Poems About Loneliness Seeking Honest Critique
#loneliness
Poems about loneliness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 4:12pm
21st Mar 2025 4:12pm
Me
Do you ever get tired,
Of being admired?
You only want one.
Instead you get a ton.
Thanks for the friends.
Can't wait to ditch them.
They call themselves,
The government.
I just wanted one.
Not everything,
Under the sun.
Their jobs are the pun.
In the web that I've spun.
Do you ever get tired,
Of being admired?
Just trying to have fun,
Not call you, "hun"
Of being admired?
You only want one.
Instead you get a ton.
Thanks for the friends.
Can't wait to ditch them.
They call themselves,
The government.
I just wanted one.
Not everything,
Under the sun.
Their jobs are the pun.
In the web that I've spun.
Do you ever get tired,
Of being admired?
Just trying to have fun,
Not call you, "hun"
#depression
#loneliness
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
108 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 8:27pm
19th Mar 2025 8:27pm
A Bunch of Brady's
Am I Greg, Peter, Bobby, Marsha, Jan or Cindy?
Maybe I'm Carol, Mike or Alice.
They all seem friendly, they all have demons.
I heard that Greg was fucking Marsha & Carol.
Maybe.
I know I was.
I met Bobby numerous times at the strip club,
Never figured he was such a horn ball.
That's ok, so am I.
I'd rather hangout and talk to Jan,
She's my kind of people.
A little flaky and delusional.
But who cares, so am I.
I'm tired of telling Mike that I'm not gay
He means well but I'm not interested.
Cindy & Peter need to...
Maybe I'm Carol, Mike or Alice.
They all seem friendly, they all have demons.
I heard that Greg was fucking Marsha & Carol.
Maybe.
I know I was.
I met Bobby numerous times at the strip club,
Never figured he was such a horn ball.
That's ok, so am I.
I'd rather hangout and talk to Jan,
She's my kind of people.
A little flaky and delusional.
But who cares, so am I.
I'm tired of telling Mike that I'm not gay
He means well but I'm not interested.
Cindy & Peter need to...
#dreams
#identity
#loneliness
#myself
#PopCulture
114 reads
16 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 3:28pm
19th Mar 2025 3:28pm
The paths unclear
Heckled by emotions
Making a mind so jaded
The memories are there
But the colours are faded
Happiness and health
Trust and fear
The windows all misty
The paths unlclear
Making a mind so jaded
The memories are there
But the colours are faded
Happiness and health
Trust and fear
The windows all misty
The paths unlclear
#bittersweet
#confusion
#despair
#loneliness
#sadness
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Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 11:27pm
17th Mar 2025 11:27pm
The March Continues...Time Lonely Proceeds
An epilogue ending of a beginning. For another end is wide open as hearing the reverberate echo of drums...A pattern rudiment of undeveloped starts. This is the world that we know which continually spins on course. Harsh are the uncompromising laws of time.
Depth of slumber, darken trails feet obey & follow. A sleepwalk harrowing trance of dire rules, guides one easily towards the threshold of the night. Fear of opening that drawer...Fear of opening that door...Fear of being here...
Depth of slumber, darken trails feet obey & follow. A sleepwalk harrowing trance of dire rules, guides one easily towards the threshold of the night. Fear of opening that drawer...Fear of opening that door...Fear of being here...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#loneliness
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 10:56am
17th Mar 2025 10:56am
Warmth
I don't know what's about the feeling.
Of warmth that comforts us and gets us reeling.
Maybe it's the way it reminds you of a friend's warm hug.
Or your own child,gently catching your attention by tugging on your shirt.
The warmth of sunshine rays.
On hot summer beach days.
The dear childhood days when you used to play.
And the times you would create.
The memories you hold onto.
And the upcoming of fate.
The warm sensation warmth does create.
Sometimes it can soothe the soul.
Or chase away any negative emotion...
Of warmth that comforts us and gets us reeling.
Maybe it's the way it reminds you of a friend's warm hug.
Or your own child,gently catching your attention by tugging on your shirt.
The warmth of sunshine rays.
On hot summer beach days.
The dear childhood days when you used to play.
And the times you would create.
The memories you hold onto.
And the upcoming of fate.
The warm sensation warmth does create.
Sometimes it can soothe the soul.
Or chase away any negative emotion...
#hope
#loneliness
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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Wordsmith
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 6:53pm
16th Mar 2025 6:53pm
Teach Me How to Love
Teach me how to love; I'm lost in the motion
Tossed in the ocean; frost-bit devotion
Heart’s been a vault; locked with corrosion
Now I’m just numb; lost the emotion
Teach me the way; 'cause I stray from the meaning
Played with the demons; bathed in the bleeding
Love was a game; now it’s pain that I’m feeding
Shadows embrace every face that I’m seeing
Teach me the touch that don’t crumble to nothing
Trust isn’t rushing; lust isn’t loving
Tired of running; my soul is combusting
Built out of scars and the weight of destruction ...
Tossed in the ocean; frost-bit devotion
Heart’s been a vault; locked with corrosion
Now I’m just numb; lost the emotion
Teach me the way; 'cause I stray from the meaning
Played with the demons; bathed in the bleeding
Love was a game; now it’s pain that I’m feeding
Shadows embrace every face that I’m seeing
Teach me the touch that don’t crumble to nothing
Trust isn’t rushing; lust isn’t loving
Tired of running; my soul is combusting
Built out of scars and the weight of destruction ...
#emotional
#loneliness
#love #relationships
#love #relationships
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 11:59am
16th Mar 2025 11:59am
Internal Incarceration
I hold myself in disdain
I don't give a fuck
I've got nothing to hide
No one understands
A part of me has died
Utopia rejected on Earth that's hell
My mind is lonely, no different from a cell
My body is sick, which I can't leave behind
What will it take to medicate the mind
Exit the womb to a tomb
Can't adjust
Alone in my room
Depend on my departed friend
Not remembering
How long has it been
If there's one thing I've learned
Comfort cannot be found
Nowhere to grow
Nobody's fault but mine ...
I don't give a fuck
I've got nothing to hide
No one understands
A part of me has died
Utopia rejected on Earth that's hell
My mind is lonely, no different from a cell
My body is sick, which I can't leave behind
What will it take to medicate the mind
Exit the womb to a tomb
Can't adjust
Alone in my room
Depend on my departed friend
Not remembering
How long has it been
If there's one thing I've learned
Comfort cannot be found
Nowhere to grow
Nobody's fault but mine ...
#loneliness
#motivational
#rhyming
#sadness
#TruthOfLife
80 reads
12 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
15th Mar 2025 8:02am
15th Mar 2025 8:02am
Waysiders
If you don't mind I'll stop here, you've still far to go.
Little more than something to destroy, for you to grow.
It won't matter, some here don't get peace.
Afforded painful memories of the gifts they must release.
It's where they stay, they're not here to belong.
Merely breaths exhaled singing someone elses song.
Not worth pity, they're here to leave behind.
You don't miss the shadows when the light you seek is shined.
Keep going, don't waste the love you've kept reserved.
Though I truly love you, yours in return is undeserved.
Little more than something to destroy, for you to grow.
It won't matter, some here don't get peace.
Afforded painful memories of the gifts they must release.
It's where they stay, they're not here to belong.
Merely breaths exhaled singing someone elses song.
Not worth pity, they're here to leave behind.
You don't miss the shadows when the light you seek is shined.
Keep going, don't waste the love you've kept reserved.
Though I truly love you, yours in return is undeserved.
#depression
#IMissYou
#loneliness #love
#loneliness #love
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thinlane
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 7:40pm
14th Mar 2025 7:40pm
Dying Alone
I've had a lot of friends in my life
But somehow I've lost them all
I've pissed it all away
Made people leave even while I loved them
Forced them to go with my behaviour
Or my words
Some things take an entire lifetime to finally regret
Now
In my dying days
When I should have all my friends around me
To laugh about all the old times
I'm alone
And simply weep for my own actions
And words
Living alone may be lonely
But just try dying that way
It'll break your fucking heart
But somehow I've lost them all
I've pissed it all away
Made people leave even while I loved them
Forced them to go with my behaviour
Or my words
Some things take an entire lifetime to finally regret
Now
In my dying days
When I should have all my friends around me
To laugh about all the old times
I'm alone
And simply weep for my own actions
And words
Living alone may be lonely
But just try dying that way
It'll break your fucking heart
#death
#emptiness
#loneliness
85 reads
1 Comment
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
11th Mar 2025 7:06pm
11th Mar 2025 7:06pm
Vile vial
It's an elixer, infused with a curse.
Delivered from the void.
To engulf the universe.
It wants blood, not so much at first.
As ritial demanded.
Dutifully aspersed.
Worthy cost, incant another verse.
For ever eager evoke.
In banishment of worse.
Insober dose, slake overflowing thirst.
Excess is not enough.
Course toxic crave to burst.
Elsewhere, current drift cannot reverse.
Dissolve into ethereal.
Then feel the soul disperse.
Delivered from the void.
To engulf the universe.
It wants blood, not so much at first.
As ritial demanded.
Dutifully aspersed.
Worthy cost, incant another verse.
For ever eager evoke.
In banishment of worse.
Insober dose, slake overflowing thirst.
Excess is not enough.
Course toxic crave to burst.
Elsewhere, current drift cannot reverse.
Dissolve into ethereal.
Then feel the soul disperse.
#depression
#drugs
#loneliness
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PoetSpeak
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 7:26pm
9th Mar 2025 7:26pm
The Lonliness
The loneliness
It grabs at my heart
The loneliness
An affair from the start
The loneliness
You pulled me in
The loneliness
I'm your broken sin
The loneliness
I hope and pray
The loneliness
You made me pay
Chorus
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
Never knew how to be strong
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
I'm no hero till I'm gone
You took me in
You gave me a pen
You showed me your bed
You gave me head
You fed me your food ...
It grabs at my heart
The loneliness
An affair from the start
The loneliness
You pulled me in
The loneliness
I'm your broken sin
The loneliness
I hope and pray
The loneliness
You made me pay
Chorus
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
Never knew how to be strong
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
I'm no hero till I'm gone
You took me in
You gave me a pen
You showed me your bed
You gave me head
You fed me your food ...
#loneliness
#lyrics
#WritingPoetry
212 reads
33 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 9:23am
9th Mar 2025 9:23am
What Am I Waiting For?
Waiting for someone,
Who doesn't talk.
Hiding behind,
Writer's block.
I'll brew you up,
Like chicken stock.
I'll be waiting for you;
Watching the clock.
If clocks could watch,
And watches can clock....
I'd add them to my,
Wifi Hotspot.
Open to the public.
I kid you not.
Unfamiliar faces,
And connecting the dots.
I know you well,
But I don't know your thoughts.
Just expressions of strangers,
While I'm on the clock.
You hide in my mind,
As I carefully...
Who doesn't talk.
Hiding behind,
Writer's block.
I'll brew you up,
Like chicken stock.
I'll be waiting for you;
Watching the clock.
If clocks could watch,
And watches can clock....
I'd add them to my,
Wifi Hotspot.
Open to the public.
I kid you not.
Unfamiliar faces,
And connecting the dots.
I know you well,
But I don't know your thoughts.
Just expressions of strangers,
While I'm on the clock.
You hide in my mind,
As I carefully...
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#loneliness
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4 Comments
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