Poems About Ignorance Seeking Honest Critique
#ignorance
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 7:37am
12th Feb 2025 7:37am
Last Stand in Honky Land: 1945 style
No kraut could make a baby fast enough
once the world caught on to their sick plan
where they thought their "master race" was so tough
that they'd win all of the fights they began...
and now, eighty years on, their curse is back,
where paleface thinks they own the world
and will not share it with the brown and black
or have their blood be by nature swirled
and by that spin a worthy future make
where turpitude no longer serves to pay,
for sabotage, or any news that's fake,
just for the worst of us to have their way...
the...
once the world caught on to their sick plan
where they thought their "master race" was so tough
that they'd win all of the fights they began...
and now, eighty years on, their curse is back,
where paleface thinks they own the world
and will not share it with the brown and black
or have their blood be by nature swirled
and by that spin a worthy future make
where turpitude no longer serves to pay,
for sabotage, or any news that's fake,
just for the worst of us to have their way...
the...
#Christian
#deception
#ignorance
#politics
#racism
40 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 2:17am
8th Feb 2025 2:17am
Saw Robert Staring At Her Dress
Barbara went to the elevator.
She saw Robert staring at her dress.
Then, she nudged his belly.
That made him get the message quick.
After that, Barbara went to Valerie's party.
She saw Robert staring at her dress.
Then, she nudged his belly.
That made him get the message quick.
After that, Barbara went to Valerie's party.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#ignorance
#temptation
58 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:46pm
7th Feb 2025 1:46pm
Negativity of some people's
In this life we all will be face with the deepness of the negativity, that somehow will create an environment that is unsafe and unfair, to the quality of your life. But yet we must have a real understand, were does that negativity comes from that seems to change our lives. For example could it come from those around us, or could it come from those things that we just don't like to come into our lives, just destructing our own way of thinking about life. For let's take it farther than that in high sight of trying, desperately to avoid the drama and nonsense that it will make your attitude,...
#emotional
#ignorance
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
60 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 2:59pm
31st Jan 2025 2:59pm
She Was Teasing My Friend
She was teasing my friend.
He walked over and grabbed her rump.
She kicked his nuts hard.
He walked over and grabbed her rump.
She kicked his nuts hard.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#ignorance
#temptation
66 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 11:12pm
28th Jan 2025 11:12pm
Deepseek
Buddy fucker MAGA rules
but not for very long
cuz A.I. went to Chinese schools
to sing a public song.
Now buddy fucker Wall Street bros
can't scoop the public dough,
since tech lords took a techno doze
as Cathay stole the show.
But maybe Duolingo stock
is where we should invest,
as we learn how the Chinese talk
before we take the test...
that gets more workers to pitch in
where paychecks will be cashed,
in Hanyu and old Mandarin...
as Hegseth just gets smashed.
but not for very long
cuz A.I. went to Chinese schools
to sing a public song.
Now buddy fucker Wall Street bros
can't scoop the public dough,
since tech lords took a techno doze
as Cathay stole the show.
But maybe Duolingo stock
is where we should invest,
as we learn how the Chinese talk
before we take the test...
that gets more workers to pitch in
where paychecks will be cashed,
in Hanyu and old Mandarin...
as Hegseth just gets smashed.
#deception
#ignorance
96 reads
10 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 11:37am
25th Jan 2025 11:37am
Honest. I Really Didn't Know Who He Was.
Jill's miracle to
find the one man
to lose her virginity
changed into sheer
embarrassment for
she chose her dad.
find the one man
to lose her virginity
changed into sheer
embarrassment for
she chose her dad.
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#ignorance
#sex
131 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 10:04pm
23rd Jan 2025 10:04pm
Bury you 5 ft under tonight
You can try and shout for change
Higher officials suck
Day to day life drains you dry
Nobody gives two fucks!
Professional Castigation
A disbelieving eye
Drug Free America won’t occur
Supply & demand until you die
People here are dazed
Epidemic of handling life
Drunk to remember tomorrow
Buried five feet under tonight
Higher officials suck
Day to day life drains you dry
Nobody gives two fucks!
Professional Castigation
A disbelieving eye
Drug Free America won’t occur
Supply & demand until you die
People here are dazed
Epidemic of handling life
Drunk to remember tomorrow
Buried five feet under tonight
#addiction
#alcohol
#corruption
#drugs
#ignorance
78 reads
8 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 11:38pm
22nd Jan 2025 11:38pm
authoritarianism, ad infinitum
nothing to do with us,
although we’ve got
our own
right wing problem
is that so many people seem to
like ‘em
although we’ve got
our own
right wing problem
is that so many people seem to
like ‘em
#ignorance
#politics
#racism
54 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 2:19pm
21st Jan 2025 2:19pm
Orange Felon
Orange Felon
As the story goes
It was 4 years ago
An orange felon with a pen
Wiped away all their sins
Cops were beaten down
With flagpoles bear spray and batons
Now those criminals go free
Where is the justice for the we
The police endorsed an orange felon
I don’t hear any outrage from them
I guess it’s ok if your on the orange side
If your not you must abide by the guide
Not even one day in the White House
As Elon gives a Roman salute not once but twice
Proud boys and...
As the story goes
It was 4 years ago
An orange felon with a pen
Wiped away all their sins
Cops were beaten down
With flagpoles bear spray and batons
Now those criminals go free
Where is the justice for the we
The police endorsed an orange felon
I don’t hear any outrage from them
I guess it’s ok if your on the orange side
If your not you must abide by the guide
Not even one day in the White House
As Elon gives a Roman salute not once but twice
Proud boys and...
#anger
#ignorance
#inequality
#shame
#violence
52 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 6:45pm
11th Jan 2025 6:45pm
Wow
Text me a year later
When you finally realize,
I know everything.
When you finally realize,
I know everything.
#ignorance
68 reads
11 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 3:23pm
11th Jan 2025 3:23pm
I'm Sorry. But I'm Really Not Okay With It.
At first, Jennifer
was okay with getting nude
and into it with Lisa.
She was also with
getting into a threesome
with Lisa's lover Eric.
But that was before
she saw Eric which made poor
Jennifer have change of heart.
was okay with getting nude
and into it with Lisa.
She was also with
getting into a threesome
with Lisa's lover Eric.
But that was before
she saw Eric which made poor
Jennifer have change of heart.
#fiction
#friendship
#ignorance
#LGBT
#sex
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0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:20pm
7th Jan 2025 11:20pm
what’s the bloody difference ..
everyone has opinions
they couldn’t possibly believe if they
thought about them;
but then, everyone,
everyone, everyone of us is ‘them’,
to somebody else ..
they couldn’t possibly believe if they
thought about them;
but then, everyone,
everyone, everyone of us is ‘them’,
to somebody else ..
#ignorance
53 reads
8 Comments
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