Poems About Home Seeking Honest Critique
#home
Jack Tha Lad In Jack Land
Gino went and played pool every Friday night.
With his friend Stevie G, they'd go and have some pints.
The stress from his Mrs at home was wearing on his brain,
So he always wanted to cut it loose until he went insane
One day, when he was off his bonce, he drank shots at the bar.
He pulled this little, fine ting, but he never took it far.
He would meet her every other day, and Emma was her name.
Till Poppy spotted them out one day and chased her down the lane.
Gino and Emma used to hook up, but only kiss...
With his friend Stevie G, they'd go and have some pints.
The stress from his Mrs at home was wearing on his brain,
So he always wanted to cut it loose until he went insane
One day, when he was off his bonce, he drank shots at the bar.
He pulled this little, fine ting, but he never took it far.
He would meet her every other day, and Emma was her name.
Till Poppy spotted them out one day and chased her down the lane.
Gino and Emma used to hook up, but only kiss...
#Britain
#city
#earth
#healing
#home
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This Is Where Reality Kicks In
Dad
had gone
over to
Judy's place in
order to drive her
back home for her birthday
celebration. But when he
got there, his eyes had grown wide at
the sight of his baby girl naked
and being humped by some guy in bed.
had gone
over to
Judy's place in
order to drive her
back home for her birthday
celebration. But when he
got there, his eyes had grown wide at
the sight of his baby girl naked
and being humped by some guy in bed.
#birthday
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#sex
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My Mom's Not Home... But Would I Do?
John came to massage Rene.
But instead, he found her daughter Heather.
She was naked and waiting.
But instead, he found her daughter Heather.
She was naked and waiting.
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#mother
#sex
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The Eternal City
In days long past, when marble gleamed
And eagles soared where empires dreamed
There stood a city, carved in stone
That world has forever known
Her streets were paved with conquerors' tread
Her hills bore kings, her waters bled
In every arch and vaulted dome
The spirit soared, the heart of Rome
But what is Rome to one whose soul
Was born in times beyond her scroll?
To whom no Senate's echo calls
No legion marches through her halls
Yet still, beneath the modern skies
A Roman heart in silence cries ...
And eagles soared where empires dreamed
There stood a city, carved in stone
That world has forever known
Her streets were paved with conquerors' tread
Her hills bore kings, her waters bled
In every arch and vaulted dome
The spirit soared, the heart of Rome
But what is Rome to one whose soul
Was born in times beyond her scroll?
To whom no Senate's echo calls
No legion marches through her halls
Yet still, beneath the modern skies
A Roman heart in silence cries ...
#admiration
#city
#epic
#home
#rhyming
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Too Much Too Handle
Family are here
No escaping the drama
Actually, I'll leave
No escaping the drama
Actually, I'll leave
#anxiety
#family
#home #senryu
#home #senryu
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If You Want My Opinion
Look, Penelope. If you want my
opinion, I would say moving
yourself to the city of
Los Angeles is more
better than staying
here and letting
Dad give you
only
grief.
opinion, I would say moving
yourself to the city of
Los Angeles is more
better than staying
here and letting
Dad give you
only
grief.
#city
#dialogue
#father
#fiction
#home
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Wish I Could Stay In This Old House
I wish I could stay
in this old house...
but I can't because
there are too many
memories in here.
in this old house...
but I can't because
there are too many
memories in here.
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#home
#vulnerability
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Zendaya Stared At A Mirror
Zendaya stared at a mirror.
After she got naked, Orion came in.
She lets him probe her.
After she got naked, Orion came in.
She lets him probe her.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#mirror
#sex
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I hate this bird
Last summer I was in my pool when a rooster arrived
Two doors down he would crow with pride
In my town, it's illegal to own
Constantly crowing, I picked up the phone
Authorities came, the owner was fined
Situation continued, nothing rectified
Endless noise throughout the year
How much more will I need to hear?
Every morning he woke me up around five
One day I paid a visit, shot him, and he died
Two doors down he would crow with pride
In my town, it's illegal to own
Constantly crowing, I picked up the phone
Authorities came, the owner was fined
Situation continued, nothing rectified
Endless noise throughout the year
How much more will I need to hear?
Every morning he woke me up around five
One day I paid a visit, shot him, and he died
#birds
#frustration
#home
#LifeChangingMoment
#summer
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If I Can't Have Him, No One Can!
Genevieve saw Phoebe riding Xander.
She shot them dead with a gun.
Then, she called the police.
She shot them dead with a gun.
Then, she called the police.
#death
#fiction
#home
#lover
#sex
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Go Ahead, Master. Do It To Me Now.
While
the rest
of the gang
kept on having
fun at the pool, Josh
went down to the basement
and saw Karen naked and
strapped to some wooden thing. After
he looked around and saw no one else,
Josh stripped and began humping with Karen.
the rest
of the gang
kept on having
fun at the pool, Josh
went down to the basement
and saw Karen naked and
strapped to some wooden thing. After
he looked around and saw no one else,
Josh stripped and began humping with Karen.
#BDSM
#fiction
#home
#sex
#summer
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No Longer In Todd's Vocabulary
Indecent
is no longer in Todd's
vocabulary when Sabrina's
enticing perfume's like an aphrodisiac
strong enough to make him strip down and
get it on with his next
door neighbor.
is no longer in Todd's
vocabulary when Sabrina's
enticing perfume's like an aphrodisiac
strong enough to make him strip down and
get it on with his next
door neighbor.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#lover
#sex
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