Poems About Ghosts Seeking Honest Critique
#ghosts
nikkimoe
Poem Published
4th Aug 2022 1:48pm
4th Aug 2022 1:48pm
There Will Be No Ghost To Give
Do not burn my bones
I'll want to come home
again and again.
I'll want to come home
again and again.
#ghosts
#unicorns
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
16th Jul 2022 2:09am
16th Jul 2022 2:09am
Casper
How marvelous to think a soul so light
That it may flit like some unfettered fart
All about a brutally Baptist night
Where no pleasure comforts the beating heart
Of the tearfully afterlife fearful
Somehow unable to police their thought
And confusing hate for something cheerful
Due to the dreadful scripture they're taught
On a Sunday sabotaged by school
When the pupil may well have learned instead
A much less harmful scientific rule
That allows mortal lovers to share a bed
Where love, I think, is more commonly found
Than in some...
That it may flit like some unfettered fart
All about a brutally Baptist night
Where no pleasure comforts the beating heart
Of the tearfully afterlife fearful
Somehow unable to police their thought
And confusing hate for something cheerful
Due to the dreadful scripture they're taught
On a Sunday sabotaged by school
When the pupil may well have learned instead
A much less harmful scientific rule
That allows mortal lovers to share a bed
Where love, I think, is more commonly found
Than in some...
#spiritual
#ghosts
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2 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
15th Jul 2022 3:17am
15th Jul 2022 3:17am
GHOST OF THE LIVING / A POEM FOR SOMEONE AND NO ONE
Find your way
Back to our people
And you’ll find your way
Back to me
I imagine you not saying—
Not your truth
Much as I wish
It could be
Back to our people
And you’ll find your way
Back to me
I imagine you not saying—
Not your truth
Much as I wish
It could be
#sadness
#grief
#rhyming #ghosts
#rhyming #ghosts
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Bushido
Poem Published
29th Jun 2022 5:28am
29th Jun 2022 5:28am
A call to the night
Come unto me, you creatures of the night.
May the sparks of passion ignite.
To burn bright once more,
The light you had lost before.
Come unto me, you who are born of the dark.
May this journey you embark.
Bring peace, joy, and tomorrow.
That our children do not know sorrow.
Come unto me, you who live in the shadows.
Cast aside tonight, your woes.
And give us your embrace,
And dance to the drummer's pace.
May the sparks of passion ignite.
To burn bright once more,
The light you had lost before.
Come unto me, you who are born of the dark.
May this journey you embark.
Bring peace, joy, and tomorrow.
That our children do not know sorrow.
Come unto me, you who live in the shadows.
Cast aside tonight, your woes.
And give us your embrace,
And dance to the drummer's pace.
#monsters
#vampires
#ghosts #werewolves
#ghosts #werewolves
73 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2022 3:29pm
23rd Jun 2022 3:29pm
The Phantom Discourse
I was with various people I knew,
Now shades in a hereafter soiree dream,
Who had bid actuality adieu
To make merry by some Morphean stream
Just outside a sliding patio door
Whose glass blocked a hint of yuletide chill
Those elder ghosts had no wish to explore
As by conversation they got their thrill.
They mingled under open beam decor
And sought not the galactic expanse
Since the colloquy of heaven's rapport
Was the primary human happenstance
Granting heaven, or hell, within a breath...
And yada-yada beyond sudden death.
Now shades in a hereafter soiree dream,
Who had bid actuality adieu
To make merry by some Morphean stream
Just outside a sliding patio door
Whose glass blocked a hint of yuletide chill
Those elder ghosts had no wish to explore
As by conversation they got their thrill.
They mingled under open beam decor
And sought not the galactic expanse
Since the colloquy of heaven's rapport
Was the primary human happenstance
Granting heaven, or hell, within a breath...
And yada-yada beyond sudden death.
#gothic
#death
#ghosts #humankind
#ghosts #humankind
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joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
17th Jun 2022 5:10pm
17th Jun 2022 5:10pm
Daniel 9.26-27 is NOT About the TRIB !!
DANIEL 9.26-27 HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE TRIBULATION PERIOD
Verse 26 starts off with the execution of the Messiah. ("The Messiah shall be cut off..").
This is talking about the crucifixion of Christ.
The Jewish leaders' part in the killing of Christ was the worst abomination possible.
They literally could not commit a worse crime than that.
Logically, the rest of this passage should be about the CURSES in the Law of Moses which would befall the Jews for their part in the torture/killing of the Messiah, the only begotten SON OF GOD.
And that is exactly what...
Verse 26 starts off with the execution of the Messiah. ("The Messiah shall be cut off..").
This is talking about the crucifixion of Christ.
The Jewish leaders' part in the killing of Christ was the worst abomination possible.
They literally could not commit a worse crime than that.
Logically, the rest of this passage should be about the CURSES in the Law of Moses which would befall the Jews for their part in the torture/killing of the Messiah, the only begotten SON OF GOD.
And that is exactly what...
#God
#angels
#ghosts
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joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
13th Jun 2022 9:29am
13th Jun 2022 9:29am
The Two-Part JUDGMENT DAY
Apostle Peter says,"Judgment must begin at the House of God.." "House of God" can mean the Western world, which used to be known as Christendom.
The West will be judged first.
Peter predicts judgment by "fire"(2 Peter 3.7).
He doesn't say it's coming from the from the East.
But Russia's arsenal is to the East.
When Ezekiel predicted Babylon would defeat Egypt, he put it in terms of God acting thru Babylon.
"They will know I am the LORD when I put my sword into the hand of the King
of Babylon, and he stretches it out against the land of Egypt"(Ez.30.25)...
The West will be judged first.
Peter predicts judgment by "fire"(2 Peter 3.7).
He doesn't say it's coming from the from the East.
But Russia's arsenal is to the East.
When Ezekiel predicted Babylon would defeat Egypt, he put it in terms of God acting thru Babylon.
"They will know I am the LORD when I put my sword into the hand of the King
of Babylon, and he stretches it out against the land of Egypt"(Ez.30.25)...
#God
#angels
#ghosts
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
10th Jun 2022 3:08pm
10th Jun 2022 3:08pm
Lyrids
I looked for them in predawn skies
And their phosphorescent trails;
Always a treat for midnight eyes
Like lightning on celestial rails,
Sending telegrams from star to star
About the latest angel host
That heaven sent out way too far
For an elusive alien ghost
Trapped in a dream that got too weird
Due to the local cosmic rays
Which gravitational lensing steered
Past a dozen odd milky ways
Which tasted just like meteors
Those angels roasted up for smores!
And their phosphorescent trails;
Always a treat for midnight eyes
Like lightning on celestial rails,
Sending telegrams from star to star
About the latest angel host
That heaven sent out way too far
For an elusive alien ghost
Trapped in a dream that got too weird
Due to the local cosmic rays
Which gravitational lensing steered
Past a dozen odd milky ways
Which tasted just like meteors
Those angels roasted up for smores!
#ghosts
#aliens
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DreamIllusions
Poem Published
7th Jun 2022 1:34am
7th Jun 2022 1:34am
She Still Sleeps with Wolves
Be it wolves from the pack
Close knit family, the ones that are supposed to
Have your back
Or the ones that chose to hunt her
Sniff her out and follow her
Eventually devour her
As the sun sets every night
She says her prayers and holds on tight
Closes her eyes and waits
For the claws the bites
The midnight fights
That strip her of all she’s got
Down to the bone, white hot
How does she even navigate
Between those who snap
And those who wait
She digs in deep and hopes and prays
For the kind of sunlight that...
Close knit family, the ones that are supposed to
Have your back
Or the ones that chose to hunt her
Sniff her out and follow her
Eventually devour her
As the sun sets every night
She says her prayers and holds on tight
Closes her eyes and waits
For the claws the bites
The midnight fights
That strip her of all she’s got
Down to the bone, white hot
How does she even navigate
Between those who snap
And those who wait
She digs in deep and hopes and prays
For the kind of sunlight that...
#sadness
#dark
#ghosts
#despair
#fear
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Abracadabra
Poem Published
30th May 2022 5:18pm
30th May 2022 5:18pm
Three Wishes
Before I die
I'd like to meet a ghost
to learn for certain
what's on the other side
Wouldn't it be cool
to shake hands with a ghoul
to chat about the weather
maybe take some tea together
Wouldn't it be nice
to get some other world advice
Before I die
I'd like to watch a saucer
land in my back yard
greet some little green men
exchange a calling card
I'd pose for photos with their UFO
like long lost friends
Wouldn't it be nice
to get some other world advice
Before I die
I'd like to...
I'd like to meet a ghost
to learn for certain
what's on the other side
Wouldn't it be cool
to shake hands with a ghoul
to chat about the weather
maybe take some tea together
Wouldn't it be nice
to get some other world advice
Before I die
I'd like to watch a saucer
land in my back yard
greet some little green men
exchange a calling card
I'd pose for photos with their UFO
like long lost friends
Wouldn't it be nice
to get some other world advice
Before I die
I'd like to...
#ghosts
#aliens
#UnrequitedLove
89 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
25th May 2022 10:46pm
25th May 2022 10:46pm
weeps the silence
skipping through the timeline
a blip here then transported elsewhere
into the infinite I go
wormholes and phantasms take me there
I exhale visions where I am
they come to life after a breath
magic confronts me...
how long didn't I see?
aching truth the serum drips in my veins
poisoning the wealth of secrets stitched in my annuals
I turn and recognize a face traveling the universes
she shines, flickers then she is gone
I feel her essence embrace mine
bye bren I hear echoing in my soul
I...
a blip here then transported elsewhere
into the infinite I go
wormholes and phantasms take me there
I exhale visions where I am
they come to life after a breath
magic confronts me...
how long didn't I see?
aching truth the serum drips in my veins
poisoning the wealth of secrets stitched in my annuals
I turn and recognize a face traveling the universes
she shines, flickers then she is gone
I feel her essence embrace mine
bye bren I hear echoing in my soul
I...
#love
#ghosts
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2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
24th May 2022 6:17pm
24th May 2022 6:17pm
torturous asylum
listening to time's ghosts replaying tortures
reverberating through space
echoing agony I feel in the now
I stop to whisper to these specters
then scream, as I take their pain into my soul
finally, I turn and realize it's just me
time traveling from my first life to my last
I realize now I will never be free
unless I can escape
I contemplate, alone in the void I will be taunted no more
it's at all possible I am an experiment gone wrong
the mental institution replays my horrors
it was created for me
a...
reverberating through space
echoing agony I feel in the now
I stop to whisper to these specters
then scream, as I take their pain into my soul
finally, I turn and realize it's just me
time traveling from my first life to my last
I realize now I will never be free
unless I can escape
I contemplate, alone in the void I will be taunted no more
it's at all possible I am an experiment gone wrong
the mental institution replays my horrors
it was created for me
a...
#dark
#shadows
#vampires #ghosts
#vampires #ghosts
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