Poems About Marriage Seeking Honest Critique
#marriage
Poems about marriage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
To Give My Husband A Wonderful Christmas Present
Only to give my husband a wonderful
Christmas present is the reason why I allowed
myself to pose naked. You did not say one
thing about posing with that one kid next to you.
Christmas present is the reason why I allowed
myself to pose naked. You did not say one
thing about posing with that one kid next to you.
#Christmas
#dialogue
#fiction
#marriage
#sex
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Generic Existence
He goes to the same job everyday.
He comes home to his wife every night.
They rarely touch each other.
Only on special occasions, like birthday's and Columbus Day.
There not attracted to each other anymore.
They don't make a fuss about it.
A few years back, they were fighting and swearing that they were going to leave one another.
When the fighting subsided, they both realized they were both a bunch of cowards.
Neither one had the courage to go out and meet someone else.
They don't despise one another.
They are friendly roommates waiting for...
He comes home to his wife every night.
They rarely touch each other.
Only on special occasions, like birthday's and Columbus Day.
There not attracted to each other anymore.
They don't make a fuss about it.
A few years back, they were fighting and swearing that they were going to leave one another.
When the fighting subsided, they both realized they were both a bunch of cowards.
Neither one had the courage to go out and meet someone else.
They don't despise one another.
They are friendly roommates waiting for...
#emptiness
#frustration
#marriage #separation
#marriage #separation
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Husband to Wife
Middle of the night
She's having a hot flash
I dry her back
Always ask if she needs help
Drying the front
She declines
I tell her to remind me
To feel her up later
No answer
I'll attempt it anyway
She's got a great rack
She's having a hot flash
I dry her back
Always ask if she needs help
Drying the front
She declines
I tell her to remind me
To feel her up later
No answer
I'll attempt it anyway
She's got a great rack
#CharlesBukowski
#EECummings
#LifeAsAWriter
#lust
#marriage
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Thirteen
13.
The body will wait,
weighted and forlorn,
drunk on stone, air on lung,
for some kind of lightning,
or door to evade again
those tethers of hinge and rust,
I could nuzzle
holly and teasel more
than human flesh, never been
able to work it all out
but your hands
no longer fit my hands,
my hands made
of green and wild
and those nooks
we laid claim to
between book pages,
in a rush to make
heroes of ourselves,
were never enough.
I'd take a boat,
I'd take a shed,
somewhere to...
The body will wait,
weighted and forlorn,
drunk on stone, air on lung,
for some kind of lightning,
or door to evade again
those tethers of hinge and rust,
I could nuzzle
holly and teasel more
than human flesh, never been
able to work it all out
but your hands
no longer fit my hands,
my hands made
of green and wild
and those nooks
we laid claim to
between book pages,
in a rush to make
heroes of ourselves,
were never enough.
I'd take a boat,
I'd take a shed,
somewhere to...
#anger
#disappointment
#frustration
#healing
#marriage
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maturity
uncertain fate frightens me
never afraid in my youth
spin the wheel of dreams
visions speak for me
in the unveiled future
turn the key and open a door for me
the misty water seems cast against me
guilty confession I feel like it's my fault
no matter the case
maturity is taking responsibility for yourself
tit for Tat is a kids' game and it has no place in love
broken-hearted. I broke my own heart trying to get even
death couldn't come sooner
hateful curse I hurt myself
he seems immune to my...
never afraid in my youth
spin the wheel of dreams
visions speak for me
in the unveiled future
turn the key and open a door for me
the misty water seems cast against me
guilty confession I feel like it's my fault
no matter the case
maturity is taking responsibility for yourself
tit for Tat is a kids' game and it has no place in love
broken-hearted. I broke my own heart trying to get even
death couldn't come sooner
hateful curse I hurt myself
he seems immune to my...
#marriage
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Gino & Poppy
It was the early 2010s, another pissed up night at the boozer.
A young Gino Corona was spending all of his dosh, like a loser!
He had long hair in a bun and a wife-beater to show his guns.
Flossing a big chunky chain on his neck to show his funds.
His wife and his kid at home would wonder where he might be?
Either way she knew, he would be pissed up, somewhere out of his tree.
In the gritty town of Swansea, it was raw, rough, and ready.
They lived in a grotty flat in the moody streets of Sketty.
Poppy Fiasco was...
A young Gino Corona was spending all of his dosh, like a loser!
He had long hair in a bun and a wife-beater to show his guns.
Flossing a big chunky chain on his neck to show his funds.
His wife and his kid at home would wonder where he might be?
Either way she knew, he would be pissed up, somewhere out of his tree.
In the gritty town of Swansea, it was raw, rough, and ready.
They lived in a grotty flat in the moody streets of Sketty.
Poppy Fiasco was...
#family
#fatherhood
#marriage
#memories
#responsibility
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HONOR AND RESPECT
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ I would like to tell you a story, that happen along time ago 11 yrs ago of an awakening, there on a road of a journey and travel and walk. For the elders say no one is sent to someone, by accident for it was by designed by fate and spiritual intention of deep subconsciousness. For sure it was a blessing in disguise and something that we both wanted and needed and want in our lives. For as the years passed by we became truly as inseparable as we became like fire 🔥 to a flame. For I have no regrets with my own commitment, to having...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#lover
#marriage
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TAKE NOTHING FOR GRANTED
Here I am upon another day and chapter in my life as I lay awakening, for a new dawn to see the light from above shining down upon me. YET I can't help but yet I wonder why, was I choose for this task of endurances, me just a mere mortal man. But yet here I find thyself sometimes over thinking, my own silent whispers of my own thoughts just trying to make sense of it all. But yet that's what the mind does to you, as it shaves off the tough edges and pull back, layers upon layers of your true existence. For sure we will never really know how strong and resilient, and powerful we are not until...
#courage
#hope
#LifeCycle
#marriage
#strength
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JUST ANOTHER BEGINNING
There will come a time in each of our lives, that we may have to face some heartship, and sorrow through this life with hardship as well. But yet nothing is more damaging than DEATH, but what is so frightening is not knowing how or whether, it's time for your life to come to an end. For the betterment of life and dreams, with endless arrays of possibilities, for the elders they say that when we die. IT'S just a new beginning in our lives, for let the truth be told to those who know and believe. For death is a natural form of life, yet still it is necessary to understand that when we are...
#dialogue
#emotional
#marriage
#relationships
#StreamOfConsciousness
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I want to introduce you to my girlfriend
Your disease brought me closer to a decision
I know now who my true love is
It still isn't you
While your laying there, let me introduce you to my true love
Here she is
Look at her
Young, spry and gorgeous
You use to be special many many years ago
Now your laying here, given a few days to live
You did nothing all your life to help yourself
You should have given me my divorce when you still had the energy, years ago
You can't even lift your head up
See you at your funeral
I know now who my true love is
It still isn't you
While your laying there, let me introduce you to my true love
Here she is
Look at her
Young, spry and gorgeous
You use to be special many many years ago
Now your laying here, given a few days to live
You did nothing all your life to help yourself
You should have given me my divorce when you still had the energy, years ago
You can't even lift your head up
See you at your funeral
#death
#evil
#girlfriend
#illness
#marriage
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The Cycling Self
There is an
emptiness
that never
seems to…
empty…
itself
No matter
the groups
or therapies
encountered
to relieve
A pain
Always present
in some niggling
manner I loathe
because
I thought
I conquered it
Finding peace
in nature
and gratitude
amongst loved ones
can ease
the burden
of this…
Cross
BUT
It’s ever present
and always
carried
on my
Left
shoulder
...
emptiness
that never
seems to…
empty…
itself
No matter
the groups
or therapies
encountered
to relieve
A pain
Always present
in some niggling
manner I loathe
because
I thought
I conquered it
Finding peace
in nature
and gratitude
amongst loved ones
can ease
the burden
of this…
Cross
BUT
It’s ever present
and always
carried
on my
Left
shoulder
...
#betrayal
#cancer
#marriage #WritingPoetry
#marriage #WritingPoetry
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Betrayal - A very short story
The yards around her suburban home were covered in snow. Malia's bedroom was warm. A place that was once a sanctuary of love, now whispered of betrayal. The walls held a gallery of captured smiles and tender embraces, tracing a romance that blossomed into marriage. Yet, as the moonlight danced through the window and over her bed, it illuminated a different scene, a testament to the frailty of vows.
Earlier, Malia had been seized by an ancient generosity, a yearning to offer herself completely to another. It was an intoxicating desire, one that demanded she spread all she was or...
Earlier, Malia had been seized by an ancient generosity, a yearning to offer herself completely to another. It was an intoxicating desire, one that demanded she spread all she was or...
#betrayal
#marriage
#sex
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