Poems for and About Lovers Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about lovers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
CoffeeMan_YQX
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 7:26pm
6th Jan 2025 7:26pm
Christmas Gift
#erotic
#lover
#orgasm
#passion
#sensual
117 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 1:58pm
4th Jan 2025 1:58pm
Who Surprised Who?
Andrew came to surprise Molly.
He caught her naked with roommate Peter.
A betrayed Andrew stormed out.
He caught her naked with roommate Peter.
A betrayed Andrew stormed out.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#sex
90 reads
0 Comments
Koulouri
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 3:38am
4th Jan 2025 3:38am
You Scare Me.
You are the scariest thing
in the world to me.
Not because you, yourself, are scary.
But because I am utterly terrified
at the thought of losing you.
I try to comfort myself with the thought
that if you are gone one day,
that I will be fine.
I'll pick up my feet
and I will keep walking along.
Yet every day,
I think it'd hurt a bit more
to lose you.
I get scared sometimes
that I'll do or say the wrong thing.
Cause the last thing I want to do
is hurt you.
...
in the world to me.
Not because you, yourself, are scary.
But because I am utterly terrified
at the thought of losing you.
I try to comfort myself with the thought
that if you are gone one day,
that I will be fine.
I'll pick up my feet
and I will keep walking along.
Yet every day,
I think it'd hurt a bit more
to lose you.
I get scared sometimes
that I'll do or say the wrong thing.
Cause the last thing I want to do
is hurt you.
...
#anxiety
#fear
#loneliness
#love
#lover
113 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 7:54pm
3rd Jan 2025 7:54pm
This Is What I Realized On The Beach
After spotting some
hot chick in a bikini,
I realized that
there truly is no fun here
without you sharing with me.
hot chick in a bikini,
I realized that
there truly is no fun here
without you sharing with me.
#beach
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
57 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 2:36am
3rd Jan 2025 2:36am
A Possible Ghostly Tease
John saw Denise standing naked.
"No! You're dead!" was what he said.
When he approached, she disappeared.
"No! You're dead!" was what he said.
When he approached, she disappeared.
#dark
#fiction
#ghosts
#lover
#sex
48 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 2:31am
2nd Jan 2025 2:31am
She's Wearing A Sheer Nightie
She's wearing a sheer nightie.
She's naked but I saw tan lines.
I feel like humping her.
She's naked but I saw tan lines.
I feel like humping her.
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#lover
#sex
141 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 9:55pm
31st Dec 2024 9:55pm
The Scarlet of Desire (Redux)
When night falls in shadows which deepen your eyes
Do they whisper of leather or lace
or
Do you long for my desires
For I esteem neither night or day one above the other
Mine the dream that passion lives
Not in the set place
The special setting
The contrived moment
That somewhere future day
Passion lives in this moment
The immediacy of now
Fierce
Urgent
Heedless of time or place
Fires burn to consume
Thirst seeks to be quenched
Hunger knows only the desire to be filled
So...
Do they whisper of leather or lace
or
Do you long for my desires
For I esteem neither night or day one above the other
Mine the dream that passion lives
Not in the set place
The special setting
The contrived moment
That somewhere future day
Passion lives in this moment
The immediacy of now
Fierce
Urgent
Heedless of time or place
Fires burn to consume
Thirst seeks to be quenched
Hunger knows only the desire to be filled
So...
#lover
#lust
#passion
176 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 2:39am
31st Dec 2024 2:39am
She Just Can't Be Truthful
She claimed to be sick.
Actually, she's being humped by some guy.
She just can't be truthful.
Actually, she's being humped by some guy.
She just can't be truthful.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#sex
87 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 11:40pm
28th Dec 2024 11:40pm
My kitchen sink
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#sexy
190 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 8:01pm
28th Dec 2024 8:01pm
Silence Beckons Me
I can't believe your lying there
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
#death
#IMissYou
#loneliness
#lover
#silence
101 reads
12 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 7:29pm
28th Dec 2024 7:29pm
That Made Robert Storm Out
Robert had finally found Jane.
She was naked and humping with Jim.
That made Robert storm out.
She was naked and humping with Jim.
That made Robert storm out.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#sex
64 reads
0 Comments
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