Poems About Gratitude Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about gratitude seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 10:13pm
2nd Mar 2025 10:13pm
Looking Back in the Future
Looking back
at some point in time
Trump will no longer be president
and I'll no longer be a teacher
Sundays destroyed by grading, planning, and fear
Looking back,
at some point in time
I'll sadly remember
how I cried every night for weeks
after my cat died
and comfort myself
with the new cat I'll have gotten
Looking back
at some point in time,
I'll remember how long I stayed in shock
after my mom's death
and finally let myself
feel all the pain
and be okay with it
...
at some point in time
Trump will no longer be president
and I'll no longer be a teacher
Sundays destroyed by grading, planning, and fear
Looking back,
at some point in time
I'll sadly remember
how I cried every night for weeks
after my cat died
and comfort myself
with the new cat I'll have gotten
Looking back
at some point in time,
I'll remember how long I stayed in shock
after my mom's death
and finally let myself
feel all the pain
and be okay with it
...
#gratitude
#PersonalGrowth
66 reads
9 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 1:17am
1st Mar 2025 1:17am
Just Catching Up/Do Dead People Pray?
Mama,
It’s been a long time since I’ve written, but you are, in fact, a spectator. So you see everything, but you know me. I have to put it all down on paper, and then give it to others because some days it’s the only proof I have that I am anywhere at all.
My body is a locked jaw, grinding teeth to dust, and it’s all to keep something inside. I’m uncertain what will tumble out if I let it all go. Will it have teeth, claws, and green and yellow froth coming from its mouth? Or will it fall to the ground, its mummified parts turning to dust after eons in darkness?
...
It’s been a long time since I’ve written, but you are, in fact, a spectator. So you see everything, but you know me. I have to put it all down on paper, and then give it to others because some days it’s the only proof I have that I am anywhere at all.
My body is a locked jaw, grinding teeth to dust, and it’s all to keep something inside. I’m uncertain what will tumble out if I let it all go. Will it have teeth, claws, and green and yellow froth coming from its mouth? Or will it fall to the ground, its mummified parts turning to dust after eons in darkness?
...
#death
#FeelingLost
#gratitude
#mother
#SelfDiscovery
54 reads
6 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 12:42pm
19th Feb 2025 12:42pm
TODAY!!!
Yell and scream today
Let everyone know you're alive
Let everybody know you care
Today is a great day
to hoot and holler
at the top of your lungs
Be heard
Say hello to the world
Today we're alive
Let it be known 😜
Let everyone know you're alive
Let everybody know you care
Today is a great day
to hoot and holler
at the top of your lungs
Be heard
Say hello to the world
Today we're alive
Let it be known 😜
#gratitude
#happiness
#inspirational
88 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 00:27am
15th Feb 2025 00:27am
When it's love
We all want and need to be loved unconditionally, at least once in our life time. FOR we all want to have a real connection, that will bond us together as one. But instead sometimes we find ourselves involved, with the wrong kind of person, as it turns out that we were wrong in our decision. 😞 Yet through the course of our lives, we finally found the truth of what is real evidence of love, and support and understanding. For sure no one is sent to you by chance or Accident, yet one day that becomes true. YET we find ourselves questioning ourselves can this be true, that we finally...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#StreamOfConsciousness
68 reads
15 Comments
Soulesslywhole
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 8:40am
13th Feb 2025 8:40am
The Whispering Heart!!
Art is the flow of the cosmic energy!!!
Creativity is the celebration of the celestial soul!!
Self expression is the highest devotion to the almighty!!!
Grace of pure intention is the nectar of immortality!!!
We walk the path of an infinite loop of self-realization....
Till we realize the ultimate truth of all creation!!!
Where death is a mere concept for the soul to transcend into the sacred dimension!!
Creativity is the celebration of the celestial soul!!
Self expression is the highest devotion to the almighty!!!
Grace of pure intention is the nectar of immortality!!!
We walk the path of an infinite loop of self-realization....
Till we realize the ultimate truth of all creation!!!
Where death is a mere concept for the soul to transcend into the sacred dimension!!
#emotions
#gratitude
39 reads
0 Comments
magichearts
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 8:09pm
6th Feb 2025 8:09pm
मदहोश हुई जा रही हैं तबियत यूँ मेरी धीरे धीरे !
ईशारा "bill" का करता हूँ, गिलास जाम से भर जाता हैं !
ईशारा "bill" का करता हूँ, गिलास जाम से भर जाता हैं !
#gratitude
45 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 1:21pm
2nd Feb 2025 1:21pm
It's a blessing in disguise
It's a blessing when we can connect on a positive, level of energy and understanding and respect. FOR what we share and have as one love. For it's true, that we all will go through so much sometimes, that it will test our strength and commitment which could either. Make us or break us or just separate us, from the deepness of the truth of our love and hearts. But yet we will find the deepness of being reunited so comfortable, even with the struggles that we have to face in the very depths of the darkness. For sure it's necessary to be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual...
#admiration
#courage
#gratitude
#happiness
#strength
93 reads
8 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 3:30pm
30th Jan 2025 3:30pm
The Rooted Lofty Tree
She sat there under a rooted lofty tree.. Shading branches and fanning leaves kept her company... The hissing of silence and the reigning of solitude driving her cold at home. She took a step out to let vanish the void that filled her chest. She brooded over herself the one of the past leafing through her memories... "That's the apple of my eye.. The lifeblood of my heart!.." She came to taste beauty.. To touch the very core of delight when He was brought to her life. Burning all the candles of her youth at both sides, extremely weary but profoundly contented. The echoes of giggles...
#aging
#gratitude
#LifeCycle
#motherhood
#nostalgia
59 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 3:13pm
30th Jan 2025 3:13pm
AWAKENING
As I stop and look and listen not only to my own mind and heart, I listen carefully to what others have to say on what they think and say about some situations, for sure it's true we all have our own opinions on what we see and hear, and read between the lines ✍️ For it's a pleasure to be able to have grown FOLKS conversations, as we can agree or disagree, but yet come together with a positive level of understanding, and walk away with knowledge and wisdom and enlightenment. With insight and the spiritual subconsciousness of our lives and dreams. Still intact with our endless,...
#dialogue
#gratitude
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
76 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 8:15am
29th Jan 2025 8:15am
Lost & Found
i. lost}
These dirty streets, skin and bone
Beneath my feet, grit and stone
Unfulfilled, the world spins around
Time stands still on solid ground
{ii. found}
Stars rain down, the night confides
In you I drown, right beside
Love declares, to you I'm bound
It was all a blur, lost and found
These dirty streets, skin and bone
Beneath my feet, grit and stone
Unfulfilled, the world spins around
Time stands still on solid ground
{ii. found}
Stars rain down, the night confides
In you I drown, right beside
Love declares, to you I'm bound
It was all a blur, lost and found
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#love
#redemption
136 reads
13 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 10:10am
23rd Jan 2025 10:10am
The Teaching Task
Lockdown over, I had to head to school
my pupils waiting to learn the golden rule
I got ready and put on that mask
following the health protocols is a must
How would I each word articulate?
and those whole lessons explicate!
***
Principals in their towers have their say
and teachers, Skills For Life, have to convey
So eager to see my pupils and join the classroom
no time to spend with colleagues in the teachers room
Just virtual wishes.. Love and hugs
and the joy of all the social media tags.
***
I...
my pupils waiting to learn the golden rule
I got ready and put on that mask
following the health protocols is a must
How would I each word articulate?
and those whole lessons explicate!
***
Principals in their towers have their say
and teachers, Skills For Life, have to convey
So eager to see my pupils and join the classroom
no time to spend with colleagues in the teachers room
Just virtual wishes.. Love and hugs
and the joy of all the social media tags.
***
I...
#gratitude
#hope
#pandemic
#school
#strength
75 reads
4 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 8:29am
23rd Jan 2025 8:29am
Right By the Balls
Going on sixty-four, I've developed a dangerous penchant for change. Captain sparky would quickly point out the fact that probably 97 percent of us at this age have a steady bearing away from the same, and for obvious reasons. Indeed, my most resent plunge into uncharted waters has found me clinging to a frail piece of bark with nearly all of my earthly possessions and financial assets lost at sea. Like a repulsive shot of back-woods corn mash, I love it. My mother was smoking something when I was in the oven.
Her & I discovered that our dreams collided, so I’ve taken my...
Her & I discovered that our dreams collided, so I’ve taken my...
#betrayal
#disappointment
#gratitude
#MovingOn
#rejection
61 reads
0 Comments
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