Poems About Gratitude Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about gratitude seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 5:19pm
13th Jan 2025 5:19pm
A Best Seed of Love
My muse is here, seeds in my heart abyss
invokes a soul to wake and open up
a solid earth shall treasure such a bliss
and oceans are spared for me to grow up.
A best seed of Love, a soul, ever to grace
reaching my soil, digging up my gardens
the scent of divine, the mystery of space
enlightens my spirit and my Self heartens.
A flame of Life meant to glow and brighten
the darkest of dark and every sealed whole
the core of awareness, to touch and heighten
lit paths to walk and ascend, one is my dole.
Intense powers...
invokes a soul to wake and open up
a solid earth shall treasure such a bliss
and oceans are spared for me to grow up.
A best seed of Love, a soul, ever to grace
reaching my soil, digging up my gardens
the scent of divine, the mystery of space
enlightens my spirit and my Self heartens.
A flame of Life meant to glow and brighten
the darkest of dark and every sealed whole
the core of awareness, to touch and heighten
lit paths to walk and ascend, one is my dole.
Intense powers...
#admiration
#gratitude
#inspirational
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
43 reads
2 Comments
doriann_barrere
Dorian
Dorian
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:45am
12th Jan 2025 2:45am
Midnite's Scent
O Marri’onne, ethereal wraith,
whose name drifts soft upon my brine-kissed lips,
you linger yet in the twilight of my being,
an echo folded into the shroud of the waves.
I, Kai of the abyssal depths, born of the sea’s mournful hymn,
sing now to you, my love, my ruin,
to the memory that binds me still,
to the scent of midnight where you once walked the shores.
Beneath the obsidian dome of a moonless sky,
I dwell, a shade tethered to salt-stung tides.
The sea, my cradle, my captor, whispers your name,
a dirge woven in threads of foam...
whose name drifts soft upon my brine-kissed lips,
you linger yet in the twilight of my being,
an echo folded into the shroud of the waves.
I, Kai of the abyssal depths, born of the sea’s mournful hymn,
sing now to you, my love, my ruin,
to the memory that binds me still,
to the scent of midnight where you once walked the shores.
Beneath the obsidian dome of a moonless sky,
I dwell, a shade tethered to salt-stung tides.
The sea, my cradle, my captor, whispers your name,
a dirge woven in threads of foam...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#kindness
#love
60 reads
1 Comment
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 2:43am
11th Jan 2025 2:43am
Third Eye
Closing my eyes so I can feel your presence
Unseeing…
So I can focus on your inner beauty
Removing the distraction of your
Outer excellence
Is
Allowing me to
Exist in your existence
My heart sees
What my eyes won’t allow me to see beyond
I need to appreciate your beauty
In all forms
Not just physically
I
Struggle to disassociate
Love from Lust
Passion from Poetry
Desire from Desirable
If I was blind
I could read your...
Unseeing…
So I can focus on your inner beauty
Removing the distraction of your
Outer excellence
Is
Allowing me to
Exist in your existence
My heart sees
What my eyes won’t allow me to see beyond
I need to appreciate your beauty
In all forms
Not just physically
I
Struggle to disassociate
Love from Lust
Passion from Poetry
Desire from Desirable
If I was blind
I could read your...
#admiration
#gratitude
#honesty
#love
#respect
117 reads
4 Comments
Dan_ONeill
Dan ONeill
Dan ONeill
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 1:01pm
10th Jan 2025 1:01pm
Now
You have a memory to show you who you owe,
Imagination builds the road to follow,
Senses gist you what you think you know,
Drizzles of persuasion soak you to the bone,
But instinct is not yet overthrown.
‘Now’ is just a nearby port,
A lucky harbour where your time is caught,
But like a slackened vessel, soon unmoored,
Then cast and lost to drifting thoughts,
A murky fog from then it haunts.
Beyond the haze, now there to distract,
There’s still exists a muddle of paths,
Trampled down on your behalf.
Now, find the...
Imagination builds the road to follow,
Senses gist you what you think you know,
Drizzles of persuasion soak you to the bone,
But instinct is not yet overthrown.
‘Now’ is just a nearby port,
A lucky harbour where your time is caught,
But like a slackened vessel, soon unmoored,
Then cast and lost to drifting thoughts,
A murky fog from then it haunts.
Beyond the haze, now there to distract,
There’s still exists a muddle of paths,
Trampled down on your behalf.
Now, find the...
#courage
#gratitude
#hope
#inspirational
#redemption
31 reads
0 Comments
Listentoact
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
Unlike words
Unlike words actions tend to stand in stature like the presence you give Is the statue to live by and be a monument of your self to pose for the test of time,
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
#courage
#gratitude
#kindness #redemption
#kindness #redemption
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 8:41pm
5th Jan 2025 8:41pm
.Meet me tonight
For it's been three years married and 11 years since we met 💕 Meet me in the garden of roses 🌹 SURROUNDED by the power of God's love, with the rosary flowers that you and I planted together. One day upon a starry night with it's perfect night of the aroma scents. THAT blows and comes out with the whispers and sounds of the birds in the tree of life. For your present is much needed to make this happen between you and I, as we shall forever remember the time ⌚of our lives. Just you and I alone in the night vibes expressing, the deepness of the love and happiness and the...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#respect
64 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 2:17pm
5th Jan 2025 2:17pm
Through this life
They elders say that through this one life, that you will have encounters that we may never truly understand. FOR each one will be different, than the one before it 🤔 For sure each one will have lessons, that we must learn to navigate through the next, chapter of our lives. FOR nothing in particular in life comes easy 🤨 as it will have challenges that could make you or break you, down to the point of just giving up to fight against the deepness, of that damage of the truth of your heart and spiritual soul.🙏 Your own health of your will being or it could be your mistake...
#admiration
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
54 reads
0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 7:32pm
4th Jan 2025 7:32pm
The Voice of Abiding Gratitude I Shall Ever Raise
Grace and mercy
I shall ever implore
as my soul
yields to boundless passions
crosses lines
and in dire straits
found lost.
The Hand of God
I shall ever beseech
to touch my heart
turn hate into compassion
envy into contentment
vanish vanity into modesty
and to raise me up
as I fall.
The blessings of His Holiness
I shall ever pray for
a voice of truth
a valiant spirit
wearing the night to meet the dark
a beauty
oozing from deep within
seeping into souls' hearts.
The voice of...
I shall ever implore
as my soul
yields to boundless passions
crosses lines
and in dire straits
found lost.
The Hand of God
I shall ever beseech
to touch my heart
turn hate into compassion
envy into contentment
vanish vanity into modesty
and to raise me up
as I fall.
The blessings of His Holiness
I shall ever pray for
a voice of truth
a valiant spirit
wearing the night to meet the dark
a beauty
oozing from deep within
seeping into souls' hearts.
The voice of...
#gratitude
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
#NewYear
69 reads
5 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
3rd Jan 2025 8:49am
Stay
Rest your weary feet
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
Now that you've become
Your echoes re-released
Staring at the sun
These paths have been explored
You showed them all the way
You've done it all before
Now you're here to stay
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
68 reads
12 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 12:09pm
2nd Jan 2025 12:09pm
My Vulnerability I Share
I learn
No war against time and age to wage
No end of time rather many a stage
Just keep the flow of what is mundane and sage..
I learn
Not to fly high with rapture not to yield to rage
Not to erase all that is written on my page
Just embrace the tides of life and the swings of age..
I learn
No reason to theorise or advise
All the hearts and minds seem to be wise
Just my very aims and aspirations revise..
I learn
To early rise and wear of sunshine a ray
Thank God in words, deeds and pray
For...
No war against time and age to wage
No end of time rather many a stage
Just keep the flow of what is mundane and sage..
I learn
Not to fly high with rapture not to yield to rage
Not to erase all that is written on my page
Just embrace the tides of life and the swings of age..
I learn
No reason to theorise or advise
All the hearts and minds seem to be wise
Just my very aims and aspirations revise..
I learn
To early rise and wear of sunshine a ray
Thank God in words, deeds and pray
For...
#admiration
#gratitude
#learning
#love
#PersonalGrowth
74 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 2:01am
31st Dec 2024 2:01am
INSIDE looking OUTSIDE
We will have challenges that will happen, in a moment notice that will affect, the very deepness of the heart and spiritual soul. Yet now we will be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of our soul. 🙏 For sure as we exchange thoughts on this subject of being alone, in peace and tranquility, with the very closeness. God's creation as our view looking at the visions of the beauty that God has created. 🙏 But yet we begin to appreciate what he has done 👍 for sure sitting here alone watching the rays, of the golden season sun over the...
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#redemption
61 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 6:00pm
25th Dec 2024 6:00pm
Her (Mary)
She is someone who is there when you need her
She can be tough
Her words can be a sword
She can be forgiving
When she knows it is well-meant
Life has not been easy for her
She is brave to say it without an apology
Hoping to help someone afraid to be brave
She holds her head high
Even in the midst of tears rolling down her cheeks
A light when you need one
A red light when he needs one
But in either light, she shines brightly
She can be tough
Her words can be a sword
She can be forgiving
When she knows it is well-meant
Life has not been easy for her
She is brave to say it without an apology
Hoping to help someone afraid to be brave
She holds her head high
Even in the midst of tears rolling down her cheeks
A light when you need one
A red light when he needs one
But in either light, she shines brightly
#gratitude
205 reads
26 Comments
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