
That’s not a question
#healing
#memories
52 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 11:01am
29th Jan 2025 11:01am
And now a true story
My childhood friend Kirby and I once hypnotized a frog in the summer of 88. We found a rock on the lake's shoreline that looked like an emerald. We believed the rock had super powers. An hour later, we found the frog. We began rubbing the rock on the top of it's forehead. It was amazing. The frog was hypnotized. (We thought) We weren't sure though on how to unhyptnotize the frog. Instead, we kept the frog and fed it to Kirby's German Sheppard, named Bear. That was the 1st time his dog tasted frog! 'oui oui'
After Bear had lunch, we went inside to see Kirby's Grandma. This old...
After Bear had lunch, we went inside to see Kirby's Grandma. This old...
#childhood
#friendship
#memories
#ShortStory
#summer
60 reads
8 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 7:19am
28th Jan 2025 7:19am
My Heart Smiled
I’ve always had a fascination with the automobile. Growing up I loved my Hot Wheels collection above all other toys. Would always look at the stamp on the bottom of the car, so I could learn: make, model, year.
My dad worked on cars for extra money when I was young. He wasn’t a certified mechanic but he knew how to work on them. I even remember he did minor body work, and painted them as well. He pulled engines and transmissions, and other items before taking them off to be crushed.
My favorite car he worked on was a 1968 Mercury Cougar. It was blue and had a...
My dad worked on cars for extra money when I was young. He wasn’t a certified mechanic but he knew how to work on them. I even remember he did minor body work, and painted them as well. He pulled engines and transmissions, and other items before taking them off to be crushed.
My favorite car he worked on was a 1968 Mercury Cougar. It was blue and had a...
#memories
#nostalgia
99 reads
16 Comments
mitjima
Lunarbitsh
Lunarbitsh
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 6:20am
24th Jan 2025 6:20am
w i t c h 2 0 0 9
#deception
#fear
#memories
#secrets
#witches
37 reads
1 Comment
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 1:31am
23rd Jan 2025 1:31am
Fatso's Dad
My NY friend from high school.
You make me smile.
I miss you.
Can't believe we're still in touch.
Fatso enjoyed the house,
You bought for him and his gf.
I hope we talk soon.
You gave me the support,
When everyone was against me.
I'm glad your ex wife finally came through.
All the support you gave through her addiction,
Now you're here for me too.
I wish there was some way I can help you.
I hope your kids grow to be as awesome as you.
11 years and I still wish I could kiss you.
Fatso and his...
You make me smile.
I miss you.
Can't believe we're still in touch.
Fatso enjoyed the house,
You bought for him and his gf.
I hope we talk soon.
You gave me the support,
When everyone was against me.
I'm glad your ex wife finally came through.
All the support you gave through her addiction,
Now you're here for me too.
I wish there was some way I can help you.
I hope your kids grow to be as awesome as you.
11 years and I still wish I could kiss you.
Fatso and his...
#memories
69 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 8:35pm
22nd Jan 2025 8:35pm
Frigid Sky
Time is passing by and slowly
Losing all its breath
Sun is going down so lonely
In the frosty, distant west
Cold nasty winds are blowing
All the hopes fade away
While life is freezing
Into a snowy, powdery haze
Within a frozen moment
Into a crystal winter sky
Memories are melting
Tears open up my eyes
Soon salvation
Will bring a long-awaited end
Reaching primordial creation
Uniting with you, my old friend
Losing all its breath
Sun is going down so lonely
In the frosty, distant west
Cold nasty winds are blowing
All the hopes fade away
While life is freezing
Into a snowy, powdery haze
Within a frozen moment
Into a crystal winter sky
Memories are melting
Tears open up my eyes
Soon salvation
Will bring a long-awaited end
Reaching primordial creation
Uniting with you, my old friend
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#memories
#rhyming
#winter
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8 Comments
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