Poems About Marijuana Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about marijuana seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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The Numen of Omen
Riding high – Riding high
The Earth is the sky – Earth is the sky.
Maybe there is no time to die -
And yet…
There was me, that is: Your humble narrator. (you know me.)
There was: Ocean, my droog from California with love.
There was: X (who’s nickname is too offensive to say.)
There was: X (he did not have a nickname)
Do you remember my story about that astral travel like episode?
With the ambulance sirens?
Well… That was a communicative omen from somewhere else
Something…...
Riding high – Riding high
The Earth is the sky – Earth is the sky.
Maybe there is no time to die -
And yet…
There was me, that is: Your humble narrator. (you know me.)
There was: Ocean, my droog from California with love.
There was: X (who’s nickname is too offensive to say.)
There was: X (he did not have a nickname)
Do you remember my story about that astral travel like episode?
With the ambulance sirens?
Well… That was a communicative omen from somewhere else
Something…...
#friendship
#universe
#marijuana
#LifeAsAWriter
#magic
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The Omen of Numen
The smoke hung heavy or languid
Having rolled off the ceiling -
Becoming a dormancy in a state of settlement.
At least this is what the perception perceived.
Or believed…
In post state flux and freeze -
Deep inhalations – Exhalations – Coughing…
Yeah… We were smoking – We were chiefing.
We were also driving.
The back seat either affords no control
or is an opportunity to explore
The hidden meanings entwined in the concept of control.
And then suddenly…
...
The smoke hung heavy or languid
Having rolled off the ceiling -
Becoming a dormancy in a state of settlement.
At least this is what the perception perceived.
Or believed…
In post state flux and freeze -
Deep inhalations – Exhalations – Coughing…
Yeah… We were smoking – We were chiefing.
We were also driving.
The back seat either affords no control
or is an opportunity to explore
The hidden meanings entwined in the concept of control.
And then suddenly…
...
#friendship
#universe
#marijuana
#LifeAsAWriter
#magic
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2 Comments
Blunt Farce Drama
(An Editorial Piece with Walter’s Alter Ego)
====~
Thank you Wally,
I just took a hit and that shit made me hella mellow…
Oh hello!
Tonight, we will be discussing the weed industry
And why we need to understand the bigotry
That’s been set in place by the system
Many of you may be familiar with the legalization of marijuana
In many different states
But I’m gonna make an observation that feels more like farce than drama
That may open the floodgates for debate
Over the years many dudes, homies and brothers ...
====~
Thank you Wally,
I just took a hit and that shit made me hella mellow…
Oh hello!
Tonight, we will be discussing the weed industry
And why we need to understand the bigotry
That’s been set in place by the system
Many of you may be familiar with the legalization of marijuana
In many different states
But I’m gonna make an observation that feels more like farce than drama
That may open the floodgates for debate
Over the years many dudes, homies and brothers ...
#politics
#marijuana
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6 Comments
High
I'm up in the sky
Flying high
Don't know whether to laugh or cry
I dont wanna live or die
I just do it to get by
Tell me why
Tell me why
Roll it up
Break it down
Breathe in, breathe out
Are you feeling it now
Are you feeling it now
It ain't wrong and it ain't right
A fire light in the dark of the night
Makes me burn so bright
I dont have to fight
So tell me
Is it wrong or is it right
Roll it up
Break it down
Breathe in, breathe out
Are you feeling it now
Are...
Flying high
Don't know whether to laugh or cry
I dont wanna live or die
I just do it to get by
Tell me why
Tell me why
Roll it up
Break it down
Breathe in, breathe out
Are you feeling it now
Are you feeling it now
It ain't wrong and it ain't right
A fire light in the dark of the night
Makes me burn so bright
I dont have to fight
So tell me
Is it wrong or is it right
Roll it up
Break it down
Breathe in, breathe out
Are you feeling it now
Are...
#music
#drugs
#marijuana
#lyrics
#addiction
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Cipher)))O(((rehpiC
Were you voted most likely to succeed?
… Most likely to breed?
… Most likely to sing?
… Most likely to do nothing?
… Most likely to do anything?..
… Most likely to say:
Fuck all yall and everything?..
… We were on the topic of fuck.
or… In this case
Fuck you.
That is… Fuck the system
This got me to thinking
or… Reminiscing.
I thought of an old year book…
Hidden in a dusty nook.
A friend did a drawing of me
clad in characteristic garb...
An over extended arm ...
… Most likely to breed?
… Most likely to sing?
… Most likely to do nothing?
… Most likely to do anything?..
… Most likely to say:
Fuck all yall and everything?..
… We were on the topic of fuck.
or… In this case
Fuck you.
That is… Fuck the system
This got me to thinking
or… Reminiscing.
I thought of an old year book…
Hidden in a dusty nook.
A friend did a drawing of me
clad in characteristic garb...
An over extended arm ...
#BestFriend
#marijuana
#LifeAsAWriter
#aliens
#magic
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high
that moment
when you are at your highest
higher than you've ever been
and you take a short breath in
inhaling
and the high falters
then for that second
a quick lapse
the high is gone
and just as quickly
you exhale
and the high falls
right back onto you
and you feel it once again
when you are at your highest
higher than you've ever been
and you take a short breath in
inhaling
and the high falters
then for that second
a quick lapse
the high is gone
and just as quickly
you exhale
and the high falls
right back onto you
and you feel it once again
#depression
#drugs
#marijuana
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6 Comments
Marijuana
There should not be laws against the possession of and use of marijuana
Humans think they have the power and authority to illegalise a natural plant
The vegetation of the earth has been here before mankind was formed
It takes a complete idiot to make laws against the things that God created
Legislators claim that ganja is a controlled substance, not an illegal substance,
But the dishonest lawmakers are just feeding the people a pile of crap
Using a different expression to describe something does not change the thing
If the law of man...
Humans think they have the power and authority to illegalise a natural plant
The vegetation of the earth has been here before mankind was formed
It takes a complete idiot to make laws against the things that God created
Legislators claim that ganja is a controlled substance, not an illegal substance,
But the dishonest lawmakers are just feeding the people a pile of crap
Using a different expression to describe something does not change the thing
If the law of man...
#power
#earth
#God
#marijuana
#tea
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Phytogyras!
Phyto gyras zoo a morons!..
Zoo mastigo phora!..
phyto gyras zoo a morons!..
Phyto mastigo phora!..
phytogyras zoo a morons!..
I will box and boss you like a boss do a mob..
I will tie and toy you like a child do a toy..
When I book I book to boost Mr. Shy..
When I bung I bung to bung Mr. high..
Losing my patience now me don't wanna lie..
If I love you I will sly..
Coz you will spy..
When I hang up you will dry..
Verse 1
Am not the one to decide on who gonna die..
After the blood shed I...
Zoo mastigo phora!..
phyto gyras zoo a morons!..
Phyto mastigo phora!..
phytogyras zoo a morons!..
I will box and boss you like a boss do a mob..
I will tie and toy you like a child do a toy..
When I book I book to boost Mr. Shy..
When I bung I bung to bung Mr. high..
Losing my patience now me don't wanna lie..
If I love you I will sly..
Coz you will spy..
When I hang up you will dry..
Verse 1
Am not the one to decide on who gonna die..
After the blood shed I...
#marijuana
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2 Comments
-MADE THIS-
#motivational
#marijuana
#magic #determination
#magic #determination
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8 Comments
Life lines
Follow down to the beach
The floaters rising from the sea
Running around in crappy denim
Steam rising from rock jaws
Salt sprays wet and all
I can feel are the waves moving
In rhythms of unstoppable soothing
Watching thousands of formless spines
Spin out into endless radiant lines
Planets to pebbles
Ashes to metal
Bones caught in fossils
Broken but still stowed
Bottled and ready to explode
Locking arms on the way home
Licking the surface of
Whatever comes
Whatever goes
Change is all we know
The floaters rising from the sea
Running around in crappy denim
Steam rising from rock jaws
Salt sprays wet and all
I can feel are the waves moving
In rhythms of unstoppable soothing
Watching thousands of formless spines
Spin out into endless radiant lines
Planets to pebbles
Ashes to metal
Bones caught in fossils
Broken but still stowed
Bottled and ready to explode
Locking arms on the way home
Licking the surface of
Whatever comes
Whatever goes
Change is all we know
#fate
#drugs
#marijuana #TruthOfLife
#marijuana #TruthOfLife
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Never Been One For Disappointment
An ounce of hope
or an ounce of weed?
Take the smoke
over make believe.
or an ounce of weed?
Take the smoke
over make believe.
#marijuana
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8 Comments
[ WotD ] Oh, Claire ..?
Flakier than puff pastry
she spaced off into some
happy-placed nowhere
if eunoia what I mean
---toking on a joint
legs lazily crossed;
a sort of half-baked
soi-disant croissant
left untouche'd
in a corner booth
of the Parisian cafe
she spaced off into some
happy-placed nowhere
if eunoia what I mean
---toking on a joint
legs lazily crossed;
a sort of half-baked
soi-disant croissant
left untouche'd
in a corner booth
of the Parisian cafe
#drugs
#marijuana
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