Inspirational Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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inspirational seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Glaxian
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:13am
Yesterday 4:13am
Dance (extended cut)
Dance (extended mix)
And the dancers dance
To the music, moving together.
To you alone do I pledge
My life, my love, my sacred honor.
And the dancers dance
Clear the floor for the Bride and Groom.
And the dancers dance
This is your song,
Your choice, your partner.
Alone together (as family and friends)
Give you your moment
Then move to join in.
And the dancers dance
The musicians play to the tempo of life,
Whether the music is soothing to sweep you along
Or bone jarring chaos that rocks...
And the dancers dance
To the music, moving together.
To you alone do I pledge
My life, my love, my sacred honor.
And the dancers dance
Clear the floor for the Bride and Groom.
And the dancers dance
This is your song,
Your choice, your partner.
Alone together (as family and friends)
Give you your moment
Then move to join in.
And the dancers dance
The musicians play to the tempo of life,
Whether the music is soothing to sweep you along
Or bone jarring chaos that rocks...
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#respect
#romantic
24 reads
0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
She Walks In Silence
She walks in silence, like a lapping wave
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
#courage
#inspirational
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
52 reads
8 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
At The Crossroads Of Life
Waiting For a New Day
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#TimeHeals
60 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 8:11am
22nd Jan 2025 8:11am
Walls
Take your
Judgement
Let it rest
My heart
On sleeve
Represents
Drink my flaws
Here right now
I'll break
These walls
Someway
Somehow
Judgement
Let it rest
My heart
On sleeve
Represents
Drink my flaws
Here right now
I'll break
These walls
Someway
Somehow
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
75 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 7:19pm
21st Jan 2025 7:19pm
I sin to live
Burn the little panties off of cuties with a flaming stick
Maturity ain't for me, Jesus wants you to suck his dick
Pick them up for the cinema and I guarantee they'll give you some head
If not, that's ok, cause your mom will sodomize you in her king size bed
I sin to live
I sin to live
I sin to live
Friday afternoons I go through people's mail
Usually old mother fuckers who are old & frail
Ripping people off is a talent that I can't give up
I'll piss in your coffee, taste good right, you stupid fuck
I sin to live ...
Maturity ain't for me, Jesus wants you to suck his dick
Pick them up for the cinema and I guarantee they'll give you some head
If not, that's ok, cause your mom will sodomize you in her king size bed
I sin to live
I sin to live
I sin to live
Friday afternoons I go through people's mail
Usually old mother fuckers who are old & frail
Ripping people off is a talent that I can't give up
I'll piss in your coffee, taste good right, you stupid fuck
I sin to live ...
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#morality
#peace
56 reads
7 Comments
Francineuwera
Francine75
Francine75
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 12:23pm
20th Jan 2025 12:23pm
Call me by my names
There is a time when waking up in the morning felt like a must,
forgetting myself while pleasing everyone was like a game I used to enjoy,
loving the family i found myself in and listening to the songs i like the most
was the best feeling ever.
I didn't realize neither the courage it takes to become mature at an early stage
Nor the fact that priorities change overtime.
maybe I should have read it in books but am not a library person,
if I were to ask I could have asked my grandpa whom I didn’t get chance to meet.
It takes time to leave your...
forgetting myself while pleasing everyone was like a game I used to enjoy,
loving the family i found myself in and listening to the songs i like the most
was the best feeling ever.
I didn't realize neither the courage it takes to become mature at an early stage
Nor the fact that priorities change overtime.
maybe I should have read it in books but am not a library person,
if I were to ask I could have asked my grandpa whom I didn’t get chance to meet.
It takes time to leave your...
#emptiness
#inspirational
#motivational
24 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:54am
19th Jan 2025 10:54am
Cursed Collar
There was a girl long ago.
Who had a cursed collar.
The collar slowly grew tighter.
And time quickly flew.
She hoped someday,it may fall off.
That it'll grow looser and fall.
She hopes she would grow tall.
Without the feeling the collar's toll.
As time slowly passed.
And she grew up big fast.
The collar stayed the same.
The collar got tighter with time.
And she began to forget her name.
She hoped for someone ,something.
To take it off,away.
In another world,she daydreamed.
And began...
Who had a cursed collar.
The collar slowly grew tighter.
And time quickly flew.
She hoped someday,it may fall off.
That it'll grow looser and fall.
She hopes she would grow tall.
Without the feeling the collar's toll.
As time slowly passed.
And she grew up big fast.
The collar stayed the same.
The collar got tighter with time.
And she began to forget her name.
She hoped for someone ,something.
To take it off,away.
In another world,she daydreamed.
And began...
#dark
#depression
#hope
#inspirational
#uplifting
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0 Comments
Inside_Roare
Ivo
Ivo
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 9:19pm
17th Jan 2025 9:19pm
Little Gem
INSIDE ROARE
Little Gem
When you feel happy,
when your heart is a sheet.
Who holds a little gem,
who doesn't want to be alone anymore.
Who would like to hear "only you" again
Who was allowed to kiss your lips,
I thought I couldn't do it.
Your blue eyes like the sky
shine through my heart.
I would like to look into them forever,
Maybe I will find the answer why I don't want to.
A sudden meeting, just the touch of fingers.
I felt it was you.
I would like to scream into the darkness. ...
Little Gem
When you feel happy,
when your heart is a sheet.
Who holds a little gem,
who doesn't want to be alone anymore.
Who would like to hear "only you" again
Who was allowed to kiss your lips,
I thought I couldn't do it.
Your blue eyes like the sky
shine through my heart.
I would like to look into them forever,
Maybe I will find the answer why I don't want to.
A sudden meeting, just the touch of fingers.
I felt it was you.
I would like to scream into the darkness. ...
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
92 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 10:55am
16th Jan 2025 10:55am
Sunday Morning
It was a typical Sunday morning.
With the sunset going down,sunshine forming.
A Sunday morning is never boring with you.
So have some tea with me,too.
Let me pour you some mint,honey tea.
And let the negative emotions flee.
As the moon goes down,sun comes up.
And the sun shines,staying put.
Maybe some music in the background.
Like lofi, electric beats.
A cup of tea,a good book.
Under the warm,cozy sheets.
It was a Sunday morning for me.
And everyone let me be.
I woke up from peaceful slumber.
...
With the sunset going down,sunshine forming.
A Sunday morning is never boring with you.
So have some tea with me,too.
Let me pour you some mint,honey tea.
And let the negative emotions flee.
As the moon goes down,sun comes up.
And the sun shines,staying put.
Maybe some music in the background.
Like lofi, electric beats.
A cup of tea,a good book.
Under the warm,cozy sheets.
It was a Sunday morning for me.
And everyone let me be.
I woke up from peaceful slumber.
...
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#uplifting
41 reads
0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 5:19pm
13th Jan 2025 5:19pm
A Best Seed of Love
My muse is here, seeds in my heart abyss
invokes a soul to wake and open up
a solid earth shall treasure such a bliss
and oceans are spared for me to grow up.
A best seed of Love, a soul, ever to grace
reaching my soil, digging up my gardens
the scent of divine, the mystery of space
enlightens my spirit and my Self heartens.
A flame of Life meant to glow and brighten
the darkest of dark and every sealed whole
the core of awareness, to touch and heighten
lit paths to walk and ascend, one is my dole.
Intense powers...
invokes a soul to wake and open up
a solid earth shall treasure such a bliss
and oceans are spared for me to grow up.
A best seed of Love, a soul, ever to grace
reaching my soil, digging up my gardens
the scent of divine, the mystery of space
enlightens my spirit and my Self heartens.
A flame of Life meant to glow and brighten
the darkest of dark and every sealed whole
the core of awareness, to touch and heighten
lit paths to walk and ascend, one is my dole.
Intense powers...
#admiration
#gratitude
#inspirational
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
59 reads
2 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 10:43pm
12th Jan 2025 10:43pm
Yin & Yang
It’s yin and yang,
the dance of light and dark,
each needing the other
to keep life balanced.
We tug at the threads of blame,
claiming truth on either side,
but in reality—
neither of us is always right
nor always wrong.
We move through life,
clutching at self-preservation,
yet sleepwalking in the shadow of our own minds,
unaware of the darkness we fear.
If you fear your shadows,
know this—
you haven’t touched divinity yet,
there’s still more of you to...
the dance of light and dark,
each needing the other
to keep life balanced.
We tug at the threads of blame,
claiming truth on either side,
but in reality—
neither of us is always right
nor always wrong.
We move through life,
clutching at self-preservation,
yet sleepwalking in the shadow of our own minds,
unaware of the darkness we fear.
If you fear your shadows,
know this—
you haven’t touched divinity yet,
there’s still more of you to...
#inspirational
#learning
#meditation
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
66 reads
1 Comment
msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 5:48pm
12th Jan 2025 5:48pm
Weeping Skies
Please pray for Los Angeles!!!
The skies are so gray,
with such a dark gloom,
I can smell the rain,
I hope it comes very soon.
The air is so windy,
The Clouds are set,
Hoping Raindrops fall,
Thus far, nothing yet.
The gray Skies are ready,
Perception predicts Rain,
Of All of the burning Forrest,
I pray this in Jesus Name.
Los Angeles is now Burning,
As an arsonist runs free,
Oh, Please stop these fires,
I beg this and I plea.
As the burning slows down,
It's a sad...
The skies are so gray,
with such a dark gloom,
I can smell the rain,
I hope it comes very soon.
The air is so windy,
The Clouds are set,
Hoping Raindrops fall,
Thus far, nothing yet.
The gray Skies are ready,
Perception predicts Rain,
Of All of the burning Forrest,
I pray this in Jesus Name.
Los Angeles is now Burning,
As an arsonist runs free,
Oh, Please stop these fires,
I beg this and I plea.
As the burning slows down,
It's a sad...
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
42 reads
1 Comment
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