Poems About Marriage Seeking Honest Critique
#marriage
Poems about marriage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
O KAMA SUTRA
O Kama Sutra, be our guide:
teach us how man and woman 'ride',
all those positions known to you -
open them up within our view,
positions that are BEST for US
to achieve the best coitus!
So help this husband and his wife
best consummate their married life,
its pages we together read,
to follow where your wise words lead....
teach us how man and woman 'ride',
all those positions known to you -
open them up within our view,
positions that are BEST for US
to achieve the best coitus!
So help this husband and his wife
best consummate their married life,
its pages we together read,
to follow where your wise words lead....
#marriage
#sex
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GET OUT OF MY LIFE
Let's take a moment to analyze, as we reflect upon the uncrossing, of our history and life 💖 together. 🤔 For sure I have been very grateful enough to know when it's over and done , between us but yet I truly wonder is it really over between us. 🤨. For it is true that we have so much history together, it would be a shame to watch it go away and never truly return. 😔 Yet I know it would be best for me and you, being that we are always fighting and arguing back to back and going at each other like cats and dogs. 🤨 Almost to the point of no return from...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#lover
#marriage
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Marriage Life
I'm use to spending my days in bad weather.
Hot, cold, sleet, snow, whiteouts it didn't matter.
Pushing myself to the limits because I hated to see you sick.
Who would have thought that the moments away would be the reason that we'd eventually split.
Thank God you made it through and now the kids are grown.
The only down fall is I'm sitting at this table eating breakfast all alone.
When just 10 years ago I was singing to a different tune.
I can't say I hate you because yes I understand you, even though sometimes I wish it wasn't true.
On the outside...
Hot, cold, sleet, snow, whiteouts it didn't matter.
Pushing myself to the limits because I hated to see you sick.
Who would have thought that the moments away would be the reason that we'd eventually split.
Thank God you made it through and now the kids are grown.
The only down fall is I'm sitting at this table eating breakfast all alone.
When just 10 years ago I was singing to a different tune.
I can't say I hate you because yes I understand you, even though sometimes I wish it wasn't true.
On the outside...
#husband
#love
#marriage
#separation
#wife
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Date With a Philosopher
If you’ve seen the present, you’ve seen all things, from time immemorial into all of eternity. For everything that happens is related and the same.” Marcus Aurelius
The woman, who could pass for a fashion model, closes the book gently, her finger holding her place, and looks out the window at the city skyline. The night is still, but her mind is anything but. She begins to think, her voice taking on a reflective tone.
What we do this day... it's what humans have always done. No need to get into emotional distress about what is happening in any given moment.
...
The woman, who could pass for a fashion model, closes the book gently, her finger holding her place, and looks out the window at the city skyline. The night is still, but her mind is anything but. She begins to think, her voice taking on a reflective tone.
What we do this day... it's what humans have always done. No need to get into emotional distress about what is happening in any given moment.
...
#betrayal
#marriage
#philosophical #temptation
#philosophical #temptation
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Adulation Bombastry
In a daze of phlogiston and aether
and steampunk chunks of yesteryear vapor
I wrote love sonnets just to bequeath her
on a myriad of fine craft paper...
all for the castles in her maven sky
of woolgathering watercolor drops
the sunbeams brought to her passage bird eye
from lupine fields and fresh Aegilops.
She the canny nymph, and I the satyr,
who hoped she'd take a turn upon my flute
somewhere in my cavorting to mate her
or nurse the dew from her paradise fruit...
raised in that old Virginia for lovers
she already...
and steampunk chunks of yesteryear vapor
I wrote love sonnets just to bequeath her
on a myriad of fine craft paper...
all for the castles in her maven sky
of woolgathering watercolor drops
the sunbeams brought to her passage bird eye
from lupine fields and fresh Aegilops.
She the canny nymph, and I the satyr,
who hoped she'd take a turn upon my flute
somewhere in my cavorting to mate her
or nurse the dew from her paradise fruit...
raised in that old Virginia for lovers
she already...
#marriage
#PowerOfWords
#romantic
#wife
#WritingPoetry
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A Thousand Futures
I press in with slow and careful muscle,
admiring your breasts, ethereal fountains of life
that glow from curtained light.
So little is seen but there’s much to imagine
as we find our place and ways to approach
the newness of what might be our wedding bed.
Feeling no doubt from you,
I dare not withdraw from this appealing position.
I’ll rest inside of you for a while,
for eternity if the gods allow.
But I have a duty this night; to plant
what I have carried since birth.
The gods of lust demand that I...
admiring your breasts, ethereal fountains of life
that glow from curtained light.
So little is seen but there’s much to imagine
as we find our place and ways to approach
the newness of what might be our wedding bed.
Feeling no doubt from you,
I dare not withdraw from this appealing position.
I’ll rest inside of you for a while,
for eternity if the gods allow.
But I have a duty this night; to plant
what I have carried since birth.
The gods of lust demand that I...
#LifeCycle
#marriage
#sex
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Temptations of John and Ruth
John knew her well. Ruth was the mother of two young children who’d been happily married for six years. As she knelt next to him, he saw her slender legs bending gracefully. Those legs had broken track records only nine years before while she was a student where he taught.
Looking down at the glow of her curly blonde hair, he remembered how bright and optimistic she’d been as a student. Her smile was infectious! She could disagree while smiling and you’d find yourself agreeing to her argument.
She was a rising star among the advanced students and quickly landed a...
Looking down at the glow of her curly blonde hair, he remembered how bright and optimistic she’d been as a student. Her smile was infectious! She could disagree while smiling and you’d find yourself agreeing to her argument.
She was a rising star among the advanced students and quickly landed a...
#marriage
#religion
#sex
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How Dare You, You Cheating Jerk?!
Blair entered and found Kristy.
Her maid of honor's naked in bed.
That's before her fiancé entered.
Her maid of honor's naked in bed.
That's before her fiancé entered.
#betrayal
#fiction
#lover
#marriage
#sex
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It's a blessing to be loved
How often do you wish that you finally met someone, who has the same passion as you have to be able, and willing to share there life and love with you 💕 As with respect and honor and support, and understanding involving that realness of honesty truth and trust. 😉 But yet in these days and times, that's 😞 not seems it's gonna happen, due to the deepness of the heart. Along with the deepness of the pain, that has been broken like tiny pieces of broken shatter glass. Yet they have said that no one is sent to you, by chance or accident. 🤔 FOR it's with these kind...
#childhood
#fatherhood
#LifeCycle
#marriage
#motherhood
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They pretended
They would both pretend at night during sex that they were having an orgasm
For her it's real easy
She could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's that
For him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd pull out and cum in his hand
She wouldn't know, since it was dark in the room and he made it sound so real
Sure he was hard, but he was thinking of other people he would see throughout his day
After about 10-15 minutes the act was over
They both would ask each other how it felt
They would both lie and say,
Great!
They would turn...
For her it's real easy
She could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's that
For him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd pull out and cum in his hand
She wouldn't know, since it was dark in the room and he made it sound so real
Sure he was hard, but he was thinking of other people he would see throughout his day
After about 10-15 minutes the act was over
They both would ask each other how it felt
They would both lie and say,
Great!
They would turn...
#gay
#lesbian
#marriage
#relationships
#sex
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Vows for a Second Marriage
We gather today under the vast canopy of the universe to celebrate a new commitment between Jennifer and Herald. They stand before us as two of creation's happenstance.
As we share the joy of their union, let us acknowledge the rich experiences that have shaped them. They bring with them memories of their childhood, education, and environment. Let us be honest and acknowledge that they also bring memories of lovers, treasured without regret, as they now embark on a journey to forge a new and deeper love together. Let us encourage them to be enthralled by each other’s beauty, to...
As we share the joy of their union, let us acknowledge the rich experiences that have shaped them. They bring with them memories of their childhood, education, and environment. Let us be honest and acknowledge that they also bring memories of lovers, treasured without regret, as they now embark on a journey to forge a new and deeper love together. Let us encourage them to be enthralled by each other’s beauty, to...
#love
#marriage
#memories
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old couple in a restaurant
she tucked her legs under the table
and said what do you fancy
you of course he said but never mind that now
I’m just so bloody hungry
and said what do you fancy
you of course he said but never mind that now
I’m just so bloody hungry
#aging
#food
#love #marriage
#love #marriage
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