Poems About Marriage by Top Critiquers
#marriage
Poems about marriage by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Torture
I'm leaving."
"Go ahead!"
" Doesn't that
bother you?"
"no..."
"Then I'll stay."
"Go ahead!"
" Doesn't that
bother you?"
"no..."
"Then I'll stay."
#marriage
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Seriously Corny
We've always been ride or die
Corny for sure
We've also held each others fears
when life and love got seriously hard
Almost losing your wife and 1st born baby
couldnt even define hard
baby number 2
maybe shes not for you
suicidal~ly and damn you hard
Yet here they both are
Losing incomes and chosing to live on one
ridiculously hard
Almost losing yourself and life partner to PTSD and addiction demons
never ever forget stupid hard
Do we try harder or do we call it quits
the worst kind of fucking hard ...
Corny for sure
We've also held each others fears
when life and love got seriously hard
Almost losing your wife and 1st born baby
couldnt even define hard
baby number 2
maybe shes not for you
suicidal~ly and damn you hard
Yet here they both are
Losing incomes and chosing to live on one
ridiculously hard
Almost losing yourself and life partner to PTSD and addiction demons
never ever forget stupid hard
Do we try harder or do we call it quits
the worst kind of fucking hard ...
#love
#children
#marriage
#family
#redemption
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Wife... Not.
Whisper behind my back,
...
And let it!
...
I don't want to be a WIFE.
...
I'm afraid!
...
Put down roots on paper - Insanity
...
ORGASM!
...
is much stronger without seals.
...
And let it!
...
I don't want to be a WIFE.
...
I'm afraid!
...
Put down roots on paper - Insanity
...
ORGASM!
...
is much stronger without seals.
#boyfriend
#relationships
#marriage
#conflict
#funny
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FORMATIVE YEARS CHAPTER 3 Part 4
#lust
#girlfriend
#marriage
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He Loved Me Not....
Never wishing for the vast sea
or heavens
nor gold and silver
I still dreamt for the unattainable.
The lucidly audible word...
to be heard from the whispering tip of his tongue.
The overtly tangible word...
to be felt beneath the caressing tips of his fingers.
My mind left to discern
as my heart ached with fissions
from such fickle moments.
Like plucking petals from their tender and unwilling bud;
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
He loves me not...
to be left as barren as the stem,...
or heavens
nor gold and silver
I still dreamt for the unattainable.
The lucidly audible word...
to be heard from the whispering tip of his tongue.
The overtly tangible word...
to be felt beneath the caressing tips of his fingers.
My mind left to discern
as my heart ached with fissions
from such fickle moments.
Like plucking petals from their tender and unwilling bud;
He loves me
He loves me not
He loves me
He loves me not...
to be left as barren as the stem,...
#marriage
#forgiveness
#memories
#TimeHeals
#emotional
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Sick Marriage
He takes care of home, but won’t fuck
“He takes care of the kids, but won’t fuck
“He gives her whatever she ask, but won’t fuck
“Now she’s contemplating about head-hunting for the nut,
“In the beginning he always called her baby
Telling her she would forever be his special lady,
“That he would always treat her brand new
Now he looks at her like dog shit found on his shoe,
“For months and heartbreaking years she attempts to hold on
Trying new things like sending...
“He takes care of the kids, but won’t fuck
“He gives her whatever she ask, but won’t fuck
“Now she’s contemplating about head-hunting for the nut,
“In the beginning he always called her baby
Telling her she would forever be his special lady,
“That he would always treat her brand new
Now he looks at her like dog shit found on his shoe,
“For months and heartbreaking years she attempts to hold on
Trying new things like sending...
#marriage
#heartbroken
#denial #temptation
#denial #temptation
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Pleasent ride
after a friendship n long dating
the moments of wedding bells
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure!
the moments of wedding bells
room lifted the load of happiness n pleasure!
#love
#marriage
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On The Way Down
It was
Supposed to be just for the weekend
But we went off the deep end
And now we meet in different venues
Reading new menus with rare delicacies
In exotic countries overseas
Spending down time in cozy cottages
Log cabins and bamboo huts
This wasn't supposed to be but....
We fell off the deep end...
And went well beyond the weekend
Now we sleep in the same bed
Living in the same house
11 years you've been my spouse...
Supposed to be just for the weekend
But we went off the deep end
And now we meet in different venues
Reading new menus with rare delicacies
In exotic countries overseas
Spending down time in cozy cottages
Log cabins and bamboo huts
This wasn't supposed to be but....
We fell off the deep end...
And went well beyond the weekend
Now we sleep in the same bed
Living in the same house
11 years you've been my spouse...
#happiness
#love
#marriage
#family
#travel
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being married for so long
both a little more worn, but that’s good, each other’s favourite
old cardigan, in fact I could have sworn we were Savile Row suited
old cardigan, in fact I could have sworn we were Savile Row suited
#marriage
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Ashley Darque
I was respectful
Or at least so I thought
Maybe I caught him in a midlife crisis
Maybe he should not have
Referred to me as Isis
In his dreams
Silly him
Is it my fault that his wife
Was ear hustling while he slept?
Listened closely as he snitched on himself
While he crept along my back alley
Sighhhh..
I'm not much into victimhood politics
People make choices
Choices have consequences
He just needed put an 'H' on his back
And...
Or at least so I thought
Maybe I caught him in a midlife crisis
Maybe he should not have
Referred to me as Isis
In his dreams
Silly him
Is it my fault that his wife
Was ear hustling while he slept?
Listened closely as he snitched on himself
While he crept along my back alley
Sighhhh..
I'm not much into victimhood politics
People make choices
Choices have consequences
He just needed put an 'H' on his back
And...
#marriage
#sex
#betrayal
#dreams
#night
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The Angle of Incidence
The Angle of Incidence
An experience,
However
Temporarily
Escaping
The daily
Run
Of the mill
Routine,
May
Feel
Well
Worth it
If the angle
Of incidence
Covers
The gap
Between
The unnumbed
Reality
Of stark living
And that
Pounding
Sense
Of mindless
Security
That
Comes
In the wake
Of turning
Off
The accountability
For the life
Someone
Seems
To have made
For...
An experience,
However
Temporarily
Escaping
The daily
Run
Of the mill
Routine,
May
Feel
Well
Worth it
If the angle
Of incidence
Covers
The gap
Between
The unnumbed
Reality
Of stark living
And that
Pounding
Sense
Of mindless
Security
That
Comes
In the wake
Of turning
Off
The accountability
For the life
Someone
Seems
To have made
For...
#teens
#marriage
#LifeCycle #nostalgia
#LifeCycle #nostalgia
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ex
the hiss of the door as it shut unnerved me
I knew it had closed for good
the devil witness your departure
he was first to tell me I was alone
a mistress of fate took you
it was fate she should be there when I faltered
I loved you but not enough
she saw different sides of you
found them endearing
where I was irritated
I looked at you through her eyes
I envied
time wasn't on my side
with bitter tears I look in the mirror
ravaged with age
I look the part of an ex wife
shrewish woman full of regret ...
I knew it had closed for good
the devil witness your departure
he was first to tell me I was alone
a mistress of fate took you
it was fate she should be there when I faltered
I loved you but not enough
she saw different sides of you
found them endearing
where I was irritated
I looked at you through her eyes
I envied
time wasn't on my side
with bitter tears I look in the mirror
ravaged with age
I look the part of an ex wife
shrewish woman full of regret ...
#sadness
#depression
#marriage #hurt
#marriage #hurt
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