Poems for and About Lovers by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about lovers by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
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#erotic
#lover
#passion #sensual
#passion #sensual
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All for One - Making Love

#LGBT
#lover
#polyamory
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
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well hung
your love
is
a noose
around
my neck
waiting
to be
pulled
taut
is
a noose
around
my neck
waiting
to be
pulled
taut
#sex
#lover
#seductive
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The Art of Moaning...
Oh, the moans, those bedroom refrains,
part opera, part way to manage the strains.
Is it ecstasy? Or just her clever ploy
to stroke your ego while she’s mildly annoyed?
You think her cries are applause for your skill,
but she might just be aiming to shorten the drill.
A symphony of "ahhs" to speed up the show,
or perhaps a melodic way to say, "Go baby Go!”
When the tempo shifts and you’re off the track,
a moan might say, “Slow down, Jack.”
Too rough? Too fast? Too much improv?
Her “ahem” is her way of saying,...
part opera, part way to manage the strains.
Is it ecstasy? Or just her clever ploy
to stroke your ego while she’s mildly annoyed?
You think her cries are applause for your skill,
but she might just be aiming to shorten the drill.
A symphony of "ahhs" to speed up the show,
or perhaps a melodic way to say, "Go baby Go!”
When the tempo shifts and you’re off the track,
a moan might say, “Slow down, Jack.”
Too rough? Too fast? Too much improv?
Her “ahem” is her way of saying,...
#love
#lover
#sex
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Oriental perfume
I wonder if anybody ever has felt that amazed,
As I did with you?
While making love yesterday.
Your youth,
Evaporating of your body,
As an oriental perfume.
Every detail as set up by an obsessed erotic producer,
Your boyish back,
Your almond eyes.
Caressing your hair
Felt the tenderest silk.
You felt deep, like an old friend.
Your words:
Sweet,
Like a beautiful familiar lullaby!
I am left wondering today,
Wishing would anybody ever desire me that deep,
As I did desire you?
I want to be a perfume! ...
As I did with you?
While making love yesterday.
Your youth,
Evaporating of your body,
As an oriental perfume.
Every detail as set up by an obsessed erotic producer,
Your boyish back,
Your almond eyes.
Caressing your hair
Felt the tenderest silk.
You felt deep, like an old friend.
Your words:
Sweet,
Like a beautiful familiar lullaby!
I am left wondering today,
Wishing would anybody ever desire me that deep,
As I did desire you?
I want to be a perfume! ...
#lover
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The Alphabet Game
As I approached you slowly
By the river you waited patiently
Casually watching me
Daring me to come closer
Ethereal light shone on you
Fair and elegant standing tall
Gracefully you waved at me
Handsome and attractive
In fact I was instantly smitten
Just watching you as you stood there
Kissed by the dappled sunrays
Lovingly caressed by the breeze
Magical feelings when we touched
Nothing could compare to the feeling
Only in dreams have I experienced
Peace and love that engulfed me
...
By the river you waited patiently
Casually watching me
Daring me to come closer
Ethereal light shone on you
Fair and elegant standing tall
Gracefully you waved at me
Handsome and attractive
In fact I was instantly smitten
Just watching you as you stood there
Kissed by the dappled sunrays
Lovingly caressed by the breeze
Magical feelings when we touched
Nothing could compare to the feeling
Only in dreams have I experienced
Peace and love that engulfed me
...
#lover
#nature
210 reads
14 Comments
Beach Glass
Smooth as beach glass, blue and green
Your notes washed over me like a dream
Beer-bottle brown eyes, a voice rich as cream,
You were smooth as beach glass, baby.
Stretched on the sand just getting cooked
Melting like cheese in a toaster oven
A voice shook my heart, and when I looked
There you sat, just strummin’ and hummin’
Our smiles connected, you reached out your hand
The heart on your sleeve swept me under your spell
Though you slipped through my fingers like fine, cool sand
That week was a secret I’ll never tell
...
Your notes washed over me like a dream
Beer-bottle brown eyes, a voice rich as cream,
You were smooth as beach glass, baby.
Stretched on the sand just getting cooked
Melting like cheese in a toaster oven
A voice shook my heart, and when I looked
There you sat, just strummin’ and hummin’
Our smiles connected, you reached out your hand
The heart on your sleeve swept me under your spell
Though you slipped through my fingers like fine, cool sand
That week was a secret I’ll never tell
...
#secrets
#beach
#lover #NaPoWriMo2022
#lover #NaPoWriMo2022
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Sold

#erotic
#lover
#ShortStory
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6 Comments
Putting It Off
Another lazy day
recuperating from another long work week
avoiding chores
to indulge in fantasy
sexual, of course
Wishing you'd drop by
to help take this edge off
(you know what I'm talking about, don't you?)
It could still be low key
but instead of a space heater and a blanket
I'd have you to keep me warm
We'd attempt to watch a movie
but it wouldn't take long
and my mouth would be on you and in you
and you would take my firmness in your hand
and do wonders to me
Clearly, craving becomes a...
recuperating from another long work week
avoiding chores
to indulge in fantasy
sexual, of course
Wishing you'd drop by
to help take this edge off
(you know what I'm talking about, don't you?)
It could still be low key
but instead of a space heater and a blanket
I'd have you to keep me warm
We'd attempt to watch a movie
but it wouldn't take long
and my mouth would be on you and in you
and you would take my firmness in your hand
and do wonders to me
Clearly, craving becomes a...
#lover
#lust
#sex
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A Dangerous Obsession
I memorise the address and shut the computer down, hurrying out of the office to my car.
Outside, dusk is settling over the area with a hint of damp and mugginess in the air. I drive quickly, nearly going through a red at a set of traffic lights. I continue on along the coastal road, tight chested.
I didn’t know what I was expecting when I looked for her name, but I wish I hadn’t. The different surname indicates she has married since we last saw each other.
That shouldn’t bother me. But it does.
Leave it alone, I tell myself as I approach the...
Outside, dusk is settling over the area with a hint of damp and mugginess in the air. I drive quickly, nearly going through a red at a set of traffic lights. I continue on along the coastal road, tight chested.
I didn’t know what I was expecting when I looked for her name, but I wish I hadn’t. The different surname indicates she has married since we last saw each other.
That shouldn’t bother me. But it does.
Leave it alone, I tell myself as I approach the...
#heartbroken
#lover
#mystery
547 reads
2 Comments
Making Love
It is nice that,
by design,
we do not have sex with our mouths,
so we can keep kissing while we do it.
It is divine that,
by design,
we do not have sex with our arms,
so we can keep embracing each other
while we do it.
by design,
we do not have sex with our mouths,
so we can keep kissing while we do it.
It is divine that,
by design,
we do not have sex with our arms,
so we can keep embracing each other
while we do it.
#love
#lover
585 reads
5 Comments
The night dee amethyst lit my poetic fire !!

#lust
#erotic
#lover
#sensual
#orgasm
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DU Poetry : Poems for and About Lovers by Top Critiquers