Poems for and About Lovers by Top Critiquers
#lover
Poems for and about lovers by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The problem
I sat there in the corner
And I watched her mingle with friends
She was happy.
I sat there for hours and she never said a thing to me
And when we got home.
She said "for a second there, I had forgotten about my problems"
And I watched her mingle with friends
She was happy.
I sat there for hours and she never said a thing to me
And when we got home.
She said "for a second there, I had forgotten about my problems"
#loneliness
#LifeStruggles
#lover
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All the gear no idea

#erotic
#lover
#passion
#sex
#temptation
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Back and Forth
Back and Forth
The shadow
moves
as fast
as any fire.
Does the flame
chase the shade
or does the darkness
chase the day?
Is it neither one
or both,
the same....
it's either way.
The shadow
moves
as fast
as any fire.
Does the flame
chase the shade
or does the darkness
chase the day?
Is it neither one
or both,
the same....
it's either way.
#BDSM
#lover
#lust #passion
#lust #passion
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Do not come near,
Do not come near,
any, all, yes, all
of you,
you with your faces of ivory,
you with your dark faces,
your faces like hungry torches,
all of you,.
do not come near
to me,
near with your eyes,
your wondered eyes,
your arrow eyes, kohled and lidded low,
slanting,
full of longing,
burdened, burdening,
near with your long arms
near with your long stride
and your ascending scent,
shearing me
with all of its
encompassings
its promises, its promisings,
the ones you...
any, all, yes, all
of you,
you with your faces of ivory,
you with your dark faces,
your faces like hungry torches,
all of you,.
do not come near
to me,
near with your eyes,
your wondered eyes,
your arrow eyes, kohled and lidded low,
slanting,
full of longing,
burdened, burdening,
near with your long arms
near with your long stride
and your ascending scent,
shearing me
with all of its
encompassings
its promises, its promisings,
the ones you...
#lover
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It is You
It was your hands
that held me when ill
genuinely grateful
you helped me be still
It was your strength
granting me courage to fight
when my hope was lost
and woefully out of sight
It was your belief
affording me assurance
that I could survive
fostering my endurance
It was your confidence
that willed me tenacity
to persevere through darkness
that forbade me to see
It is your heart always
that sweeps me away
yet keeps me grounded
and my demons at bay
It will forever...
that held me when ill
genuinely grateful
you helped me be still
It was your strength
granting me courage to fight
when my hope was lost
and woefully out of sight
It was your belief
affording me assurance
that I could survive
fostering my endurance
It was your confidence
that willed me tenacity
to persevere through darkness
that forbade me to see
It is your heart always
that sweeps me away
yet keeps me grounded
and my demons at bay
It will forever...
#husband
#lover
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irony
you dripped sarcasm
true to form it was your arsenal
you assault me with poison barbed words
and I cringe inside hearing them
it hurt to be just another woman you were no good for
a Sadist you pride yourself not needing anyone, not really
you deconstruction of my pride took years
systematically charming me then pushing me away
I was the anti heroine for you
just a side chick who could bear your abuse
inflicting emotional damage your forte
and I bore it well
no one would know how many times you tore me down
just to...
true to form it was your arsenal
you assault me with poison barbed words
and I cringe inside hearing them
it hurt to be just another woman you were no good for
a Sadist you pride yourself not needing anyone, not really
you deconstruction of my pride took years
systematically charming me then pushing me away
I was the anti heroine for you
just a side chick who could bear your abuse
inflicting emotional damage your forte
and I bore it well
no one would know how many times you tore me down
just to...
#lust
#lover
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Mind f**k
Love collaborations mental saturations, low tides high tides of wet vibrations. Love libations of soaked vibrations. Soul touches my spirit blushes lyrical incantations of passionate vibrations.
Heavenly observations of lustful emancipations. Kisses upon my flesh causing heart palpitations. Infacuations of fleshly stations, embodiments of pleasurable sensations, sweet seducing invitations.
Causing orgasmic liquidations. Love making love creating unconditionally wet situations. Carnally evading limited physical limitations, freedom of love with out stipulations. Love...
Heavenly observations of lustful emancipations. Kisses upon my flesh causing heart palpitations. Infacuations of fleshly stations, embodiments of pleasurable sensations, sweet seducing invitations.
Causing orgasmic liquidations. Love making love creating unconditionally wet situations. Carnally evading limited physical limitations, freedom of love with out stipulations. Love...
#lover
#lust
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I wish I Would've Paid Attention
You caught me on the rebound
Still nursing a bruised heart
From the Iove before you
But you gave me hope
That love could last erasing
all of the pain from the past
How could I know our love
Would go so wrong
That you'd starve me of
Affection and your attention
Chipping away at my love
Until there was nothing there
I searched my past for
Something I might have done
To make you want to bring
Another woman into the picture
But I just couldn't think of one
Don't know why you had to ...
Still nursing a bruised heart
From the Iove before you
But you gave me hope
That love could last erasing
all of the pain from the past
How could I know our love
Would go so wrong
That you'd starve me of
Affection and your attention
Chipping away at my love
Until there was nothing there
I searched my past for
Something I might have done
To make you want to bring
Another woman into the picture
But I just couldn't think of one
Don't know why you had to ...
#despair
#love
#lover #sadness
#lover #sadness
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Cabernet Valentine
Cabernet Valentine”
Oh my sweet silent Valentine veins flowing life
Secrets are meant to be kept my obedient wife
Luscious ruby mouth perked open for kissing
Shouldn't be too many acrylics inside missing
Most special day of the year celebrated lovers
Jack-o'-lantern face that is loved by mothers
You were stunning under your sexy lace negligee
If you hadn't screamed maybe you wouldn't be ugly
Silken raven strands stained in cherry hemoglobin
Pink blush cheeks smeared in tears, eyes bulging
...
Oh my sweet silent Valentine veins flowing life
Secrets are meant to be kept my obedient wife
Luscious ruby mouth perked open for kissing
Shouldn't be too many acrylics inside missing
Most special day of the year celebrated lovers
Jack-o'-lantern face that is loved by mothers
You were stunning under your sexy lace negligee
If you hadn't screamed maybe you wouldn't be ugly
Silken raven strands stained in cherry hemoglobin
Pink blush cheeks smeared in tears, eyes bulging
...
#bittersweet
#horror
#lover
#tragedy
#ValentinesDay
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Don't You Want To Stay For One More?
Roxann finally opened her eyes.
She saw Jon getting ready to leave.
Roxann sat up totally naked.
She saw Jon getting ready to leave.
Roxann sat up totally naked.
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#sex
#sleep
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Wings
My life hangs in your heart . It’s in your eyes blue lagoons that make me want to take off my clothes and take a dip because i am losing control . You have taken all my defences and found a way in and I don’t know how . I am teetering on the edge. Do I dive or do I turn around you see I am not sure . How do I know if you will catch me if I fall but I know the way you think along the lines of but what if you fly .That’s the difference between you and I . One flying in the sky and one trying to find her wings .
#crush
#happiness
#love
#lover
#romantic
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